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|What God thinks about it? - Why cosmetic surgery must be banned
2 - the negative effects <of >cosmetic surgery - In fact, cosmetic surgery is a short term, waste of money, and...
Writing Feedbackgerrard - Aug 17, 2014 / sssenyoritaa - Aug 19, 2014
|Extinction of some languages will make life easier through improving the efficiency and employment
6 - Some minority languages are dying out due to rapid population growth. People without thelittle language skills...
Writing Feedbackkevin1983 - Jul 20, 2014 / eddies - Aug 18, 2014
|IELTS: 'economic, diplomacy, and environmental' - most popular career choices for youth in Indonesia
4 - Here are some issues I reveal that you should pay particular attention to: 1. Spelling 2. Word form...
Writing Feedbackfadlanmuzakki - Aug 13, 2014 / eddies - Aug 17, 2014
|[IELTS] A discursive essay on visitors' attitude toward other countries's culture.
3 - I think you've done a good job argumenting from both sides, I agree with your view. "Foreigners...
Writing Feedbackthanhthanhdo10 - Aug 17, 2014 / Stevie - Aug 17, 2014
|TOEFL, "Tell the truth" - People need to have some friends who are trustful.
3 - Hi ,Marger ! In the first paragraph " for instant, having a friendship relationship, " ,I think it...
Writing Feedbackmarger - Aug 17, 2014 / kathyt - Aug 17, 2014
|"Captain America" - What motivates people to change themselves?
Writing FeedbackA106810421310 - Aug 15, 2014 / SHanafi - Aug 15, 2014
|'the real achievement is when we can help others' - Summarize your accomplishment
3 - Dear Gagan, About grammar and tenses I strongly agreed with you. Here my self correction, please give me...
Writing FeedbackSHanafi - Aug 13, 2014 / SHanafi - Aug 15, 2014
|ielts - The transformation from childhood into adulthood are every important in each person's life
Writing Feedbackngoctrang123 - Aug 13, 2014 / SHanafi - Aug 14, 2014
|TOEFL: 'friendly and good at cooking person' - the important qualities of a good roommate.
2 - too much informal forms were used, therefore i recommend you should check for academic words regularly. Dont be worried,...
Writing Feedbacktoannguyen - Aug 13, 2014 / garung1187 - Aug 14, 2014
|'I am always exhilarated when doing my social work job' - the reason for leaving
Writing FeedbackSHanafi - Aug 13, 2014 / SHanafi - Aug 14, 2014
|TOEFL: respect and loyalty are the conspicuous qualities that all children should have
4 - you seem to lack examples for your ideas. besides, the consequences you mention are all assumptions, therefore, you should...
Writing Feedbackhamedmas - Aug 13, 2014 / garung1187 - Aug 14, 2014
|The dominance of imported entertainment is harmful to the culture of these countries.Do you agree?
4 - Nevermind Zahra :). This is commonly occured for new member Would you kindly give us the prompt...
Writing Feedbackz_ansari - Aug 13, 2014 / SHanafi - Aug 14, 2014
|Scandals can only be solved by a combined effort of all the people of the society - GRE essay
2 - Overall, the essay's main point is clear. It needs some attention given to correcting grammar and a few typographical...
Writing FeedbackInfernuS - Aug 12, 2014 / EF_Sheri - Aug 13, 2014
|Toefl Essay :: Travel within group is always safe and brings more recreations to everyone
5 - Yur essay is very clear and it easy to understand. Yu give many ideas to support for a topic....
Writing Feedbackhamedmas - Aug 11, 2014 / ngoctrang123 - Aug 13, 2014
|New restaurant that may be built in your neighborhood will disturb residents of this area
Writing Feedbackjacky5421 - Aug 12, 2014 / hamedmas - Aug 13, 2014
|Studying in foreign university should be very helpful for everybody who does not afraid difficulties
Writing FeedbackNortT - Jul 31, 2014 / dumi - Aug 12, 2014
|'remarkable rise with slight fluctuations' - Japanese tourists on the trip
2 - If I were you, I prefer writing overview paragraph rather than conclusion. Based on IELTS writing task 1 band...
Writing FeedbackAngel Lolla - Aug 10, 2014 / tiaDS - Aug 11, 2014
|IELTS : Lately more and more work has to be done by machines.
