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|'Globalization is like elephant' - how it affects the world?
Writing Feedbackizhar - Aug 4, 2014 / izhar - Aug 5, 2014
|IELTS: Intelligent students should be educated separately. Do the benefits outweigh the problems?
4 - This introductory paragraph is too simple. You need some major changes. For this prompt, let's give a try; ...
Writing FeedbackSummer_J - Aug 3, 2014 / eddies - Aug 5, 2014
|'I'm happy when I can solve difficult problems myself' - Studying alone or in groups?
2 - "All of those are a general purpose of student that they want to get success in their study. According...
Writing Feedbackwonnguyen - Aug 4, 2014 / cpuissant - Aug 4, 2014
|IELTS Competitiveness is a positive quality for people to have among most societies.
2 - Here is some general advice. Hope this helps; If you look at people taking GRE exams, then mostly...
Writing Feedbacksundin928 - Aug 4, 2014 / eddies - Aug 4, 2014
|Technology has both advantage and disadvantage for creativity of children
5 - Same meaning, both words means less, I just wanna add (es) to the verb which is unfamiliar to me...
Writing Feedbackhosseinshafiee - Aug 3, 2014 / EyadBosy - Aug 3, 2014
|SAT ; We place far too much emphasis on experience and achievement in our society
5 - Hitler had thrived to be the Chancellor of the Third Reich, which was also one of his achievements ....
Writing FeedbackDilian_Nguyen - Jun 28, 2014 / niesaysi - Aug 3, 2014
|Prunty County must undertake the same kind of road improvement as the Butler County; GRE Argument
NEW - [b]Q. Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain...
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|GRE: Highway Safety in Prunty and Butler County - Argument Topic
NEW - Argument topic In an attempt to improve highway safety, Prunty County last year lowered its speed limit form 55Mph...
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|The wide-spread use of labor-saving devices has only made our life much more hectic.
Writing FeedbackRevin - Aug 1, 2014 / sundin928 - Aug 3, 2014
|TOEFL: 'new building construction hold the right to gain more money from government'
2 - If the price of housing growsincreases(more appropriate in the context) continuously, a comfortable place to live in will be...
Writing FeedbackStevenKuang - Aug 2, 2014 / niesaysi - Aug 2, 2014
|Learning a new language process
4 - Learning a new language it is a difficult process. Recently found this language exchange website: languageforexchange It's especially for...
Writing Feedbackkbektas - Jul 30, 2014 / ANSAN - Aug 2, 2014
|IELTS:Parents sending their kids abroad to acquire good education. Good or bad trend?
2 - I noticed that you change very often time scale of the ideas, which describe a person who studies abroad...
Writing Feedbackdevabe2005 - Aug 1, 2014 / VadimKlimenko - Aug 2, 2014
|TOEFL: children should be allowed to play computer games(the whole title is written in the message)
Writing FeedbackDearbhailS - Jul 31, 2014 / VadimKlimenko - Aug 2, 2014
|TOEFL: It is more important to use available land for farmland, housing, and industry.
2 - Well, we are not great experts, however, with our experience for all these years we can certainly help...
Writing FeedbackVadimKlimenko - Aug 1, 2014 / dumi - Aug 1, 2014
|Business is an right investment for future despite of the economic crisis
Writing Feedbackwonnguyen - Aug 1, 2014 / wonnguyen - Aug 1, 2014
|'Travel is the thing, that makes you richer' - Semester at Sea Essay
Writing Feedbackoreillee - Jul 28, 2014 / Hiruni - Aug 1, 2014
|Whether each individual or government should be responsible for the healthy diet?
NEW - Please give me a look and your comments on this essay! Thanks all! :-* IELTS TASK 2: Some people...
Writing Feedbackningo - Aug 1, 2014 / — -
|Not only mother is giving her time and energy to nourish and raise children
3 - You should avoid using question to start an essay. The purpose is to paraphrase this topic fluently. ...
Writing FeedbackHiruni - Aug 1, 2014 / ningo - Aug 1, 2014
|IELTS - historic buildings are precious legacy to human development
2 - "development of modernization"? I really don't get your idea :( You need to open your essay with an...
Writing FeedbackMinnaliao - Jul 31, 2014 / dumi - Aug 1, 2014
|TOEFL Essay- People should master on skill only or many different skills.
2 - I think the last examples "one more friend, one more way to go" cannot support your view very well....
Writing FeedbackJiazigao - Jun 24, 2014 / DearbhailS - Jul 31, 2014
|IELTS Essay - Appropriate age of adulthood
Writing Feedbackmsarkar - Jul 29, 2014 / fikri - Jul 31, 2014
|Ielts: Is it necessary to teach children handwriting?
