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|Cultural differences should be welcomed by everyone
6 - Thank you :D...
Writing FeedbackShokhusrav - Apr 9, 2014 / Shokhusrav - Apr 10, 2014
|"I am glad that my mother didn't give up"; most intelligent and beautiful lady in our town
3 - Today, as I write this, I recall the memories that were never swept out of my mind. (stop here)whileI...
Writing FeedbackaliMurtaza - Mar 26, 2014 / dumi - Apr 10, 2014
|IELTS: Solving the issues of growing traffic and pollution - Increase petrol price?
6 - Hi, i am preparing IELTS as well, my teacher said that answer the question is very important for IELTS...
Writing Feedbackmariasultana - Mar 7, 2014 / oneclbb - Apr 10, 2014
|IELTS essay - why adults decide to study; shared cost of each course
6 - Hope this can cover the data presented in the bar chart: A subject's preference breaks a record as the...
Writing Feedbackshikamaru - Mar 31, 2014 / eddies - Apr 10, 2014
|IELTS: Technology impact on people; Earth has become like a small village
10 - Thank you Pahan, dumi and eddies. I really appreciate your helps. I will be grateful to see your comments...
Writing FeedbackAbdurasul - Apr 9, 2014 / Abdurasul - Apr 10, 2014
|Number of visits to two new music sites on the web - 180,000 / 80,000
Writing FeedbackEva Novita Sari - Apr 10, 2014 / eddies - Apr 10, 2014
|IELTSTASK1:illiteracy rates by region and by gender; 2%, 12% and 20% rate
Writing Feedbackernhy - Apr 10, 2014 / eddies - Apr 10, 2014
|IELTS: Under British and Australian laws a jury in a criminal case has no access
8 - Sorry, dear :( I am not the one who is capable of answering your question. To make everything clear,...
Writing Feedbacktechgeek - Apr 8, 2014 / eddies - Apr 9, 2014
|IELTS: The graph below shows how much money was spent on different forms of fun?
4 - In Europe, in 1995, the bar chart started from 97.000 million dollars were spent on entertainment in 1995.It...
Writing Feedbacktechgeek - Apr 8, 2014 / Pahan - Apr 9, 2014
|IELTS - governments or individuals should take care of environment? 'equal role'
Writing Feedbackduo008 - Apr 3, 2014 / duo008 - Apr 9, 2014
|TOEFL - Rush vs. Slower Pace
5 - If you do not hurry yourselfrush for things, then you can take more time for your family and friends....
Writing FeedbackLeonP - Apr 8, 2014 / Pahan - Apr 9, 2014
|ielts; Teaching foreign languages broaden childrens horizons
7 - axa thanks for feedback) i will try to be active and i hope you regularly give me your suggestions)...
Writing Feedbackbakhadeer - Apr 8, 2014 / bakhadeer - Apr 9, 2014
|TOEFL: Listening to the advice of family and friends or via personal experience?
Writing Feedbacksntinn - Apr 8, 2014 / eddies - Apr 9, 2014
|Money is a major source of satisfaction while searching for a job
5 - The first thing the reader sees is your layout, which shows whole of your essay. If the layout is...
Writing Feedbacksandipsinh - Apr 9, 2014 / eddies - Apr 9, 2014
|IELTS: Reading news in the internet or newspapers ?
7 - This item is highly common. Use these less common lexical items: The aforementioned evidence examines that ... Given...
Writing Feedbackchaaaany - Apr 7, 2014 / eddies - Apr 9, 2014
|I agree with the selective roommate system; Dormitory rooms shared by 2 students
4 - Well, the first thing the reader sees is your layout, which shows whole of your essay. If the layout...
Writing Feedbackpedramcontrol - Mar 31, 2014 / eddies - Apr 9, 2014
|Travels broaden the mind - Advantage and disadvantage of travelling
Writing Feedbackciasteczkoik - Mar 18, 2014 / eddies - Apr 9, 2014
|IELTS:The birth rate in most developed countries is predicted to begin to fall.
8 - This item is highly common. Use these less common lexical items: The aforementioned evidence examines that ... Given...
Writing Feedbackuzboy - Apr 6, 2014 / eddies - Apr 9, 2014
|Never miss a chance to attend a live performance, its way better than TV at home
4 - You'd better rewrite this expression. What I see is that many students think the memorization of the phrase...
Writing Feedbackhere2study - Apr 8, 2014 / eddies - Apr 9, 2014
|Work or travel between high school & university; beneficial or unfavorable year
Writing FeedbackShokhusrav - Apr 6, 2014 / eddies - Apr 9, 2014
|Large shopping center in your neighborhood; 'it can increase province income'
7 - Well, you conclude this intro with a question to the reader. However, your prompt expects you to answer...
