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|Columbia SHP - interests and background in science and mathematics. Biology & Math is everywhere
2 - The explanation is direct to the point and simplistic in its approach. That, is where I see a problem...
Undergraduatevivi0627 - Mar 11, 2021 / Holt - Mar 11, 2021
|My thirst for knowledge - benefitting from study at American University in Cairo
2 - The question is, to me, forward thinking in presentation. How will you benefit from a university education is equivalent...
UndergraduateShazaMamdouh - Mar 9, 2021 / Holt - Mar 10, 2021
|UGRAD - I can resolve Georgia's internal and external problems
3 - @Holt Thanks for the answer,I already started fixing the said points by your advice,it really was dry and missing...
UndergraduateSeenBetterDes - Mar 8, 2021 / SeenBetterDes - Mar 9, 2021
|"Write Down Your Key Achievements"- GIST undergraduate admission. If possible, kindly help me out.
2 - A reviewer will read this presentation and realize that there is nothing special about you. What you consider achievements...
UndergraduateShakerin Aakash - Mar 7, 2021 / Holt - Mar 8, 2021
|Application for the math program of the university of Waterloo - AIF form essay
7 - With a limited number of characters, maybe you can answer more directly to what they ask so that you...
Undergraduateremy - Feb 10, 2021 / Umbu Richy - Mar 5, 2021
|Own glass of lemonade. A REALIZATION THAT SPARKED A PERIOD OF PERSONAL GROWTH OR NEW UNDERSTANDING
2 - You are spreading yourself too thin in this essay. You only need one period of realization. The Lemon and...
Undergraduatenklinh2308 - Mar 4, 2021 / Holt - Mar 5, 2021
|College Supplementary Essay (Computer Science Major)
Undergraduateum2020 - Mar 1, 2021 / um2020 - Mar 1, 2021
|PERSONAL STATEMENT TO UNIVERSITY - BUSINESS AND MANAGEMENT
3 - @Holt The length of the required PS is from 1-3 pages and ahould include ( seft introduction, what motives...
Undergraduatenganhacindy - Feb 28, 2021 / nganhacindy - Mar 1, 2021
|'...feel the sweetness of life after struggling'; GKS Undergraduate application - personal statement
2 - The motivation factor being referred to in this case is not your motivation to study in Korea. Rather, it...
Undergraduatecarlaputri - Feb 28, 2021 / Holt - Feb 28, 2021
|Global UGRAD 2021. Describe a time when you encountered a conflict and how you handled it
3 - @Holt I'm working as a teacher part-time after completing an introductory teaching course provided by an online language school,...
Undergraduatedaryamkvchk - Feb 23, 2021 / daryamkvchk - Feb 25, 2021
|The natural world - Texas A&M College Station transfer essay prompt A
UndergraduateAtrox - Feb 23, 2021 / Atrox - Feb 25, 2021
|Canadian entrepreneurs - Waterloo AIF, first question of Part A
3 - When you're talking about future goals, you need to provide a more solid educational and working experience background to...
UndergraduateOlaMercedes - Feb 19, 2021 / Pradausa - Feb 22, 2021
|REASONS FOR CHOOSING YOUR PROGRAM AND WATERLOO - AIF form math (data science) essay
NEW - feel free to give any advices! Question 1: REASONS FOR CHOOSING YOUR PROGRAM AND WATERLOO (*REQUIRED) Please tell...
Undergraduatenasha123 - Feb 18, 2021 / — -
|Math, coop system - AIF-Reasons for Choosing The Programs
2 - You have to allot 300 characters per program. Revise the essay to clearly present your educational goal and Waterloo...
Undergraduateiwillbeaccepted - Feb 17, 2021 / Holt - Feb 17, 2021
|Reasons to choose Waterloo and mechanical engineering- Help with AIF
2 - Summarize your educational goals. It is too long. You should be able to better explain that within 2 sentences...
Undergraduatetroyswack - Feb 16, 2021 / Holt - Feb 17, 2021
|BIOMEDICAL SCIENCES - University of Waterloo AIF
4 - I believe that the reasons you give for the university of Waterloo are not specific enough and still fall...
Undergraduatehat2003 - Feb 14, 2021 / AeroSAE98 - Feb 15, 2021
|Interest in Engineering question for Waterloo
Undergraduateipuga - Feb 13, 2021 / ipuga - Feb 14, 2021
|Application Form: Provide any additional information about your High School science and math
2 - The last sentence is irrelevant. What you should have done was used a few of the word count to...
Undergraduateceleztina - Feb 12, 2021 / Holt - Feb 13, 2021
|Becoming a doctor while my trans girlfriend becomes a woman - transfer essay
2 - You covered most of the required elements in this discussion. While it is all compelling and up to date...
Undergraduatehaileybugj - Feb 10, 2021 / Holt - Feb 10, 2021
|The programming process - Q1 Waterloo AIF - "Why I applied to Waterloo Software Eng and Comp Sci"
2 - Since this is a character limited essay, you should not use irrelevant opening sentences such as the one you...
