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Study plans to improve foreign languages (Korean, English, etc) required for taking a degree course

2 - Is this a language study plan for the U or G scholarship? You cannot just tell me it is...

ScholarshipVanessa Mendez B - Mar 9, 2021 / Holt - Mar 10, 2021
Digital pandemic - Writing an outstanding Essay for AAS

6 - I didn't see you put the course name and the institution you choose. According to your essay, I also...

ScholarshipLovelyshaa - Feb 20, 2021 / Umbu Richy - Mar 9, 2021
Teaching English language (Australia Award Scholarship) Master Degree in TESOL

3 - Too much introduction. I will prefer to answer the question directly first and then list my reason(s) and problem(s)...

ScholarshipTin Maung Oo - Mar 1, 2021 / Umbu Richy - Mar 9, 2021
Essay AAS for Master of Public Health degree in Australia

3 - Maybe you can answer the question directly first and then explain your reason(s). For example: I am applying...

Scholarshipsucianggraini - Mar 4, 2021 / Umbu Richy - Mar 9, 2021
Learning another way to think about things. Language study plan essay

3 - @Holt okay thank you for your advice, I will make it shorter...

Scholarshipdorra - Mar 7, 2021 / dorra - Mar 8, 2021
I am a young leader, who is hunting for knowledge - UGRAD exchange program application

2 - The essay does not respond to the most important requirement of the essay which is a discussion of the...

ScholarshipIslambek - Mar 8, 2021 / Holt - Mar 8, 2021
COVID-19 x-ray medical images. How did you choose your proposed course and institution?

2 - Kick off the essay with the Indonesia-Australia Cooperation Covid 19 Response plan first. That way you immediately catch the...

Scholarshipoedale - Mar 8, 2021 / Holt - Mar 8, 2021
Aerospace engineer - concept, theory, or topic you have explored

2 - You failed to respond to the prompt in totality. You need to discuss your intellectual curiosity first, then why...

ScholarshipLavanyaD17 - Mar 7, 2021 / Holt - Mar 8, 2021
GKS-G Personal Statement - Creative Economy Diplomacy

3 - Oooh, yes I see your point. Thank you very much for your feedback, I will rewrite it again and...

Scholarshipayo_yuk - Mar 6, 2021 / ayo_yuk - Mar 7, 2021
Learning languages - my study plan. STATEMENT OF PURPOSE FOR KOREAN SCHOLARSHIP

3 - @lynleo Hi, yeah I think the comittee wanted to see how strong-willed we are in applying for the scholarship,...

Scholarshiplynleo - Mar 6, 2021 / karinrizky - Mar 7, 2021
Confidence and expertise - Why would you be a great participant in the Global UGRAD Program?

2 - The problem with this presentation is still the lack of leadership skills and your direct participation, in a leadership...

Scholarshipi_m - Mar 5, 2021 / Holt - Mar 6, 2021
Being resilient - Personal Statement GKS-G MBA Aspirant

3 - @Holt Yes, I have consular confirmation of this heritage as well as birth certificates that supports this. Thank you...

ScholarshipAlejandroHz96 - Mar 4, 2021 / AlejandroHz96 - Mar 5, 2021
AAS - Accountant/Auditor - plans when you finish your studies?[500 characters]

4 - i think you should categorize your plan into shorterm and longterm, better if you add information of your continuation...

ScholarshipRebu - Feb 18, 2021 / sucianggraini - Mar 4, 2021
Australia Awards Scholarship Essay (Master of Public Policy)

3 - Thank you for your feedback and suggestionsions, I really appreciate that....

ScholarshipUmbu Richy - Mar 4, 2021 / Umbu Richy - Mar 4, 2021
Personal statement for Environmental landscape Architecture master programme

2 - The essay is based ont he previous prompt requirements for the GKS-G program. You need to write the essay...

ScholarshipEnergy - Mar 1, 2021 / Holt - Mar 2, 2021
2021 GKS SCHOLARSHIP - PERSONAL STATEMENT - INTERNATIONAL TRADE

2 - Hi Sharon. Listen, I can really see the sincerity in your application. You are doing your best to prove...

