Unanswered [1]
  

Home / Scholarship [5250] - page 14 of 88

Scholarship

Researching and writing effective scholarship essays (page 14)

Replies | Threads
Global Korea Scholarship Personal Statement for Graduate Study in Electrical Engineering.

3 - @Dam2019 Hello, I would definitely just summarize with the first paragraph the most important key factors of the others!...

ScholarshipDam2019 - Feb 21, 2021 / mariana_2314 - Feb 27, 2021
GLOBAL KOREA SCHOLARSHIP_ PERSONAL STATEMENT_COMPUTER SCIENCE AND ENGINEERING

4 - @Holt @grant_Oliver I am very grateful for your help. I will rewrite based on your comments. Thank you so...

Scholarshipsunny1909 - Feb 25, 2021 / sunny1909 - Feb 27, 2021
'intellectual growth should commence at birth and cease only at death'. Letter for MAIA scholarship

3 - "Not a bad motivational letter. You have shown a personal, academic, and professional interest in the course that you...

Scholarshipreraxi4908 - Feb 26, 2021 / reraxi4908 - Feb 26, 2021
Leadership, community service. The Global UGRAD. Why would I be a great participant in this program?

2 - Remove the reference point about how you are familiarizing yourself with American culture. That is not part of the...

Scholarshipbigdreamy - Feb 26, 2021 / Holt - Feb 26, 2021
DRL model - [KGSP] MASTER IN ARTIFICIAL INTELLIGENCE - Goal of study and detailed study plan

3 - Hi Holt, Thank you for the suggestions! Since master applicants do not need to submit Research Proposal, we...

Scholarshipgrant_Oliver - Feb 17, 2021 / grant_Oliver - Feb 26, 2021
[KGSP/GKS SCHOLARSHIP] MASTER IN ARTIFICIAL INTELLIGENCE - Future plan after study

2 - That should be the focal point of this future plan after study. They are not interested in knowing...

Scholarshipgrant_Oliver - Feb 23, 2021 / Holt - Feb 26, 2021
GKS Statement of Purpose - Language Study Plan

2 - - Trying to memorize what in a month? Hangul characters and alphabet? English spelling of Hangul words? There...

ScholarshipAlsgray - Feb 25, 2021 / Holt - Feb 26, 2021
GKS/KGSP Master in Urban Environmental Planning - Statement of Purpose

2 - There is no need to list you references at any point in this presentation. While these are possibly reading...

ScholarshipTraiaU - Feb 24, 2021 / Holt - Feb 25, 2021
KGS-G STATEMENT OF PURPOSE - language in Korea

3 - @Holt, thanks for your observations...

ScholarshipWunuson - Feb 23, 2021 / Wunuson - Feb 24, 2021
GKS SCHOLARSHIP LANGUAGE STUDY PLAN BEFORE AND AFTER

3 - Hello! There are some things that you do not need to put in this part of the Statement of...

Scholarshipsruthi1998 - Feb 17, 2021 / TraiaU - Feb 24, 2021
Motivation, small & medium - sized enterprises - GKS Personal Statement Business Administration

4 - Hello, I suggest you to elaborate the more specific area that you are mastered in to show your academic...

Scholarshipqwepoi - Feb 19, 2021 / fiannyfia - Feb 24, 2021
Personal Statement for GKS's graduate studies in Communication Design University track

5 - Hi, I like your essay. However it is better for you to mention another area in arts and culture...

Scholarshipmadrisheva - Feb 7, 2021 / fiannyfia - Feb 24, 2021
Interactive teaching - GKS GRADUATE PERSONAL STATEMENT

NEW - Hello, This is my personal statement and I need some feedback :) Thank you in advance personal...

Scholarshipfiannyfia - Feb 24, 2021 / — -
My academic success - The Global UGRAD Program^ why am I a great participant?

3 - Thank you very much. I'll try to fix the last paragraph and focus more on what I get...

Scholarshipiroda_bekmur - Feb 7, 2021 / iroda_bekmur - Feb 24, 2021
SCHOLARSHIP GKS - PERSONAL STATEMENT GRADUATE DEGREE 2021 - Public Administration.

