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Motivation Letter for embedded systems master program ...

3 - @Holt thank you for your help .. I will take this into consideration while rewriting the letter....

Lettersaseilattia - Dec 26, 2022 / aseilattia - Dec 27, 2022
Double Degree Motivational Letter; My interest in business management

2 - Nobody will be able to offer a solid review of this motivational letter because of the redacted information. This...

Letterstttiiiaaa - Dec 27, 2022 / Holt - Dec 27, 2022
Letter of Motivation for Hydrology and Geological Risk Engineering

2 - Since this is a motivation letter, the information it provides should have a backward flow. Present the information in...

Lettersnaqvisyed - Dec 24, 2022 / Holt - Dec 25, 2022
LETTER OF MOTIVATION for Water and Geological Risk Engineering

3 - @Holt Noted sir. Could you find any other mistakes in it?...

Lettersmunimjaffer - Dec 21, 2022 / munimjaffer - Dec 23, 2022
Reference letter for Swedish institute admission

2 - What you have written is an incomprehensible paragraph. It will confuse a native speaker who will notbe able to...

Lettersto be - Dec 16, 2022 / Holt - Dec 17, 2022
Cover letter for Astrophysics PhD application ( Exoplanets)

2 - The closing paragraph would be a perfect opener with just a little editing. This time, try to mention what...

Lettersayeshaarshad95 - Dec 11, 2022 / Holt - Dec 11, 2022
I have to write an email to all the employees to announce the office renovation plan.

3 - This is a business letter. Therefore, it must use all formal and professional forms of address. It is incorrect...

Letterssoulpancake - Nov 10, 2019 / Holt - Dec 7, 2022
Erasmus Mundus: Neurasmus Motivation Letter; neuroscience with a specialization in genomics

2 - More than 80% of this essay is irrelevant to the proper motivation for attending the program. Since this is...

Lettersryoryo - Nov 30, 2022 / Holt - Dec 1, 2022
Erasmus Mundus cover letter: GLOCAL Programme Global Markets and Creative Industries Pathway

2 - The first paragraph is useless. It should not be presented in such a manner because it sounds like the...

Lettersbooos_1999 - Nov 29, 2022 / Holt - Nov 30, 2022
Info-Bionics Engineering - Motivation letter for graduate school

2 - The first paragraph of this essay is quite concise in representing the motivation of the student and the imperative...

Lettersddrazoh - Nov 29, 2022 / Holt - Nov 30, 2022
Motivation letter for Undergraduate Study program (computer science)

2 - The last paragraph would have been highly effective as the establishing paragraph in the opening portion. This should definitely...

Letterszholochievvv - Nov 29, 2022 / Holt - Nov 29, 2022
A letter written by me to introduce one of my friends for a newspaper award.

4 - First of all, I think you explain who you are and the reason of your letter 4 year -...

LettersQuyennguyetri - Nov 25, 2022 / jenny0601 - Nov 28, 2022
Motivation Letter - Stipendium Hungaricum Programme (computer science at Jadara University)

2 - This is a directionless letter that does not make the intention of the writer clear. Does the writer wish...

LettersEyas Alomari - Nov 25, 2022 / Holt - Nov 26, 2022
Motivation Letter - Russian Scholarship (Biology and Biotechnology)

2 - This is the actual focus of the motivation letter. This is the main topic the writer should show...

Lettersmaisaaziad - Nov 16, 2022 / Holt - Nov 17, 2022
Biotechnology - Motivational letter for master program in university

2 - The letter could be more straight forward in explaining the motivation. Since this appears to be a continuing research...

Lettersuletrax - Nov 15, 2022 / Holt - Nov 16, 2022
LOR for student applying to Msc Data science

2 - A letter of recommendation for a masters course often comes with a prompt from the university the student is...

Letterslayla12 - Nov 1, 2022 / Holt - Nov 2, 2022
Help me to write exemption letter

6 - @strangersth write your motivation letter and post it here for a review. Take note that the motivation letter could...

LettersSohaib799 - Aug 23, 2013 / Holt - Oct 31, 2022
Prospective MS student - Looking for potential research opportunities for fall 2023

2 - Let me just point out that research professors do not appreciate unsolicited emails asking about position openings on their...

Lettersrs26 - Oct 15, 2022 / Holt - Oct 15, 2022
Mental health policies. Motivation letter for EuroPubHealth+ Erasmus Mundus Scholarship

4 - Hello Gustavo, I think you should elaborate more on how your experiences with mental health issues has pushed you...

LettersKoiD - Oct 4, 2022 / Pettypet - Oct 6, 2022
The Interdisciplinary program. Motivation Letter For Master's In Norway

2 - The letter does not properly represet a motivation to study the course in Norway. Since this is a specialized...

