The cycle of the salmon in diverse habitats and stages
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The Criminals Lead People To Stay At Home...___...IELTS Task 2
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IELTS 1: the wealth in a country versus population proportions in various regions of the world
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IELTS TASK 1: Cinema visitors description in the Great Britain in 2 decades
Writing Feedbackichanpants89 - Apr 4, 2016 / justivy03 - Apr 4, 2016
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IELTS TASK 2 e-book as an additional format and it can not replace the presence of a printed book
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The best alernative to prevent crime - 'apply a stringent penalties'
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To solve the fear of crime problem. What official has done is not sufficient to restrict it.
Writing Feedbackbastian20 - Apr 4, 2016 / suxiaojing - Apr 4, 2016
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Salmon put their eggs in the upper river which has slow moving currents - facts from this fish life
Writing Feedbacknurannisaputry92 - Apr 4, 2016 / justivy03 - Apr 4, 2016
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The statistics data about cinema visitors based on different age groups in the United Kingdom
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After 4 years in Lower River, salmons fry will grow into smolts which have size roughly 12-15 cm
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CHARTS the age and gender of single-occupant households as well as how many bedrooms in their houses
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This species originally hatch in fresh water, then live in the sea when it grows. The life of salmon
Writing Feedbackangga93 - Apr 4, 2016 / justivy03 - Apr 4, 2016
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The growth of salmon begin when eggs from adult salmon laid out at small stones under the reeds
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Salmon Life Cycle. It lives in upper-river which move slowly as an egg for 5 until 6 months.
Writing Feedbackyonathan66 - Apr 4, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Apr 4, 2016
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IELTS TASK I: the satisfaction of spending money - in shops, restaurants, and design (New Zealand)
Writing Feedbackfardan10 - Apr 3, 2016 / justivy03 - Apr 4, 2016
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Taks 1 : the employees according to their gender in the Great Britain
Writing FeedbackLaPolo11 - Apr 3, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Apr 4, 2016
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Does Charging Tourist For Admission Has More Merits Than Demerits?
Writing Feedbackyonathan66 - Apr 4, 2016 / Hadiyati Fudla - Apr 4, 2016
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From the chart: Native Australia experienced the largest number entering Movie Theater at 70%
Writing FeedbackDesty22 - Apr 3, 2016 / justivy03 - Apr 4, 2016
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Many citizens should pay admission to visit museum. Money is spent eg. for rebuilding the facility.
Writing Feedbacknurannisaputry92 - Apr 4, 2016 / rahmat248 - Apr 4, 2016
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IELTS TASK 2: Whether crime prevention should be done or not.
Writing Feedbackichanpants89 - Apr 4, 2016 / La Baso - Apr 4, 2016
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A fixed punishment delivers some benefits for human being - IELTS TASK 2.
Writing Feedbacknelarizka79 - Apr 3, 2016 / La Baso - Apr 4, 2016
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The advantages gain by museums when charging visitors for admission
Writing FeedbackRAY93 - Apr 4, 2016 / La Baso - Apr 4, 2016
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The consideration of entrance fee in some museums
Writing Feedbacktiraatira11 - Apr 4, 2016 / fardan10 - Apr 4, 2016
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Museums are supposed to be affordable to all people
Writing FeedbackYusri31 - Apr 4, 2016 / LaPolo11 - Apr 4, 2016
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Charging people for admission to the museums; original writing, 40 minutes
Writing Feedbackangga93 - Apr 4, 2016 / fardan10 - Apr 4, 2016
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IELTS TASK 2: The rich and poor nations have the gap after that what the cause and solution the case
Writing Feedbackdina79 - Apr 3, 2016 / LaPolo11 - Apr 4, 2016
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Railway passengers in the U.K. In 1950, the National train stood at top rank with 1,000 users
Writing Feedbackfardan10 - Apr 4, 2016 / tiraatira11 - Apr 4, 2016
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IELTS Task 2 Government should introduce new technologies or offer free education to improve life
Writing FeedbackElvis_S - Apr 4, 2016 / angga93 - Apr 4, 2016
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The life cycle of salmon marine creature - big size of fish in river and in ocean habitat
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Tourism can cause some problems in socio-culture due to its bad influence.
Writing Feedbackadeclara - Apr 3, 2016 / Yusri31 - Apr 4, 2016
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Helping the young generation be ready to face the globalization era is the task of education sector.
Writing Feedbacknelarizka79 - Apr 3, 2016 / RAY93 - Apr 4, 2016
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IELTS TASK 1. Four places visited by three different people migrants living in Australia
Writing Feedbacknelarizka79 - Apr 3, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Apr 4, 2016
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IELTS writing Task 2 : The media in people's lives and politicians
Writing Feedbacklily89 - Apr 3, 2016 / Wolf Larsen - Apr 4, 2016
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Can we get more knowledge about the whole world only by television broadcasts or movies?