6 - @grant_Oliver Thanks for the recommendation :) I'm working on it....

ScholarshipAnyellaa - Feb 21, 2021 / Anyellaa - Feb 23, 2021
American-Hispanic learning process - Personal Statement for the Global Korea Scholarship

2 - Kindly fix the format of this presentation. It is extremely difficult to read. If you submit this essay in...

Scholarshipalexaguti - Feb 22, 2021 / Holt - Feb 23, 2021
The efforts you have undertaken so far to obtain information on your study options in Australia?/AAS

2 - ONE QUESTION PER THREAD. ADMIN SHALL DELETE THE OTHER QUESTIONS SHORTLY. Do not confuse the presentation with unnecessary...

Scholarshipcyber168 - Feb 23, 2021 / Holt - Feb 23, 2021
GLOBAL UGRAD - WHY WOULD I BE A GREAT PARTICIPANT IN THIS STUDENT EXCHANGE PROGRAM

2 - You do not qualify for the program based on this presentation. You have written a lengthy personal statement that...

Scholarshipshaqkandou - Feb 22, 2021 / Holt - Feb 23, 2021
Laboratories - ChIR Motivational Statement

2 - It would be best for me to list down the points that you actually responded to with this essay...

Scholarshipstrongwarrior - Feb 22, 2021 / Holt - Feb 23, 2021
Defending the global internet - GOVERNMENT OF IRELAND INTERNATIONAL EDUCATION SCHOLARSHIP

2 - Review the prompt requirement again. You have failed to properly respond to the question because you wrote a personal...

ScholarshipStonye - Feb 22, 2021 / Holt - Feb 23, 2021
Serving community - Why would you be a great participant in the Global UGRAD Program?

2 - The first 3 paragraphs do not speak of your ability to be a community leader and enforce changes in...

Scholarshipahyar - Feb 22, 2021 / Holt - Feb 23, 2021
AAS - What are your plans when you finish your studies (Master Program : Tourism)

2 - The last thing that I can do for you here is make the decision for you regarding which statement...

ScholarshipPradausa - Feb 22, 2021 / Holt - Feb 23, 2021
Fighter family - KGSP Scholarship - Personal Statemente International Relations

3 - Hi gloriacabral, I think you have a good background for application, but you need to shorten your essay. You...

Scholarshipgloriacabral - Feb 22, 2021 / grant_Oliver - Feb 22, 2021
My commitment to my community - Global Ugrad

2 - The problem with your presentation is that you are representing yourself as a community leader, without having any access...

ScholarshipDankarys - Feb 22, 2021 / Holt - Feb 22, 2021
Applying the knowledge and experience essay. Sustainable Transportation SISGP

4 - "As someone who experience working ..." Would be better framed as: As my core profession has involved mainly...

Scholarshipndhnif - Feb 16, 2021 / Ishaqur - Feb 20, 2021
Evaluate the applicant's leadership capacity and potential to play a role in development

3 - @tyanna I think instead of mentioning the currency, try focusing on growth/changes from last term. Furthermore, it would be...

Scholarshiptyanna - Feb 16, 2021 / Ishaqur - Feb 20, 2021
GOVERNMENT OF IRELAND INTERNATIONAL EDUCATION SCHOLARSHIP

4 - I think you should look into the specific courses available under the program, mention those in the essay to...

Scholarshiptomtomiwa - Feb 16, 2021 / Ishaqur - Feb 20, 2021
Korean broadcasting will change us for the better - KGSP Master 2021 Personal Statement

3 - Hi Semos, I would like to suggest you to move your motivation paragraph to the top. The motivation is...

Scholarshipsemos - Feb 15, 2021 / grant_Oliver - Feb 17, 2021
From mathematics to engineering- Personal statement should describe who you are and past experiences

2 - You mentioned engineering at the end. So change that reference point. Try not to keep mentioning Engineering because it...

ScholarshipAeroSAE98 - Feb 16, 2021 / Holt - Feb 16, 2021
Aerospace engineering - Study Objectives essay for FULBRIGHT SCHOLARSHIP

2 - I feel that the binational impact needs to be stronger in terms to referring to America's possible use for...

