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|Elaborate on one of your activities (a manager of a restaurant)
Undergraduatevk123 - Dec 28, 2008 / EF_Kevin - Dec 28, 2008
|MACAULAY ESSAY - a dish that holds a strong associative power for you
Undergraduatesamosa - Dec 28, 2008 / samosa - Dec 28, 2008
|Village Records/ better to give than to receive/I went to Nashville; 3 NYU Short Answers
4 - I would join Village Records, but I would attempt to make changes and propose new ideas to the students...
Undergraduatepencil - Dec 28, 2008 / EF_Kevin - Dec 28, 2008
|Personal Statement, (lunch, active in sports)
Undergraduatedsacks - Dec 28, 2008 / dsacks - Dec 28, 2008
|Common App essay: Performing
3 - This is a really nice essay! It is really personal, and I like the varied sentence structure....
Undergraduatealightinapark - Dec 28, 2008 / mad3na90 - Dec 28, 2008
|Upenn "Your interest..." (business)
4 - The University of Pennsylvania is not a public school, it's a private school, so the basis of your...
Undergraduateserendipity123 - Dec 28, 2008 / LW Trojan - Dec 28, 2008
|Davidson Peer Recommendation
5 - Even with piano lessons, workout classes, organizing and participating in functions as president of the Anchor Club, and tutoring...
Undergraduaterandomzm - Dec 28, 2008 / EF_Kevin - Dec 28, 2008
|NYU CAS for 2009 - summer vacation/ activity/ family trait/ song/ academic program - Short Answers
6 - Your SAT score is very high... slightly above NYU average. I think you did a brilliant job on...
Undergraduatealightinapark - Dec 28, 2008 / Limon1909 - Dec 28, 2008
|'journalism student found me' - this to 150 words----Greatest Accomplishment
5 - You could take out or greatly condense the following to sentences: Later, a journalism student found me and asked...
Undergraduatebhangra369 - Dec 27, 2008 / abcdefg - Dec 28, 2008
|Supplement Essay- more about myself (music)
Undergraduatecutiep0chacc0 - Dec 27, 2008 / cutiep0chacc0 - Dec 28, 2008
|An Iffy Topic (the true art of music)
4 - I observed hundreds of musicians who lined the stage in preparation for the ninety-minute performance of Gustav Mahler's Second...
UndergraduateRachovsky - Dec 28, 2008 / EF_Kevin - Dec 28, 2008
|MIT short answer-feedback? opinions?
2 - Environmental Engineering is to me the most attractive MIT program. My AP Environmental Science teacher has revealed to...
UndergraduateNotAnHero - Dec 28, 2008 / EF_Kevin - Dec 28, 2008
|unc long essay (my math teacher)
Undergraduateqzhang - Dec 28, 2008 / qzhang - Dec 28, 2008
|UPenn: A Bold Choice (Why UPenn?)
5 - well, it doesn't have to be kevin to correct this, does he? you know that he's very busy, every...
Undergraduaterandomzm - Dec 28, 2008 / Angela629 - Dec 28, 2008
|'Languages and my way to America' - CommonApp essay - my life of diversity
Undergraduateabcdefg - Dec 27, 2008 / abcdefg - Dec 28, 2008
|NYU short answers (family trait, NYU activity, talent show, NYU program)
UndergraduateVeggy - Dec 28, 2008 / Veggy - Dec 28, 2008
|Motivated you to apply to Rice? Wonderful psychology program that fits my type of learning
Undergraduatedebaterchick09 - Dec 26, 2008 / debaterchick09 - Dec 28, 2008
|northwestern statement- quench thirst!
3 - Ef_Kevin: Thank you so much! You have helped me alot. Anyone else want to give me their input? Any...
Undergraduatedebaterchick09 - Dec 27, 2008 / debaterchick09 - Dec 28, 2008
|Common app Activities short essay - the International Congress on AIDS
8 - This is amazing! ...But the word limit will be a problem because colleges will feel that you cannot follow...
UndergraduateARodz19 - Dec 26, 2008 / angel101 - Dec 28, 2008
|UPenn- Describe the courses of study and the unique characteristics
3 - What makes the Wharton School special, is how the undergraduate program combines liberal arts with business, and theory with...