LettersSamee Ullah - Oct 3, 2022 / Holt - Oct 3, 2022
Motivation letter to pursue a phd in Battery Management system in the University

2 - The admissions committee is not looking to learn about the applicant's work biography, which is what he summarized in...

LettersNishant1989 - Oct 1, 2022 / Holt - Oct 2, 2022
Letter of Motivation, Computer Science for pursing Masters in Germany

2 - The first 2 paragraphs of this essay do not relate to the motivational aspect of the letter so these...

LettersFarhan2910 - Sep 21, 2022 / Holt - Sep 22, 2022
Impressive academic potential - LOR

2 - This letter will be totally unacceptable to the GKS review committee ( That is a big IF the applicant...

Lettersgogy - Sep 15, 2022 / Holt - Sep 15, 2022
'The beginning is the middle' - Letter of motivation for GKS-U education

3 - write in depth about everything and dont mention details like your name as they already know it from...

Lettersannyxradit - Sep 8, 2022 / vxxra25 - Sep 10, 2022
Write a letter in reply to the tourism office advertisement

2 - The writer has mostly problems with writing sentences in English. He often loses track of who is speaking and...

Lettersntminh720 - Sep 3, 2022 / Holt - Sep 4, 2022
Fascination by hardware and software. Motivation Letter for applying to a master proramme

2 - The writer has developed a friendly letter of introduction. It does not reflect the necessary information requirements for a...

Lettersaseil - Aug 31, 2022 / Holt - Aug 31, 2022
Pursuing my Master of Arts - Graduate Scholarship Application

2 - It is impossible to review an essay that avoids all mention of important information. I have nothing to review...

Lettersdigitalliteracy - Aug 19, 2022 / Holt - Aug 19, 2022
Letter of intent for Business Administration. Business is a matter of passion for me

NEW - Letter of intent for Business Administration Business has become one of the most important aspects of our life...

Lettersoluwalan - Aug 11, 2022 / — -
Study Plan for Canadian Study Permit - Art, Creation and Technology Program

2 - The study plan could use more educational background reference. It would help reinforce the idea that the applicant is...

Letterstxmdd - Jul 11, 2022 / Holt - Jul 11, 2022
To Study in Romania - Motivation letter for Romanian Government Scholarship

2 - The application cycle for this scholarship is currently closed. I am not sure why you are preparing a motivational...

Lettersendlerviena - Jul 9, 2022 / Holt - Jul 9, 2022
A Study plan for Canada Study Permit - a professional master in Digital Media from a mature student

3 - @Holt I was aware that my application would be hard, so I tried my best to cover the potential...

Letterssongoftruth - Jun 19, 2022 / songoftruth - Jun 20, 2022
Express motivation to pursue a Master Business Analytics & Econometrics study

2 - This is a personal statement. It should not be confused with a motivational letter. The motivational letter focuses on...

Letterspudtarn - Jun 10, 2022 / Holt - Jun 10, 2022
A motivation letter for why I want to read Geoengineering at the University of Florence, Italy.

2 - The experience your father had when you were 8 years old is irrelevant. It is a stretch to believe...

Lettershenryasareadjei - Jun 9, 2022 / Holt - Jun 9, 2022
The Ministry of Foreign Affairs and International Cooperation - Motivation Letter

2 - The motivation letter does not have a prompt, which makes writing it difficult. Without guidance, your tendency will be...

LettersKelly1998 - Jun 9, 2022 / Holt - Jun 9, 2022
E-mail: Request for a recommendation letter for the graduate program

2 - The professor is going to decline your request yet again. The reason will be that you are seemingly dictating...

Lettersjsadu - May 29, 2022 / Holt - May 29, 2022
Ielts writing task 1: A response to a complaint of your neighbors about the noise from your house.

2 - The letter is using an inapplicable scenario. The prompt indicates that the noise problem must be a current problem...

LettersLanita - May 23, 2022 / Holt - May 23, 2022
Becoming an entrepreneur in the software industry; Motivation Letter for foreign university

2 - The opening statement is acceptable for the most part. However, I am confused as to whether you are applying...

Lettersnisshankaul - May 18, 2022 / Holt - May 18, 2022
Academic (LOR) Letter of recommendation for MS in Civil Engineering

2 - It is good but could be more informative. The first paragraph is taken as the opportunity for the recommendee...

LettersAhmed Aborai - May 18, 2022 / Holt - May 18, 2022
The Software Development and Entrepreneurship Degree - Motivation letter for BSC

2 - The first paragraph is well developed and serves as an effective lead-in to the actual motivational considerations the student...

Lettersdineshni - May 16, 2022 / Holt - May 16, 2022
SAP Appeal Letter Review for College

2 - If the applicant is not willing to get personal with this letter of appeal by offering information that would...

Lettersabeishere - May 12, 2022 / Holt - May 12, 2022
Accounting - Letter of explanation for study permit in canada

2 - The entire letter is not going to be believable to the consular or visa officer upon first, second, or...

