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|Toefl - Advertising can tell you a lot about a country
7 - You should write at least two paragraphs for the TOEFL independent essay. Your word count is low and you...
Writing Feedbacksandipsinh - Feb 13, 2014 / ramshah - Mar 15, 2014
|Advantages and disadvantages of the internet. Increasing the living standards?
Writing Feedbackrrivanh - Apr 16, 2011 / paula13 - Mar 15, 2014
|IELTS TASK 1 (Map) - Planned Shopping Center Locations
2 - The map shows illustrates town planning for two potential locations (B and A) for atwo new shopping centers(A and...
Writing FeedbackJasS - Mar 14, 2014 / dumi - Mar 14, 2014
|Destiny and Character; "Your moments of decisions affect your Destiny"
Writing FeedbackSaqib - Oct 25, 2013 / Faith318 - Mar 14, 2014
|IELTS: Letter to your friend - 'we all can have some lunch together'
Writing FeedbackArun0506 - Mar 14, 2014 / Faith318 - Mar 14, 2014
|Topic: My favorite three ways of communications.
5 - .... transformed life to what? You need to specify! Secondly, the Internet has been instrumental in transforming our...
Writing Feedbackuzboy - Mar 11, 2014 / dumi - Mar 14, 2014
|IELTS;Popular events are essential in easing international tension
Writing FeedbackGichki - Mar 14, 2014 / dumi - Mar 14, 2014
|High salaries to sportsmen or other important professions; equally hard work
Writing Feedbackrachana - Feb 28, 2014 / eddies - Mar 14, 2014
|IELTS WRITING TASK 1; Annual expenditure of a British school
Writing Feedbackmona bhadange - Mar 12, 2014 / mona bhadange - Mar 14, 2014
|Relationship between HIGH SALES & POWER OF ADVERTISING
Writing Feedbackmariasultana - Feb 28, 2014 / eddies - Mar 14, 2014
|Traffic jams in big cities - headache question for the government to solve
Writing FeedbackThanh Thuy - Feb 13, 2014 / Pahan - Mar 14, 2014
|IELTS Task 1 : Australian children leisure activity
5 - I quite agree with eddies :) "attractive noticeable trends" - the word "attractive" does not provide...
Writing FeedbackSHanafi - Mar 14, 2014 / Pahan - Mar 14, 2014
|"Pohela Falgun" - The custom of my country that I like most and will encourage to follow TOEFL essay
Writing Feedbackjon_snow - Mar 11, 2014 / jon_snow - Mar 14, 2014
|Some people fail on their school but achieve success in their adult life. Why do you think
3 - here is the prompt: and Were I you, I would start analyzing the prompt, like this: Topic/discussion:...
Writing Feedbackagi - Feb 13, 2014 / eddies - Mar 13, 2014
|"to teach or understand the concept of the topic" - purpose of teaching and learning is same
7 - a closer look at the prompt given. Here, you should focus this topic on keywords: important ideas,...
Writing Feedbacksandipsinh - Feb 12, 2014 / eddies - Mar 13, 2014
|IELTS task 1: The continuous movement of water on, above & below the surface of the Earth
7 - You are welcome, Eddy :) And also, congratulations on your IELTS score! You deserve it every bit :-D...
Writing Feedbackeddies - Mar 7, 2014 / MisterWandering - Mar 13, 2014
|IELTS TASK 1 - Bar and Line Charts! Tourists Of Japan Travelling Abroad!
Writing FeedbackJasS - Mar 12, 2014 / JasS - Mar 13, 2014
|My friend veipune
5 - Firstly, I learnedshe helped me learn how important it is to hold a positive attitude was importantin life. She...
Writing Feedbackveipune - Feb 27, 2014 / dumi - Mar 13, 2014
|belong to a middle class; Being a celebrity - such as a famous film star or ...
5 - To begin with, many celebrities earn extremely large amount of money, that is millions and millions of US dollars....
Writing Feedbackevstigneeff - Mar 13, 2014 / dumi - Mar 13, 2014
|IELTS task 2: The position of women in society has changed markedly in the last 20 years.
Writing Feedbackeddies - Feb 22, 2014 / dumi - Mar 13, 2014
|IELTS task 2: What to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers.
Writing Feedbackeddies - Mar 3, 2014 / Pahan - Mar 13, 2014
|Ielts writing test 1. Cement and concrete production diagrams. Ielts8
11 - The diagram illustrates the production process of cement which is one of the raw material used for concrete production...
