Mentor have to check the condition of his children if they are ready or not to learn second language
Writing Feedbacknida26 - Mar 27, 2016 / justivy03 - Mar 28, 2016
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IELTS Task 2: Fewer and fewer people are walking these days
Writing FeedbackLita27 - Mar 27, 2016 / justivy03 - Mar 28, 2016
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Young people should take a job for a few years between school and university
Writing Feedbacknida26 - Mar 28, 2016 / yonathan66 - Mar 28, 2016
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A country must have regulations to arrange and manage people's lives.
Writing Feedbacknida26 - Mar 27, 2016 / justivy03 - Mar 28, 2016
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College or university have always been a place that provides knowledge and experience. Why?
Writing FeedbackTrisulastri - Mar 27, 2016 / ankush008 - Mar 28, 2016
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In this globalization era, many people try to be an entrepreneur, creating their own product/service
Writing FeedbackTrisulastri - Mar 28, 2016 / — -
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Both old generation and young generation have their respective advantages to lead the company.
Writing Feedbacknida26 - Mar 27, 2016 / angga93 - Mar 28, 2016
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An second language should be introducted after the child is mastering the mother tongue.
Writing FeedbackTrisulastri - Mar 27, 2016 / JanFan - Mar 28, 2016
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Chocolade producing starts with harvesting the ripe red pods from cocoa trees
Writing FeedbackTrisulastri - Mar 27, 2016 / angga93 - Mar 28, 2016
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The position of women in society can influence the development of their children's behaviour
Writing Feedbacknida26 - Mar 27, 2016 / JanFan - Mar 28, 2016
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Several steps which must be passed for making liquid chocolate
Writing Feedbacknida26 - Mar 27, 2016 / RAY93 - Mar 28, 2016
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Spending budgets on expensive medical technology and procedures rather than on health education
Writing Feedbacknida26 - Mar 27, 2016 / Yusri31 - Mar 28, 2016
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Young people will become competent leaders if they gt support and guide by senior person.
Writing FeedbackTrisulastri - Mar 27, 2016 / Yusri31 - Mar 28, 2016
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IELTS Task 2 - What is the best way to decrease crime rate? Prisons or education?
Writing FeedbackTrisulastri - Mar 27, 2016 / Yusri31 - Mar 28, 2016
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Which one is better, young or old director?
Writing Feedbackyonathan66 - Mar 27, 2016 / nida26 - Mar 28, 2016
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The basketball on 'Martin Carpena' - Writing about an event I've lived
Writing FeedbackAlvaroRobles7 - Mar 27, 2016 / EF_Susan - Mar 27, 2016
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IELTS Task 2 - Career women can trigger juvenile deliquency
Writing FeedbackTrisulastri - Mar 27, 2016 / EF_Susan - Mar 27, 2016
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Prisons are considered as the best way to decrease crime rate
Writing Feedbacknurannisaputry92 - Mar 27, 2016 / angga93 - Mar 27, 2016
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IELTS Task 2 - Should be health budgets spent more to health education?
Writing FeedbackTrisulastri - Mar 27, 2016 / EF_Susan - Mar 27, 2016
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Task 2: Many people believe that having a fixed punishment for all crimes is more efficient
Writing FeedbackLita27 - Mar 27, 2016 / EF_Susan - Mar 27, 2016
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Schools from different areas report that students tend to have behavioral problems
Writing Feedbacknurannisaputry92 - Mar 27, 2016 / RAY93 - Mar 27, 2016
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Severe problems in regard to children behavior at schools
Writing Feedbackangga93 - Mar 27, 2016 / EF_Susan - Mar 27, 2016
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The typical steps of items production for consumers
Writing Feedbackyonathan66 - Mar 27, 2016 / EF_Susan - Mar 27, 2016
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The comparison regarding the number of population in Yemen and Italy between 2000 and 2050
Writing Feedbackainirere - Mar 26, 2016 / akbartaufiq25 - Mar 27, 2016
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The complex process of goods manufacturing starts by collecting raw materials and other components
Writing FeedbackTrisulastri - Mar 27, 2016 / nurannisaputry92 - Mar 27, 2016
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Objection of skyscrapers is unreasonable
Writing Feedbackangga93 - Mar 27, 2016 / EF_Kevin - Mar 27, 2016
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The government should balance budgets for healthcare and health education
Writing Feedbackangga93 - Mar 27, 2016 / EF_Kevin - Mar 27, 2016
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The diagram depicts the stages of manufacturing and process adjustment of the customer goods.
