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|radio and television audiences throughout the day in 1992.
Writing FeedbackEva Novita Sari - Apr 23, 2014 / upinipin - Apr 29, 2014
|IELTS Task 1: The audiences of radio and television for full the day in 1992.
Writing FeedbackBOMAT_IRA - Apr 23, 2014 / upinipin - Apr 29, 2014
|The number of television sales annually from 1996 to 1999
4 - between 1996 and 1999. wrong noun phrase ; a significant increase or significantly (adv) increase (verb)...
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|IELTS TASK 1 : TRIP TO WORK IN HOUSTON, TEXAS
5 - For me, probably, that way of organizing body paragraphs is very common in writing. However, let us not...
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|IELTS TASK II : Inventors are not as important to society as doctors ?
5 - appreciate what inventors have created in the past which hasbeengiven brought advantages for to the public (science inventions for...
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|IELTS: production of electricity in Germany and France from all sources
Writing FeedbackBOMAT_IRA - Apr 25, 2014 / upinipin - Apr 28, 2014
|TOEFL ESSAY - Technology makes people's lives simpler rather than complicated
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|IELTS: Graph of the winter heating costs from 2003 to 2011
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|The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By 2020 may be as many as 29 million vehicles.
4 - two months ago i wrote this essay with the same prompt. this is my introduction; Throughout the world,...
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|IELTS: 'sense of cooperation' - children should be competitive or cooperative?
11 - also, you can put some relevant specific examples, you may take from your own experience or your friends'...
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|IELTS: CHALLENGE - some people are attracted to dangerous sports/ activities
5 - My teacher said that introduction is a part to catch reader attention. So, making the good introduction is...
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|IELTS: electricity generated in Germany and France in the year 2009
Writing FeedbackEva Novita Sari - Apr 25, 2014 / tiaDS - Apr 27, 2014
|IELTS TASK 1: How greenhouse gases
Writing FeedbackEva Novita Sari - Apr 26, 2014 / tiaDS - Apr 27, 2014
|IELTS: born with certain talents or not?; professional football player
8 - when i read your prompt direcly i think about lionel messi and christiano ronaldo, perhaps they can be an...
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|IELTS General Training; 'growing trend of increasing the retirement age'
4 - also, I just give additional advise, try to give specific details, you can take some events from your real...
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|Teaching in group along with specialised education according to abilities
Writing Feedbackclairpure - Apr 13, 2014 / fikri - Apr 27, 2014
|GRE: Development of technology and the way people rely on it too much.
2 - Hey, this essay is so good considering its your first. You almost have no mistakes however, I think you...
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|'homeless or in jail'; Parents are the best teachers; I agree with the statement
4 - Obviously, you write small letter "i" not just once but several times. Practice writing it in capital. Otherwise,...
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|IELTS: The relative electricity consumption; 'spa is more extravagant used'
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|compare and contrast your fashion style with that of someone you know
4 - Here is I found on the net that should be followed as an organizational structure for your compare and...
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|SAT essay: 'Taking a bad decision is way better than the terror of indecision'
3 - Thanks man!...
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|college or university; Success or a good life in future through knowledge
Writing Feedbackthaontt1408 - Apr 26, 2014 / eddies - Apr 26, 2014
|broad knowledge vs many academic subjects; various subjects in order to be wise
5 - Thank you very much! And do you mean that my paragraph structure is not clear enough? I just think...
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|Wealthy nation shares to support poor countries at the solidarity among nations
7 - Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations by providing such things as food and...
Writing FeedbackSHanafi - Apr 8, 2014 / SHanafi - Apr 26, 2014
|Toefl- The qualities of a good neighbor - should be sociable and helpful
6 - Ok, so the idea is good but some sentences arent written in a right form so here's the correction:...
Writing FeedbackJaanu - Apr 15, 2014 / Itsyasmeens - Apr 25, 2014
|Every movie made in a country can reflect some realities about that country
5 - For example, when we are watching a picture made in Iran.. The right form is: when we are watching...
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|IELTS-GT (task2): Working Extended hours should restricted. (Agree/Disagree)
6 - I would strongly emphasis and recommend, Government must include the clause of maximum number of working hours in its...
Writing FeedbackNaveed786 - Apr 24, 2014 / sevan_777 - Apr 25, 2014
|Ielts 1 enquire letter - English lessons questions
4 - Overall, you are being asked to use Present simple, Present continuous, Present perfect, and Future. For the next...