UndergraduatewannaB - Feb 9, 2021 / Holt - Feb 9, 2021
|Why to become a Sonographer?
2 - The first paragraph doesn't really focus on the needed content. The reviewer will not be interested in reading that...
Undergraduateelisalopezp01 - Feb 3, 2021 / Holt - Feb 3, 2021
|Maths/Comp Sci Waterloo AIF; discuss your interest in your chosen program(s)
2 - Your educational goals are quite impressive. However, your decision to enroll in Waterloo is commonplace. It does not carry...
UndergraduateBlazeKush - Jan 31, 2021 / Holt - Feb 1, 2021
|Second Bachelor's Statement for Linguistics - Flow and Cohesion
3 - @Holt, thank you very much for your feedback. I've reworked my essay using this as my base and am...
UndergraduateSchwa - Jan 27, 2021 / Schwa - Jan 31, 2021
|Educational Goals & Interests; Digital Media & Computer Science
2 - The presentation is clear and shows a definite interest in the individual programs as both individual courses and, a...
Undergraduatefreshmango - Jan 27, 2021 / Holt - Jan 27, 2021
|My Application Essay for Fashion School in New York
2 - You should definitely write more since you still have the space to do so. The essay was fantastic in...
Undergraduatefashionista28 - Jan 26, 2021 / Holt - Jan 26, 2021
|[PERSONAL STATEMENT KGSP-U] - I wonder if I'm being sentimental
4 - @Holt and @nhunggngu Thank you for taking the time to give some advices. I'm glad that I started early...
Undergraduateagusaefulloh - Jan 17, 2021 / agusaefulloh - Jan 23, 2021
|My education - Trinity College Supplemental Essay: How would you contribute?
3 - Hi @Holt, these are fantastic suggestions! I shall get working on them right away. Thank you for your help!...
UndergraduateRAJVEERSODHI - Jan 19, 2021 / RAJVEERSODHI - Jan 19, 2021
|Entering a software engineering programme but have no relevant background whatsoever.
2 - There is no exceptional achievement or impressive lesson learned in this presentation. These are normal and average on the...
Undergraduateimsmooth - Jan 19, 2021 / Holt - Jan 19, 2021
|Motivation Letter for Stipendium Hungaricum in Engineering field - Education is the key
3 - Hi there! Nice to know you. Dear @Holt, please excuse me, I'd like to add more feedbacks on this...
Undergraduateswitnaura - Jan 14, 2021 / yesayagm - Jan 15, 2021
|UBC PERSONAL PROFILE, WHAT IS IMPORTANT TO YOU AND WHY? "Effort"
3 - Hi! I believe you have written a highly impressive response which is sure to reflect well on your application....
Undergraduatehighschoolstuden - Jan 14, 2021 / RAJVEERSODHI - Jan 15, 2021
|Academic objectives and indicate how these are appropriate to your long-range goals.
2 - Start off with the actual topic sentence. Reverse the presentation to kick - off with, "Being an avid technophile..."...
Undergraduatebetheguy - Jan 14, 2021 / Holt - Jan 15, 2021
|Health Studies Program [AIF] -University Of Waterloo Entrance
UndergraduateRosie Do - Jan 12, 2021 / Rosie Do - Jan 15, 2021
|Both my parents - UBC Draft - What is important to you?
6 - I think your short paragraph is really nice but you have to concentrate on the Subject. It requires "skill"...
Undergraduateparinitashetty - Dec 30, 2020 / chaodendinhmo128 - Jan 14, 2021
|Waterloo AIF Advice - What could I improve? Question about educational goals, interest in program...
2 - This is what they call a non-answer. At first glance, it appears that you are responding to the prompt....
Undergraduatepnksociety - Jan 13, 2021 / Holt - Jan 14, 2021
|Overcoming a static mindset
2 - You are 15 words over the limit without addressing any aspect of the prompt requirement. There is no reference...
Undergraduateavery33 - Jan 12, 2021 / Holt - Jan 13, 2021
|My independence and ability to materialize goals - Tell us about who you are
2 - You are focused only on your proudest achievement. You have not focused on the way that various people, based...
Undergraduatepantheraleo - Jan 12, 2021 / Holt - Jan 12, 2021
|"West Point caught my attention" - Transfer Essay Help
3 - This feels close to a question you'd get in a job interview. Advice I've always received was to answer...
UndergraduateADHopeful - Jan 9, 2021 / Callipyge - Jan 12, 2021
|The jigsaw puzzle of my dreams. Motivation letter to Stipendium Hungaricum Scholarship Program
UndergraduateMarinaJoan14 - Jan 9, 2021 / MarinaJoan14 - Jan 11, 2021
|DESCRIBE UP TO FIVE ACTIVITIES THAT YOU HAVE PURSUED OR ACCOMPLISHMENT ACHIEVED
2 - The first activity is something that falls under the "Achievement" classification of the prompt. This shows your potential as...
