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|KGSP Personal Statement - I want to fix my country unseen problem
2 - Josevan, the reference to your ambition should start with high school not childhood. the reviewers do not believe that...
ScholarshipJsovane - Feb 16, 2018 / Holt - Feb 16, 2018
|"Stipendium Hungaricum" Program - Motivation letter for Hungarian Scholarship
2 - This is a very weak motivation letter and will not be considered for candidacy in the scholarship program. It...
ScholarshipIvanovic12 - Feb 15, 2018 / Holt - Feb 15, 2018
|Academic study related awards, publications - not specific to any particular qualifications you hold
NEW - how to write this scholarship essay? Provide a maximum of four academic study related awards, prizes or publication...
Scholarshipharry dawson - Feb 15, 2018 / — -
|I can learn a lot of good things from this great nation. KGSP scholarship 2018
2 - Deagisti, I can see that your personal statement is still based on the previous prompts which had a focus...
Scholarshipyourbae - Feb 13, 2018 / Holt - Feb 14, 2018
|I'm on my way to become that great food engineer I've always wanted
2 - Tchalim, this essay reminds me of an example of a misunderstanding in a conversation that my professor once told...
ScholarshipBooster70 - Feb 12, 2018 / Holt - Feb 13, 2018
|I strive to be a leader in this field. Motivational Letter for MaMaSELF Erasmus Mundus Scholarship
2 - BIFFO, I know you have already submitted this essay for consideration with your other application documents. Therefore, what I...
Scholarshipbiffokadir13 - Feb 12, 2018 / Holt - Feb 13, 2018
|Reference Letter Chevening Scholarship "Global Health "
Scholarshipwomeen15 - Feb 11, 2018 / womeen15 - Feb 12, 2018
|KGSP program is the perfect opportunity for my goals and dreams - Korean Scholarship essay
ScholarshipMyrium - Feb 10, 2018 / Xti02 - Feb 11, 2018
|I want to apply KGSP. I need to write a Statement of Purpose for that I wrote this.
ScholarshipAkib67 - Feb 9, 2018 / Akib67 - Feb 10, 2018
|Food Technology and Packaging -Your study objectives for Fulbright application
4 - Tchalim, your essay does not respond to any aspect of the prompt requirements. I believe that you mistakenly thought...
ScholarshipBooster70 - Feb 8, 2018 / Holt - Feb 10, 2018
|The KGSP is one such opportunity that I don't wish to regret for not trying - PERSONAL STATEMENT
3 - Jerry, your personal statement is not aligned with the prompt requirements in some instances. So it would be better...
Scholarshipjerrys1995 - Feb 9, 2018 / Holt - Feb 10, 2018
|Impact of my study to national development; Commonwealth scholarship.
Scholarshipjoechido91 - Feb 7, 2018 / joechido91 - Feb 9, 2018
|Convincing that this Scholarship in Korea is a true match with my education and work experience
5 - @Holt I was actually trying to explain about my departement (communication science) used to offer specific major in 4th...
Scholarshipaprn88 - Feb 8, 2018 / aprn88 - Feb 9, 2018
|'Because this is my first life' - KGSP-Master in Data Science application
4 - @senuthilini Thank you so much for your correcting :) @Holt Thank you so much for your suggestion! Before...
Scholarshipnalinzie - Feb 6, 2018 / nalinzie - Feb 9, 2018
|Australian Awards Scholarship essay for masters degree.
2 - Sheilly, I will be honest with you here and say the truth. This is a very weak presentation. While...
ScholarshipSheilly - Feb 8, 2018 / Holt - Feb 9, 2018
|Scholarship for master program in data analytics - Management Information Systems
Scholarshipkennai - Feb 6, 2018 / Holt - Feb 8, 2018
|NTU Scholarship Essay - Parents as my motivation to work hard
3 - Tan, you need to be consistent in your time reference. Either you are discussing in the past tense of...
Scholarshiptanwk_97 - Feb 5, 2018 / Holt - Feb 8, 2018
|Battling with the negative effects of climate change for further efficiency in swine industry
4 - Florina, as the title of the prompt indicates, this is a goal of study and a study plan essay....
Scholarshipzhayendzuji - Feb 5, 2018 / Holt - Feb 7, 2018
|The same proportion between boys and girls in a tertiary education for all subjects
2 - Hello Phuong, I will try giving you a few correction for improving your essay. Please, meet my notes and...
ScholarshipQuynhphuong1 - Feb 6, 2018 / akbarmappiare - Feb 6, 2018
|KGSP - this scholarship will play a big part of my plan to reach my goal in life
3 - Karina, aside from your reason for wanting to study in Korea, a major part of the essay is non-prompt...
Scholarshipbmmbae - Feb 4, 2018 / Holt - Feb 5, 2018
|Scholarship - Good health and well-being / Master's programme in Sweden
Scholarshipnaj12 - Feb 3, 2018 / naj12 - Feb 4, 2018
|We are the product of both our efforts and our failures. NTU scholarship essay
4 - @Holt Thank you for your comments! I really appreciate it ◡̈ So sorry could I clarify so beliefs...
