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|Did Somebody Say Genocide?; response/summary essay
2 - Greetings! You have written an excellent, informative essay which does a good job of explaining the complex factors...
Writing Feedbackcalvinphoon - Oct 23, 2006 / EF_Team2 - Oct 25, 2006
|Cause and effect paper - getting over abuse
2 - Greetings! You have written a good essay with a strong, personal perspective. I do have some minor corrections...
Writing Feedbackjkolhagen - Oct 23, 2006 / EF_Team2 - Oct 23, 2006
|On the morning I've been waiting for all year!
2 - Greetings! Technically a "run-on sentence" is actually two complete sentences with no punctuation dividing them. I don't see...
Writing Feedbackfiguresk8tingchik - Oct 15, 2006 / EF_Team2 - Oct 19, 2006
|Something Deeper - What am I looking for? Why am I here? Meaning of Life?
2 - Greetings! This is an interesting topic! I'll point out a few things I noticed that you might consider...
Writing Feedbackstarphyre - Oct 17, 2006 / EF_Team2 - Oct 18, 2006
|Do you like to smell the strong cigarette smoke at public places? NO!
Writing Feedbackjanice - Jul 21, 2006 / figuresk8tingchik - Oct 15, 2006
|'Woods Riding and The Dirt Bike' - Process essay review
2 - Greetings! You have done a wonderful job of describing the process of riding a dirt bike. I almost...
Writing FeedbackBadAngel299 - Oct 11, 2006 / EF_Team2 - Oct 12, 2006
|The damnation of the canyon is one man's account
2 - Greetings! You've done a good job of expressing your disagreement with the author's views. I'm guessing "The damnation...
Writing Feedbackarkaudio123 - Oct 4, 2006 / EF_Team2 - Oct 5, 2006
|Future of Media Conclusion - (High School)
Writing Feedbacknjbignell - Oct 4, 2006 / njbignell - Oct 4, 2006
|Doctor Faustus Essay
Writing Feedbackjeffspears - Oct 2, 2006 / EF_Team2 - Oct 2, 2006
|'Attack of the Bees' - essay bout a day I will never forget
3 - Greetings! Your essay does, indeed, have details and coherence! Just a few little things pop out to me....
Writing FeedbackBadAngel299 - Sep 24, 2006 / EF_Team2 - Sep 25, 2006
|Nazi Germany was a totalitarian state
2 - Greetings! It is always important to keep in mind that the function of writing is to communicate. If...
Writing Feedbackougoah - Sep 16, 2006 / EF_Team2 - Sep 16, 2006
|MAJOR CONCERNS on T.S. Eliot's context revealed in The Love Song of J Alfred
Writing Feedbackougoah - Sep 12, 2006 / ougoah - Sep 13, 2006
|Christianity in Beowulf ; Is Beowulf is a Christian poem or not?
2 - Greetings! You have written an excellent essay! While it is impressive and very nearly perfect, I have just...
Writing Feedbackjeffspears - Sep 11, 2006 / EF_Team2 - Sep 11, 2006
|What can people do to live a long life?
4 - Greetings! While I can understand why you might want to edit your post or to have "private messaging"...
Writing Feedbackstartanewlife - Aug 14, 2006 / EF_Team2 - Sep 2, 2006
|The Enlightenment: Adolescence of Modern Western SOciety
2 - Greetings! I am happy to provide you with some feedback! The primary suggestion I can make is...
Writing Feedbackitsud1021 - Jun 25, 2006 / EF_Team4 - Jun 25, 2006
|Brave New World; Can a "perfect" drug be used to acieve a stable society?
3 - Thanks for your quick response. This essay was written for a high school writing class. I do agree that...
Writing FeedbackJoocy - Jun 4, 2006 / Joocy - Jun 5, 2006
|Virtual Education: Student Perspectives on the Distance Learning
NEW - Summary "Virtually Educated: Student Perspectives on the Distance Learning Experience" (McGettigan, 1999) offers an interesting perspective on the...
Writing FeedbackEF_Team - May 20, 2006 / — -
|Taking Classes Online is Not Good for Every Student...
NEW - What kind of students will succeed or fail when taking online classes? We live in a world of...
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|The Philosophy of Teaching of the English Language Arts
NEW - I believe that teaching the English language arts means teaching skills around critical thinking, researching, and the general synthesis...
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