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|IELTS: The development of a coastal village
Writing FeedbackMisterWandering - May 21, 2013 / Helio - May 24, 2013
|GRE Issue Task; More technology for problem solving results in less ability to think?
Writing FeedbackDips - May 24, 2013 / Dips - May 24, 2013
|The Mass Media Control; Differents Risks and Points of View
4 - Thanks a lot for your help, both of you. I've managed to correct the mistakes that kridUessay found, but...
Writing FeedbackFco_94 - May 23, 2013 / Fco_94 - May 24, 2013
|Shorris's studies show the reader that a change is possible in any community
2 - overcome the division? .... interrogation means questioning, inquiring etc. and mostly used in criminology. Is...
Writing FeedbackFreenchy - May 24, 2013 / dumi - May 24, 2013
|People are now more interested in using seafood and some products from seafoods than ever before
3 - No one can deny that many ocean species have become endangered due to human over-fishing across the...
Writing FeedbackHelio - May 23, 2013 / dumi - May 23, 2013
|Living in the countryside better in Vietnam
Writing Feedbacklele1987 - May 22, 2013 / lele1987 - May 23, 2013
|TOEFL :Which do u prefer living in an apartment or living in a dorm?
Writing FeedbackMax Payne - May 21, 2013 / LAB 328 - May 22, 2013
|Marriage older is more advantageous than marrying at young age!
Writing Feedbacktruongnhunhan - May 21, 2013 / dumi - May 22, 2013
|IELTS; Students from rural areas find difficult to receive higher education
6 - ... Start with a sentence which has more relevance to your topic. Ideally, it should introduce your topic...
Writing FeedbackNancy Quan - May 19, 2013 / dumi - May 22, 2013
|Important truths begin as outrageous, or at least uncomfortable, attacks.....
Writing Feedbacksanilt237 - May 22, 2013 / dumi - May 22, 2013
|Why do crime rates increase? How to arrest this issue?
Writing Feedbackartlife - May 21, 2013 / Pahan - May 22, 2013
|Criticism of Modern Primary Education System
Writing FeedbackTneufy11 - May 13, 2013 / Pahan - May 22, 2013
|How does rapid economic development affect a country?
Writing FeedbackMisterWandering - May 21, 2013 / MisterWandering - May 22, 2013
|The advantages and disadvantages of study in other country
Writing Feedbackanup80 - May 21, 2013 / dumi - May 21, 2013
|"Made in China"; Fake products produced in China
Writing FeedbackFiorella Li - May 21, 2013 / Habib Rastegar - May 21, 2013
|Which one do you prefer? A student-based class or a lectured-based class.
Writing FeedbackHabib Rastegar - May 21, 2013 / Habib Rastegar - May 21, 2013
|IELTS; How to reduce traffic in cities? Should it be by reducing the need for travel?
4 - This is much better than what you've written first. I'm sure Pahan too would agree. However, even this...
Writing FeedbackMisterWandering - May 21, 2013 / dumi - May 21, 2013
|In my opinion, daily homework is necessary; Reasons & Examples
Writing FeedbackSapodils - May 20, 2013 / Sapodils - May 21, 2013
|Which is more advantages? Marrying young or older?
2 - .... is that so? I thought people now tend to postpone marriage compared to older generations. ...
Writing Feedbacktruongnhunhan - May 21, 2013 / Pahan - May 21, 2013
|IELTS :Creativity needs freedom and so do the creative artists; Do you agree?
2 - ... In this sentence, I don't find any relevance to your topic. That's a bit dangerous because everything...
Writing FeedbackSecilia - May 21, 2013 / dumi - May 21, 2013
|Increasing price of petrol would not help controlling traffic
Writing FeedbackRavLlika - May 20, 2013 / dumi - May 21, 2013
|What Should People Do To Become Healthier?
Writing FeedbackMuath1987 - May 20, 2013 / Muath1987 - May 20, 2013
|'less stress'; Games are as important for adults as they are for children.
Writing Feedbackgp2013 - May 20, 2013 / dumi - May 20, 2013
|IELTS; Changing jobs and living places - Good or Bad?
5 - Well.... your prompt does not ask for reasons for changing jobs...it asks you whether it's a positive or...
Writing FeedbackNancy Quan - May 19, 2013 / dumi - May 20, 2013
|TOEFL : which on do you prefer? serious movies or amusing movies
Writing FeedbackS0heil - May 19, 2013 / S0heil - May 20, 2013
|It's a good idea to allow students take a long break in order to work or travel
Writing Feedbackhomsai - May 8, 2013 / Muath1987 - May 20, 2013
|Narrate how did you overcome the challenges to achieve your goal(s) in life
6 - I appreciate your revision. You have changed it more concise. Would it be more appropriate if I am...
Writing Feedbackniesaysi - May 6, 2013 / niesaysi - May 20, 2013
|A person's passion and dream cannot be bought by money
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|TOEFL; A person's job's has more effects on his happiness
Writing Feedbackpulp - May 6, 2013 / carolyn - May 19, 2013
|"Pain is not a pleasant feeling" ; Analyzing the concept "PAIN"
7 - I put the family aspect in as an implication of emotional pain. That you really not need a physical...
Writing Feedbackcarolyn - May 18, 2013 / carolyn - May 19, 2013
|IETLTS; High School programs should include Community Service as a compulsory part
2 - I would argue that it should be made compulsory due to several reasons. First, community service...
Writing Feedbackmaruko_a2609 - May 19, 2013 / dumi - May 19, 2013
|TOEFL;If I am to change something in my hometown,it is to provide more bicycle roads
4 - I would focus on sentence structure. This will help in the flow of your paper. It will help the...
