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|Dumpling of My Life - FSU Essay
2 - @koowilliam01 Hi there. Welcome to the forum. Hopefully, my feedback will give you an idea on how to improve...
Undergraduatekoowilliam01 - Nov 1, 2019 / Maria - Nov 3, 2019
|NAME AND IDENTITY - COMMONAPP 650 words or less
4 - @nochaelle04 I actually think that it should be a larger portion of your essay- you could dive into...
Undergraduatenochaelle04 - Oct 28, 2019 / lycheepeach12 - Oct 29, 2019
|Things that caught my interests in Purdue - in one hundred words or less
Undergraduateomostic21 - Oct 22, 2019 / omostic21 - Oct 26, 2019
|HOW THE SMARTPHONE CHANGED PEOPLE'S LIVES
3 - Good day, Your writeup is interesting. But can be expanded for better content. 1An essay is better when it...
Undergraduatephuongthao187 - Oct 26, 2019 / Tobechukwu - Oct 26, 2019
|Stanford students have a sense of intellectual vitality. Intellectually engaging idea or experience.
3 - More of an deep-insight-tip here, Stanford is prestigious for their weirdness and quirkiness, so you should try to make...
UndergraduateJKANG - Oct 22, 2019 / Tuguldurgnrdn - Oct 24, 2019
|Robot "02618" - Common App Essay (Setback/Failure) - Is it to cliche? Is it any good?
3 - Try to write like you talk. The descriptive writing you're going for is not working out that well for...
Undergraduateiswhars - Oct 22, 2019 / Tuguldurgnrdn - Oct 24, 2019
|When my dog died - Most Significant challenge I faced - MIT Prompt
2 - @prmchpra7 Hello there! Good luck on your MIT application. I'm going to provide you with feedback on your writing....
Undergraduateprmchpra7 - Oct 22, 2019 / Maria - Oct 24, 2019
|My passion for aviation. Congressional Nominational Essay for Air force Academy
2 - @Bpriley1414 Welcome to the forum. I hope this feedback becomes beneficial for you! Please don't hesitate to approach us...
UndergraduateBpriley1414 - Oct 20, 2019 / Maria - Oct 23, 2019
|Bike ride - A story from your life which could illustrate your character
2 - @thfdlrla Taking a first example by you learning to ride a bike, I think it's good move. Learning...
Undergraduatethfdlrla - Oct 23, 2019 / ndhnif - Oct 23, 2019
|"My world and my Dreams" MIT prompt
3 - @Maria Thanks for the feedback! The essay has word limit of 250 words. I understand that I need...
Undergraduateprmchpra7 - Oct 19, 2019 / prmchpra7 - Oct 22, 2019
|Beyond "Good" and "Bad" - Common App Essay, Prompt 3 (questioning/challenging a belief)
3 - @espeon12 Hi. Welcome to the forum. Let me provide you with feedback on your writing to hopefully help you...
Undergraduateespeon12 - Oct 14, 2019 / Maria - Oct 19, 2019
|The Importance of Education - What is important to you and why? - UBC Personal Profile
3 - @ng864 Hi. Thanks for being in the forum once more. Please don't hesitate to come back if you have...
Undergraduateng864 - Oct 16, 2019 / Maria - Oct 19, 2019
|Woman for Humanity - the person you dream of becoming and how do you believe Syracuse University
2 - @obluebeanso Hello. Thanks for coming to the forum. I'm going to give feedback on this essay of yours. Hopefully,...
Undergraduateobluebeanso - Oct 18, 2019 / Maria - Oct 19, 2019
|Multicultural affairs - Who or what influenced you to apply to Syracuse University?
Undergraduateobluebeanso - Oct 18, 2019 / obluebeanso - Oct 18, 2019
|To Work as a Software Engineer - SFU Dual Degree Prompts - Academic or career goals after university
2 - @ng864 Hi. Thanks for your continuous contributions to the forum. I hope that this feedback gives you insight on...