Scholarshipcoffeetoffee - Feb 2, 2018 / coffeetoffee - Feb 3, 2018
|"I like your car" - Personal Statement for KGSP application Undergraduate to study Design
5 - There is something wrong with your tenses in the first paragraph. I had to reread many times as I...
Scholarshipkgspwilli - Feb 2, 2018 / coffeetoffee - Feb 3, 2018
|Scholarship Essay writing on my best academic and extracurricular accomplishments
4 - well, personally I think that your intro is a little bit exagerated, because is hard to believe that one...
ScholarshipAhmadzabir - Jan 30, 2018 / patoguerra - Feb 1, 2018
|KGSP Study Plan - Improving ride quality of high-speed trains
Scholarshipjgbiel47 - Jan 30, 2018 / jgbiel47 - Jan 30, 2018
|Illustrate how the programme will contribute to you Home Country Benefit
5 - @Godluck as for the first paragraph i wish if you could just start with the current state of your...
ScholarshipGodluck - Jan 28, 2018 / meksebsium - Jan 30, 2018
|NTU SCHOLARSHIP, MY VALUES I Hold Strongly To - plus examples
2 - Patricio, please stop mentioning the scholarship in every instance of your essay responses. You will irritate the reviewer and...
Scholarshippatoguerra - Jan 30, 2018 / Holt - Jan 30, 2018
|NTU SCHOLARSHIP ESSAY, ABOUT MY INSPIRATION MY FAMILY.
Scholarshippatoguerra - Jan 30, 2018 / patoguerra - Jan 30, 2018
|MY STUDY PLAN FOR A SCHOLARSHIP AWARD - the peerless University of Botswana
3 - Honestly, it is a really great exposition of your ideas. I think that as they said, you may introduce...
ScholarshipRazy - Jan 27, 2018 / patoguerra - Jan 30, 2018
|Study Objective [Fulbright] : Studying HCI to Solve Problem Based on Human Behavior.
2 - Eda, what the specific point of your study? You have given an extensive background for yourself in business but...
Scholarshipkukas90 - Jan 29, 2018 / Holt - Jan 30, 2018
|The methodology that you will use and the potential significance of the study to your discipline
4 - @TshimangeM If you are to write a detailed study plan, you need to write the basics in doing a...
ScholarshipTshimangeM - Jan 23, 2018 / zhayendzuji - Jan 29, 2018
|DETAILED PLAN OF STUDY FOR COMMONWEALTH SCHOLARSHIP-Msc APPLIED INTERNATIONAL DEVELOPMENT
3 - @Madalo You should able to show clarity in your plan. Your idea may have a broad interest but your...
ScholarshipMadalo - Jan 23, 2018 / Bangarusai - Jan 28, 2018
|Plan of study relating to HIV in Nigeria
3 - Ahmed, there is no clear course of study provided in your essay. Your earlier statement, the opening portion of...
ScholarshipSgh_p910 - Jan 28, 2018 / Holt - Jan 28, 2018
|Strive for your goal ! : Self-introduction for KGSP
2 - Chutchanok, the essay is 25% completed. There are 2 portions of the essay that you need to address in...
Scholarshipparnnaveiy - Jan 28, 2018 / Holt - Jan 28, 2018
|You should describe clearly your research question, the methodology that you will use during study
NEW - DETAILED PLAN OF STUDY Research proposal for commonwealth scholarship application-environmental science You should describe clearly your research question,...
ScholarshipTshimangeM - Jan 25, 2018 / — -
|A Property Officer from South Pacific Region is trying to apply for an Australian Aid Scholarship
2 - Douglas, you need to indicate what your appointment was all about. There should also be a background reference to...
ScholarshipUlahim - Jan 25, 2018 / Holt - Jan 25, 2018
|'Music has been a very important part of my life' - Self Introduction for KGSP
3 - Hello! Thank you very much for your kind advise! yes I did lack of work experience which made me...
Scholarshipcaeciliaj - Jan 24, 2018 / caeciliaj - Jan 24, 2018
|Cricket fast bowling. PhD research proposal for Commonwealth scholarship Application
3 - Thanks for your feedback. But my research interests and study goals, long term objectives are written in other part...
ScholarshipBangarusai - Jan 23, 2018 / Bangarusai - Jan 24, 2018
|Personal background that encourage the future contribution to development of Nigeria
2 - Stephen, you should rethink your presentation in this essay. You should have a uniformity in the presentation that lays...
ScholarshipTshimangeM - Jan 23, 2018 / Holt - Jan 23, 2018
|To advance in the field of agricultural biotechnology. Letter of Self-Introduction for KGSP 2018
3 - Florina, you need to revise this essay to be more prompt responsive. Remember that you will not get a...
Scholarshipzhayendzuji - Jan 23, 2018 / Holt - Jan 23, 2018
|You must provide a statement explaining how their proposed study relates to a development need. You
3 - Stephen, you turned the statement into a research paper. Delete all of the information regarding the government of Nigeria...
