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IELTS TASK 2 TOPIC: GOVERNMENT AND SOCIETY

4 - @Holt Thank you for your recommendations ! I will check my assignment again and correct my errors...

Writing Feedbackchloeng1301 - Mar 24, 2022 / chloeng1301 - Mar 24, 2022
Task 2 : NOWADAYS ARTIFICIAL INTELLIGENCE IS BEING USED TO DRIVE CAR.

2 - The prompt paraphrase and direct question responses that comprise the personal opinion are all incorrect. The prompt restatement is...

Writing Feedbackminahaya2020 - Mar 24, 2022 / Holt - Mar 24, 2022
IELTS WRITING TASK 1 - BAR CHART: Shares of expenditures for selected categories

4 - It is a great essay anyway you should make the numbers count properly. I found it contains more than...

Writing Feedbackquannhuy - Mar 19, 2022 / rasikhah - Mar 23, 2022
The bar chart shows the average class sizes in primary schools and lower secondary schools in 6

3 - Thank you for your useful advice, I will try to complete my task more perfectly...

Writing Feedbackthuytien123 - Mar 11, 2022 / thuytien123 - Mar 23, 2022
Some people think that intelligence is innate while others claim that we can improve it by learning

2 - The personal opinion of the writer is not clearly stated in the discussion paragraphs. Though general and group viewpoints...

Writing FeedbackIris HSIEH - Mar 22, 2022 / Holt - Mar 22, 2022
Literature, BL, ancient China

2 - Not everyone is familiar with LGBTQIA+ movies at this point. It would help educate the reader if you can...

Writing Feedbackhualien3800 - Mar 21, 2022 / Holt - Mar 22, 2022
Give your opinion on punishing young children. Propose alternatives.

2 - Avoid exaggerations in your restatement presentations as words such as "unquestionable" will alter the original intent of the presentation....

Writing Feedbackandroangelface - Mar 21, 2022 / Holt - Mar 21, 2022
Residents are transferring from rurality to metropolis toward an advanced future

2 - The first thing that the examiner will notice in this essay is the lack of proper word usage. The...

Writing Feedbackginquynh - Mar 21, 2022 / Holt - Mar 21, 2022
Public libraries should be replaced by computer technology. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

3 - I think in the introduction paragraph, you should change the sentence "I do not agree that public libraries should...

Writing Feedbackwindieyaaa - Mar 16, 2022 / thuthanh1908 - Mar 21, 2022
Writing Task2 - Universities and colleges are now offering qualifications through distance learning

3 - In this writing, the author did not write according to the structure of the question required. With this type...

Writing Feedbacksegrid15 - Mar 19, 2022 / thuthanh1908 - Mar 21, 2022
Describe a line graph which indicates the average global temperature and co2 levels

4 - I think this essay is not really meaningful as it contains too many simple sentences which leads to lack...

Writing FeedbackLEON315 - Mar 19, 2022 / luonggiabao01 - Mar 20, 2022
Investment in railways is a must however the road infrastructure also play a vital role in transport

2 - The writer has written a failing score essay at this point. In terms of task accuracy, he has shown...

Writing Feedbackthuvuvu - Mar 20, 2022 / Holt - Mar 20, 2022
Hosting an international sports - Disscuss both views about it.

3 - You met some serious mistakes in the introduction which you gave your personal view before restating of the 2...

Writing Feedbackthuthanh1908 - Mar 19, 2022 / thuvuvu - Mar 20, 2022
A Healthier Life - rough draft

2 - The writer should make up his mind about the subject reference. Will it be pets in general or dogs?...

Writing FeedbackDavidB - Mar 19, 2022 / Holt - Mar 20, 2022
ARGUMENT ESSAY TASK - GRE - Newsletter offering advice to investors

2 - The writer need not repeat the prompt requirements in the first paragraph unless he was actually qquestioning these references...

Writing Feedbackhar8584 - Mar 19, 2022 / Holt - Mar 20, 2022
Computers are often argued to be the greatest milestone in the history of technology.