Undergraduateng864 - Oct 17, 2019 / Maria - Oct 18, 2019
|My interest in Computer Science and Chinese Culture - SFU Dual Degree Program Statement of Interest
2 - @ng864 Thanks for your continuous participation in the platform. I'm here again to give you feedback on this essay...
Undergraduateng864 - Oct 16, 2019 / Maria - Oct 18, 2019
|Student with passion for technology - UBC Personal Profile - Who are you?
2 - @ng864 Hi. Thanks for your continuous support and feedback into this site. We're hoping that you've learned something valuable...
Undergraduateng864 - Oct 15, 2019 / Maria - Oct 18, 2019
|Common app essay - The gaming Cafe. A challenge, setback, or failure and its effect on me.
4 - @suckasmack Thank you so much for your feedback! But do you think I should change the topic? Some people...
Undergraduatesoo010207 - Oct 9, 2019 / soo010207 - Oct 15, 2019
|"The Heartbeat" - APPLICATION ESSAY - TELL US WHO YOU ARE
2 - @chikhnguyen16 Welcome to the forum. I'm going to provide you with my feedback on this writing to hopefully help...
Undergraduatechikhnguyen16 - Oct 13, 2019 / Maria - Oct 14, 2019
|Striving for the best - UBC Personal Profile Question. Tell us about who you are.
2 - @ShaylaC Thank you for being in the forum. I'm here to give feedback on this essay of yours. ...
UndergraduateShaylaC - Oct 11, 2019 / Maria - Oct 14, 2019
|About My Father - Princeton Supplement Essay - a person who has influenced you in a significant way
2 - @rouyi Welcome to the forum. I am here to help you by providing feedback on this essay. Firstly,...
Undergraduaterouyi - Oct 10, 2019 / Maria - Oct 14, 2019
|My Gender - Common app 4 - A problem of significance to you and steps that can be taken to solve it.
2 - @StephVan Welcome to the forum. I'll be providing you with feedback on your writing. Content-wise, I find that...
UndergraduateStephVan - Oct 10, 2019 / Maria - Oct 14, 2019
|Women and Volunteer Essay UIC
2 - @Essay19 Welcome here. I hope you're doing good. Let me give you feedback on this writing first and foremost....
UndergraduateEssay19 - Oct 9, 2019 / Maria - Oct 11, 2019
|"Life is what happens while you are busy making other plans" - FIT application essay
2 - @TovaW Hi, welcome to the forum. I'm going to provide you feedback on this writing; and, hopefully, it will...
UndergraduateTovaW - Oct 8, 2019 / Maria - Oct 11, 2019
|Discipline, family, climate - WHAT IS IMPORTANT TO YOU AND WHY?
2 - @chopraribhav Welcome to the forum. Here, I'm going to provide you with feedback on your writing. Firstly, be...
Undergraduatechopraribhav - Oct 8, 2019 / Maria - Oct 11, 2019
|A sense of belonging - Students identify Lafayette as an excellent fit for countless reasons.
2 - @pramodk18 Welcome here! I hope that this feedback somehow gives you insight on writing. Don't hesitate to always approach...
Undergraduatepramodk18 - Oct 8, 2019 / Maria - Oct 11, 2019
|Flying - Purdue Opportunities Essay. How do the opportunities at Purdue support my interests?
2 - @suckasmack Hi! Welcome to the forum. I hope that this feedback becomes helpful. Firstly, the first sentence immediately...
Undergraduatesuckasmack - Oct 7, 2019 / Maria - Oct 9, 2019
|Why my major and what opportunities at Georgia Tech will prepare me in that field after graduation?
2 - @Shkr Welcome to the forum! I'm here to provide you with feedback on your writing. I hope this truly...
UndergraduateShkr - Oct 7, 2019 / Maria - Oct 9, 2019
|UBC personal profile - who am I? My natural ability and determination.
2 - @celinehb Hey, welcome to the forum. I'm here to provide you with feedback on this writing. I hope this...
