TOEFL TASK: children prepare for adult life → do a part-time job
Writing FeedbackCrystal812 - Mar 6, 2016 / Wolf Larsen - Mar 6, 2016
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"It's not beauty if it can be removed with a wet kleenex." - A humble opinion essay
Writing Feedbackdogaaslaner - Mar 3, 2016 / justivy03 - Mar 4, 2016
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Different people have different opinion about standard for imitation - role models for youngsters
Writing FeedbackMaximama - Mar 3, 2016 / justivy03 - Mar 4, 2016
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Writing Task 1: total population of old people in three different countries
Writing Feedbackmita23 - Feb 22, 2016 / justivy03 - Mar 4, 2016
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There are also passion and hobby which should be taken into consideration at work, not only money
Writing Feedbackamrillahmk31 - Feb 29, 2016 / Ssakshijain - Mar 2, 2016
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Hybrid cars sale trend in Japan increased significantly from 2006-2009
Writing Feedbackanita11 - Feb 2, 2016 / justivy03 - Mar 2, 2016
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Contributions of scientists and artists to society - comparison
Writing FeedbackJay2016 - Mar 1, 2016 / Lynn88Mr - Mar 2, 2016
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Most governments allocate a considerable portion of their budget on space exploration.
Writing FeedbackJay2016 - Mar 2, 2016 / Lynn88Mr - Mar 2, 2016
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ISSUE OF IMPORTANCE - UT APP ESSAY; Our failing education system!
Writing Feedbacknicholai - Feb 28, 2016 / Lynn88Mr - Mar 2, 2016
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The importance and meaning of international education - avoiding conflicts between people
Writing Feedbackjehona mustafa - Feb 29, 2016 / Lynn88Mr - Mar 2, 2016
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Running business is one of many jobs option which people can choose. Money is crucial?
Writing Feedbackmita23 - Feb 28, 2016 / NourNour - Mar 1, 2016
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It is evident that the business has to search the profit to maintain the production and pay a salary
Writing Feedbackanita11 - Feb 28, 2016 / Jay2016 - Mar 1, 2016
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Majority of employees had very good relationships not only with their supervisor (2005-2009)
Writing Feedbackputri22 - Feb 28, 2016 / justivy03 - Mar 1, 2016
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Recuirtment of teachers in Ontario; the percentage of English-language tutors had a downward trend
Writing Feedbackputri22 - Feb 28, 2016 / justivy03 - Mar 1, 2016
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Writing Task 1: worker interaction with their supervisor and other colleagues at work
Writing Feedbackmita23 - Feb 28, 2016 / samirsinha - Mar 1, 2016
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The wind turbine is able to generate electricity with a simple design and process.
Writing Feedbackputri22 - Feb 28, 2016 / Rocky529440 - Mar 1, 2016
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If we're afraid of making mistakes during the process of obtaining success, we'll miss opportunities
Writing FeedbackCrystal812 - Feb 28, 2016 / jhayea - Feb 29, 2016
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In this fast-changing world, a lot of children live in the way that can threaten their health.
Writing Feedbackputri22 - Feb 28, 2016 / Ssakshijain - Feb 29, 2016
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Information about several issues which people have when they live in other countries
Writing Feedbackputri22 - Feb 28, 2016 / amrillahmk31 - Feb 29, 2016
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Social media as a communication has a bad impact on society and relationships
Writing FeedbackADIE08 - Feb 28, 2016 / Ssakshijain - Feb 29, 2016
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The Dorian invasion gave the Greeks the opportunity to develop the polis.
Writing FeedbackRedbud51 - Feb 27, 2016 / EF_Kevin - Feb 29, 2016
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Writing Task 1: happiness scale in married and unmarried couples
Writing Feedbackmita23 - Feb 28, 2016 / EF_Kevin - Feb 29, 2016
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Clothes? There are more principal factors that should be considered before assessing people
Writing Feedbackputri22 - Feb 28, 2016 / Wolf Larsen - Feb 29, 2016
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It is very troublesome for people to have a healthy lifestyle in the modern era. (IELTS Task 2)
Writing Feedbackanita11 - Feb 28, 2016 / bottles - Feb 29, 2016
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Young people who take a job before college gain experience and extend communication skills
Writing Feedbackputri22 - Feb 28, 2016 / EF_Carol - Feb 29, 2016
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The media should focus on exposing ordinary people since it will bring benefits for humans
Writing Feedbackputri22 - Feb 28, 2016 / Wolf Larsen - Feb 29, 2016
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It's evident that electronic devices influence the communication between societies when used wrongly
Writing Feedbackanita11 - Feb 28, 2016 / Wolf Larsen - Feb 29, 2016
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This article recounts the journey of two parents as they make difficult decisions - review
Writing FeedbackKofi300 - Feb 28, 2016 / Kofi300 - Feb 28, 2016
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Efficiency of study overseas. Level of education among Bulgarians.