4 - As a task 2 IELTS essay response, it is safe to say that this paper has been over written....

Writing Feedbackminhtamdav - Sep 10, 2019 / Holt - Mar 19, 2022
The proportion of households in owned and households in rented accommodation in England and Wales

2 - The writer tends to have a redundant presentation in the use of the word "household", It was used as...

Writing Feedbackmeaan - Mar 18, 2022 / Holt - Mar 18, 2022
IELTS WRITING TASK 2! Can you guess which band?

2 - The writer has over written his essay to the point where there is a great possibility that he cannot...

Writing Feedbacklinhluutk123 - Mar 18, 2022 / Holt - Mar 18, 2022
Communication amenities - WRITING TASK 1: THE LINE GRAPH

2 - The summary overview and trending statement would have been better scored had it properly used the listing of services...

Writing FeedbackHuynhTruc - Mar 17, 2022 / Holt - Mar 17, 2022
IELTS Writing Task 2: Some people think that space exploration is a waste of resources while others

2 - The prompt restatement is acceptable and shows a degree of control over the creation of simple and complex sentences....

Writing Feedbackbhlin - Mar 17, 2022 / Holt - Mar 17, 2022
Today, TV channels show more men's sports than women's sports. Why is this the case?

2 - There are times when a restatement requires 2 sentences, there are times when it needs 3 sentences in the...

Writing Feedbackvananhpivi - Mar 17, 2022 / Holt - Mar 17, 2022
WRITING TASK 1: The Percentage of Canadian workforce in five main industries

3 - Hi there, I have a few suggestions for your essay. Hope it helps! 1. It's better to have...

Writing FeedbackMocTuAnh - Mar 14, 2022 / windieyaaa - Mar 16, 2022
Is government penalizing people who use their own cars the best way to traffic / pollution problems?

3 - @phanhuusang I have a few sugestions for your essay. Hope it helps! - "consequently, positively affect our surroundings..."...

Writing Feedbackphanhuusang - Mar 16, 2022 / windieyaaa - Mar 16, 2022
The chart compares and contrasts data on the changes in the number of films produced in 5 countries

2 - A chart is different from a diagram. A chart represents a given measurement for a specific series of comparisons....

Writing Feedbackbuithanhduy - Mar 15, 2022 / Holt - Mar 16, 2022
The investment in health promotion is more crucial than the treatment of people who are already ill

3 - @Holt Thank you so much! can you guess which band I can have??...

Writing Feedbacklinhluutk123 - Mar 15, 2022 / linhluutk123 - Mar 15, 2022
Is it a fact that earning extremely high salaries by few people is good for the country?

2 - The first paragraph will lose points for lack of restatement clarity. The 2 public opinions must be presented as...

Writing Feedbackdevold - Mar 14, 2022 / Holt - Mar 15, 2022
IS FREEDOM OF SPEECH NECESSARY IN A FREE SOCIETY. TO WHAT EXTEND DO YOU AGREE ? (250 words minimum)

2 - I believe that the writer has meant this essay piece for as a task 2 response. In which case,...

Writing Feedbackminahaya2020 - Mar 13, 2022 / Holt - Mar 14, 2022
The two maps compare the road access to a city hospital which was done in 2007 and 2010

3 - @Holt Thank you for your feedback! I think I should improve my range of vocabulary for my writing skill...

Writing Feedbackluonggiabao01 - Mar 12, 2022 / luonggiabao01 - Mar 12, 2022
Money spent on the protection of wild animals could be better use on human's needs

2 - It is incorrect for the writer to refer to the idea presented "in restrospect" because the idea is not...

Writing Feedbackminhkhoi - Mar 12, 2022 / Holt - Mar 12, 2022
Public smoking - good or not?

2 - To get the maximum base score potential in a task 2 test, the writer must refrain from immediately discussing...

