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|IELTS Task 2 Technology and traditional cultures are incompatible - the loss of cultural norms
3 - You did not properly rephrase the prompt. You must make sure that you do not offer too much of...
Writing FeedbackRomanKoch - May 9, 2020 / Holt - May 9, 2020
|University graduates in Canada - IELTS WRITING Task 1 Question and Answer
3 - Do not rush when writing your report. Always take some time towards the end to review your work. This...
Writing Feedbackpanatagama51 - May 9, 2020 / Holt - May 9, 2020
|Coffee and banana sales - TEST 2 CAMBRIDGE IELTS 10
2 - Your essay cannot be marked because you did not upload the image and discussion instructions for this task 1...
Writing Feedbackhandauiu - May 9, 2020 / Holt - May 9, 2020
|IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Answer: Acceptance / Unsatisfactory Lives (IELTS Cambridge 14)
2 - You have totally changed the parameters of the topic. You have turned a discussion into a debate, a dual...
Writing Feedbackthecursedpencil - May 8, 2020 / Holt - May 8, 2020
|The number of cars has increased significantly in major cities. What problems and some solutions?
Writing Feedbacklanlan - May 8, 2020 / pko20 - May 9, 2020
|Some children can learn more efficiently by watching TV. Therefore, children should watch regular TV
2 - Whenever you see the word OR in a prompt, that means this is a single opinion discussion. You cannot...
Writing Feedbackthanishka - May 8, 2020 / Holt - May 8, 2020
|It is not necessary to travel to other places to learn the culture of other people. IELTS task 2
3 - You have to learn to divide your thought process into individual sentences. That must be done so that you...
Writing Feedbackishaha - May 8, 2020 / Holt - May 8, 2020
|The bar chart and table below give information about health care resources and life expectancy
4 - Make it a regular practice to review your essays prior to submission. This is so that you can catch...
Writing FeedbackNhu Ngoc - May 8, 2020 / Holt - May 8, 2020
|Causes and solutions of teenager's bad behavior which get them into trouble.
Writing Feedbackngocbich31 - May 8, 2020 / lanlan - May 9, 2020
|Is the financial support from developed countries to those poor nations satisfactory?
8 - @RomanKoch Right, I didn't actually answer the prompt. The things I mentioned are mostly good starting points I think...
Writing FeedbackRomanKoch - May 7, 2020 / anhnguyenhai333 - May 8, 2020
|IELTS task 2 CAM 14 about bad situation - try to make it better, or leave it how it is
Writing Feedbackmitchpham458 - May 7, 2020 / mitchpham458 - May 7, 2020
|Some high schools forced their students to do volunteer work in order to graduate. Give your opinion
3 - I am uncertain as to what the actual, complete prompt for this essay is. There are actually several topics...
Writing FeedbackChauAnh2312 - May 7, 2020 / Holt - May 7, 2020
|Watching a live performance such as a play, concert, or sporting event is more enjoyable
Writing FeedbackRinLam - May 7, 2020 / Namangarg147 - May 21, 2020
|Some people believe that it is more important to teach children the literature of the country
2 - The first thing I noticed about this essay is that it does not follow the standard IELTS prompt for...
Writing Feedbacklanlan - May 7, 2020 / Holt - May 7, 2020
|Both physical and mental strenght are necessary to reach success in a sport
3 - @Holt I really thank you for your comment. I have some questions! In the 3rd paragraph, should I present...
Writing Feedbackmichelletran10 - May 7, 2020 / michelletran10 - May 8, 2020
|Compare and contrast knowledge gained from experiment with knowledge gained from books.
Writing Feedbackpko20 - May 7, 2020 / pko20 - May 8, 2020
|Ielts writing task 2: A cap on citizens' salary or not?
3 - I think you should put your personal opinion right in the introduction paragraph like a signal for examiners so...
Writing Feedbackbee_linhtinh - May 6, 2020 / lehoang1294 - May 7, 2020
|Peace comes from within, do not seek it without.
3 - This is a confusing story. Though it tries to be insightful in approach, the total lack of character background...
Writing FeedbackBilltwill - May 6, 2020 / Holt - May 7, 2020
|IELTS Writing Task 2 Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment
5 - You make some typos (capable, producing bottles, etc.) Your ideas are not clear and well documented. ..., they are...
Writing FeedbackRomanKoch - May 6, 2020 / lanlan - May 9, 2020
|Topic: Some people suggest that there should be restrictions on a detailed description of crimes
3 - You should always make sure to review the discussion question / instruction after you have drafted your response. That...
Writing Feedbackhuongdottt - May 6, 2020 / Holt - May 7, 2020
|IELTS TASK 1 + 2: The amount of electricity produced from different energy sources
2 - @lehoang1294 I believe there should be only one essay per post. Also for Task 1 you should upload the...
