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|TOEFL: why do people attend college; 'it offers much more than life preparation'
Writing Feedbackthanhmai - Jun 25, 2014 / dumi - Jun 26, 2014
|'I like football and music' - ESSAY on my HOBBIES
Writing Feedbacktiennguyen - Jun 26, 2014 / tiennguyen - Jun 26, 2014
|[IELTS TASK 1] A report about consumption of energy in the USA
6 - The line graph compares(I don't really agree if you use the verb 'compares'. This chart uses the appropriate language...
Writing FeedbacktiaDS - Jun 23, 2014 / eddies - Jun 26, 2014
|CAUSES OF LOW PASS RATE OF PROFICIENCY EXAM
Writing Feedbackkbektas - Jun 20, 2014 / lovemylife - Jun 24, 2014
|IELTS Essay: Animal Testing - positive and negative aspects
3 - I appreciate your suggestion :) any way I think there are many different ways to write this kind of...
Writing FeedbackMiaCuthbert - Jun 23, 2014 / MiaCuthbert - Jun 24, 2014
|Ielts: Analysis of shopping complex in Auckland, New Zealand
2 - Hello friend, In writing task 1 is not important to write a conclusion paragraph, but an overview paragraph is...
Writing Feedbackiamchop - Jun 22, 2014 / tiaDS - Jun 23, 2014
|[IELTS] Classmates' impacts on children's performance at school
Writing FeedbackSalMon - Jun 17, 2014 / SalMon - Jun 23, 2014
|[IELTS] proportion of watching television and videos (Australian children)
4 - Everything was tackled appropriately and relevant contrast/comparison was made. However, a conclusion regarding the whole trend would have made...
Writing FeedbacktiaDS - Jun 20, 2014 / hillard214james - Jun 23, 2014
|Knowledge gained from books or from practical experience; compare and contrast
Writing Feedbackmoney123 - May 28, 2014 / hillard214james - Jun 23, 2014
|What you do and what you do not like about your city?
Writing Feedbackrbinods - Jun 22, 2014 / SalMon - Jun 23, 2014
|IELTS Essay Task 2: 'Television / Children' Topic
8 - Hi MiaCuthbert, I think it would be better if you try to refrain from repeating the same words. For...
Writing FeedbackMiaCuthbert - Jun 22, 2014 / hillard214james - Jun 22, 2014
|[IELTS] A large factory built near community. Pros and cons? Your position?
Writing FeedbackSalMon - Jun 8, 2014 / iamchop - Jun 22, 2014
|[IELTS] The new fashion in having careers
3 - Hi salMon, It is indeed quite tricky on how to attack the question since it did not ask anything...
Writing FeedbackSalMon - Jun 22, 2014 / hillard214james - Jun 22, 2014
|IELTS: Online learning or real school? Provide your opinion.
5 - Online learning is good for self-motivated students only; otherwise, they are better off sticking to regular class room and...
Writing Feedbacklewyne - Jun 8, 2014 / Rich Monte - Jun 22, 2014
|Own encouragement, own motivation to get you to the point of graduation.
2 - Going back to college was a difficult decision for me to make. For almost six years I went back...
Writing Feedbacksunserimelissa - Jun 18, 2014 / dumi - Jun 22, 2014
|Topic: Describe learning something from a friend.
4 - Hi dumi, Thank you for sharing your comments. I edit the paragraphs that you wrote and it becomes:...
Writing Feedbackokdeerpass - Jun 15, 2014 / okdeerpass - Jun 22, 2014
|TOEFL IBt Integrated task - decreasing number of sea otter (western coast of US)
2 - However, the lecturer rebuts the author's reasons and asserts that attacks by predators is the most important reasons for...
Writing Feedbackmasih65 - Jun 8, 2014 / dumi - Jun 22, 2014
|IELTS: Working/Traveling between finishing school and starting university?
8 - May be there are some students who do not enjoy any leisure and look forward to completing their...
Writing FeedbackInkjet - Jun 8, 2014 / dumi - Jun 22, 2014
|It is inevitable that as technology develops traditional culture must be lost.
2 - Although lots of people claim that technology and traditions are not compatable,compatible with each other many experts believe that...