UndergraduateJustGlaze - Dec 27, 2008 / EF_Kevin - Dec 28, 2008
|Need some reviews on short essay from Stanford University.
4 - Thanks a lot you guys! @Kevin Could you help me break the sentence that you said would look more...
Undergraduateavneeeet - Dec 27, 2008 / avneeeet - Dec 28, 2008
|MACAULAY (It is now 2013.)
Undergraduatesamosa - Dec 27, 2008 / samosa - Dec 28, 2008
|Common app Essay: No Need for a Cure
Undergraduateyfung91 - Dec 26, 2008 / yfung91 - Dec 28, 2008
|'Summers with senior citizens' - common app short essay - volunteering
Undergraduatecaliforniagirl - Oct 8, 2008 / joseph0807 - Dec 28, 2008
|NYU talent show song short answer
Undergraduatepencil - Dec 27, 2008 / pencil - Dec 28, 2008
|My last two summers, including jobs - essay
4 - Much more commonly than experimenting on myself, however, I will read books I would usually avoid (like McCullough's John...
Undergraduaterandomzm - Dec 27, 2008 / dsacks - Dec 28, 2008
|Blindsided- "Syracuse University essay" admission essay question.
Undergraduatemustaa - Dec 15, 2008 / kimku91 - Dec 28, 2008
|I am very eager to strengthen my role as a global citizen - qualities of Northwestern
5 - Thanks Stimpsimp. I'm still open to any comments; Im planning on turning this in in like 2 days or...
UndergraduateMelafire29 - Dec 25, 2008 / Melafire29 - Dec 28, 2008
|Grinnell Supplement Essays help
6 - One of our school students went to Grinnell College few years ago. I heard him tell stories of his...
Undergraduatekimku91 - Dec 27, 2008 / EF_Kevin - Dec 28, 2008
|short essay of Michiagan : social or cultural difference
Undergraduatejustinwang - Dec 27, 2008 / EF_Kevin - Dec 28, 2008
|U of Chicago essay
7 - I actually thought the metaphorical use of the "road of life" was quite appealing. I hope you integrated your...
Undergraduatedreamswept - Dec 6, 2008 / amy - Dec 28, 2008
|'a devoted athlete' - Trinity College essay- integrity contract
2 - As a distinguished member of my school's community and a devoted athlete, I believe in dependability, responsibility, and honesty....
Undergraduatetonywchen - Dec 27, 2008 / EF_Kevin - Dec 28, 2008
|Common App Essay (Athletes Serving the Community)
6 - This is something that gives you an excuse to call the admissions office, and tell your name, make a...
Undergraduatetonywchen - Dec 26, 2008 / EF_Kevin - Dec 28, 2008
|Summer act. char limit prob
6 - 2008: Elementary school: A ball will bounce when it hits the ground. Will light? Now, I wanted to know....
Undergraduatepandora - Dec 27, 2008 / EF_Kevin - Dec 28, 2008
|Which version should I use? (major is for biology)
2 - Wow, your first few paragraphs are great! Now, be sure to italicize the titles: My passion for astronomy...
Undergraduatezizi201 - Dec 27, 2008 / EF_Kevin - Dec 28, 2008
|Common App: Fundraising consultant, physical therapist and neonatologist
8 - Thanx Kevin and Yung-En.. I already submitted so hopefully it will get me in... anyway thnx again..tke care...
UndergraduateSweetGirl - Dec 23, 2008 / SweetGirl - Dec 28, 2008
|U of Illinois #1 (My fascination with the business world)
2 - I shadowed my father everyday, eying his every move and noting his every action. Having watched my dad run...
Undergraduateprincetongirl - Dec 27, 2008 / EF_Kevin - Dec 28, 2008
|Princeton Summers - Korean
2 - I think the overall of the essay is pretty well done, but may I suggest you use another example...
UndergraduateIvy_91 - Dec 28, 2008 / Angela629 - Dec 28, 2008
|MY ESSAY FOR SYRACUSE : IT'S REALLY NEED ENHACEMENT
Undergraduateqiuerwei - Dec 27, 2008 / qiuerwei - Dec 28, 2008
|MIT essay (my family will never fail to celebrate together)
UndergraduateSapphire - Dec 27, 2008 / Sapphire - Dec 28, 2008
|'Chemistry and new people' - Why do I want to apply to Emory University?