Writing Feedbackipanema13 - Feb 10, 2014 / mona bhadange - Mar 13, 2014
|TOEFL ESSAY - Short stories are preferred more than movies,explain your position.
7 - Reading stories were( are )good means of amusement in primitive days Great emphasis! :) Please undo it. I'm sure...
Writing Feedbacksandipsinh - Mar 12, 2014 / niesaysi - Mar 13, 2014
|TOEFL: Which is better- Learning foreign language in home or host country?
Writing Feedbackmax2014 - Mar 12, 2014 / sandipsinh - Mar 13, 2014
|TOEFL : business research or agriculture research. What do you recommend for your country?
Writing Feedbackmax2014 - Mar 11, 2014 / max2014 - Mar 12, 2014
|IELTS TASK 2 : Problems that overpopulation causes and suggest solution.
Writing FeedbackSHanafi - Mar 8, 2014 / ahqaf - Mar 12, 2014
|IELTS Task I : Flowchart process of academic writing
6 - Thank you, Tuan. You correct the grammar and syntax wholly. I found in the dictionary, and i consider ...
Writing FeedbackSHanafi - Mar 7, 2014 / SHanafi - Mar 11, 2014
|Priority: The happiness of the majority vs the rights of individuals?
3 - A vast amountMany of people believe that the happiness of the majority is more important, while others claim that...
Writing FeedbackAbdurasul - Mar 11, 2014 / dumi - Mar 11, 2014
|IELTS- How should the value of a person be evaluated?
3 - First, I have an admin request. You need to have a more meaningful topic in the Subject field when...
Writing Feedbackthuongph170292 - Mar 11, 2014 / dumi - Mar 11, 2014
|IELTS - HAPPINESS; Why it is difficult to define and What factors contribute to achieving?
3 - The actual reason is that different people perceive happiness differently. These perceptions may have been shaped by their...
Writing FeedbackGichki - Mar 11, 2014 / dumi - Mar 11, 2014
|TOEFL: 'reach the zenith' Some people prefer to work for a large company.
3 - Thanks for the appraise. Could you be more specific? Are you saying both of my reasons are incomplete or...
Writing Feedbackbestonline99 - Mar 11, 2014 / bestonline99 - Mar 11, 2014
|Today, man is master and machine is slave but tomorrow, machine will be master and man wil
6 - You write very well. However, this does not follow the style that you are required to present at...
Writing Feedbackbwosti - Mar 11, 2014 / Pahan - Mar 11, 2014
|IELTS TASK 2: Young people are much aware about issues than previous generations.
3 - Your introduction seems to be ok! But you haven't written: Hook - An interesting statement to catch the reader's...
Writing FeedbackSHanafi - Mar 11, 2014 / Abdurasul - Mar 11, 2014
|Priority: Industrial skills vs Education?
Writing FeedbackAbdurasul - Mar 10, 2014 / Abdurasul - Mar 11, 2014
|My father wanted doctor profession for me; subject without opportunity to study
5 - i think your second reason is not strong enough. You already took your higher education on Management despite protest...
Writing Feedbacksandipsinh - Mar 11, 2014 / jon_snow - Mar 11, 2014
|An email to the hotel asking for a favor
2 - I have a reservation at your hotel as follows, Name: XXXXXXXXXXX Telephone: XXXX-XXXXXX Expiration dateValid till: XXXXXXXXX My husband...
Writing Feedbackmaych - Mar 11, 2014 / dumi - Mar 11, 2014
|The twenty-first century has begun. What changes do you think this new century will bring?
2 - First, it is good to mention the purpose of this writing. Is this for IELTS or TOEFL? Others can...
Writing Feedbackhakuyo1112 - Mar 11, 2014 / dumi - Mar 11, 2014
|Essay For Toefl: how can schools help new students with their problems?
9 - Well, that's fine. This forum is for everybody to express their views on others' writing in view of helping...
Writing Feedbackjon_snow - Mar 6, 2014 / dumi - Mar 11, 2014
|Learning from experience or from book, TOEFL
6 - Sure :) This is what I would do for this intro; "Intellectual growth should commence at birth...
Writing Feedbacksntinn - Mar 6, 2014 / dumi - Mar 11, 2014
|Toefl essay: part time job for teenage students
5 - When we talk about student, we generally mean a boy or a girl who study in school or college....