Writing Feedbackangelinawang - Jun 16, 2014 / dumi - Jun 22, 2014
|Charts on adult education and costs shared
2 - I found that you forget to attach you graphs. As I am recently practicing IELTS I think you have...
Writing Feedbackkoolsudha - Jun 22, 2014 / Inkjet - Jun 22, 2014
|[IELTS] We should opt for customary music rather than worldwide one
Writing FeedbackSalMon - Jun 18, 2014 / SalMon - Jun 22, 2014
|IELTS - Life in Big Cities Vs People's health
4 - Your essay is quite hard to review because there is no space among paragraphs. In my opinion, this essay...
Writing FeedbackMiaCuthbert - Jun 21, 2014 / tiaDS - Jun 22, 2014
|IELTS: Global music has more positive impacts on humans than traditional music
4 - I think you're confused because both of them are right. After "help", the verb can be V-infinitive/ to-V/...
Writing FeedbackMiaCuthbert - Jun 21, 2014 / MiaCuthbert - Jun 21, 2014
|IELTS: The private motor vehicle improved individual freedom; but it's expensive
6 - Hi, Thanks to Everyone, With your help i understand the structure of the Essay and hook of the...
Writing FeedbackShineStarJoti - Jun 20, 2014 / ShineStarJoti - Jun 21, 2014
|Schools should teach skills? What about values? The purpose of education.
4 - Write first the main TOPIC. I think you better change the structure of your essay. Remove the use of...
Writing Feedbackforouzan - Jun 17, 2014 / niesaysi - Jun 20, 2014
|[IELTS] Increased taxation on petrol and diesel fuel to discourage private cars?
12 - ok thanks :)...
Writing FeedbackSalMon - Jun 7, 2014 / SalMon - Jun 20, 2014
|[IELTS] Should parents be obliged to immunize their vulnerable children?
Writing FeedbackSalMon - Jun 18, 2014 / SalMon - Jun 20, 2014
|Distance learning as a new trend in education
NEW - In today's advanced technology world, students have option to choose whether they want learning in distance by using computer...
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|IELTS Essay: Work or study from home - advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Writing Feedbackrims - Jun 18, 2014 / fikri - Jun 19, 2014
|IELTS: As an international tourist, whether adhere to the local custom or not?
Writing Feedbacklynn11 - Jun 18, 2014 / lynn11 - Jun 19, 2014
|parents were busier in the past - nowadays more of them are involved in their children's education
8 - First, I have a small admin request from you. You should have had a more meaningful title in the...
Writing Feedbackpeyman_np - Jun 6, 2014 / dumi - Jun 19, 2014
|TOEFL: Would you choose your own roommate?
2 - I think you should rewrite these 2 sentences :) They are simple and not quite clear, and maybe...
Writing FeedbackAudi - Jun 18, 2014 / SalMon - Jun 19, 2014
|In many countries there has been increase in social problems involving teens
6 - It is always good to mention the purpose of writing your essay in the title itself. I guess this...
Writing FeedbackSabi Thapaa - Jun 14, 2014 / dumi - Jun 19, 2014
|IELTS: the graph show the number of passenger railway journeys
4 - You need to upload the graph for the reader to have a better understanding about what it presents...
Writing Feedbackiamchop - Jun 6, 2014 / dumi - Jun 19, 2014
|IELTS - The gender issue for getting education needs
Writing Feedbackagienugroho - May 25, 2014 / Henie - Jun 19, 2014
|Grandparents are significant source of experiences; childrens education big role
2 - Well you should combine sentences two make complicated one. For example, you should combine sentence 2 and...
Writing Feedbackreza10977 - Jun 19, 2014 / SalMon - Jun 19, 2014
|IELTS : Police force carries guns - significant impact for level of violence
6 - I recommend you next time pay attention to big mistakes and help suggest as much as possible, this is...
Writing Feedbackthanhphongct1 - Jun 9, 2014 / SalMon - Jun 19, 2014
|[IELTS] Prisons have various purposes
Writing FeedbacktiaDS - Jun 18, 2014 / reza10977 - Jun 19, 2014
|Why arranged marriage is bad idea? Descriptive paragraph
2 - arrangedArranged marriage is a bad idea simply because it does not gain the acceptance from both parties who are...