ScholarshipAeroSAE98 - Feb 15, 2021 / Holt - Feb 16, 2021
Global issues need global responses - Why did you choose your proposed course and institution*?

2 - Use that quote, and refer to the original speaker, as a stand alone presentation at the start. That will...

ScholarshipSinSonng - Feb 15, 2021 / Holt - Feb 16, 2021
Essay about how you can apply the knowledge once finish the education in the own country

2 - The discussion is totally off base. Remember that the prompt assumes you have already completed the course and you...

ScholarshipBarol16 - Feb 15, 2021 / Holt - Feb 16, 2021
Me helping people - Describe yourself in 285 words.

2 - The prompt is not about what interests you. It is about who you are. What are your personal traits...

Scholarshipteddyz - Feb 15, 2021 / Holt - Feb 16, 2021
Statement of Purpose; Goal of Study & Study Plan Graduate : Art Management

6 - Hi moondeluna, The SOP requirement in this section is goal of study and detailed study plan. I feel...

Scholarshipmoondeluna - Feb 13, 2021 / grant_Oliver - Feb 16, 2021
[KGSP SCHOLARSHIP] GRADUATE PROGRAM - MASTER IN ARTIFICIAL INTELLIGENCE - Personal Statement

3 - @Holt Thank you for your careful review and the constructive comment. Have a nice day! : )...

Scholarshipgrant_Oliver - Feb 14, 2021 / grant_Oliver - Feb 15, 2021
Scholarship motivation letter for masters studies - how you can apply the knowledge and etc..

3 - @Holt Dear Holt. Thank you very much for your timely response. I will connect the work of the UNDP...

Scholarshipkomadx - Feb 14, 2021 / komadx - Feb 15, 2021
GKS-G Scholarship Personal Statement: Marketing Major

2 - If the first paragraph is your motivational statement, then you need to work on it. The motivational statement should...

Scholarshipoahr93 - Feb 14, 2021 / Holt - Feb 15, 2021
The Engineer I want to be. Committing to the global community Scholarship Essay

2 - Here is the thing, your essay shows you not as a community leader, but as a community follower in...

Scholarshipeds420 - Feb 14, 2021 / Holt - Feb 15, 2021
Business Development - YOUR PROPOSED COURSE AND INSTITUTION? (FOR AUSTRALIA AWARDS SCHOLARSHIP)

2 - You only responded to the course choice discussion. You did not indicate the university of choice and why you...

ScholarshipRatudestiani - Feb 14, 2021 / Holt - Feb 15, 2021
Personal statement for KGSP scholarship Master program in English Linguistics

5 - Just so you know the requirements for the personal statement have changed as follows! - Motivations with which...

Scholarshipaigerim87 - Feb 7, 2021 / oahr93 - Feb 14, 2021
[KGSP SCHOLARSHIP] GRADUATE PROGRAM - MASTER IN PUBLIC ADMINISTRATION - Student from Public Schools

5 - Hi Aline, Please notice that the KGSP SOP and PS requirements had changed. According to the newly release guideline,...

Scholarshipaccandido - Jan 31, 2021 / grant_Oliver - Feb 14, 2021
"Success is not final; failure is not fatal" - being a great participant in the Global UGRAD program

2 - Without the reference to how you have actually served your community, which is what the prompt asked you write...

Scholarshipelisabettgt - Feb 14, 2021 / Holt - Feb 14, 2021
Question 1 scholarship; Why Curtin? Because it is a university that specializes in mining

2 - Your employment background should be mentioned in some capacity as the basis of the reference point for your course...

ScholarshipFaridFR - Feb 13, 2021 / Holt - Feb 14, 2021
GKS Graduate 2021 - Masters in International Business (Personal Statement)

3 - Hi Olivia! The feedback that I have for you is that it looks too short or simplified. I would...

Scholarshippetitemuncher - Feb 4, 2021 / oahr93 - Feb 14, 2021
The Trip - Global UGRAD Program application essay - Why Participate?

2 - This is not really a leadership experience within a community. There is a lack of physical interaction on a...

Scholarshiplemeigeni - Feb 9, 2021 / Holt - Feb 10, 2021
Why would you be a great participant in the Global UGRAD program? Powerful vision and effort.