Writing Feedbacklatkhan - Aug 10, 2014 / tiaDS - Aug 11, 2014
|Parents should let their children grow up in the city - good preparation for the hard life ahead
NEW - Please read and correct this essay for me. Thank you very much One of the most important factors in...
Writing Feedbacklazylazycat2801 - Aug 11, 2014 / — -
|'disagreement can cause stress and inhibit learning' - Agreement or disagreement? GRE Issue Essay
NEW - The Issue statement is : We can usually learn much more from people whose views we share than from...
Writing FeedbackComcop - Aug 11, 2014 / — -
|Government should take the responsibility to make appropriate regulation about the dangerous sports
3 - Actually, people engage in a wide range of sports. So, I like if you change this sentence to;...
Writing Feedbackheylie - Aug 11, 2014 / dumi - Aug 11, 2014
|Not only governments and big companies are responsible for environment but also the whole community
2 - For me your introduction is bit unclear, I have rephrased your introduction. However i am a learner too,...
Writing Feedbacktrantrunghieu - Aug 10, 2014 / latkhan - Aug 10, 2014
|TOEFL: A/D? In modern times, parents will learn more from their children
3 - Some people agree with that statement; other people disagree. this sentence can be deleted you can just say"I have...
Writing FeedbackAichen - Aug 8, 2014 / DearbhailS - Aug 10, 2014
|Ambition motivate people - without it life would be mechanical or meaningless
3 - you can use others listing points to show new ideas; Also, Moreover, Furthermore, etc. Even though...
Writing FeedbackJwala - Aug 9, 2014 / tiaDS - Aug 10, 2014
|TOEFL: High stress job paid a lot of money or low stress job with just enough to live on?
3 - Thank you for your useful advice, Aichen. I clearly see your point and try to improve them in further...
Writing FeedbackAudi - Aug 8, 2014 / Audi - Aug 9, 2014
|IELTS ESSAY; Some people have great ambitions in life, others don't.
NEW - [QUESTION] Some people have great ambitions in life, others don't. Do you think ambition is important to succeed in...
Writing Feedbackdevabe2005 - Aug 9, 2014 / — -
|task 2 for ielts: the wealth sharing among countries always have two sides
4 - Thus, the support should stop at providing food, education and health care. --> So the needy country should...
Writing FeedbackTuti gunner - Jul 8, 2014 / devabe2005 - Aug 9, 2014
|IELTS: bar chart - average retirement age among seven countries in 2004 and 2008
5 - be careful when you are using commas in your sentences, i observed so many comma mistakes in your report...
Writing Feedbackdigitalidea - Jul 18, 2014 / handsome7boy - Aug 9, 2014
|We always like to make progress in our life and it gives us a good sense - Toefl Essay
Writing Feedbackhamedmas - Aug 7, 2014 / hamedmas - Aug 9, 2014
|IELTS: In many countries recently young single people have been living far from their parent
6 - Is it fine to mention immigration and having to learn new life/culture as an advantage? Or is it a...
Writing Feedbacklatkhan - Aug 1, 2014 / Monloi - Aug 9, 2014
|How did you get over your fear to speak in English? - Learning From Mistakes
2 - As a non-native speaker it was really hard to say even few sentences out loud, when I didn't really...
Writing Feedbackflorszi - Aug 7, 2014 / EF_Kevin - Aug 8, 2014
|"Situation after Reunification of Korean peninsula" - prediction essay
2 - Do not capNot capitalize a word that comes after a,. Only capitalize the first letter of the sentence....
Writing Feedbacksamuela - Aug 7, 2014 / EF_Kevin - Aug 8, 2014
|IELTS: Taxpayers don't need pay for public education system in which their children are not enrolled
2 - For instance, the recent bridge construction scam exposed by the media amounts Where ? I am new...
Writing Feedbackmvettri - Aug 7, 2014 / latkhan - Aug 8, 2014
|IELTS - 'the chart also predicts the proportions in 2040' - quantity of the population aged 65
6 - You must write overview paragraph in writing task 1 because overview is important instead of conclusion. In this prompt,...