5 - a lot of your essay has stuff about location and size...Since the questions says besides, try to write about...
Undergraduatejoke0611 - Dec 26, 2008 / princetongirl - Dec 28, 2008
|Gain hands on experience, gain a greater appreciation for the NASA mission; NASA INSPIRE PROGRAM
3 - "For a student interested in pursuing a career in aerospace engineering, I believed there to beare only a few...
Undergraduatemihirmj - Dec 28, 2008 / Linnus - Dec 28, 2008
|Cornell CAS Essay (intellectual interests). Does it make sense?
Undergraduateatomvik - Dec 27, 2008 / mihirmj - Dec 27, 2008
|a para from Cornell engineering essay vague? unclear?
Undergraduatechuliuxiang - Dec 27, 2008 / Linnus - Dec 27, 2008
|Personal statement for NUS: The big day
Undergraduatefaizan_abid - Dec 26, 2008 / faizan_abid - Dec 27, 2008
|Is Sociology/AP Psychology considered core academic subjects?
Undergraduateyee - Dec 26, 2008 / yee - Dec 27, 2008
|essay about Setbacks, I'm a foreign student,need help
7 - I think it would be good to write about cultural conflicts with your host family and how you overcame...
Undergraduatehanson3566 - Dec 26, 2008 / yfung91 - Dec 27, 2008
|BU Supplement (I have many connections with Boston)
8 - Ohh okay thank you! I see what you're saying. Do you think that my essay sounds too much like...
Undergraduatechristineg711 - Dec 26, 2008 / christineg711 - Dec 27, 2008
|Common App Essay ("Grazie! Grazie!")
Undergraduatecrissy1251 - Dec 26, 2008 / christineg711 - Dec 27, 2008
|I chose to go to Kenya for my school trip - Travelling to other countries
UndergraduateIvy_91 - Dec 21, 2008 / Ivy_91 - Dec 27, 2008
|Grinnell Supplement essay - what makes me an individual
9 - well, I just said that I first learnt Grinnell from Grinnell students in a foreign forum. And I then...
Undergraduatejustinwang - Dec 25, 2008 / justinwang - Dec 27, 2008
|I was really fascinated in the law of supply and demand; Academic interests
2 - What intership was this? What kind of factory was this? What was the purpose of your internship? In the...
Undergraduatejustinwang - Dec 26, 2008 / EF_Constance - Dec 27, 2008
|"Do you feel like you are part of the local community?" u of michigan
Undergraduatekaka0525 - Dec 24, 2008 / kaka0525 - Dec 27, 2008
|After-school activity - Role playing
4 - I would change the first sentence because it sounds like role-playing is your only after school activity. I would...
Undergraduateowen92217 - Dec 26, 2008 / EF_Constance - Dec 27, 2008
|The click of a camera shutter; NYU short answers [all five]
4 - thanks so much for the feedback!!! SUPER helpful.. Yeah -- music business or music industry is a major...
Undergraduatex soundclash - Dec 26, 2008 / x soundclash - Dec 27, 2008
|"Why architecture?" essay - Rice
3 - Thanks! I just want to make sure it's coherent and I don't sound like I'm jumping from place to...
Undergraduatepriscileung - Dec 26, 2008 / priscileung - Dec 27, 2008
|Nerd at heart - Why UChicago
4 - Oh, I'm sorry about that, but there is no changing posts, just editing that everyone can see. We need...
Undergraduatexperceptionx - Dec 26, 2008 / EF_Kevin - Dec 27, 2008
|'political science and Obama's field office' - Cornell- college of arts and sciences
3 - i just got access to a computer here and Mexico, and I read through your response. I had corrected...
Undergraduategmailblows31 - Dec 25, 2008 / gmailblows31 - Dec 27, 2008
|'I can contribute tons in college' - Lehigh University Supplement Questions
NEW - As you researched and visited colleges and universities, why did you decide to apply to Lehigh? Please give specific...
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|What is your favourite word and why? - Uni of Virginia
15 - hmm... i think i almost liked your first version better... the second version makes you "haha" outlook on life...
Undergraduatewongxy - Nov 26, 2008 / mbhaire - Dec 27, 2008
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