ScholarshipTshimangeM - Jan 23, 2018 / Holt - Jan 23, 2018
|Describe your educational goals, the career path you've chosen- IPAG scholarship application
2 - Phan, you have overly complicated the application essay when there are only 2 paths of response required for it....
ScholarshipPhan Bao Tram - Jan 21, 2018 / Holt - Jan 21, 2018
|Your plan of study and/or research you propose to pursue and relate this to your future career plan
2 - ABUBAKAR, although you have written a very personal paper here, it is not an accurate response to your plan...
ScholarshipAbishaq - Jan 20, 2018 / Holt - Jan 20, 2018
|Describe SDG#10: Reduced Inequalities against the context of your home country. (Swedish Institute)
4 - Ege, since you have a highly limited character count, you should not try to present too much inequalities in...
Scholarshipjonesjones - Jan 17, 2018 / Holt - Jan 18, 2018
|Why I want to Obtain my MSW in South Korea for the Korean Government Scholarship Program (KGSP)
2 - Keelyanne, there are only two points that I feel you need to attend to in order to finalize this...
Scholarshipkkhyl - Jan 18, 2018 / Holt - Jan 18, 2018
|An activity, complicated issue - two short personal statements answers
2 - Maryam, the first prompt is asking you to expand only on one activity that is of importance to you...
ScholarshipMariamBakr2001 - Jan 15, 2018 / Holt - Jan 16, 2018
|NSTIR-2030 Innovation plan for Nigeria. Commonwealth Scholarship Application
3 - Oluwasegun, sorry about the delay. I stepped away from the computer for a bit. Anyway, I believe that this...
Scholarshipsegun2700 - Jan 15, 2018 / Holt - Jan 15, 2018
|Scholarship Personal Statement for Erasmus Mundus Master Programme in International Security
2 - Clara, your main motivation for the masters degree should not be academic in nature, it has to be profession...
ScholarshipClaraRA - Jan 14, 2018 / Holt - Jan 15, 2018
|My goal is to make Nigeria that great nation it is. This master program will help me with this.
Scholarshipeconomist16 - Dec 29, 2017 / economist16 - Jan 11, 2018
|Live within my means and be honest - NTU Scholarship Essay
2 - Sylvia, you should reverse paragraph 2 and paragraph 1 in terms of presentation in the essay. Paragraph 2 has...
Scholarshipmaihmaih - Jan 10, 2018 / Holt - Jan 10, 2018
|My personal statement of purpose-study plan for applying for KOREAN government scholarships program
3 - Nesterenko, the KGSP program has specific essay requirements, a letter of introduction, a statement of purpose, and a study...
ScholarshipKimMaru - Jan 9, 2018 / Holt - Jan 9, 2018
|Write a reference letter for yourself in the third person describing yourself. Scholarship essay
4 - Thanks for your comment, That plan seems perfect to me. Will sure write it from scratch with these...
ScholarshipSWMaster - Jan 5, 2018 / SWMaster - Jan 6, 2018
|How to end motivation letter on strong and positive note? - Erasmus Scholarship
2 - Diva, you have a bigger problem that just closing this motivation letter on a strong note. You do not...
Scholarshipdiva2994 - Jan 5, 2018 / Holt - Jan 5, 2018
|If you aren't awarded this scholarship, what are your plans for the next 4 years? Scholarship essay
ScholarshipSWMaster - Jan 2, 2018 / Holt - Jan 3, 2018
|A personal life experience with the lessons and experience you gained from it; scholarship essay
3 - Thanks for your reply, So you think this experience is a good choice and lessons learned are somewhat...
ScholarshipSWMaster - Jan 2, 2018 / SWMaster - Jan 2, 2018
|Describe your academic goals and how they are appropriate to your long range goals Scholarship essay
ScholarshipSWMaster - Jan 1, 2018 / SWMaster - Jan 2, 2018
|Commonwealth Scholarship: Future Career Plan - Advancing the Nigerian Construction Industry
2 - Ibrahim, you focused so much on the post graduate plans and opportunities that you plan on achieving that you...
Scholarshipisahmk125 - Dec 31, 2017 / Holt - Jan 1, 2018
|SELF-INTRODUCTORY ESSAY FOR UNIVERSITY ADMISSION
3 - NILUFAR, there are no real qualities being presented in your essay aside from your bragging about certain personal aspects...
Scholarshipnilyudoesnotexis - Dec 31, 2017 / Holt - Jan 1, 2018
|Everyone's approach to leadership is different. Global UGrad Leadership Essay
2 - Arie, this essay comes across more as a hypothetical scenario rather than an interview wherein you discuss how you...
Scholarshipjudantoatp - Dec 31, 2017 / Holt - Jan 1, 2018
|The most important value in leading others - UGRAD Essay on Leadership
NEW - Essay Choice A: John Quincy Adams said, "If your actions inspire others to dream more, learn more, do more...
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