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|The issue of whether government should invest on railway systems more than roads or not
Writing Feedbackroswita116 - Sep 4, 2019 / roswita116 - Sep 8, 2019
|Write a paragraph about the advantages of shopping online
NEW - Shopping online is a hot topic that everybody concerns about Obviously, it plays an important role in the modern...
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|Writing task 2. Man made activities increases climate temperature
3 - overall, I think it well written essay, but I believe it is better for you to avoid some sentence,...
Writing Feedbackmayangrn - Sep 3, 2019 / Hassan91 - Sep 10, 2019
|Importance of Parks, Sports facilities and shopping malls in planning towns
2 - Nice first paragraph, although I think you should state your opinion immediately rather earlier I think your argument...
Writing FeedbackSanFer - Sep 3, 2019 / phlorem - Sep 6, 2019
|Ielts writing 2 - people may face certain difficulties when they move outside their home country
2 - Hello ! @poyiyeung Welcome to this platform. I appreciate your clear ideas and structure in your writing, and...
Writing Feedbackpoyiyeung - Sep 2, 2019 / rivathh - Sep 3, 2019
|IELTS TASK 1: THE NUMBER OF EMPLOYEES AND FACTORIES IN ENGLAND AND WALES
Writing Feedbackamira11545 - Sep 2, 2019 / amira11545 - Sep 3, 2019
|Domestic violence problem (I'm taking proficiency exam on September 3rd)
2 - @Selen can Hi there. Welcome to the forum. I hope that this feedback becomes beneficial for you. If you...
Writing FeedbackSelen can - Sep 1, 2019 / Maria - Sep 7, 2019
|Many of us have a chance to study in another country to get a university qualification
2 - Hi Americana, You have good points and supported by examples in your essay. Though I have few observations, Always...
Writing FeedbackAmerianna - Sep 1, 2019 / Norbsidy - Sep 6, 2019
|People naturally resist making changes in their lives.
Writing Feedbackmabubeo - Aug 31, 2019 / mabubeo - Sep 8, 2019
|The diagram illustrates how electricity is produced by using water
Writing Feedbackvhag nguyen - Aug 31, 2019 / phlorem - Sep 6, 2019
|The pie charts illustrate the water usage for six different regions around the world
Writing Feedbackroswita116 - Aug 31, 2019 / roswita116 - Sep 4, 2019
|Should government spend more money in support of the arts than in support of the athletics?
2 - @thehowfanned Hi, I have few observations regarding your essay. Minimize writing long sentences, sometimes it makes your essay...
Writing Feedbackthehowfanned - Aug 30, 2019 / Norbsidy - Sep 5, 2019
|England and Wales; rented and owned accommodation - Ielts Cambridge 13, Test 2, Task 1
2 - @vunhanhoa Hi there. Next time, it would be beneficial to add the graph that you've analyzed into the given...
Writing Feedbackvunhanhoa - Aug 30, 2019 / Maria - Sep 5, 2019
|Social media is becoming increasingly popular amongst all age groups.
3 - Hi there. I think I can give you some writing suggestions about your conclusion.😊😊 It would be better...
Writing FeedbackDebbie0123 - Aug 30, 2019 / roswita116 - Sep 4, 2019
|IELTS TASK 2 : PRINTED NEWSPAPERS VS. ONLINE NEWSPAPERS
2 - @amira11545 Hello there. Thanks for your continuous support in the site. I hope that you find this feedback to...
Writing Feedbackamira11545 - Aug 30, 2019 / Maria - Sep 5, 2019
|Traffic accidents - the best way to improve road safety is to increase the minimum legal age
Writing Feedbackchristine amelia - Aug 30, 2019 / Helen Neleh - Sep 4, 2019
|Scientific exploration carried out and managed by the state or by private companies?
Writing Feedbackminhthanh211 - Aug 30, 2019 / minhthanh211 - Sep 5, 2019
|The graphs show the result of a survey of computer ownership total and by education level
2 - @ashleycyw Hi there. I see that you're new here - welcome to the forum. Let me provide you with...
Writing Feedbackashleycyw - Aug 30, 2019 / Maria - Sep 5, 2019
|Life is an adventurous journey that one cannot predict any obstacles having in the future.
2 - You repeat the word 'one' too many times in your essay. Try to rewrite your sentences using other words....
Writing FeedbackHOANG17 - Aug 30, 2019 / amira11545 - Sep 2, 2019
|IELTS Task2: Recycling of waste materials
Writing Feedbackrivathh - Aug 30, 2019 / rivathh - Sep 3, 2019
|You worked part time for a company in the past and now see an advertisement for full time
2 - @kev2 Hi, I'm going to show you my personal ideas. Hope these suggestions are useful. - struggle with/against (not...
Writing Feedbackkev2 - Aug 29, 2019 / Helen Neleh - Sep 4, 2019
|IELTS Task 2: it is important to build more public parks and sport facilities than shopping centre
3 - @kev2 Thank you very much for your help. I have a terrible tendency of randomly changing the sentence tense....