LettersMikebael - May 10, 2022 / Holt - May 11, 2022
Motivational letter for the University Paris-Saclay, Master's in English for Specific Purposes

2 - It should not only be shortened, it should be deleted in totality with a more appropriate motivational letter written...

LettersDina K - May 6, 2022 / Holt - May 7, 2022
Master Environment and Energy Management Motivation letter (UNIVERSITY OF TWENTE)

2 - The response to the first few questions of the essay are on point. The paragraphs respond to the questions,...

Lettersyosuarmand - Apr 25, 2022 / Holt - Apr 26, 2022
Motivation Letter for Admission Postgraduate Certificate in Global Business Management at University

2 - Saying that "I love business" is too amateur. It is almost high schooler in sentiment. I would not use...

Letterstayyabqureshibe - Apr 25, 2022 / Holt - Apr 26, 2022
Msc Human technology in Sports and medicine - my motivation letter

3 - @Holt Thanks a lot for the reply. Yes, I will consider the changes you have recommended. Thank you...

LettersVk18luv - Apr 18, 2022 / Vk18luv - Apr 19, 2022
COVER LETTER APPLY TO SCIENTIFIC DEVELOPER POSITION AT SCHRODINGER, INC.

2 - The letter is not clear about whether the position being applied for is currently open or if the applicant...

Lettersdolong2110 - Apr 14, 2022 / Holt - Apr 15, 2022
Letter of Motivation PhD (research-based, with pre-defined research topic)

2 - Seeing how the motivation for your studies stems more from related experiences after completing the masters course, the molrational...

Lettersedgmin - Apr 12, 2022 / Holt - Apr 13, 2022
Master Environment and Energy Management Motivation letter

2 - I would have to say that the writer over-developed the content of the letter to the point where it...

Lettersvincdels - Apr 12, 2022 / Holt - Apr 12, 2022
You have received an email from the manager of Science club

2 - The sentence structure and word usage in this letter is so bad, the letter loses all its meaning and...

Lettersquynha1603 - Apr 11, 2022 / Holt - Apr 11, 2022
Letter of recommendation for Berea College

2 - The recommendation letter is highly individualistic in focus. It speaks only of the solitary nature of the student. This...

Lettersyejiitzy - Apr 9, 2022 / Holt - Apr 10, 2022
Motivation letter - Master of Science in Spatial data science - Munster, Germany

2 - The 2000 word maximum need not be used if the writer tends to over-extend his motivational letter with non-motivational...

LettersabdelrhmanCS - Apr 6, 2022 / Holt - Apr 6, 2022
Teaching and National Prizes in Computer Science - Letter of recommendation for GKS-U

3 - Hi, it is my first time here so i didnt notice that. Btw, i cant see my lor...

Lettersbritonnn - Apr 4, 2022 / britonnn - Apr 5, 2022
Application for the Master of Education program in Canada - plan of study essay

2 - 11 paragraphs proves to be too long for a study plan explanation. The winter takes several paragraphs before it...

Lettersjenny_ye - Apr 1, 2022 / Holt - Apr 1, 2022
LOR/Recommendation letter for undergraduate - Business Administration

2 - The letter does not contain the same academic tone that it should have, if a teacher had actually written...

Letterskayce - Mar 31, 2022 / Holt - Mar 31, 2022
Motivation Letter - Research Master in Business - Maastricht University - The Netherlands

2 - The response essay needs to be better structured by creating a clear relationship between the courses of interest to...

Lettershdmquan - Mar 27, 2022 / Holt - Mar 27, 2022
Erasmus Mundus Master In Impact Entrepreneurship (EMMIE)-- Motivation Letter

2 - The current letter can be made shorter and direct to the point. Remember that there are thousands of applicants...

Letterszack1211 - Mar 21, 2022 / Holt - Mar 22, 2022
Letter of Motivation Masters in Cybersecurity (Germany)

2 - The historical references in this essay are all more than 5 years old making these irrelevant in relation to...

LettersRishi986 - Mar 21, 2022 / Holt - Mar 22, 2022
Statement letter for pursuing a master's degree in petroleum refining.

2 - The letter is too weak as it does not represent a strong and imperative reason for your decision to...

LettersTheep - Mar 15, 2022 / Holt - Mar 15, 2022
Motivational Letter for the PhD doctoral course in Computer science

3 - Thank you so much for your feedback....

Lettersmuhammadbinsaif0 - Mar 3, 2022 / muhammadbinsaif0 - Mar 4, 2022
[GKS-G] Letter Of Recommendation on behalf of my PROFFESOR for application to SNU

2 - There are conflicting statements in the recommendation letter. An example of the conflict is with regards to the thesis...

LettersViktoriAnders - Mar 3, 2022 / Holt - Mar 4, 2022

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