2 - The scholarship program always bases its first consideration of the applicant based on his community leadership skills and abilities....

ScholarshipAlvaro - Feb 9, 2021 / Holt - Feb 10, 2021
Personal Statement for GKS's graduate studies in Visual Communication Design

2 - Your personal statement is not based on the proper information requirement for the presentation. The personal statement for the...

Scholarshipfranbrown - Feb 7, 2021 / Holt - Feb 7, 2021
To serve my country - UGRAD exchange program why am I a great participant for this program

2 - The first part of the presentation makes you sound like a beauty pageant contestant. You may want to rethink...

Scholarshipmariami_77 - Feb 6, 2021 / Holt - Feb 7, 2021
My paragraph for applying for a scholarship about experience in Sweden

2 - Do not divide the information in the presentation. Either focus on your company or focus on the UN 2030...

ScholarshipHena - Feb 6, 2021 / Holt - Feb 6, 2021
Masters' in Environmental Science and Engineering - Statement of purpose for GKS program.

2 - The other half of the paragraph 4 content belongs in the study plan. Remove all references to the study...

Scholarshipbonsena - Feb 5, 2021 / Holt - Feb 6, 2021
The kindness of strangers - Scholarship essay about financial need

2 - Balance the focus between financial need and the intended long term career path. You have over focused on your...

ScholarshipDorsey - Feb 4, 2021 / Holt - Feb 4, 2021
Personal Statement Fulbright Scholarship (Master's degree program in Mining Engineering)

2 - This essay only covers the information regarding your undergraduate course, special interest, and practical experience. It does not contain...

Scholarshipmirz - Feb 2, 2021 / Holt - Feb 3, 2021
I am writing for my NTU scholarship essay, "Practice Makes Perfect".

3 - @RowenTey I did apply for a scholarship at NTU in 2018 and I had 25% reduction in my tuition...

ScholarshipRowenTey - Jan 31, 2021 / FAWAZ - Feb 1, 2021
WHAT THE YOUNGER GENERATION NEED - JOURNALISM, AN ESSAY FOR TURKIYE SCHOLARSHIPS

3 - @Holt Hi, thanks for your advice! but if I may know, how to write a compelling first sentence so...

ScholarshipShara Fazhalia - Jan 30, 2021 / Shara Fazhalia - Jan 31, 2021
My Study Plan for writing the Language Proficiency Test and the GRE

2 - I am not sure what you mean by "writing these exams." Do you mean you wish to take these...

ScholarshipJibolar - Jan 30, 2021 / Holt - Jan 31, 2021
Productive high-school years - UWC scholarship essay

3 - I think you did not focus on the main goal of how you are going to contribute to UWC....

ScholarshipErmuun - Jan 25, 2021 / AbdelrahmanWal4 - Jan 26, 2021
The Global UGRAD Program is for young leaders committed to serving their home communities

3 - I believe that you had better not use contractions like ''didn't''. Instead, just write did not. Be aware of...

Scholarshipdinoraachilova - Jan 14, 2021 / AbdelrahmanWal4 - Jan 26, 2021
Why did you choose the Master of Taxation at the University of Sydney? AAS Supporting Statement

2 - Since this is a word limited response, you need to balance the presentation to reflect a proper discussion for...

ScholarshipStephan - Jan 26, 2021 / Holt - Jan 26, 2021
An ardent passion for the electric energy industry. Erasmus program motivation letter 2021

2 - Remove the link to the article. Believe me, the reviewer isn't going to read it. Your narration should tell...

Scholarshipmic - Jan 25, 2021 / Holt - Jan 26, 2021
Security and gender - Erasmus Mundus Scholarship Personal Statement

2 - I feel like there is a missing link in this presentation. As this is a personal statement, it has...

Scholarshipcassandravd - Jan 25, 2021 / Holt - Jan 26, 2021

Home / Scholarship

ⓘ Need academic writing help? 100% custom and human!
✖
Fill out one of these forms for professional help:

Best Writing Service:
CustomPapers form ◳

Graduate Writing / Editing:
GraduateWriter form ◳

Excellence in Editing:
Rose Editing ◳

AI-Paper Rewriting:
Robot Rewrite ◳