Writing Feedbacklehoang1294 - May 6, 2020 / RomanKoch - May 6, 2020
|It is hard to imagine how people live without friends
Writing Feedbackvtat1902 - May 6, 2020 / Holt - May 6, 2020
|Technology stock prices - TASK 1 exercise line chart
2 - The summary overview is incomplete. You only mentioned 2 out of the 4 stock companies presented in the graph....
Writing Feedbackphongphotphat - May 5, 2020 / Holt - May 6, 2020
|task 1: The map below shows the main changes that have taken place in an American town over 62 years
2 - When you write the descriptive essay, you will need to remain specific about which image has what along with...
Writing FeedbackRanda99 - May 5, 2020 / Holt - May 6, 2020
|Formal examinations and assessments in university
2 - The TA score for your essay will fail because you did not follow the proper discussion format. The discussion...
Writing FeedbackMeoluoi1912 - May 5, 2020 / Holt - May 6, 2020
|Writing task 1:The graph shows the number of marriages and divorces in the UK between 1975 and 2000.
3 - You have not been able to prove that you have done an original restatement of the discussion instructions from...
Writing Feedbackhhoaianhh2905 - May 5, 2020 / Holt - May 6, 2020
|IELTS Task 1 Consumption and production of potatoes
3 - Great essay! I learned a lot from this one. But in my humble opinion, I think you should divide...
Writing FeedbackRomanKoch - May 5, 2020 / lehoang1294 - May 6, 2020
|The environment is damaged by humans activities. The governments and individuals should act together
2 - I believe that this is a well written essay but, it suffers from under developed paragraph presentations. You have...
Writing FeedbackLoanhquanh - May 5, 2020 / Holt - May 5, 2020
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - Celebrities earn more money than politicians.
4 - In my opinion, your introduction is really dubious. You just need to paraphrase the thread and off you go....
Writing Feedbackkhaitrinh - May 5, 2020 / lehoang1294 - May 6, 2020
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2: It is true to blame working mothers on the increasing of youth crimes ?
4 - The extent essay is a single opinion essay that does not allow the writer to give a compare and...
Writing Feedbackemillia2003 - May 4, 2020 / Holt - May 5, 2020
|IELTS Writing Task 1 The graph below shows the average temperature in Antarctica in June 2015.
2 - While you did write 162 words, your essay does not follow the presentation requirements in terms of paragraph presentations....
Writing FeedbackRomanKoch - May 4, 2020 / Holt - May 5, 2020
|Some commentators feel that grandparents should live together with their children and grandchildren
2 - Your essay is confusing to read due to the lack of connecting words, proper sentence presentations, incoherent sentences, and...
Writing Feedbackthduong - May 4, 2020 / Holt - May 4, 2020
|a wide range of subjects or a narrow range of subjects related to a particular career.
2 - Based on the original prompt for this essay, you cannot take the middle stand and say that both methods...
Writing FeedbackHelenTran - May 4, 2020 / Holt - May 4, 2020
|IELTS TASK 1 : The charts show school expenditure and the % of students who gained higher education
Writing Feedbacklehoang1294 - May 4, 2020 / lehoang1294 - May 5, 2020
|IELTS 1, BAR CHART: the amount of money which France and UK spent on five types of consumer goods
2 - The presentation is good. However, in your desire to finish the task within the time limit, you failed to...
Writing Feedbackwanbincd - May 4, 2020 / Holt - May 4, 2020
|IELTS PIE CHART: The charts illustrate the annual income and expense of a US charity organization.
4 - You need to learn to properly format the Task 1 reporting presentation. Based on the information presentation requirements, you...
Writing Feedbackanthonyphan - May 3, 2020 / Holt - May 4, 2020
|In many countries, teenagers are encouraged to find part-time jobs. What's your opinion about this?
Writing FeedbackTrangTam - May 3, 2020 / TrangTam - May 4, 2020
|The two maps represent some changes that were made on the island for tourism purposes.
4 - You did describe the map, but, for the essay purpose, it should have been in a more technical or...
Writing Feedbackuhthnim - May 3, 2020 / julialisboa - May 11, 2020
|Topic: the ways in which humans are damaging the environment (solutions from govs and individuals)
4 - @Hafsa257 Thanks so much! @Holt Thanks for spending your precious time reading my essay and giving such constructive feedback....
Writing FeedbackKim225 - May 3, 2020 / Kim225 - May 4, 2020
|IELTS Writing task 2: Causes and solutions to urbanization.
Writing Feedbackitsasecret - May 3, 2020 / itsasecret - May 3, 2020
|Writing task 2: positive and negative impacts of robots
2 - Since this is your first essay, I can understand why you would end up messing up the discussion format...
