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|Health safety and budget - how important to the society - Ielts test
7 - I do not know, I am not an examiner. Different examiners would score your differently. I think this...
Writing Feedbackmanjit809 - Nov 16, 2012 / ah_zafari - Nov 16, 2012
|'Our parents and grandparents may be obstacles to the new world order' - [IELTS]
3 - Hi ah_zafari !!! Please have a look at my recent essay please...:) Really need some final advice......
Writing Feedbackanar_ - Nov 16, 2012 / manjit809 - Nov 16, 2012
|IELTS ; Nowadays travelling abroad is more convenient and cheaper!
Writing Feedbackanar_ - Nov 5, 2012 / anar_ - Nov 16, 2012
|IELTS WT2: Preservations of Museums and artworks
2 - Hi Inspired, I'm marking and giving you every little bit that I think a better way of expressing....
Writing FeedbackInspired2012 - Nov 16, 2012 / dumi - Nov 16, 2012
|IELTS WT2: Position of women in Society and their career status
Writing FeedbackInspired2012 - Nov 14, 2012 / Inspired2012 - Nov 16, 2012
|[IELTS] - 'The unsolvable problem' - In many countries, people are living longer.
3 - Thanks Scientiana. I learned so much from you:) Thanks for your encouragement, Inspired2012. I will remember that. ...
Writing Feedbackcswords - Oct 31, 2012 / cswords - Nov 15, 2012
|AP Lang Essay: The Twerp in the Photo is Me
Writing FeedbackKnighted - Nov 6, 2012 / Martin80 - Nov 15, 2012
|Money spent on FAST FOOD IN BRITAIN (IELTS TASK1)
NEW - The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain. The graph shows...
Writing Feedbackorkhan - Nov 15, 2012 / — -
|What historical event in your country has had a major effect on your country?
2 - I think the historical event that had great effect on my country is a Treaty of Gulistan.Because with the...
Writing FeedbackAzeroglu - Oct 31, 2012 / orkhan - Nov 15, 2012
|Ielts task 2: today, more school leavers are unable to find jobs.
7 - @Inspired2012: I'm impressed by your fighting-to-death spirit in English writing. You will probably succeed. At least it's what I...
Writing Feedbackprincedynasty - Nov 14, 2012 / princedynasty - Nov 15, 2012
|'the development of science' - IELTS TASK2- TECHNOLOGY
Writing Feedbackrenlyso - Nov 13, 2012 / renlyso - Nov 15, 2012
|'working for the childrens right' - Children engaged in paid work essay
5 - Hi Ibadullah, From the writing task description, I can see that this is for the IELTS writing exam....
Writing Feedbackibadullah - Nov 6, 2012 / Inspired2012 - Nov 14, 2012
|how important is to maintain old buildings?should history stand in the way of progres
2 - Hi Saaaaaaaaaaaaaammmmmmmm ;) Is this for IELTS? If yes, What is the task for this essay? Is it to...
Writing Feedbacksam2012 - Nov 14, 2012 / Inspired2012 - Nov 14, 2012
|'Independent, Artistic, Curious' - 3 WORDS TO DESCRIBE YOURSELF ESSAY
5 - MY SECOND DRAFT. I get rid of the curiosity part because I cannot find anything else to back it...
Writing Feedbacksydvu76 - Nov 9, 2012 / sydvu76 - Nov 14, 2012
|IELTS essay main benefit of international cooperation
7 - Your essay have specific ideas and examples. I'm just wondering how we can think up such interesting ideas within...
Writing Feedbackjenny45 - Nov 13, 2012 / princedynasty - Nov 14, 2012
|Your Music, Your Emotions, You (news article for concert)
NEW - Please read this and tell me ASAP, what the mistakes and everything else that's wrong. I will reply to...
Writing FeedbackBani - Nov 14, 2012 / — -
|Narrative essay in betrayal; 'John Dustin was the most popular boy in school'
2 - hey... women don't envy good looking guys, but go crazy... only men envy ...lol So, I suggest you...
Writing FeedbackBluwinda - Oct 20, 2012 / dumi - Nov 14, 2012
|Movement away from written exams to practical skills.Discuss this trend
2 - These days, besides written papers , many universities have been applying other forms of assessment like practical or oral...