3 - here is my example,, Foreign visitors should pay more than local visitors for cultural and historical attractions. To what...
Writing Feedbackningo - Jul 30, 2014 / fikri - Jul 31, 2014
|Some cultures value more the elderly people, while others paid more attention on young generation
5 - It is a little bit difficult to provide more meaningful feedbacks without seeing your full prompt. However, I guess...
Writing FeedbackGulnar604 - Jul 27, 2014 / Pahan - Jul 31, 2014
|'children in Gaza' - Pre-Toefl - Childhood is not always a happiest time of people's life
6 - Yes, I quite agree with Ahmad :) What he has suggested is the most appropriate approach because it helps...
Writing FeedbackSarah Gharavi - Jul 29, 2014 / Pahan - Jul 31, 2014
|TOEFL: 'ancient people lived a natural life' - Now it's easier to maintain health
3 - However, some people even scholars are arguing about ifwhether modern people can maintain a good health easier compared to...
Writing FeedbackStevenKuang - Jul 30, 2014 / dumi - Jul 31, 2014
|Change of career and living place has more positive effect on the whole society and the individual
3 - MisterWandering: Your suggestions are very valuable. Thanks! The question is: People change their career and place of residence...
Writing Feedbackdigitalidea - Jul 30, 2014 / digitalidea - Jul 31, 2014
|IELTS Museums and art galleries should show artworks of the local culture
3 - THANKS Nathan, i rewrite it Today, Traditional arts and crafts are going through tough times and most of them...
Writing Feedbacksundin928 - Jul 30, 2014 / sundin928 - Jul 30, 2014
|Effects of sexual abuse and injustice on the personal lives of countless females today
2 - You need to check on your first line structure. It should be something like this, "In this world, we...
Writing Feedbacklydiuta - Jul 28, 2014 / nathan2014 - Jul 30, 2014
|IELTS: the importance of history - removing this course from school curriculum is unwise
Writing FeedbackNZsky - Jul 28, 2014 / eddies - Jul 30, 2014
|Home is good place to learn a lot, however school is the best place to learn.
Writing Feedbackapanwar01 - Jul 2, 2014 / msarkar - Jul 29, 2014
|Ielts: Can environmental problems be solved by individuals?
Writing Feedbackningo - Jul 29, 2014 / eddies - Jul 29, 2014
|'In countries like Japan, the population is getting older' - aging population essay Ielts
Writing Feedbackrachelye - Jul 28, 2014 / — -
|IELTS: Money as a members of staff reward for their exceptional contribution to the company
Writing FeedbackWillNgo - Jul 27, 2014 / eddies - Jul 28, 2014
|IELTS Detailed description of crimes on newspaper and TV can have bad consequences on society
NEW - Detailed description of crimes on newspaper and TV can have bad consequences on society, so this kind of information...
Writing Feedbacksundin928 - Jul 28, 2014 / — -
|Fast Internet connection is a source of great entertainment
Writing Feedbackhoanghonn97 - Jul 27, 2014 / sundin928 - Jul 28, 2014
|IELTS academic task one .. bar chart - coffee and meat consumption
5 - Well, you need to change your current approach for this task. This task is to assess your report writing...
Writing Feedbackmo7ammed1986 - Jun 28, 2014 / dumi - Jul 28, 2014
|"THE MAKING OF PAPER UMBRELLAS" - IELTS WRITING TASK 1
2 - You introduce your paper fairly well although I would add more to it. Try to be more descriptive and...
Writing Feedbacknhungqnk - Jul 27, 2014 / lydiuta - Jul 28, 2014
|IELTS: learning a foreign language early has benefits for an individual but not for the culture
Writing FeedbackHiruni - Jul 26, 2014 / Pahan - Jul 27, 2014
|Topic: Which better? Living in a city or living in the country? why (150 words)
2 - This should be split into two paras - Firstly and Secondly, should go into two separate paragraphs :)...
Writing FeedbackNamkeo - Jul 24, 2014 / Pahan - Jul 27, 2014
|IELTS - mobile phones: faster communication vs social problems
6 - Furthermore, the growing number of mobilesmobile games will impact theirthe mental development of children negatively. For instance, there are...
Writing FeedbackMy2983189867 - Jun 30, 2014 / Pahan - Jul 27, 2014
|IELTS: One of advertising's drawbacks - purchasing not necessary products
2 - Well, your essay has many issues and the most obvious one is that you have written everything in one...