Writing Feedbackmita23 - Feb 28, 2016 / — -
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Businesses ought to concern of attention on their activity due to their aim related to profit
Writing FeedbackBunglon11 - Feb 28, 2016 / Ssakshijain - Feb 28, 2016
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The air is leaking out from certain rooms through recessed light, bathroom fan vent, and attic hatch
Writing Feedbackmita23 - Feb 28, 2016 / — -
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Young people work after graduating from senior high school and before entering university
Writing Feedbackmita23 - Feb 28, 2016 / Ssakshijain - Feb 28, 2016
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Even though some organisations oblige their workers to dress smartly the efficiency is more crucial
Writing Feedbackputri22 - Feb 28, 2016 / — -
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Pros and cons opinions that young people should take a work early after they finish their schools
Writing FeedbackLinda91 - Feb 28, 2016 / AmitJ - Feb 28, 2016
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All age groups witness the same difficulties when living abroad, but older have language issues
Writing FeedbackLinda91 - Feb 28, 2016 / ADIE08 - Feb 28, 2016
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'having marvelous capability is more vital' - Writing Task 2: dress smartly vs quality of work
Writing Feedbackmita23 - Feb 28, 2016 / — -
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The recruitment of the new two-language teachers among the recently graduated people in Ontario
Writing FeedbackLinda91 - Feb 28, 2016 / Bunglon11 - Feb 28, 2016
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IELTS Topic: No limits in car usage - problems and solutions
Writing FeedbackClare_in_OZ - Feb 28, 2016 / ADIE08 - Feb 28, 2016
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Working after school before going to university becomes the controversial issue in society
Writing FeedbackADIE08 - Feb 28, 2016 / Diqon - Feb 28, 2016
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The energy is lost and wasted in a house because of air getting into and out of the house
Writing FeedbackADIE08 - Feb 28, 2016 / — -
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The diagram illustrates air circulation related to heat lost and energy wasted in rooms
Writing FeedbackLinda91 - Feb 28, 2016 / ADIE08 - Feb 28, 2016
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The wind turbine provided in the diagrams has classification for the design and its location.
Writing Feedbackmita23 - Feb 28, 2016 / — -
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WIND TURBINES - how can be constructed and then activated by the wind if located in a proper place
Writing FeedbackLinda91 - Feb 18, 2016 / ADIE08 - Feb 28, 2016
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The chart show that both parents, whether with very young children or juveniles, are happy enough.
Writing FeedbackLinda91 - Feb 28, 2016 / ADIE08 - Feb 28, 2016
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Now it is more common to have similar lifestyle among people from different countries in the world
Writing Feedbacknazila1345 - Feb 21, 2016 / Linda91 - Feb 28, 2016
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Besides of a wind turbine picture, the optimum location also affects the amount produced electricity
Writing FeedbackADIE08 - Feb 28, 2016 / — -
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Healthy lifestyle in the modern era is a hard thing to deal, but staying fit depends on willingness.
Writing FeedbackADIE08 - Feb 28, 2016 / Ketusia62 - Feb 28, 2016
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The information gained about happiness rating for married and unmarried people in the USA
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TOEFL Task: Should teachers make their social or political views known to students?
Writing FeedbackCrystal812 - Feb 28, 2016 / Linda91 - Feb 28, 2016
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Money in businesses - innovation and people are the key ingredients of the successful enterprise.
Writing FeedbackADIE08 - Feb 28, 2016 / — -
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The way of dressing continues to be a controversial topic in globalization era
Writing FeedbackADIE08 - Feb 28, 2016 / Linda91 - Feb 28, 2016
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The level of education of Bulgarian people who wanted to go and live in another country
Writing FeedbackADIE08 - Feb 28, 2016 / Linda91 - Feb 28, 2016
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The party that should take responsibility for children's healthy lifestyle is parents and schools
Writing FeedbackLinda91 - Feb 28, 2016 / eddies - Feb 28, 2016
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The clothes which people wear cannot judge who they are, but we need to dress accordingly
Writing FeedbackLinda91 - Feb 28, 2016 / ADIE08 - Feb 28, 2016
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Young married couple with children are the happiest group, such as unmarried people aged 65 and more
Writing FeedbackLinda91 - Feb 28, 2016 / ADIE08 - Feb 28, 2016
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The results of a survey asking workers about their relationship with supervisor and their co-workers
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Nowadays, many companies require their workers wearing a fashion dress in the workplace
Writing FeedbackADIE08 - Feb 28, 2016 / — -
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Two surveys in 1997 and 2006, in which people were asked which communication skills were essential
Writing FeedbackADIE08 - Feb 28, 2016 / — -
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Starting a business, instead of trying to gain a job in an occupation (IELTS Task 2)
Writing Feedbackanita11 - Feb 27, 2016 / anita11 - Feb 28, 2016
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I firmly agree that news about ordinary people's lives are important to know. IELTS Writing
Writing FeedbackLinda91 - Feb 28, 2016 / mita23 - Feb 28, 2016
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