Writing Feedbackhoapq - Oct 21, 2012 / EF_Susan - Nov 13, 2012
|Changes to the society and the suicide rates essay
Writing FeedbackSomeoneNoOne - Oct 20, 2012 / Sheri_Editor - Nov 13, 2012
|Narrative ESSAY; UNUSUAL VOYAGE, Footballer, and Britain
Writing Feedbackghokmen - Nov 12, 2012 / ghokmen - Nov 13, 2012
|'Teen Responsibility' - dropingout of high school (agree or disagree)
Writing Feedbackbetocheagha - Nov 13, 2012 / betocheagha - Nov 13, 2012
|Ielts; teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work
Writing Feedbackskop - Nov 13, 2012 / renlyso - Nov 13, 2012
|Universities should provide graduates with the knowledge or with work experience?
3 - Thanks a lot for valuable corrections. I agree with your suggestion about introduction completely....
Writing Feedbacknazadjou - Nov 12, 2012 / nazadjou - Nov 12, 2012
|'Corrupt-free governments and stable economy' - IELTS preparation
Writing FeedbackTrave - Nov 12, 2012 / renlyso - Nov 12, 2012
|Old buildings and nation's history; History in pages can fade out from our minds
NEW - hi, I am preparing for IELTS can any one correct my essay and tell me how can i improve.thank...
Writing Feedbackprameelagolla - Nov 12, 2012 / — -
|'experience of survival life, South Pole' - Ielts, task 2
3 - Thank you very , very much !!! Could you just point me if isn't there any other mistake, pleasee...
Writing Feedbackskop - Nov 12, 2012 / skop - Nov 12, 2012
|Computers overweigh schools so schools will disappear
NEW - Some people think computers and the Internet have more benifit than schools so schools will disappear from our lives....
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|'Competitive life' - Ielts essay
5 - thank you writersmyth what do you mean about "make it more effective by pros and cons" can you give...
Writing Feedbackabtin - Nov 12, 2012 / abtin - Nov 12, 2012
|'all writers started career at their 20s' - Ielts - graph
Writing Feedbackgop - Nov 10, 2012 / dumi - Nov 12, 2012
|IElLTS - reducing pollution and damage to the remote environments
Writing Feedbackjenny45 - Nov 8, 2012 / skop - Nov 12, 2012
|Rich countries should share wealth among poor countries!
3 - Thank you very much Scientiana for your valuable advices and corrections.Ä°n the third paragraph i have considered that if...
Writing Feedbackorkhan - Oct 29, 2012 / orkhan - Nov 12, 2012
|'The source of media and private information about famous people' band according to IELTS
4 - Dear Scientiana, Thanks for providing me your feedback and the impressive correction and suggestion .That for sure help me...
Writing Feedbackdeep9012 - Oct 25, 2012 / deep9012 - Nov 11, 2012
|'Electing a representative in government' - Essay help for midterm
2 - The entire third paragraph seems to drag on. Maybe try spacing out the essay a little better. It appears...
Writing Feedbackalexnsarria - Oct 16, 2012 / mhk1294 - Nov 11, 2012
|'positive and inspirational trend' - IELTS: Creative artists' freedom
Writing Feedbackhumanx - Nov 8, 2012 / humanx - Nov 11, 2012
|'Good atmosphere' - What change to hometown more appealing to people your age?
4 - "Although there are many buses in the urban and rural area, but it is pretty hard for people to...
Writing Feedbackpurplepotato - Nov 7, 2012 / zahras93 - Nov 11, 2012
|IELTS: WHETHER BOTTLED WATER SHOULD BE BANNED
3 - Thank you dumi and scientiana, I greatly appreciate your comments. I will write as many essay as I can...
Writing FeedbackChuHa - Oct 25, 2012 / ChuHa - Nov 11, 2012
|'Harmful effects' - IELTS Essay about the influence of advertisement
Writing Feedbackying0216 - Nov 7, 2012 / ying0216 - Nov 11, 2012
|'better standard of living for people' - ielts - 2 task
4 - I've changed the pointed mistakes by you guys thank you very much, I really need to get down to...
Writing Feedbackskop - Nov 10, 2012 / skop - Nov 11, 2012
|'From Qatar and an independent school for girls' - about yourself
Writing Feedbackdmj - Nov 10, 2012 / ah_zafari - Nov 11, 2012
|'Coral Gables, Miami' - My lost palace
3 - What about Coral Gables makes you like getting lost? Getting lost is usually not pleasant, so what about the...
