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|Celebrity/ famous film star/ sports personality - 'opt for entertainment field'
Writing FeedbackNaveed786 - Mar 17, 2014 / Naveed786 - Mar 18, 2014
|task-2 General ielts- Industrial pollution is increasing all around the world.
6 - Hey, Use of comma,semi-colon, period is required at many places in your essay. Always read your essay a...
Writing Feedbackamu1988 - Mar 15, 2014 / sandipsinh - Mar 18, 2014
|CONDITIONING STYLES; Child conditioning
3 - From the moment people are born, they begin to learn things and this learning process continues till the...
Writing Feedbackrivers785 - Mar 13, 2014 / Pahan - Mar 18, 2014
|One national cirriculum is forcing students to study materials they dont want to
5 - Well, I think should have not opened your essay with a statement expressing your opinion. You need to tell...
Writing Feedbacksudeepdai - Mar 7, 2014 / Pahan - Mar 18, 2014
|IELTS task 1: How a thermos flask works.
4 - Next part is called vacuum flask THAT IS OR WHICH IS divided into two parts: This part is divided...
Writing Feedbackeddies - Mar 7, 2014 / sandipsinh - Mar 18, 2014
|"Many holidaymakers would rather stay in a hotel room. Others prefer a campsite." (Essay)
Writing FeedbackGustav02 - Mar 16, 2014 / Gustav02 - Mar 18, 2014
|IELTS TASK 1 : Developing on Chorleywood Village
4 - hi, eddies . Can I say that you mean tenses consistency usage (continuous and past simple). When...
Writing FeedbackSHanafi - Mar 18, 2014 / SHanafi - Mar 18, 2014
|IELTS TASK 1; Country Food/ Drinks/ Tobacco/ Clothing/ Footwear/ Leisure/ Education
5 - The table illustrates the need for different items in 5 countries in 2002. In general, the percentage of national...
Writing Feedbackthuylinh - Mar 18, 2014 / thuylinh - Mar 18, 2014
|IELTS: Should whistle blowers be immune from punishment?
Writing Feedbackkai_tabz - Mar 18, 2014 / MisterWandering - Mar 18, 2014
|TOEFL:Travel from home to a place 40 miles away. Which method of travel you would choose ?
4 - However, train would not be a suitable option in this case because most of the trains in my city...
Writing Feedbackmax2014 - Mar 14, 2014 / Pahan - Mar 18, 2014
|IELTS; 'every student either male or female should be given equal opportunity'
12 - purse- pusue Anyway, I can see the argument here and it does make sense. :) I am totally agreed...
Writing FeedbackArun0506 - Mar 16, 2014 / ieltspinoy - Mar 18, 2014
|PTE essay----Do governments have a legitimate role to legislate to protect citizens?
3 - Tobacco is a prevalent drug attracting over a billion of adults every day. However, long-term consuming tobacco regularly for...
Writing Feedbackdorisluo - Mar 14, 2014 / dumi - Mar 18, 2014
|Why are Cities Becoming Overcrowded? - IELTS topic.
Writing Feedbackuzboy - Mar 13, 2014 / uzboy - Mar 18, 2014
|Essay on the extent to which living in a city in the 21st century is stressful
5 - Living in a city is totally different from living in the countryside. ...You have not yet told...
Writing Feedbackmadona - Mar 15, 2014 / dumi - Mar 18, 2014
|"Where I see myself in ten years" but written in third person essay.
3 - Many people thingthink about their future and the things theydream about their desiresto achieve . A student may want...
Writing FeedbackEms27 - Mar 6, 2014 / dumi - Mar 18, 2014
|Three important things in choosing a job. - IELTS topic.
Writing Feedbackuzboy - Mar 14, 2014 / uzboy - Mar 18, 2014
|Toefl - Do you agree or disagree? "The most important thing about a job is how much money
Writing Feedbacksandipsinh - Mar 13, 2014 / dumi - Mar 18, 2014
|toefl essay: large company vs small company - which one is better?
Writing Feedbackjon_snow - Mar 17, 2014 / niesaysi - Mar 18, 2014
|Toefl essay: which is better learning from the advice of fnf or from personal experience
5 - thank you all...
Writing Feedbackjon_snow - Mar 14, 2014 / jon_snow - Mar 18, 2014
|IELTS; Nowadays the way many people intearact with each other has changed
9 - Hellooooo..., Dumi has shown you how to deal with the best structure. What you do is to adjust....