Writing Feedbacknurannisaputry92 - Mar 27, 2016 / EF_Kevin - Mar 27, 2016
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Power-holders in many countries govern several regulations to shelter society from harmful actions
Writing FeedbackTrisulastri - Mar 27, 2016 / angga93 - Mar 27, 2016
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Supermarkets and customers can restrict the use of the product packaging. IELTS Task 2
Writing FeedbackTrisulastri - Mar 27, 2016 / angga93 - Mar 27, 2016
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IELTS Task 2 - Different objections against skyscrappers
Writing FeedbackTrisulastri - Mar 27, 2016 / angga93 - Mar 27, 2016
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The pathway of chocolate production
Writing Feedbackangga93 - Mar 27, 2016 / Trisulastri - Mar 27, 2016
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The world construct ever-taller building to provide accommodation and offices
Writing Feedbacknurannisaputry92 - Mar 27, 2016 / angga93 - Mar 27, 2016
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Prison is one of places for offenders to rehabilitate their deeds.
Writing Feedbacknida26 - Mar 27, 2016 / Trisulastri - Mar 27, 2016
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Manufacturers and supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of goods
Writing Feedbacknurannisaputry92 - Mar 27, 2016 / angga93 - Mar 27, 2016
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Manufacturing and information flow of consumers good production
Writing FeedbackRAY93 - Mar 27, 2016 / kev510 - Mar 27, 2016
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IELTS Task 2 - The causes and solutions of student's severe problems
Writing FeedbackTrisulastri - Mar 27, 2016 / Lita27 - Mar 27, 2016
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Most developed countries spend a large proportion of their health budgets
Writing Feedbacknurannisaputry92 - Mar 27, 2016 / Lita27 - Mar 27, 2016
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Manual and technological process of chocolate manufacturing - ten stages
Writing Feedbackyonathan66 - Mar 27, 2016 / Trisulastri - Mar 27, 2016
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Schools should cut art and music so that children can focus on information and technology
Writing FeedbackLita27 - Mar 27, 2016 / — -
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Who have to take responsibility on the number of plastic usage for packaging
Writing Feedbackyonathan66 - Mar 27, 2016 / Lita27 - Mar 27, 2016
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Some inhabitants think that government create too many rule though it is for their own safety.
Writing Feedbackyonathan66 - Mar 27, 2016 / Lita27 - Mar 27, 2016
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Pupils have serious problems with their behaviour at school because of influence of the environment
Writing Feedbacknida26 - Mar 27, 2016 / Trisulastri - Mar 27, 2016
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People reckon that the growing number of overweight children is caused by government's regulation
Writing FeedbackLita27 - Mar 27, 2016 / — -
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Many People Refuse Apartment Building Process
Writing Feedbackyonathan66 - Mar 27, 2016 / Lita27 - Mar 27, 2016
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The knowledge or experience from an university is very useful lesson in people's life.
Writing Feedbacknida26 - Mar 27, 2016 / — -
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Seeking for a job is the main reason why people attends higher educational institutions classes
Writing FeedbackRAY93 - Mar 26, 2016 / Lita27 - Mar 27, 2016
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The rising number of world's population makes the city becoming more crowded. Tall buildings.
Writing Feedbacknida26 - Mar 27, 2016 / — -
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Whether prison or education is the best way to decrease crime or not
Writing FeedbackRAY93 - Mar 26, 2016 / Lita27 - Mar 27, 2016
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Reduction of packaging involves both producers and consumers
Writing Feedbackangga93 - Mar 27, 2016 / — -
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Artists' freedom to express their ideas
Writing Feedbackstku - Mar 27, 2016 / angga93 - Mar 27, 2016
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The diagrams show how chocolate is produced
Writing Feedbacknurannisaputry92 - Mar 27, 2016 / Trisulastri - Mar 27, 2016
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Contradict opinions about the most responsive to reduce the amount of packaging of goods
Writing FeedbackRAY93 - Mar 26, 2016 / Lita27 - Mar 27, 2016
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Older vs younger leaders, whom is better?
Writing Feedbackangga93 - Mar 27, 2016 / — -
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TASK 2 - 1. Some people think that the government is responsible for the rise in obesity in children
Writing FeedbackDesty22 - Mar 27, 2016 / angga93 - Mar 27, 2016
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National budget expenditure on medical technology objected by some people
Writing FeedbackRAY93 - Mar 26, 2016 / nurannisaputry92 - Mar 27, 2016
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Which one is better, spending money on sophisticated medical equipment or on health education
Writing Feedbackyonathan66 - Mar 27, 2016 / nurannisaputry92 - Mar 27, 2016
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Governments make many rules to save people from harm
Writing Feedbacknurannisaputry92 - Mar 27, 2016 / yonathan66 - Mar 27, 2016
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People attend college or university for many different reasons
Writing Feedbacknurannisaputry92 - Mar 27, 2016 / yonathan66 - Mar 27, 2016
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The role of women in community has altered dramatically in the last two decades.
Writing Feedbacknurannisaputry92 - Mar 27, 2016 / yonathan66 - Mar 27, 2016
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