Writing Feedbackernhy - Apr 2, 2014 / dumi - Apr 9, 2014
|IELTS - Is social skill as important as good qualification? give your reasons.
21 - Ok, thanks Pahan!...
Writing Feedbackduo008 - Mar 31, 2014 / duo008 - Apr 9, 2014
|Single career is an old fashion - 'being an expert in one specified sphere'
Writing FeedbackShokhusrav - Apr 7, 2014 / Shokhusrav - Apr 9, 2014
|TOEFL - Human needs vs. saving land for endangered animals
Writing FeedbackLeonP - Apr 8, 2014 / LeonP - Apr 9, 2014
|Co-Educaitonal Schooling Systems; integrating concepts of the future; conclusion
2 - that ( END YOUR SENTENCE HERE) co-educational institutes do not compromise the academic achievement of students, and that co-educational...
Writing Feedbackclassified9988 - Apr 6, 2014 / sandipsinh - Apr 9, 2014
|IELTS: leisure time - joblessness people take the highest place in the race
5 - Yes, Dumi is right. It is hard to share thoughtful feedback for your IELTS visual writing if the...
Writing Feedbackkikiliyik - Apr 7, 2014 / eddies - Apr 8, 2014
|IELTS TASK 1 : Student joining education by gender.
4 - I think you wrote writing task 1 perfectly. There are some mistakes such as felt , it should be...
Writing FeedbackSHanafi - Apr 7, 2014 / techgeek - Apr 8, 2014
|IELTS: E-mail has had a huge impact on professional and social communication, ..
4 - Nowadays, most people use e-mail for communicating and sharing data with individualsothers who live in a long distance. It...
Writing Feedbacktechgeek - Apr 7, 2014 / dumi - Apr 8, 2014
|ielts essay: Physical education plays an important role in pupil's life
4 - Yes, you should follow Pahan's suggested structure. Read those examples to get a good knack about it. For this...
Writing Feedbacksunny0438 - Apr 7, 2014 / dumi - Apr 8, 2014
|IELTS: 'car industry is developing extremely fast' ; traffic problems
7 - which every family pays / which all families pay Today, income taxes, which every family pays are...
Writing Feedbacktechgeek - Apr 7, 2014 / dumi - Apr 8, 2014
|Budget control; it is better to enjoy your money than you save your money?
5 - I actually wanted to ask you this question in my earlier comment, but somehow I have missed it out...
Writing Feedbackernhy - Apr 2, 2014 / dumi - Apr 8, 2014
|IELTS; 'I can't think too quiet' - Making important decision alone.
7 - Personally, sometimes I cannot make decision without askingto my best friend. So, my choice is always between agree and...
Writing Feedbackernhy - Apr 3, 2014 / dumi - Apr 8, 2014
|IELTS TASK 1; UK TELEPHONE CALLS - three categories
5 - Let's give a try for the overview: Overall, the most popular category was recorded by local fixed line...
Writing FeedbackRobotintheworld - Apr 5, 2014 / eddies - Apr 8, 2014
|IELTS: The number of men and women in further education in Britain
2 - The bar charts illustrate the changes in the number of men and women who undertook full-time and part-time...
Writing Feedbacktechgeek - Apr 7, 2014 / MisterWandering - Apr 7, 2014
|These days, more and more people are going to another countries.IELTS
2 - Concurrently, taking a year out to live and study abroad is being popular among young adults. For many, it's...
Writing Feedbackuzboy - Apr 7, 2014 / chaaaany - Apr 7, 2014
|Toefl - Language plays a significant role in our lives
Writing Feedbacksayes - Mar 31, 2014 / eddies - Apr 7, 2014
|IELTS: 'Woman'; behavior of children and the role of a modern mother
6 - Well I attended my IELTS test on saturday. The first task was a line chart representing the number of...
Writing FeedbackMowonight - Apr 3, 2014 / Mowonight - Apr 7, 2014
|IELTS 'helicopter model'; General test Writing Task 1: complaint letter
Writing Feedbackduo008 - Apr 3, 2014 / duo008 - Apr 7, 2014
|'Advertisements make people feel like they are successful and special person'
Writing Feedbackoneclbb - Apr 6, 2014 / oneclbb - Apr 7, 2014
|IELTS: University lecturers are now able to put their lectures on the Internet..
5 - Eddy and Dumi, thanks a lot buddies! : ) Can somebody give me an approximate band, which I will...