Writing Feedbackhoaiduc2010 - Aug 29, 2019 / hoaiduc2010 - Aug 29, 2019
|IELTS 2: Will all jobs eventually be done by artificially intelligent robots? Human vs machine.
2 - @TriceLiu Hi there! Let me provide you with feedback on your writing. You do quite well to list...
Writing FeedbackTriceLiu - Aug 29, 2019 / rivathh - Aug 30, 2019
|How to become successful in sports?
2 - @alexyale Hi there. I'll be providing you with feedback on your essay. I hope that this will somehow help...
Writing Feedbackalexyale - Aug 28, 2019 / Maria - Sep 1, 2019
|Reply to an e-mail sent by the marketing director of the Classical Shakespeare Theatre of Bardville
2 - @jaypark00 Hi there. Welcome to the forum. I hope you find this feedback helpful for your writing endeavors. ...
Writing Feedbackjaypark00 - Aug 28, 2019 / Maria - Aug 31, 2019
|What are the most important characteristics a successful businessman has ? (~100 words)
2 - Hi @Kyle123 "Another characteristic that push an ..." The plural verb push does not appear to agree...
Writing FeedbackKyle123 - Aug 27, 2019 / cornel - Aug 27, 2019
|Writing part 2 IELTS , Average weight of people is rising and levels of health is declining
4 - @chwkao Yes you can stress the solutions in the introduction. Just like how you mentioned "I think the...
Writing Feedbackchwkao - Aug 27, 2019 / TriceLiu - Sep 5, 2019
|It is sometimes said that a high salary is the most important factor. IELTS WRITTING TASK2
2 - In modern time --> in the modern word/ in modern times Most people believed key element in all...
Writing Feedbackalmee2003 - Aug 27, 2019 / amira11545 - Aug 27, 2019
|Senior-level workers - IELTS Writing Task 2- Opinion Essay
2 - Hi there, You have demonstrated a decent vocabulary and command of grammar in the essay. However, the...
Writing Feedbackthekingmindaugas - Aug 26, 2019 / TriceLiu - Aug 29, 2019
|IELTS - TASK1: The diagram below shows the various stages involved in the production of beer
2 - @phminh271 Hi there. Welcome to the forum. I hope you find this feedback helpful in any way. The...
Writing Feedbackphminh271 - Aug 26, 2019 / Maria - Aug 29, 2019
|How the agriculture, manufacturing, business and financial services contributed to British economy
3 - @zcs2008china Thank you so much. I will more practice. Do you think this part "this situation reversed in the...
Writing FeedbackNathan_long - Aug 26, 2019 / Nathan_long - Aug 27, 2019
|The proportion of the most popular sports played by boys and girls in New Zealand (IELTS 1)
2 - @kirstenlee Hi there. Welcome to the forum. I hope you find this feedback helpful for your writing endeavors. ...
Writing Feedbackkirstenlee - Aug 25, 2019 / Maria - Aug 29, 2019
|Government should spent sufficient amount of money on development and promotion of arts and artists
2 - I think you spent to much space in the first paragraph. The first paragraph should just be an introduction...
Writing Feedbackmathew123 - Aug 25, 2019 / razor0424 - Aug 29, 2019
|Writing task 1 the charts below information about USA and marriage and divorcee
2 - As far as I concerned this is a good sample for writing task 1. However, you should consider writing...
Writing FeedbackSanis - Aug 25, 2019 / thekingmindaugas - Aug 26, 2019
|Some think that people need to have simpler lifestyles in order to solve the environmental problems.
5 - Hello there, I appreciate for your ideas in the essays! Here are my suggestions. Feel free to change your...
Writing FeedbackWinter - Aug 25, 2019 / rivathh - Aug 29, 2019
|TASK: Some people think that one should retire at the age of 65.
3 - @kev2 Para 1: reap the benefits of sth. Para 2: What did you mean "the others", better use just...
Writing Feedbackkev2 - Aug 24, 2019 / zcs2008china - Aug 27, 2019
|An argument over the issue of whether teenagers should have a job while they are still students
Writing FeedbackKhanhlinh2401 - Aug 24, 2019 / Khanhlinh2401 - Aug 25, 2019
|IELTS task 1 - the forest areas over the world - statistics and comparison
Writing Feedbackminhnhat97hmu - Aug 24, 2019 / minhnhat97hmu - Aug 24, 2019
|Vertical and horizontal cities evaluation
Writing FeedbackHelen Neleh - Aug 24, 2019 / Helen Neleh - Sep 4, 2019
|Some people hold the view that young generation is proper for important positions in governments
3 - Hi Trangxi Thanks a lot for all the nice comments and suggestions. I learn a lot from you. Hope...
Writing FeedbackHelen Neleh - Aug 24, 2019 / Helen Neleh - Sep 4, 2019
|IELTS TASK 1: OVERSEAS RESIDENTS VISITING AUSTRALIA IN TWO SPECIFIC YEARS
4 - @Helen Neleh the author used intro-overview-body structure to accomplish the task。It's totally acceptable。 I wouldn't use depict， this word...