Writing FeedbackPhanThinh - Mar 12, 2022 / Holt - Mar 12, 2022
Give your opinion on sharing information freely

3 - @Holt Thank you for your suggestions! Now I find out my problems in this essay!...

Writing Feedbackthuvuvu - Mar 11, 2022 / thuvuvu - Mar 11, 2022
Is it true that technology makes our life too complex?

2 - When the student states "the technology", he is making reference to a specific technology already. The original prompt does...

Writing FeedbackNgan kieu - Mar 11, 2022 / Holt - Mar 11, 2022
Should we preserve or destroy old buidings?

2 - A school of thought is a belief or idea that is supported by people. That is not the reference...

Writing Feedbackluuly512 - Mar 11, 2022 / Holt - Mar 11, 2022
Some people say that teachers have the biggest influence on child's development once he/she starts.

3 - This essay is not appropriate to the format of the standard essay like IELTS, TOEIC,... There is no an...

Writing FeedbackJena Williams - Mar 11, 2022 / Ngan kieu - Mar 11, 2022
Run your own business rather than work for an employer. Advantages and disadvantages

2 - The prompt restatement is too far from the original topic considerations to be considered an accurate rewording of that...

Writing Feedbackhuongpro68 - Mar 11, 2022 / Holt - Mar 11, 2022
IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - Economic progress VS Other progress

2 - The prompt restatement is inaccurate. It fails to represent both public opinions prior to the writer's point of view...

Writing Feedbacktkhuev - Mar 10, 2022 / Holt - Mar 10, 2022
IELTS Writing Task 1 - The proportion of national consumers' expenditure on various items

2 - A 4 paragraph report is only acceptable when 2 images are provided for the comparative reporting task. Where only...

Writing Feedbackadriennguyen - Mar 10, 2022 / Holt - Mar 10, 2022
IELTS Writing Task 2 - Children's Talents can be learned

2 - In the first sentence of the prompt restatement, the writer uses the past tense "believed" rather than the current...

Writing Feedbackadriennguyen - Mar 10, 2022 / Holt - Mar 10, 2022
Ielts Writing Task 2: Some people think the news has no connection to people's lives

5 - @Holt I really appreciate your detailed feedback on my essay. It is really helpful to know my weakness so...

Writing Feedbackthuyduong267 - Mar 10, 2022 / thuyduong267 - Mar 10, 2022
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of online course as well as learning online

4 - The topic is really confusing. online course is almost the same as online course. Therefore, I can't check whether...

Writing Feedbacktrinhhuong08 - Mar 1, 2022 / CindyChang - Mar 9, 2022
IELTS WRITING TASK 1: HELP ME TO CHECK MY PREPARATION FOR MY UPCOMING EXAM - export values

3 - @Holt Thank you very much....

Writing Feedbackthanhyen2003 - Mar 8, 2022 / thanhyen2003 - Mar 9, 2022
*not a reference* Young leaders in the government. Discuss both views and give opinions

2 - I take it that the writer is reviewing for the IELTS test alone. Something that I surmised because, instead...

Writing Feedbackntbaotram138 - Mar 9, 2022 / Holt - Mar 9, 2022
WRITTING TASK 1: the percentage of Australian people who were born in different places in the world

2 - The summary overview the writer has presented is conflicting. There is a difference between the meaning of "the world"...

Writing Feedbackphu2626262 - Mar 8, 2022 / Holt - Mar 9, 2022
IELTS WRITING TASK 2: Watching live events is still more satisfying than watching it on TV

3 - @Holt Thank you for your feedback. I really appreciate your detailed comment on my two essays. I'm preparing for...

Writing Feedbackimduonggg - Mar 7, 2022 / imduonggg - Mar 9, 2022
IELTS WRITING TASK 2: Are governments responsible for environmental preservation?

2 - Why is the writer constantly changing the presentation slant of the original prompts? This is the second time that...