Writing Feedbackflooppy - May 18, 2013 / carolyn - May 19, 2013
|IELTS: Some workers are allowed to work at home - Positive or Negative?
Writing Feedbackmaruko_a2609 - May 13, 2013 / maruko_a2609 - May 19, 2013
|The most important traits required to achieve mastery.
Writing Feedbackpattrycja - May 19, 2013 / dumi - May 19, 2013
|IELTS ; My opinion on using fertilizer and machinery for producing food
Writing FeedbackNancy Quan - May 18, 2013 / Nancy Quan - May 19, 2013
|'private issues, lose feeling and painful exercises' - being a celebrity brings lot of problems
3 - In the first place, they lack privacy because they are famous. Not only them, even their family members...
Writing FeedbackPeterInKingston - May 17, 2013 / Pahan - May 19, 2013
|With the assistance of technology, students will learn faster and assimilate more knowledge.
3 - To encapsulate, helping students access necessary information easier than before, and also, many electronic community forums for students...
Writing FeedbackXiaokai Jin - May 17, 2013 / S0heil - May 19, 2013
|BARCELONA BEACH (Lake Erie) - observation essay
2 - sanchez On this warm spring day I have decided to visit the beach though the season is not quite...
Writing Feedbacksanchez - May 18, 2013 / JeremyofAL - May 18, 2013
|IELTS: Modern eating habits and lifestyle has had negative effects on children.
3 - Secondly, the modern life-styles too have their own negative effects on children's health and growth. ...very...
Writing Feedbackshaddy - May 13, 2013 / dumi - May 18, 2013
|Biography Writing about Geoffrey Rush
Writing FeedbackMuath1987 - May 11, 2013 / Muath1987 - May 18, 2013
|TOEFL ;Reasons for attending college- Increasing knowledge &preparing for career
8 - Nowadays, with the development of the world, more and more people attend colleges or universities instead of seeking for...
Writing Feedbackvietanhnqbk - May 16, 2013 / kntran1010 - May 17, 2013
|IELTS: Children spend long time studying in school. What are the effects?
Writing Feedbackeileenalien - May 8, 2013 / xucoi - May 17, 2013
|The same curriculum for all students? disadvantages overweight advantages
2 - Different educational institutions should be allowed to follow diversified directions as long as they share the same goal...
Writing FeedbackDan0912 - May 17, 2013 / Pahan - May 17, 2013
|Imagine that you have recived some land to use as you wish; What would you do?
4 - Maybe you can try to explore as many factor as possible, home, farm, playgrounds, shopping centre, small societies since...
Writing FeedbackCilos - May 15, 2013 / MiSsiNg - May 17, 2013
|How to select your career ? Status/ Salary or Satisfaction?
Writing Feedbackmalhamed - May 15, 2013 / S0heil - May 17, 2013
|CLEP College composition essay "How computers changed the way we work ...
Writing Feedbackprowd - May 12, 2013 / dumi - May 17, 2013
|I strongly disagree that money is the most important aspect of a job !
3 - Thanks dumi, I really appreciate your help. honestly, I wanted not to use the word "job" over and...
Writing FeedbackS0heil - May 16, 2013 / S0heil - May 16, 2013
|Globalisation of trade is beneficial to the economicaly backward countries
3 - .... this is what I suggest; Advancement in technology brought the world together. This globalization has taken place...
Writing Feedbackxyzwithashok - May 13, 2013 / dumi - May 16, 2013
|IELTS WRITING TASK 1: UK Acid rain emissions (GRAPH)
Writing Feedbackhahong - May 15, 2013 / dumi - May 16, 2013
|GPS is small device but there is a big process behind it; How the GPS works
Writing FeedbackFaraj_696 - May 15, 2013 / dumi - May 16, 2013
|IELTS WRITING : students should be encouraged to evaluate and criticise their teacher
5 - I would like to add some points to what dummi mentioned. I think the main reason why you cannot...
Writing Feedbackhahong - May 11, 2013 / ah_zafari - May 16, 2013
|IELTS---Small town-center shops are running out of business because of ...
NEW - Small town-center shops are running out of business because of an increasing number of large out-of-town stores. To what...
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|IELTS ; Convenience food eventually replace traditional foods? No
4 - .... good introduction! However, in my view, traditional food will continue to be preferred by many people who...
Writing Feedbackihedgehog - May 8, 2013 / dumi - May 15, 2013
|Why Smoking should be Illegal? Opening paragraph
Writing Feedbackhannabanana - May 7, 2013 / shaddy - May 15, 2013
|Men vs women are not equally suited for many tasks
Writing Feedbackmaheshbabu - May 8, 2013 / shaddy - May 15, 2013
|Advantage and disadvantage of 3D printing technology(argumentative, research essay)
Writing FeedbackSnowWolf - May 8, 2013 / dumi - May 15, 2013
|IELTS, Education at home VS formal education - Which is better?
4 - You need to be careful about time management. This task you need to perform within a limited time...
Writing Feedbacknada english - May 7, 2013 / dumi - May 15, 2013
|TOEFL ; DIFFICULTIES of learning a NEW LANGUAGE
8 - ....there are lots of difficulties .... Your introduction sounds better without this because this should reflect...
Writing FeedbackLAB 328 - May 7, 2013 / dumi - May 15, 2013
|Toefl - Classmates are more influential than parents on a child's success in school
Writing FeedbackCamilaTobar95 - May 7, 2013 / dumi - May 15, 2013
|Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communites.TOEFL ESSAY
Writing Feedbacktynguyen - May 6, 2013 / malhamed - May 15, 2013
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