Writing Feedbackdigestion - Feb 22, 2014 / eddies - Mar 17, 2014
|IELTS TASK1; The consequence of a survey of grown up person education
5 - I feel that this sentence is not necessary. Although it is shown in the prompt that the charts...
Writing Feedbackfanix - Mar 16, 2014 / MisterWandering - Mar 17, 2014
|TOEFL "a coin has two sides" Young people enjoy life more than older people do.
Writing Feedbackramshah - Mar 15, 2014 / Pahan - Mar 17, 2014
|International Graduates, Canadian Universities, 2001-2006
Writing FeedbackMisnariah Idrus - Mar 16, 2014 / eddies - Mar 17, 2014
|Servings Per Container; Creative Writing: Lyric Essay
Writing Feedbackcl8onshuttle - Mar 12, 2014 / sandipsinh - Mar 17, 2014
|Toefl - a custom from your country that you would like people from other countries to ado
Writing Feedbacksandipsinh - Mar 13, 2014 / dumi - Mar 17, 2014
|TOEFL -You have the opportunity to visit a foreign country for two weeks.
5 - Well, overall, your essay needs better presentation. You tend to construct too complicated sentences. Avoid that and write simple,...
Writing Feedbacksandipsinh - Mar 14, 2014 / dumi - Mar 17, 2014
|Effects of the gold rush to Australia. 1850's Gold Rush changed the country face
4 - the gold is getting pulled up is the subject and the verb is the immigrants following. Does it make...
Writing Feedbacksabstar - Mar 6, 2014 / sabstar - Mar 17, 2014
|IELTS task 1: median costs of houses and units in four cities in Australia over a 16 year
3 - Overall, I think you write very well and really need not to worry about this task. However, you need...
Writing Feedbackandial - Mar 16, 2014 / eddies - Mar 17, 2014
|TOEFL - studying art and music will develop one's mind
4 - It can bring to everybody all pleasant views from all over the world without the need of expensive travelling....
Writing Feedbackborisbonev - Mar 16, 2014 / niesaysi - Mar 17, 2014
|In modern times, how to maintain the balance of the competition and cooperation is a serious problem
2 - Logon to EF On the new screen that opens up, under the LOGO "EssayForum", Find and select your essay...
Writing FeedbackBINGBINGLIANG - Mar 16, 2014 / eddies - Mar 16, 2014
|I was a rebel I was a trouble maker; Epiphany in My Life
6 - Utilize spell check features of Microsoft Word to correct as many spelling problems as possible before...
Writing Feedbackdayanag - Feb 17, 2014 / eddies - Mar 16, 2014
|IELTS Task I : Male and Female Fitness Membership
5 - To me, 2 details (para) look more organised: selecting the key information, including Number, and making comparison/contrast. Tell me...
Writing FeedbackSHanafi - Feb 18, 2014 / eddies - Mar 16, 2014
|IELTS Task 1 - Describing chart - help me to correct if any mistakes!
6 - This is good. However, you'd better have an overview instead of a conclusion. Write your overview paragraph after...
Writing Feedbackcarolinenguyen - Feb 20, 2014 / eddies - Mar 16, 2014
|Traditional methods of cooking is likely to be extinct - IELTS writing
Writing Feedbackyohooooo - Feb 20, 2014 / eddies - Mar 16, 2014
|IELTS - TASK1 - BAR CHART - average bed use in three typical hospitals
7 - To provide readers with a clear view of the main trends of the given charts, write your overview...
Writing Feedbackraflo - Feb 20, 2014 / eddies - Mar 16, 2014
|IELTS - GT (task-1) You have moved to different house, Write a letter to your friend
Writing FeedbackNaveed786 - Mar 16, 2014 / Naveed786 - Mar 16, 2014
|IELTS Task 1: Subway system in six major countries
5 - The table revealsevidencepresents detailed statistics of the underground railway systems in six major countries in field of opening...
Writing FeedbackSHanafi - Mar 14, 2014 / dumi - Mar 16, 2014
|IELTS WRITING SKILL 1 : Global water use by sector and in 2 different country
Writing Feedbackneda ziee - Feb 17, 2014 / eddies - Mar 16, 2014
|In my views, there is a positive and negative effects of global tourism in one country
8 - (1) "The flow of global tourism has been dramatically increased for the past few years" I think, for...