Writing Feedbackjincera1 - Nov 10, 2012 / cezyou - Nov 10, 2012
|'museum can attract visitors' - [ielts] topic with museum
8 - Plz every one comment on this There are different kinds of people having different personalities and opinions living...
Writing Feedbackrenlyso - Nov 7, 2012 / ibadullah - Nov 10, 2012
|TECHNOLOGICAL FOODS IS HARMFUL TO PEOPLE'S HEALTH ( IELTS )
3 - HI.dzung1991 Beside motivator, general background should be given in the introduction. However, ah_zafari said that the opinion should...
Writing Feedbackdzung1991 - Nov 6, 2012 / renlyso - Nov 10, 2012
|'What I taught myself' - Essay Revision
Writing Feedbackdudeman - Nov 6, 2012 / ysysysys - Nov 10, 2012
|Power of advertisements are overrated!
3 - Thankyou ah_zafari for your suggestions, I will try to improve those fiels which you highlited....
Writing Feedbackpriya9991 - Nov 7, 2012 / priya9991 - Nov 10, 2012
|[ielts task 1] report on quantities of goods transported in UK
2 - Your writing is very good with good use of a variety of vocabulary. However, try to use more linking...
Writing Feedbackgandora1510 - Oct 23, 2012 / Scientiana - Nov 9, 2012
|How dependent we are on machines? / Are machines going to take over the world?
NEW - We are living in a society which is called a "technologically civilized" society. Every small work that we do...
Writing FeedbackJessicaG - Nov 9, 2012 / — -
|'complicated thinking skills' - IELTS: the main function of university
5 - .... when you rearrange the order it reads well; Should they give knowledge and skills to the graduates.......
Writing FeedbackAida - Oct 16, 2012 / dumi - Nov 9, 2012
|Essay about taxation to reduce air traffic - feedback
Writing FeedbackMSMK - Nov 9, 2012 / MSMK - Nov 9, 2012
|TOEFL - Improving conditions - Has human harmed the Earth or made it a better place?
Writing FeedbackMunkhjin - Nov 7, 2012 / dumi - Nov 9, 2012
|How many hours of 10-11 years old schoolchildren spent time on home activities
2 - The graphic shows how many hours of 10-11 years old schoolchildren spent time on home activities between televisions and...
Writing FeedbackWal - Nov 3, 2012 / EF_Susan - Nov 8, 2012
|'my priorities and goals' - Meaning of life essay
2 - I believeThe world is inhabited by millions of individuals, each defining the meaning of life differently. Corresponding to...
Writing Feedbackmeme123456 - Oct 28, 2012 / EF_Susan - Nov 8, 2012
|Is money synonymous to success?
Writing FeedbackCharmaine VC - Nov 7, 2012 / Charmaine VC - Nov 8, 2012
|Governor's School essay on social issue (apathy) that concerns me
3 - Thanks for the feedback. Unfortunately, the deadline has passed and I just went with what my teachers said. Although,...
Writing Feedbackselemi - Oct 14, 2012 / selemi - Nov 8, 2012
|This is a research paper on whether Social Networks causes relationships to end
NEW - The guidelines for this paper are as follows Transition sentence to get from the previous paragraph Topic sentence Supporting...
Writing Feedbackmcotton79 - Nov 8, 2012 / — -
|Fast food brings us more avails than drawbacks (IELTS task 2)
Writing Feedbackclackkent - Nov 6, 2012 / humanx - Nov 8, 2012
|'money-centered people' - Judging person by his social status and material possessions - ielts
Writing Feedbackmanjit809 - Nov 8, 2012 / manjit809 - Nov 8, 2012
|Dishonesty in relationship / Should you be always truthful?
3 - thanks a lot!...
Writing FeedbackMai_Alexei - Nov 6, 2012 / Mai_Alexei - Nov 8, 2012
|IELTS TASK: support fixed punishment for each type of crime or not
2 - no two crimes happen (appear) in totally the same conditions there's not always one simple punishment which suit every...
Writing Feedbacksydaisy - Oct 22, 2012 / jenny45 - Nov 8, 2012
|IELTS Writing Task 2, topic about yongsters
2 - Your essay is great! Well organization and well argument! However, you have to be careful with your grammar and...
Writing Feedbackgoldmanswalking - Oct 21, 2012 / Scientiana - Nov 8, 2012
|History shows us how forgetful human beings are
Writing Feedbackrkandil - Nov 7, 2012 / jincera1 - Nov 7, 2012
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