ScholarshipSharonSahian - Feb 28, 2021 / Holt - Feb 28, 2021
Personal Statement about Public Administration - Graduate program GKS

2 - The first paragraph, though imaginative in presentation, does not offer itself as a part of any appropriate response. It...

ScholarshipFiorella02 - Feb 27, 2021 / Holt - Feb 28, 2021
Global Korea Scholarship Personal Statement for Graduate Study in Electrical Engineering.

3 - @Dam2019 Hello, I would definitely just summarize with the first paragraph the most important key factors of the others!...

ScholarshipDam2019 - Feb 21, 2021 / mariana_2314 - Feb 27, 2021
GLOBAL KOREA SCHOLARSHIP_ PERSONAL STATEMENT_COMPUTER SCIENCE AND ENGINEERING

4 - @Holt @grant_Oliver I am very grateful for your help. I will rewrite based on your comments. Thank you so...

Scholarshipsunny1909 - Feb 25, 2021 / sunny1909 - Feb 27, 2021
'intellectual growth should commence at birth and cease only at death'. Letter for MAIA scholarship

3 - "Not a bad motivational letter. You have shown a personal, academic, and professional interest in the course that you...

Scholarshipreraxi4908 - Feb 26, 2021 / reraxi4908 - Feb 26, 2021
Leadership, community service. The Global UGRAD. Why would I be a great participant in this program?

2 - Remove the reference point about how you are familiarizing yourself with American culture. That is not part of the...

Scholarshipbigdreamy - Feb 26, 2021 / Holt - Feb 26, 2021
DRL model - [KGSP] MASTER IN ARTIFICIAL INTELLIGENCE - Goal of study and detailed study plan

3 - Hi Holt, Thank you for the suggestions! Since master applicants do not need to submit Research Proposal, we...

Scholarshipgrant_Oliver - Feb 17, 2021 / grant_Oliver - Feb 26, 2021
[KGSP/GKS SCHOLARSHIP] MASTER IN ARTIFICIAL INTELLIGENCE - Future plan after study

2 - That should be the focal point of this future plan after study. They are not interested in knowing...

Scholarshipgrant_Oliver - Feb 23, 2021 / Holt - Feb 26, 2021
GKS Statement of Purpose - Language Study Plan

2 - - Trying to memorize what in a month? Hangul characters and alphabet? English spelling of Hangul words? There...

ScholarshipAlsgray - Feb 25, 2021 / Holt - Feb 26, 2021
GKS/KGSP Master in Urban Environmental Planning - Statement of Purpose

2 - There is no need to list you references at any point in this presentation. While these are possibly reading...

ScholarshipTraiaU - Feb 24, 2021 / Holt - Feb 25, 2021
KGS-G STATEMENT OF PURPOSE - language in Korea

3 - @Holt, thanks for your observations...

ScholarshipWunuson - Feb 23, 2021 / Wunuson - Feb 24, 2021
GKS SCHOLARSHIP LANGUAGE STUDY PLAN BEFORE AND AFTER

3 - Hello! There are some things that you do not need to put in this part of the Statement of...

Scholarshipsruthi1998 - Feb 17, 2021 / TraiaU - Feb 24, 2021
Motivation, small & medium - sized enterprises - GKS Personal Statement Business Administration

4 - Hello, I suggest you to elaborate the more specific area that you are mastered in to show your academic...

Scholarshipqwepoi - Feb 19, 2021 / fiannyfia - Feb 24, 2021
Personal Statement for GKS's graduate studies in Communication Design University track

5 - Hi, I like your essay. However it is better for you to mention another area in arts and culture...

Scholarshipmadrisheva - Feb 7, 2021 / fiannyfia - Feb 24, 2021
Interactive teaching - GKS GRADUATE PERSONAL STATEMENT

NEW - Hello, This is my personal statement and I need some feedback :) Thank you in advance personal...

Scholarshipfiannyfia - Feb 24, 2021 / — -
My academic success - The Global UGRAD Program^ why am I a great participant?