Writing FeedbackMasfufah - Apr 3, 2016 / fardan10 - Apr 4, 2016
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Increasing a large number of flight is widely known in whole world. What is the effect of this?
Writing Feedbacklily89 - Apr 3, 2016 / RAY93 - Apr 4, 2016
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Writing Task 2: In order to be happy, you must have a job you love doing
Writing FeedbackMasfufah - Apr 3, 2016 / fardan10 - Apr 4, 2016
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IELTS 2 : Rich vs Poor Nations - income achievement gap has been growing for at least fifty years
Writing Feedbacklily89 - Apr 3, 2016 / fardan10 - Apr 4, 2016
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Issue price of stuff about the which are relatively inexpensive
Writing Feedbackrahmat248 - Apr 1, 2016 / yonathan66 - Apr 4, 2016
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The massive usage of electronic media has a drawback on the society's private relationships.
Writing FeedbackRAY93 - Mar 28, 2016 / nurannisaputry92 - Apr 3, 2016
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Some people argue that those who live in apartment tower is far from social life; IELTS
Writing Feedbackadeclara - Apr 3, 2016 / yonathan66 - Apr 3, 2016
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The pie chart presented the plus points and problems the most general categories of Fairmont Islands
Writing FeedbackDesty22 - Apr 3, 2016 / Sawsana - Apr 3, 2016
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Almost a half of the Fairmont Island disbenefits come from high cost living
Writing FeedbackLita27 - Apr 3, 2016 / Sawsana - Apr 3, 2016
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The general merits and demerits of visiting Fairmont Island; expensive living cost was complained
Writing Feedbacknelarizka79 - Apr 3, 2016 / Sawsana - Apr 3, 2016
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IELTS TASK I: cell-pone market share - upward trend in Nokia, Motorola, and Sony Ericsson.
Writing Feedbackfardan10 - Apr 3, 2016 / xutong - Apr 3, 2016
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Task 1 : mobile phone manufacture for two consecutive years (2005 and 2006)
Writing FeedbackLaPolo11 - Apr 3, 2016 / xutong - Apr 3, 2016
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It is clear for me that the increasing percentage of overweight among children is parents' mistakes
Writing Feedbacknelarizka79 - Apr 3, 2016 / adeclara - Apr 3, 2016
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Early education boosts creativity, although it can bring detrimental effect on mentality development
Writing Feedbacknurannisaputry92 - Apr 1, 2016 / nelarizka79 - Apr 3, 2016
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Tourism can give bad impacts for local culture and environment. There are several ways to reduce it.
Writing Feedbackrahmat248 - Apr 1, 2016 / nelarizka79 - Apr 3, 2016
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The percentage of people attending several public areas in Australia
Writing FeedbackLita27 - Apr 3, 2016 / dina79 - Apr 3, 2016
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There is no consensus about the learning foreign language age for children among experts.
Writing Feedbackmeco - Apr 3, 2016 / dina79 - Apr 3, 2016
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Many people say that the bliss count on money whilst another say that money is not all in life.
Writing FeedbackWiwik Mujahidin - Apr 3, 2016 / lily89 - Apr 3, 2016
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Human eagerness to purchasing unnecessary items; IELTS TASK 2.
Writing Feedbacknelarizka79 - Apr 3, 2016 / adeclara - Apr 3, 2016
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'keep-in-touch with the entire world'; Without the internet, the world would be completely different
Writing Feedbackadeclara - Apr 3, 2016 / nelarizka79 - Apr 3, 2016
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Punishment is given to someone who breaks the rule; fixed punishment for all kinds of crimes?
Writing FeedbackDesty22 - Apr 3, 2016 / Lita27 - Apr 3, 2016
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The effect of global trade increase - goverment changes so local companies can take advantage of it
Writing FeedbackMasfufah - Apr 3, 2016 / adeclara - Apr 3, 2016
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Lack of emotional and social education from family as the main cause of crimes among teenagers
Writing FeedbackLaPolo11 - Apr 3, 2016 / lily89 - Apr 3, 2016
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A breakdown of employment labour from different genders based on the kinds of job in Britain 2005
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Holidaymakers and businessmen have been enjoyed the ease and convenience of air transportation
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Task 1 : The charts show in percentage in terms of the results of a survey of a new shop
Writing FeedbackLaPolo11 - Apr 2, 2016 / nelarizka79 - Apr 3, 2016
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Child labor is a common and dangerous phenomenon in some parts of the world.
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