Undergraduateschoola - Jan 9, 2021 / Holt - Jan 10, 2021
|"My interest in Mechanical Engineering is linked to my childhood" -Texas A&M Transfer SOP
3 - Thank you so much! I will go ahead and remove the paragraph you mentioned and develop the idea of...
Undergraduateax2020 - Jan 9, 2021 / ax2020 - Jan 9, 2021
|Lafayette College: What do you do? Why do you do it? // Watch movies to understand psychology.
3 - @Holt Thank you for your feedback. My main intention with the third paragraph was to demonstrate why I am...
UndergraduateRAJVEERSODHI - Jan 8, 2021 / RAJVEERSODHI - Jan 9, 2021
|Help with content & word limit: eg of how the pandemic has changed your involvement in the community
2 - The essay does not involve itself with a community or group that you belong to. The charitable act that...
UndergraduateShrxti - Jan 8, 2021 / Holt - Jan 9, 2021
|The Best Squash - UBC Sauder Questions About Handling a Problem
UndergraduateAlaana - Jan 2, 2021 / A7zanany - Jan 8, 2021
|OVERCOMING THE BEAUTY STANDARD - UNDERGRADUATE ADMISSIONS ESSAY
Undergraduatehanasharabasy - Jan 7, 2021 / hanasharabasy - Jan 7, 2021
|The Blue Crew & Counterpoint - Additional Essay to Wellesley College
3 - Thank you @Holt. What you said is true that I'm not good at imagining the future. Thank you a...
Undergraduatetoodii2102 - Jan 5, 2021 / toodii2102 - Jan 6, 2021
|Giving "Hack" A New Name | Common Application Personal Essay [Prompt #4]
UndergraduateBearByte - Jan 3, 2021 / BearByte - Jan 4, 2021
|Write your Personal Profile for UBC application - how others describe me & something I'm proud of
2 - Delete the first paragraph. That is not a requirement in this statement. Use at least 2 different points of...
UndergraduateAx9730 - Jan 3, 2021 / Holt - Jan 3, 2021
|My common app about being stuck on the mountains of Osaka, Japan and the analogy
2 - The essay itself covers a detailed discussion of your background and development as person. It does not really cover...
UndergraduateMaryam123 - Jan 2, 2021 / Holt - Jan 3, 2021
|No More What-ifs. Commonapp Essay
2 - Neither prompt you have chosen applies to this essay. The focus of the essay is on your family alone....
Undergraduatehakuryuu - Jan 2, 2021 / Holt - Jan 2, 2021
|Tell us about who you are. Include something you are proud of and why? - Graduation and tough times
2 - As this statement is based on your character when attending to different situations, avoid using a collective description for...
Undergraduatesimonp00 - Jan 2, 2021 / Holt - Jan 2, 2021
|AIF Pandemic Information - Computer Science
2 - This is a good response to the question. However, you need to better explain why you believed that turning...
Undergraduateaylak77 - Jan 2, 2021 / Holt - Jan 2, 2021
|The university application - writing about my personal qualities which describe who I am
5 - @xuanhieu2611 Maybe think about including a situation you encountered with family or friends that captures a unique perspective...
Undergraduatexuanhieu2611 - Dec 24, 2020 / aylak77 - Jan 2, 2021
|1250 feet above the ground-view; my common application essay to verify
3 - @Holt thankyou for your review i will make the required changes and if you dont mind could you mention...
Undergraduateanushka_s - Dec 31, 2020 / anushka_s - Jan 1, 2021
|Your existence is worth more than just a piece of paper / Undocumented Asian, Origami, Common App
3 - Hi, Thank you for responding My prompt was: Some students have a background, identity, interest, or talent that is...
Undergraduatenathaniadhisty - Jan 1, 2021 / nathaniadhisty - Jan 1, 2021
|STEM and the arts - reasons for choosing the CFM program at Waterloo
2 - The educational goal needs to be more precise. It needs to show a clear decision on your part to...
Undergraduatebongos - Dec 31, 2020 / Holt - Jan 1, 2021
|"If you could meet a character from a book or a historical figure..." College Supplement Prompt
2 - The response is appropriate for the task. You have managed to show the reviewer that you have a real...
Undergraduatedansiglesia - Dec 31, 2020 / Holt - Jan 1, 2021
|Common App Essay on being the youngest sibling
UndergraduateDDKang - Dec 30, 2020 / DDKang - Dec 31, 2020
|Common App Essay - The Geometry Problem
2 - Have you settled on what common apps you would want to write about? This presentation is extremely long and...
UndergraduateSauron - Dec 31, 2020 / Holt - Dec 31, 2020
|Common App Essay - My experience with grandma's Alzheimer's
3 - Thanks for the suggestions, I will try to implement them in my final draft. Otherwise, I'd appreciate it if...
UndergraduateYahia - Dec 29, 2020 / Yahia - Dec 30, 2020
|"Crescendo" - Yale RD Supplements
Undergraduateilovechipotlealo - Dec 30, 2020 / Holt - Dec 30, 2020
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