3 - Thank you very much. I'll try to fix the last paragraph and focus more on what I get...

Scholarshipiroda_bekmur - Feb 7, 2021 / iroda_bekmur - Feb 24, 2021
SCHOLARSHIP GKS - PERSONAL STATEMENT GRADUATE DEGREE 2021 - Public Administration.

6 - @grant_Oliver Thanks for the recommendation :) I'm working on it....

ScholarshipAnyellaa - Feb 21, 2021 / Anyellaa - Feb 23, 2021
American-Hispanic learning process - Personal Statement for the Global Korea Scholarship

2 - Kindly fix the format of this presentation. It is extremely difficult to read. If you submit this essay in...

Scholarshipalexaguti - Feb 22, 2021 / Holt - Feb 23, 2021
The efforts you have undertaken so far to obtain information on your study options in Australia?/AAS

2 - ONE QUESTION PER THREAD. ADMIN SHALL DELETE THE OTHER QUESTIONS SHORTLY. Do not confuse the presentation with unnecessary...

Scholarshipcyber168 - Feb 23, 2021 / Holt - Feb 23, 2021
GLOBAL UGRAD - WHY WOULD I BE A GREAT PARTICIPANT IN THIS STUDENT EXCHANGE PROGRAM

2 - You do not qualify for the program based on this presentation. You have written a lengthy personal statement that...

Scholarshipshaqkandou - Feb 22, 2021 / Holt - Feb 23, 2021
Laboratories - ChIR Motivational Statement

2 - It would be best for me to list down the points that you actually responded to with this essay...

Scholarshipstrongwarrior - Feb 22, 2021 / Holt - Feb 23, 2021
Defending the global internet - GOVERNMENT OF IRELAND INTERNATIONAL EDUCATION SCHOLARSHIP

2 - Review the prompt requirement again. You have failed to properly respond to the question because you wrote a personal...

ScholarshipStonye - Feb 22, 2021 / Holt - Feb 23, 2021
Serving community - Why would you be a great participant in the Global UGRAD Program?

2 - The first 3 paragraphs do not speak of your ability to be a community leader and enforce changes in...

Scholarshipahyar - Feb 22, 2021 / Holt - Feb 23, 2021
AAS - What are your plans when you finish your studies (Master Program : Tourism)

2 - The last thing that I can do for you here is make the decision for you regarding which statement...

ScholarshipPradausa - Feb 22, 2021 / Holt - Feb 23, 2021
Fighter family - KGSP Scholarship - Personal Statemente International Relations

3 - Hi gloriacabral, I think you have a good background for application, but you need to shorten your essay. You...

Scholarshipgloriacabral - Feb 22, 2021 / grant_Oliver - Feb 22, 2021
My commitment to my community - Global Ugrad

2 - The problem with your presentation is that you are representing yourself as a community leader, without having any access...

ScholarshipDankarys - Feb 22, 2021 / Holt - Feb 22, 2021
Applying the knowledge and experience essay. Sustainable Transportation SISGP

4 - "As someone who experience working ..." Would be better framed as: As my core profession has involved mainly...

Scholarshipndhnif - Feb 16, 2021 / Ishaqur - Feb 20, 2021
Evaluate the applicant's leadership capacity and potential to play a role in development

3 - @tyanna I think instead of mentioning the currency, try focusing on growth/changes from last term. Furthermore, it would be...

Scholarshiptyanna - Feb 16, 2021 / Ishaqur - Feb 20, 2021
GOVERNMENT OF IRELAND INTERNATIONAL EDUCATION SCHOLARSHIP

4 - I think you should look into the specific courses available under the program, mention those in the essay to...

Scholarshiptomtomiwa - Feb 16, 2021 / Ishaqur - Feb 20, 2021
Korean broadcasting will change us for the better - KGSP Master 2021 Personal Statement

3 - Hi Semos, I would like to suggest you to move your motivation paragraph to the top. The motivation is...

Scholarshipsemos - Feb 15, 2021 / grant_Oliver - Feb 17, 2021
From mathematics to engineering- Personal statement should describe who you are and past experiences

2 - You mentioned engineering at the end. So change that reference point. Try not to keep mentioning Engineering because it...