Writing FeedbackJuliet Ngo - Jul 25, 2014 / Pahan - Jul 27, 2014
|Some subjects should be optional rather than compulsory
2 - Education has been viewed as one of the most essential elementsaspects of individual and social development.One topic now under...
Writing Feedbacksundin928 - Jul 27, 2014 / Pahan - Jul 27, 2014
|IELTS Should we invent a new language for people to use for international communication?
2 - Why do you talk about "English" in particular here? Your prompt is much broader and talk about the...
Writing Feedbacksundin928 - Jul 26, 2014 / dumi - Jul 27, 2014
|"Courage, my friends" - Tommy Douglas stands out as one of the greatest Canadian
2 - In fact, Canada is known for its successful Medicare system. Statistic showconfirm Canadians are among the healthiest people...
Writing Feedbackayesha10833 - Jun 9, 2014 / dumi - Jul 27, 2014
|Adolescents are being influenced badly by untalented people who become famous
5 - First of all, it is true thatAdmittedly, people usespend their money to becomeachieve an inspiration, which is are definitely...
Writing Feedbackicebeating - Jun 26, 2014 / eddies - Jul 27, 2014
|IELTS: I highly recommend authorities to raise the age to leave school to 18
7 - contribute to high quality or contribute in producing high quality I always suggest others to have...
Writing Feedbackbangvuthe - Jun 4, 2014 / eddies - Jul 27, 2014
|Imprisonment trend among five different countries - bar graph
Writing FeedbackVihuynh - Jun 30, 2014 / eddies - Jul 27, 2014
|Some people say that success is "10 percent talent and 90 percent hard work"
Writing FeedbackKatyDao - Jun 10, 2014 / eddies - Jul 26, 2014
|Crime in urban areas of America - rough draft
2 - teachers affects a studentsstudent's achievement. Without proper education, the possibility of being able to earn a decent income...
Writing Feedbackameyer149 - Jul 18, 2014 / Hiruni - Jul 26, 2014
|It is very boring and monotonous to keep living in the place you were born until you die
3 - First and foremost, there may be more job opportunities available in another area.outside. For example, many people choose to...
Writing Feedbackmandana193 - Jul 26, 2014 / dumi - Jul 26, 2014
|How the Vietnamese invasion of Cambodia affected the United States-feedback
5 - The Vietnamese invasion of Cambodia also affected people's actionsperceptions on war and their behavior (actions and behavior more or...
Writing Feedbackyodelkid4 - Jun 21, 2014 / dumi - Jul 26, 2014
|ielts essay about water shortage
12 - You should have included the full prompt of your essay for us to understand what it really requires from...
Writing FeedbackShajiang - Jun 22, 2014 / dumi - Jul 26, 2014
|Advertisement are only the good way of gaining information and one should not be fully depends on it
5 - As you have pointed out, it is difficult to generalise about IELTS template. You'd better focus on the...
Writing Feedbackemonabin - Jul 24, 2014 / eddies - Jul 26, 2014
|Unpaid community service - "great stepping stone for high school institutions"
6 - It is ok if you put many paragraphs here and there. However, a layout takes an important role...
Writing Feedbackhillard214james - Jun 23, 2014 / eddies - Jul 26, 2014
|essay: following the host country's culture for visitors
5 - even this essay opens for discussion/ both views, it is always nicer if you state your opinion in...
Writing Feedbacklovemylife - Jun 23, 2014 / eddies - Jul 26, 2014
|'healthy diet and adequate exercises' - Methods to improve public health
Writing Feedbackhillard214james - Jun 22, 2014 / eddies - Jul 26, 2014
|IELTS WRITING TASK - 2 Most high-level positions in companies are filled by men
Writing FeedbackSabi Thapaa - Jun 22, 2014 / eddies - Jul 26, 2014
|some people believe that college student should consider only their own talents
4 - Given this evidence, both group opinions are right, which students should consider parameters when choosing field of study....
Writing Feedbacktgholian - Jun 5, 2014 / eddies - Jul 26, 2014
|Should people be allowed to have cosmetic surgery before the age of 18?
5 - Therefore, I believe that there are in-depth discussion about the pros and cons of having surgery for teenagers....
Writing Feedbackhwabatte - Jul 24, 2014 / eddies - Jul 26, 2014
|IELTS Task 1. MARRIAGES AND DIVORCE IN THE USA & ADULT AMERICANS' MARITAL STATUS
Writing FeedbackMisnariah Idrus - Jun 19, 2014 / eddies - Jul 26, 2014
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