Writing Feedbackjon_snow - Mar 10, 2014 / hakuyo1112 - Mar 11, 2014
|Attend college support people to go through their bitter or sweet student life
6 - Hey there. Your ideas are good but i suggest that you write 3 separate paragraphs about 'Some people want...
Writing Feedbackcharllote0825 - Mar 9, 2014 / hakuyo1112 - Mar 11, 2014
|IELTS task 2: Capital punishment (the death penalty) in society
Writing Feedbackeddies - Feb 24, 2014 / rairaichan0323 - Mar 11, 2014
|'the figure fluctuated between 1920 and 1940' - Birth Rates in China and the USA
3 - Thank you I'll analyse it, but I wrote this essay according to "Introduction, Overview, Details, Details" stucture which was...
Writing FeedbackJasS - Mar 10, 2014 / JasS - Mar 11, 2014
|Television dominates the free time for too many people& prevent from socializing?
Writing Feedbackshezad - Mar 10, 2014 / dumi - Mar 11, 2014
|IELTS; Who should pay tuition fees for adults who are interested in university studies?
5 - Well, I don't see this as a strong reason to justify your position - government should sponsor adult...
Writing FeedbackGichki - Mar 10, 2014 / dumi - Mar 10, 2014
|IELTS; Who's responsible for one's health? The individual or society?
Writing Feedbackrairaichan0323 - Mar 10, 2014 / dumi - Mar 10, 2014
|IELTS - Negative effects of Globalization
Writing FeedbackGichki - Mar 10, 2014 / Gichki - Mar 10, 2014
|Driving education course before being licensed can reduce the number of traffic accidents.
Writing FeedbackAbdurasul - Mar 10, 2014 / Abdurasul - Mar 10, 2014
|Too many subjects or specialize in one, which is better?
3 - I agree with Pahan. Try to maintain a proper alignment with what your prompt suggests. :) .......
Writing Feedbackmia_01 - Mar 10, 2014 / dumi - Mar 10, 2014
|IELTS task 2: The traditional skills and ways of life die out.
4 - Well, this sounds like an example and not a reason that you use to justify a particular opinion....
Writing Feedbackeddies - Mar 7, 2014 / Pahan - Mar 10, 2014
|IELTS task 1: The total number of minutes (in millions) of telephone calls in Finland
Writing Feedbackeddies - Mar 7, 2014 / Pahan - Mar 10, 2014
|IELTS, Society will produce happy people if there's little gap between rich and the poor
4 - Well, it is not clear that how maintaining the justice would help reduce the gap between rich people...
Writing Feedbackagi - Mar 9, 2014 / Pahan - Mar 10, 2014
|IELTS TASK 2 : increasing the number of sport facilities in order to improve public health
Writing FeedbackMowonight - Mar 8, 2014 / Mowonight - Mar 10, 2014
|SAT ; Suspect honesty and motives of people?
2 - Well, you start with expressing your opinion. However, in my view, it is good to open your essay...
Writing FeedbackThePariah - Mar 7, 2014 / dumi - Mar 10, 2014
|IELTS task 2: Good exam results at school or college guarantee success in life.
4 - .... This is not an effective hook . I find it's pretty too long and contain some inappropriate...
Writing Feedbackeddies - Mar 7, 2014 / dumi - Mar 10, 2014
|IELTS task 2: The rise of overweight children in developed countries
3 - Well, have you been able to complete this task within 30 mins? Your essay looks pretty lengthy. Especially your...
Writing Feedbackeddies - Mar 7, 2014 / dumi - Mar 10, 2014
|IELTS Let students still have some challenges in art-based subjects, but not give mark on their work
Writing FeedbackMica1988 - Mar 8, 2014 / Mica1988 - Mar 10, 2014
|Reasons one should start (or not start) college right after high school..ESSAY
2 - First, you need to open your essays in the right forum. This should have been opened in the Writing...
Writing Feedbackgennabug - Mar 9, 2014 / dumi - Mar 10, 2014
|IELTS Task 2. As children become adults their social behavior changes in some ways.
4 - Well, it is not actually about the length of your paras. It is about the contents. In your body...
Writing Feedbacklarkkk - Mar 8, 2014 / Pahan - Mar 9, 2014
|IELTS Task 2: Fast food is unhealthy. Do you agree and disagree?
Writing Feedbackshezad - Mar 4, 2014 / eddies - Mar 9, 2014
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