Writing Feedbackimduonggg - Mar 7, 2022 / Holt - Mar 8, 2022
IELTS WRITING TASK 2: Write about people's opinion about hosting an international sports event

3 - @Holt Honestly, I really appreciate your help with my writing. As a person who is learning IELTS on my...

Writing FeedbackImAnAmateur - Mar 5, 2022 / ImAnAmateur - Mar 8, 2022
IELTS Task2: To what extent do the advantages of memorization outweigh the disadvantages?

2 - Memorization is not the same as copying text. Memorization means"to commit to memory". It requires repeated reading. copying refers...

Writing FeedbackCindyChang - Mar 6, 2022 / Holt - Mar 6, 2022
IELTS: WRITING TASK 2: LANGUAGE DIED OUT

2 - The essay will get a failing TA score and because of that, an overall failing score even though the...

Writing Feedbackdumen88 - Mar 6, 2022 / Holt - Mar 6, 2022
IELTS WRITING TASK 1 - Bar chart - Divorces and marriages together with marital status

3 - @Holt Thanks so much for the feedback !!!...

Writing Feedbackwindieyaaa - Mar 5, 2022 / windieyaaa - Mar 6, 2022
Some people think climate change has a negative impact on business

2 - The writer will do best to remember that he has only 40 minutes to draft, review, edit, review, proofread,...

Writing FeedbackCh_ng - Mar 5, 2022 / Holt - Mar 6, 2022
In many countries, more and more people choose to buy imported food rather than local food

2 - The writer has shown a difficulty in the prompt restatement portion of this task. He has managed to string...

Writing FeedbackMarina Nguyen - Mar 5, 2022 / Holt - Mar 6, 2022
[IELTS Writing Task 2] Environmental degradation problems and solutions.

3 - @Holt Thank you for your assessment. I agree that my vocabulary needs working. I, however, don't suppose word...

Writing Feedbackcrazybee - Mar 5, 2022 / crazybee - Mar 5, 2022
IELTS 2 Some believe that nuclear weapons benefit the world at large. To what extent do you agree?

2 - Indicating several reasons is too wide a net to cast in a limited time essay. Aim for clarity and...

Writing Feedbacktptanuyen - Mar 5, 2022 / Holt - Mar 5, 2022
ARGUING ABOUT THE PURPOSES OF LEARNING A NEW LANGUAGE

2 - The prompt restatement is acceptable although the first sentence is a bit out of place as it does not...

Writing Feedbackkimquin - Mar 4, 2022 / Holt - Mar 5, 2022
Paragraph about saving a natural resource

3 - If there is no word limit in writing this essay, add some more reasons to support your topic like...

Writing FeedbackNoah Caron - Mar 4, 2022 / harshita - Mar 4, 2022
ITLTS TASK2 ABOUT INTERNATIONAL CONTRIBUTION FOR THOSE IN NEED

2 - When the original prompt refers to something that people think, it is not referring to an argument. The reference...

Writing Feedbackkeymi850723 - Mar 3, 2022 / Holt - Mar 4, 2022
Annual outlook of a bank.

3 - @Holt Thank you so much for your correction. The reason why I repeat the phrase "The Bank" is that...

Writing Feedbackcdkengkeng - Mar 3, 2022 / cdkengkeng - Mar 3, 2022
Ielts task1: children's sport participation - graphs reporting

3 - @Holt thank you very much!...

Writing FeedbackAngela Pham - Mar 3, 2022 / Angela Pham - Mar 3, 2022
Some people think that it would be better for large companies and industry to move to countrysides

2 - Kindly review the original prompt and compare it to the statement presented here. There are several points of difference...

Writing Feedbackphammai2309 - Mar 3, 2022 / Holt - Mar 3, 2022
Task 2: More and more vehicles get in use today - fuel price impact on traffic and pollution

2 - The writer has not relayed an accurate prompt restatement based on the original prompt. He has offered a statement...

Writing Feedbacknvdkhoa - Mar 3, 2022 / Holt - Mar 3, 2022

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