Writing Feedbacktechgeek - Apr 6, 2014 / techgeek - Apr 7, 2014
|The extended family is less important now; 'urban life / communication tools'
Writing Feedbackramshah - Apr 6, 2014 / eddies - Apr 7, 2014
|Spending money on six consumer goods in Europe between 1980 -1990. 'British spent more'
Writing FeedbackBob brother - Mar 27, 2014 / dumi - Apr 7, 2014
|About my self - education; parent; activities; strength; weakness; end notes
Writing Feedbackdejiman - Mar 27, 2014 / dumi - Apr 7, 2014
|IELTS; tuition fees, who are responsible to pay?
Writing Feedbackcodeblue - Apr 4, 2014 / Nhasir Rahmatia - Apr 7, 2014
|'Game is imagination bowed three dimension'; important for adults and children
Writing Feedbackridwan - Apr 4, 2014 / eddies - Apr 7, 2014
|'special talents' parent and family background vs teachers influence on children
8 - As professional teachers, it is obvious thatEvidently, they, professional teachers, have adequate teaching techniques which can help young people...
Writing Feedbackjack zhao - Apr 1, 2014 / eddies - Apr 7, 2014
|Increasing weight, decreasing health; 'can't find absolutely healthy person'
4 - Today it seems to be impossible to meet an absolutely healthy person who is absolutely healthy , (1)( stop...
Writing FeedbackShokhusrav - Apr 6, 2014 / eddies - Apr 6, 2014
|TOEFL iBT - Saving/Spending money
Writing FeedbackLeonP - Apr 2, 2014 / eddies - Apr 6, 2014
|impressive buildings are important for a city or hospitals and schools
5 - After perusing the prompt, I conclude that the essay should be written to respond to the ideas: Money should...
Writing FeedbackNhasir Rahmatia - Apr 1, 2014 / eddies - Apr 6, 2014
|Telecomm. effects; 'Edison would be astonished if he saw the use of telephone'
3 - Where is your prompt? Anyway, I will just concentrate on syntactical principles (grammar, mechanics, sentence structure). What has...
Writing FeedbackBINGBINGLIANG - Apr 3, 2014 / niesaysi - Apr 6, 2014
|Directors of large companies receive high salary; 'Employees are working hard'
9 - Well , I wrote like this because I am supporting normal workers rather than directors, can I write like...
Writing Feedbackammus1 - Apr 4, 2014 / ammus1 - Apr 6, 2014
|'we gather in living room and talk about daily activities' - most important room
Writing Feedbacksayes - Mar 31, 2014 / dumi - Apr 6, 2014
|My Life Goals; I came to realize my passion in the Entertainment Industry and in Computing
4 - I have edited few words: there are lots of unsolved problem which needs to be giving a solution In...
Writing Feedbackdejiman - Mar 27, 2014 / eddies - Apr 6, 2014
|Toefl evalution - God is too large to fit in one religion
5 - Firstly, nobody have ever seen god except their imaginations, faith or beliefs , probably that is the reason god...
Writing Feedbacksandipsinh - Mar 27, 2014 / Pahan - Apr 6, 2014
|'People need food, fashion, and health' - advertisements may improve our lives
Writing Feedbackridwan - Mar 30, 2014 / Pahan - Apr 6, 2014
|IELTS, TASK; 'In Indonesia, child workers are still the one of the big issues'
3 - Hey Friend, please have this note: When you deal with IELTS, the first thing the assessor sees is your...
Writing Feedbackkikiliyik - Apr 5, 2014 / eddies - Apr 6, 2014
|IELTS: 'satisfaction'; People are never satisfied with what they have
8 - On the one side, I think that some persons want to reach something that they want. They will not...
Writing FeedbackEva Novita Sari - Apr 3, 2014 / Pahan - Apr 6, 2014
|Ielts task 2: Parents vs teachers: development of a child.
4 - Your introduction does not contain what you think about the issue. It's important to have that in your intro....
Writing FeedbackAbdurasul - Apr 5, 2014 / Pahan - Apr 6, 2014
|IELTS; schools as oppose to parents; different forms of violence
6 - Well, if you struggle so much for finding a most appropriate hook, don't trouble yourself. What you can...
Writing Feedbackcodeblue - Apr 3, 2014 / dumi - Apr 5, 2014
|ielts writing task - Causes of obesity and worsening people's health and fitness
5 - My best advice for you is that do not worry about how well your writing would impress the reader....
Writing Feedbackkikiliyik - Apr 4, 2014 / dumi - Apr 5, 2014
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