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|Controversial: Teenagers are working while they are still students
4 - Pahan is right. I too think this phrase adds no value. they can arrange time when they should...
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|Toefl - Is technology creating single world culture? fights for culture & belief
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|Article: "What do you want to when you grow up?" medical student
5 - Doctor is one of the highest paying professions, (stop here) For example,thean average family doctor has an annual salary...
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|IELTS: unemployment rate comparaison between US and Japan mar.93-mar.99
7 - Have look at this sentence: The US line remained steady woth some fluctuations from 96 to 99, during wich...
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|Education of boys & girls in separate schools; 'distracting and hamper progress'
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|IELTS: Modern artist is a sort of high paid profession; 'preparation process'
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|IELTS TASK 2 : High sum of money of modern artist
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|Fixed punishment or flexible one?
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|During this 25 year period, consumption of pizza and hamburgers by Australian teenagers increased
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|Toefl-Teachers encouraging students to question everything 'for our knowledge, o
9 - Pay attention to the approaches we have suggested to you above as your essay looks so lengthy and you...
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|These days, fewer people want to become teachers, particularly in high schools.
Writing Feedbackuzboy - Apr 22, 2014 / Arun0506 - Apr 24, 2014
|Do you agree that the traditional skills will die out? -- IELTS Essay
7 - Alright.... the ideal way is to write a catchy short hook that provides a very good entrance to...
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|Apple canning process; 'sterilizing from bacteria'
8 - The diagram shows a process of making an apple canningproducing canned apple . This is totally irrelevant...
Writing Feedbackupinipin - Apr 19, 2014 / dumi - Apr 24, 2014
|IELTS: The diagram about the evolution of the horse
5 - Once the first two evolution stages finishedwere completed, it can be seen that equineEquin e transformed into Merychippus with...
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|IELTS; mobile phone impacts on people's lives
9 - From my point of view, your introduction is quite long compared with 3 or 4 sentences for a model...
Writing Feedbacklinh110 - Apr 21, 2014 / ningo - Apr 24, 2014
|IELTS; mobile phones and precautions
7 - Can someone help me correct and make this sentence more academic ? I don't know how to express properly...
Writing Feedbacklinh110 - Apr 22, 2014 / linh110 - Apr 24, 2014
|Pain (First writing Essay) - 'Pain is a word that most of us hate'
6 - Google is the best friend. Everything you can find there. Also, If you think that you need some...
Writing FeedbackAlpha - Jan 25, 2012 / eddies - Apr 24, 2014
|IELTS: The process of apple how to be canned; 'apple tree'
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|Researching the Collapse of 2008: The Rise, Fall, and Flat Line
2 - But for recent college graduates- (I prefer using a comma, instead of hyphen) the group of immediate interest for...
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|Ielts: apple is canned; 'there are many processes'
Writing Feedbackernhy - Apr 18, 2014 / Pahan - Apr 23, 2014
|Write a report about education in Australia between 1997 and 2005.
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|Doctor is the most important person for society
5 - Ok, I see :D They think the doctors can help society from their illness.save others lives which is an...
Writing FeedbackApsari - Apr 23, 2014 / Pahan - Apr 23, 2014
|Task - Are Macro-sports events good in easing international tensions?
5 - I suggest you to leave a blank line between your paragraphs to present your essay better and impress the...
Writing FeedbackThomas1948 - Apr 12, 2014 / Pahan - Apr 23, 2014
|IELTS: 'all processes occur in the water' - Live cycle of a frog
Writing FeedbackBOMAT_IRA - Apr 19, 2014 / Pahan - Apr 23, 2014
|IELTS TASK 1: The winter heating costs according to heating fuel type
Writing FeedbackEva Novita Sari - Apr 23, 2014 / Pahan - Apr 23, 2014
|Radio and television audience in UK
4 - The TV audience is pretty less in numbers from 1.00 to 11.00 Thereafter the audience begins to grow and...
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|IELTS Task 2 : Advertising increase tendency to buy unneeded thing
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|Individuals should not be allowed to carry guns - 'used for illegal purposes'
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|GRE: analyze and issue -- technology will deteriorate human thinking
NEW - -- As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for...
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|IELTS: Sector of the economy - different age groups were employed.
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|Ielts: Discuss both harms and good of advertising & give your opinion
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|IELTS Task 1: The unemployment rates: US and Japan - 5% in March 99
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