Writing Feedbacklannguyen_mia - May 3, 2020 / Holt - May 3, 2020
|The map describe the change of the urban area in San Jose from 1995 to present.
2 - We need the diagram uploaded to the server so that a comprehensive review of your essay can be completed....
Writing Feedbackbichphuong710 - May 3, 2020 / Holt - May 3, 2020
|WRITING TASK 2: SHOULD FOREIGN LANGUAGE STUDY BE A REQUIREMENT IN EDUCATIONAL SYSTEMS?
2 - Do not refer to scientist. Always use a general reference to information. Never make it sound like you researched...
Writing FeedbackKoi - May 3, 2020 / Holt - May 3, 2020
|IELTS PIE CHART: The graphs compare the different types of energy manufacture of France
2 - Your presentation is 2 words short of the minimum word requirement. That means, you will be given points deductions...
Writing Feedbackanthonyphan - May 3, 2020 / Holt - May 3, 2020
|Line graph task 1: The line graph shows the percentage of New Zealand population from 1950 to 2050.
Writing FeedbackTHUHIEN183 - May 3, 2020 / THUHIEN183 - May 3, 2020
|Topic: Wealthy nation should assist poorer countries with humanitarian relief during natural disaste
2 - This essay is bound to get a failing score based mostly on the fact that your explanation is extremely...
Writing Feedbackphamthimaiphuong - May 3, 2020 / Holt - May 3, 2020
|Illegal music sites on the internet are a serious threat to the industry
3 - @Holt Thank you for your advice. Well...actually I do not only pick one side, but I chose two sides,...
Writing Feedbackylc125 - May 3, 2020 / ylc125 - May 4, 2020
|The graph shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria 1995-2005
3 - Kindly focus your writing on your grammar and content rather than the word count. When I checked your essay,...
Writing FeedbackAnhNguyen97 - May 2, 2020 / Holt - May 3, 2020
|WRITING TASK 2 - MANY PEOPLE CANNOT READ OR WRITE.
Writing Feedbackhien_220495 - May 2, 2020 / hien_220495 - May 3, 2020
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2: POSITIVE DEVELOPMENT OF INTERNATIONAL TRAVEL
2 - The prompt restatement requires you to deliver a clear outline pattern for your discussion based on the two questions...
Writing FeedbackDazarlie - May 2, 2020 / Holt - May 2, 2020
|IELTS WRITING TASK 1- LINE GRAPH ILLUSTRATES THE PERCENTAGE OF AUSTRALIAN EXPORTS TO 4 NATIONS
Writing FeedbackElla Pham - May 2, 2020 / Ella Pham - May 2, 2020
|Flu Rates for Males and Females
2 - By writing only 152 words, you are showing that you have not carefully analyzed the content of the line...
Writing FeedbackYulia Indah - May 1, 2020 / Holt - May 2, 2020
|A person's health is their own responsibility rather than the government's responsibility.
4 - Thank you both for your thorough feedbacks @holt @yulia. I tried to conclude in the last paragraph that...
Writing Feedbackanh09 - May 1, 2020 / anh09 - May 4, 2020
|Do the benefits of studying abroad outweigh the drawbacks? Opportunities for career.
2 - Before anything else, you have to decide if you believe that the topic offers more benefits than drawbacks. Indicate...
Writing FeedbackAlexHoang - May 1, 2020 / Holt - May 1, 2020
|Cell Phones In Classrooms? This is not good idea.
Writing FeedbackSharonHuang - May 1, 2020 / Holt - May 1, 2020
|Can the implementation of modern technologies in communication replace hand-writing letters?
2 - Your response is missing the extent response to the singular opinion of agree or disagree. To be clear: ...
Writing Feedbackbuibichnga1510 - May 1, 2020 / Holt - May 1, 2020
|Nowadays, some parents tend to give their children e-books to read. What about printed materials?
4 - Hi, I'm tata, a learner of academic writing, too. So, let me mention some correction for your essay. ...
Writing FeedbackAholachou - Apr 30, 2020 / Yulia Indah - May 1, 2020
|First impressions are important. Doing well in interviews is the key to job security.
3 - Your reasoning paragraphs are sound. However, you failed to discuss the essay based on the manner prescribed by the...
Writing FeedbackLuana - Apr 30, 2020 / Holt - May 1, 2020
|Is it a waste of time to read news in newspapers and watch television news programs?
Writing Feedbackhangvu248 - Apr 30, 2020 / Luana - Apr 30, 2020
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2-Essay about whether physical education should be compulsory in school.
3 - @Holt Thanks a lot for your feedback! This is my revised essay and I've tried a lot to expand...
Writing Feedbacklhd2104 - Apr 30, 2020 / lhd2104 - May 3, 2020
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