Undergraduatecelinehb - Oct 2, 2019 / Maria - Oct 2, 2019
|I am very dedicated to pursuing a career in computer science and Engineering; personal statement
4 - @jozaif12 Hello there! Welcome to the forum. I hope this feedback becomes helpful for your writing endeavors. If it...
Undergraduatejozaif12 - Sep 26, 2019 / Maria - Sep 27, 2019
|I want to study psychology - Personal statements 2021 kgsp undergraduate
2 - @nicole10115 Hi there, welcome to the forum! I hope this feedback becomes helpful for your writing endeavors. If it...
Undergraduatenicole10115 - Sep 24, 2019 / Maria - Sep 26, 2019
|Studying abroad - My personal Statement for Apply GKS
UndergraduateMulya Hadi 99 - Sep 17, 2019 / ochanlebong7 - Sep 23, 2019
|The complexity of Climate Change - Princeton essay
3 - Hi! I was wondered this topic. Actually, The change of weather is one of the most problem that all...
Undergraduatequavius - Sep 21, 2019 / Estelle133 - Sep 22, 2019
|Describe problems connected with overpopulation and propose resolutions to this issue
2 - @longpm2k Hi longpm2k! I'm not an expert, so please just ignore if my advice doesn't actually help... I think...
Undergraduatelongpm2k - Sep 19, 2019 / yui meow - Sep 19, 2019
|UC Personal Insight Question #2: Every person has a creative side...
Undergraduateashymustard - Sep 17, 2019 / ashymustard - Sep 18, 2019
|Write about a person who has made a meaningful impact on you. Hasan Minhaj.
2 - @quavius Hey there. I'll be providing you with feedback on this essay - no worries! I hope that you...
Undergraduatequavius - Sep 17, 2019 / Maria - Sep 18, 2019
|Efficiency of human with respect to social class (Common app essay)
2 - @Browny Welcome, Browny! I hope you have been lurking around and enjoying what we offer in this site. If...
UndergraduateBrowny - Sep 17, 2019 / Maria - Sep 18, 2019
|Study Plan for learning language for KGSP Undergraduate Program - before and after entry
3 - thank youu...
UndergraduateZelk0vA - Sep 16, 2019 / Zelk0vA - Sep 18, 2019
|My Statistics Personal Statement (GKS Undergraduate)
2 - I really think you're on the right track with this essay but it's missing one crucial detail. You do...
Undergraduateposeidonchild - Sep 15, 2019 / quavius - Sep 17, 2019
|Common App, Singapore's Third-Culture Kid
2 - @ferna9624 Hello there. Welcome to the forum! I hope that this feedback serves you well in your application process....
Undergraduateferna9624 - Sep 15, 2019 / Maria - Sep 16, 2019
|My Study Plan with the schedule of learning Korean and English for KGSP undergraduate Program
2 - Hi there! Glad i found someone that is applying for the same scholarship as me. I hope my advice...
Undergraduategiwang indri - Sep 15, 2019 / alyssa2036 - Sep 15, 2019
|Volunteer - description of your professional background and current work, including accomplishment
Undergraduateizahnelson13 - Sep 13, 2019 / izahnelson13 - Sep 15, 2019
|Computing and Programming - Georgia Tech Supplemental Essay
4 - @Maria Thanks for the feedback. I guess I will pretty much have to write it scratch as it seems...
UndergraduateTheShubhi - Sep 1, 2019 / TheShubhi - Sep 14, 2019
|"Genius Festival" - Personal Statement
3 - @Maria I write this essay for college application (personal statement). Tks for your advice <3...
Undergraduatechi_l_2002252 - Aug 29, 2019 / chi_l_2002252 - Sep 11, 2019
|MIT Pleasure Short Essay (PokemonGo): I don't know if I should even keep this specific topic
2 - @dzlhrt Hi there. Welcome to the forum! I apologize for the delay. However, I hope that this feedback becomes...