Writing FeedbackAndhy07 - Mar 15, 2014 / Misnariah Idrus - Mar 16, 2014
|The officials of Canadian universities have high variety in allow international students to graduate
Writing FeedbackSHanafi - Mar 16, 2014 / dumi - Mar 16, 2014
|COMPUTERS Vs TEACHERS; What would happen in the future?
3 - I requested you to follow some forum rules in your other thread and hope you'd pay attention to them...
Writing Feedbackbwosti - Mar 16, 2014 / dumi - Mar 16, 2014
|One Official international Language or more languages?
6 - (why...?) If you could, here you'd better restate what you've mentioned above. Then, show some suggestion or warning...
Writing FeedbackAbi90 - Jan 28, 2014 / eddies - Mar 16, 2014
|[Ielts task 1] Fish and Meat consumption in Europe from 1979 to 2004
7 - reduce the length of your sentences a bit more. Long sentence gives more work to the reader as he...
Writing Feedbacksouthstar - Feb 14, 2014 / eddies - Mar 16, 2014
|expenditure on fast food by income groups and consumption of fast food (1970-1990)
Writing Feedbackfanix - Mar 15, 2014 / eddies - Mar 15, 2014
|Toefl - Advertising can tell you a lot about a country
7 - You should write at least two paragraphs for the TOEFL independent essay. Your word count is low and you...
Writing Feedbacksandipsinh - Feb 13, 2014 / ramshah - Mar 15, 2014
|Advantages and disadvantages of the internet. Increasing the living standards?
Writing Feedbackrrivanh - Apr 16, 2011 / paula13 - Mar 15, 2014
|IELTS Task 1 : The Chart in Global Sales of Games Software, CDs and DVD or Video
Writing FeedbackSHanafi - Jan 20, 2014 / leoking - Mar 15, 2014
|IELTS TASK 1 (Map) - Planned Shopping Center Locations
2 - The map shows illustrates town planning for two potential locations (B and A) for atwo new shopping centers(A and...
Writing FeedbackJasS - Mar 14, 2014 / dumi - Mar 14, 2014
|Destiny and Character; "Your moments of decisions affect your Destiny"
Writing FeedbackSaqib - Oct 25, 2013 / Faith318 - Mar 14, 2014
|IELTS: Letter to your friend - 'we all can have some lunch together'
Writing FeedbackArun0506 - Mar 14, 2014 / Faith318 - Mar 14, 2014
|Topic: My favorite three ways of communications.
5 - .... transformed life to what? You need to specify! Secondly, the Internet has been instrumental in transforming our...
Writing Feedbackuzboy - Mar 11, 2014 / dumi - Mar 14, 2014
|IELTS;Popular events are essential in easing international tension
Writing FeedbackGichki - Mar 14, 2014 / dumi - Mar 14, 2014
|High salaries to sportsmen or other important professions; equally hard work
Writing Feedbackrachana - Feb 28, 2014 / eddies - Mar 14, 2014
|IELTS WRITING TASK 1; Annual expenditure of a British school
Writing Feedbackmona bhadange - Mar 12, 2014 / mona bhadange - Mar 14, 2014
|Relationship between HIGH SALES & POWER OF ADVERTISING
Writing Feedbackmariasultana - Feb 28, 2014 / eddies - Mar 14, 2014
|Traffic jams in big cities - headache question for the government to solve
Writing FeedbackThanh Thuy - Feb 13, 2014 / Pahan - Mar 14, 2014
|IELTS Task 1 : Australian children leisure activity
5 - I quite agree with eddies :) "attractive noticeable trends" - the word "attractive" does not provide...
Writing FeedbackSHanafi - Mar 14, 2014 / Pahan - Mar 14, 2014
|"Pohela Falgun" - The custom of my country that I like most and will encourage to follow TOEFL essay
Writing Feedbackjon_snow - Mar 11, 2014 / jon_snow - Mar 14, 2014
|Some people fail on their school but achieve success in their adult life. Why do you think
3 - here is the prompt: and Were I you, I would start analyzing the prompt, like this: Topic/discussion:...
Writing Feedbackagi - Feb 13, 2014 / eddies - Mar 13, 2014
|"to teach or understand the concept of the topic" - purpose of teaching and learning is same
7 - a closer look at the prompt given. Here, you should focus this topic on keywords: important ideas,...
Writing Feedbacksandipsinh - Feb 12, 2014 / eddies - Mar 13, 2014
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