Writing Feedbacksonyta - Jun 12, 2014 / dumi - Jun 18, 2014
|SAT essay sample - how important is to look beyond superficial appearances?
Writing Feedbackmonmomo04 - May 28, 2014 / monmomo04 - Jun 18, 2014
|[TOEFL] People were more satisfied in the past in comparison to today's people/
2 - First of all, you should have included the essay prompt in the post for us to understand what it...
Writing Feedbackpeyman_np - Jun 18, 2014 / dumi - Jun 18, 2014
|[TOEFL] 'friends talk' - telephone is more influential than the television
2 - I have a question about TOEFL preparing process. How should I reinforce my grammar? Is there any good way...
Writing FeedbackCute Scott - Jun 17, 2014 / peyman_np - Jun 18, 2014
|Ielts: letter and gift to a friend who has just had a baby recently
Writing Feedbackganggang - Jun 17, 2014 / aklochkova1 - Jun 18, 2014
|IELTS Essay - Children are raised by grandparents. How family is affected?
7 - my eyes are really out after having finished checking the essay above. So can I get my essay checked?...
Writing Feedbackmsarkar - Jun 2, 2014 / MiaCuthbert - Jun 18, 2014
|"broken chopsticks" - letter to the shop manager; writing task in IELTS 8
Writing Feedbacksam4 - Jun 15, 2014 / sam4 - Jun 17, 2014
|Government should spend national budget for roads, highways and public transport
NEW - Transportation is an important living factor, and also influences to country's economy. Both quality of route for any vehicle...
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|[IELTS] Keeping pets is good or not? Discuss both views? Personal opinion?
Writing FeedbackSalMon - Jun 15, 2014 / thanhphongct1 - Jun 17, 2014
|New shopping centre in your neighborhood - do you agree or not?
4 - Thank you very much! Precious suggestions! I was a little bit nervous when i wrote this essay because my...
Writing FeedbackAngelaB - Jun 15, 2014 / AngelaB - Jun 16, 2014
|TOEFL ESSAY - taking jobs with high salary but risks or low salary but secure?
2 - Well, I like if this sentence has been a bit shorter. Ideally, you should start the essay with...
Writing Feedbackjessiebaojie - Jun 15, 2014 / dumi - Jun 16, 2014
|GRE ISSUE - People who make decisions based on emotion
2 - This issue revolvingthat people who make decisions based on emotions is quite an interesting one. Furthering to that we...
Writing Feedbackmkunaparaju - Jun 15, 2014 / dumi - Jun 16, 2014
|divorce: Causes and effects on children
Writing Feedbackbabyevy - Jun 4, 2010 / ah_zafari - Jun 15, 2014
|IELTS : Could Fame Be All Good?
Writing Feedbackeva_lim - Jun 15, 2014 / ah_zafari - Jun 15, 2014
|IELTS argument essay large amount of violence in television programs
6 - to make your essay more specific, you can take some examples from your experiences or your daily life. it...
Writing Feedbackwzncx8879 - Jun 14, 2014 / fikri - Jun 15, 2014
|'human beings are far from perfect' - Essay about an ideal wife
Writing FeedbackAkatsuki - Jun 14, 2014 / Akatsuki - Jun 15, 2014
|my best friend - Champ ; Descriptive paragraph about person who I feel admirable
Writing Feedbacklittle_shimmery - Jun 14, 2014 / little_shimmery - Jun 15, 2014
|Puppy love should be agreed or not?
2 - Love is a lifelong word, directly or indirectly, reminding us of each milestone we have suffered from no matter...
Writing Feedbackgarung1187 - Jun 14, 2014 / eva_lim - Jun 15, 2014
|'bored of being a social nobody' - more money for student's social activities?
4 - thanks for your help! can you give me some suggestions of how to solve this problem? i have already...
Writing Feedbackzcb56123 - Jun 13, 2014 / zcb56123 - Jun 14, 2014
|Ielts: The gap between poor and rich countries has been large from longtime ago
NEW - The inequality between rich and poor nations is wider than it has ever been before. What do you think...
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|A day to spend the way you wish
Writing Feedbackmodakindia - Jun 10, 2014 / modakindia - Jun 13, 2014
|GRE Issue Topic: Understanding a society by studying the major cities
NEW - Issue topic: To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities. Major...
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