Undergraduatedzlhrt - Sep 5, 2019 / Maria - Sep 11, 2019
|DARTMOUTH supplement - introduce yourself mo'olelo
3 - @jasmine12 thank you! how did you like concept of the essay overall? @Holt I'd really appreciate your feedback....
Undergraduatembigl - Sep 2, 2019 / mbigl - Sep 11, 2019
|like a neutron - Computer Science and Beyond Common App Essay
Undergraduatesharvilgrg - Sep 8, 2019 / sharvilgrg - Sep 8, 2019
|Commonapp essay on mathematics - share your story about an interest or talent
2 - @DodgeCharger Hi there. Welcome to the forum! As you are here, I wish you the best of luck in...
UndergraduateDodgeCharger - Sep 1, 2019 / Maria - Sep 7, 2019
|Independent Study and Research findings in Additional Information on Common App
2 - @Bastian Hi there. Welcome to the forum. I hope that you find this feedback to be beneficial for your...
UndergraduateBastian - Aug 31, 2019 / Maria - Sep 7, 2019
|The Great Depression / Economics - Transfer Application Essay for Georgia Tech
3 - Hello, I admire your passion for your choice, and it seems like you have a big decision of your...
Undergraduatejakefire10 - Aug 30, 2019 / quavius - Sep 6, 2019
|Why a Model? - EXPERIENCES YOU HAVE HAD THAT HAVE HELPED TO DEFINE YOU AS A PERSON
2 - @buttercup3 Hi there. Welcome to the forum. I hope it's not too late to provide you with a brief...
Undergraduatebuttercup3 - Aug 30, 2019 / Maria - Sep 5, 2019
|UT-Dallas Prompt B - Minecraft and how it affected me as a person
2 - @Noah_177 Hi there. Welcome to the forum! I hope you find this feedback to be helpful for your writing...
UndergraduateNoah_177 - Aug 29, 2019 / Maria - Sep 5, 2019
|Common app prompt 6 (engaging activities) - Investing with Dad
2 - @quavius Hi there. Welcome to the forum! We're always open to other people being a part of our community....
Undergraduatequavius - Sep 1, 2019 / Maria - Sep 2, 2019
|Urbana-Champaign Essay review/edits Computer Science - Artificial Intelligence and Bioinformatics
3 - The third paragraph starts to share your specific origin story, like that of a superhero. In the third paragraph,...
UndergraduateAviPatel1 - Aug 31, 2019 / pc_pc - Sep 1, 2019
|Your reasons for applying to the University of Waterloo; my interest in computer engineering
2 - @tennis_ball1 Hi there! Welcome to the forum. Seeing as you are new here, don't be afraid to keep coming...
Undergraduatetennis_ball1 - Aug 25, 2019 / Maria - Aug 29, 2019
|I want to pursue a degree in Computer Engineering or Mechanical Engineering - AIF reply
3 - @Maria Thanks a lot! I'll keep working on it. BTW, I don't know if it's unique enough to appeal...
Undergraduaterazor0424 - Aug 23, 2019 / razor0424 - Aug 29, 2019
|Electrical circuit - My Columbia Engineering Essay
Undergraduatedeladenoo - Aug 17, 2019 / deladenoo - Aug 29, 2019
|Becoming a USNA graduate - Congressional Nomination Essay
2 - @colt2002 Hi there. Welcome back here! I hope that you've found the forum to be helpful for your writing...
Undergraduatecolt2002 - Aug 23, 2019 / Maria - Aug 28, 2019
|Taiwan trip - the impact of this experience and the greatest learning outcome for you
2 - @Kelly Pender Hi there. Apologize for the delay. I'm here to provide you feedback on your writing. I'm...
UndergraduateKelly Pender - Aug 21, 2019 / Maria - Aug 28, 2019
|University of Michigan Supplement Essay--My Time in the Navy
2 - @saubesas Hi there. I see that you're new here. Welcome to the forum! I hope that you find this...
Undergraduatesaubesas - Aug 20, 2019 / Maria - Aug 27, 2019
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