ScholarshipAeroSAE98 - Feb 16, 2021 / Holt - Feb 16, 2021
Aerospace engineering - Study Objectives essay for FULBRIGHT SCHOLARSHIP

2 - I feel that the binational impact needs to be stronger in terms to referring to America's possible use for...

ScholarshipAeroSAE98 - Feb 15, 2021 / Holt - Feb 16, 2021
Global issues need global responses - Why did you choose your proposed course and institution*?

2 - Use that quote, and refer to the original speaker, as a stand alone presentation at the start. That will...

ScholarshipSinSonng - Feb 15, 2021 / Holt - Feb 16, 2021
Essay about how you can apply the knowledge once finish the education in the own country

2 - The discussion is totally off base. Remember that the prompt assumes you have already completed the course and you...

ScholarshipBarol16 - Feb 15, 2021 / Holt - Feb 16, 2021
Me helping people - Describe yourself in 285 words.

2 - The prompt is not about what interests you. It is about who you are. What are your personal traits...

Scholarshipteddyz - Feb 15, 2021 / Holt - Feb 16, 2021
Statement of Purpose; Goal of Study & Study Plan Graduate : Art Management

6 - Hi moondeluna, The SOP requirement in this section is goal of study and detailed study plan. I feel...

Scholarshipmoondeluna - Feb 13, 2021 / grant_Oliver - Feb 16, 2021
[KGSP SCHOLARSHIP] GRADUATE PROGRAM - MASTER IN ARTIFICIAL INTELLIGENCE - Personal Statement

3 - @Holt Thank you for your careful review and the constructive comment. Have a nice day! : )...

Scholarshipgrant_Oliver - Feb 14, 2021 / grant_Oliver - Feb 15, 2021
Scholarship motivation letter for masters studies - how you can apply the knowledge and etc..

3 - @Holt Dear Holt. Thank you very much for your timely response. I will connect the work of the UNDP...

Scholarshipkomadx - Feb 14, 2021 / komadx - Feb 15, 2021
GKS-G Scholarship Personal Statement: Marketing Major

2 - If the first paragraph is your motivational statement, then you need to work on it. The motivational statement should...

Scholarshipoahr93 - Feb 14, 2021 / Holt - Feb 15, 2021
The Engineer I want to be. Committing to the global community Scholarship Essay

2 - Here is the thing, your essay shows you not as a community leader, but as a community follower in...

Scholarshipeds420 - Feb 14, 2021 / Holt - Feb 15, 2021
Business Development - YOUR PROPOSED COURSE AND INSTITUTION? (FOR AUSTRALIA AWARDS SCHOLARSHIP)

2 - You only responded to the course choice discussion. You did not indicate the university of choice and why you...

ScholarshipRatudestiani - Feb 14, 2021 / Holt - Feb 15, 2021
Personal statement for KGSP scholarship Master program in English Linguistics

5 - Just so you know the requirements for the personal statement have changed as follows! - Motivations with which...

Scholarshipaigerim87 - Feb 7, 2021 / oahr93 - Feb 14, 2021
[KGSP SCHOLARSHIP] GRADUATE PROGRAM - MASTER IN PUBLIC ADMINISTRATION - Student from Public Schools

5 - Hi Aline, Please notice that the KGSP SOP and PS requirements had changed. According to the newly release guideline,...

Scholarshipaccandido - Jan 31, 2021 / grant_Oliver - Feb 14, 2021
"Success is not final; failure is not fatal" - being a great participant in the Global UGRAD program

2 - Without the reference to how you have actually served your community, which is what the prompt asked you write...

Scholarshipelisabettgt - Feb 14, 2021 / Holt - Feb 14, 2021
Question 1 scholarship; Why Curtin? Because it is a university that specializes in mining

2 - Your employment background should be mentioned in some capacity as the basis of the reference point for your course...

ScholarshipFaridFR - Feb 13, 2021 / Holt - Feb 14, 2021

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