Writing Feedbackamira11545 - Aug 24, 2019 / zcs2008china - Aug 24, 2019
|Argumentative essay- CBEST: "We succeed only as we identify in life a single overriding objective"
Writing FeedbackNorbsidy - Aug 24, 2019 / Norbsidy - Sep 5, 2019
|Writing part 2 IELTS , SCIENTIES TO MAKE POSITIVE CHANGES TO THE WORLD
2 - There are a number of downsides ... First, in technological development that may put people ... In fact The...
Writing FeedbackThao456 - Aug 24, 2019 / KeeneSapphire - Aug 26, 2019
|IELTS TASK 1 : SPENDING ON CONSUMER GOODS IN FRANCE AND THE UK- BAR CHART
2 - I think that you should not use "opposing to" and use "while" instead in the first line of the...
Writing Feedbackamira11545 - Aug 23, 2019 / kirstenlee - Aug 25, 2019
|IELTS Writing Task 2 -Task: describe your opinion of sense of competition or co-operation is better
2 - @longman2270 Hi there. I'll assist you in this by providing feedback on this essay. I find the first...
Writing Feedbacklongman2270 - Aug 23, 2019 / Maria - Aug 23, 2019
|Both passion and colleague relationship might influence people's enjoyment of a job.
2 - Grammar error Interested in Feel the warmth In a nutshell is a informal style you should use in conclusion...
Writing Feedbackjocelyne001 - Aug 22, 2019 / Winter - Aug 27, 2019
|In many countries not enough students are choosing to study science subject. Causes and effects?
3 - Nowadays, it is experienced that... ( I just think that using " perceived" is way better ) ... those...
Writing FeedbackVivian0209 - Aug 22, 2019 / amira11545 - Aug 23, 2019
|On Tackling Congestion in Chinese Cities
Writing FeedbackTriceLiu - Aug 22, 2019 / TriceLiu - Aug 29, 2019
|Besides reading, writing, and Math, the computer skills can be also necessary for a child
3 - @vuvietha There are or is， both are correct。 I searched up and asked few local friends to clarify which...
Writing Feedbackzcs2008china - Aug 22, 2019 / zcs2008china - Aug 24, 2019
|The line graph illustrates data on how much car commuter in Britain (1990-2030)
2 - Hello In the first paragraph, you wrote data on how much car commuter which has different meaning from...
Writing FeedbackNgocnam2k - Aug 21, 2019 / jocelyne001 - Aug 22, 2019
|The two bar charts compare four levels of residents' weights in Charlestown by percentage
2 - Your whole essay is good, it explains the context accurately and precisely. The only thing I noticed is that...
Writing Feedbackjocelyne001 - Aug 21, 2019 / KeeneSapphire - Aug 26, 2019
|The question - what is the right age for the children to start learning a new language
5 - @kev2 I think using only 2 sentences for the first paragraph is enough. Perhaps you can write like: "People...
Writing Feedbackkev2 - Aug 20, 2019 / Veranda - Aug 21, 2019
|30-year price of three food product groups and CPI in The Line Chart
2 - hi, please note the following ... fluctuated from 1978 to 2009.This statement is incorrect as all lines show...
Writing Feedbackiamxuu - Aug 20, 2019 / ahsan_daniyal - Aug 24, 2019
|IELTS - using laptops and mobile phones, during lessons is a good way to encourage children to learn
5 - some suggestions for you. - ... gadgets like laptops, computers and mobile phones is a good ... >>the word...
Writing FeedbackJane Wong - Aug 20, 2019 / Helen Neleh - Aug 24, 2019
|Soil degradation - ielts writing task 1 pie chart and table
3 - thank you very much for your useful advices (sorry for not replying you sooner).I will try to improve my...
Writing Feedbacknohope123 - Aug 20, 2019 / nohope123 - Sep 4, 2019
|Essay about the air pollutants in UK
Writing Feedbackanhxinh99 - Aug 20, 2019 / TriceLiu - Aug 21, 2019
|Do the advantages of learning a foreign language at primary school outweigh the disadvantages?
2 - Hello~ I only have two suggestions. I think you can add a little explanation about why people have...
Writing FeedbackVeranda - Aug 20, 2019 / jocelyne001 - Aug 20, 2019
|Ielts Writing task 2- Banning the use of mobile phones
Writing FeedbackHuyBryce - Aug 19, 2019 / HuyBryce - Aug 25, 2019
|Some people think that it is best to live in a horizontal city while others think of a vertical city
Writing Feedbackvuvietha - Aug 19, 2019 / vuvietha - Aug 20, 2019
|Letter to a friend asking for help with translation of documents
3 - @coke Hi there. Thanks for consistently being a member of the forum. I hope you're doing well. I'll try...
Writing Feedbackcoke - Aug 19, 2019 / Maria - Aug 19, 2019
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