Writing FeedbackHiruni - Jul 30, 2014 / tiaDS - Aug 8, 2014
|IELTS 2: CONSIDERING DISADVANTAGES OF TOURISM
Writing Feedbackeirehc - Jul 15, 2014 / SHanafi - Aug 8, 2014
|Ielts: why and how parents teach their kids the importance of money?
10 - Is this college essay? If it is, then you shouldn't set (4-paragraphs) structures for it because it will limit...
Writing Feedbackningo - Aug 4, 2014 / huyenluv - Aug 7, 2014
|"WE FIND COMFORT AMONG THOSE WHO AGREE WITH US - GROWTH AMONG THOSE WHO DON'T"; PPST Writing TOPIC
Writing Feedbackeperry1 - Aug 5, 2014 / Binte Rasheed - Aug 7, 2014
|Efficient presentation saves time, makes the points clear, satisfies its audience
2 - Exactly, one thing more i would like to add is that put many pictures in your presentation so that...
Writing Feedbackahsam - Aug 5, 2014 / Binte Rasheed - Aug 7, 2014
|IELTS: The tax reduction of state school for parents who have children studying in private system
2 - On the whole, I do believe that taxes paying for state schools are necessary to be compulsory for all...
Writing FeedbackAnh Nguyen 265 - Aug 7, 2014 / mvettri - Aug 7, 2014
|Independent TOEFL essay , Judging people on their appereance
Writing FeedbackBasilMostafa - Aug 5, 2014 / florszi - Aug 7, 2014
|Celebrities are more famous for the look and wealth than for talents and contribution to their field
2 - I think the crossed phrase is redundant. In addition, I suppose you need to develop or explain more...
Writing Feedbackmvettri - Aug 6, 2014 / Anh Nguyen 265 - Aug 7, 2014
|Advertising has too much influence on what people buy?
4 - Hence, the effect of advertising on the type of goods which people buy is undeniable => I thought this...
Writing Feedbackparand - Aug 5, 2014 / parand - Aug 7, 2014
|IELTS: CELEBRITY'S ROLE - influence of celebrities to the youth is as well positive as negative
7 - In fact, "Effort" can be both countable and uncountable word. Look at this example from macmilandictionary: Despite someone's efforts:...
Writing FeedbackAnh Nguyen 265 - Aug 6, 2014 / ningo - Aug 7, 2014
|Having a factory in the region is bad and good news
Writing FeedbackEyadBosy - Aug 3, 2014 / sayes - Aug 6, 2014
|To me studying alone is more useful - students choice
Writing Feedbackahmadaz - Aug 5, 2014 / Anh Nguyen 265 - Aug 6, 2014
|Movies, television - entertainment and hobby that we can learn a lot from
2 - to the new modern television, which can be installed (i guess you mean the application or softwares for viewing...
Writing Feedbackafaghfarhadi - Aug 5, 2014 / izhar - Aug 5, 2014
|Mixed education provide added opportunity for either sex to develop interpersonal skills
NEW - Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Other, however, believe that...
Writing Feedbackizhar - Aug 5, 2014 / — -
|[IELTS] 'advertising manipulates people' - Positives and Negatives of Ad's
Writing FeedbackJwala - Aug 3, 2014 / tiaDS - Aug 5, 2014
|Money as a reward can be beneficial, but compliments and comfortable working environment are better
NEW - Topic: Some employers reward members of staff for their exceptional contribution to the company by giving them extra money....
Writing Feedbackmanh - Aug 5, 2014 / — -
|'Globalization is like elephant' - how it affects the world?
Writing Feedbackizhar - Aug 4, 2014 / izhar - Aug 5, 2014
|IELTS: Intelligent students should be educated separately. Do the benefits outweigh the problems?
4 - This introductory paragraph is too simple. You need some major changes. For this prompt, let's give a try; ...
Writing FeedbackSummer_J - Aug 3, 2014 / eddies - Aug 5, 2014
|'I'm happy when I can solve difficult problems myself' - Studying alone or in groups?
2 - "All of those are a general purpose of student that they want to get success in their study. According...
Writing Feedbackwonnguyen - Aug 4, 2014 / cpuissant - Aug 4, 2014
|IELTS Competitiveness is a positive quality for people to have among most societies.
2 - Here is some general advice. Hope this helps; If you look at people taking GRE exams, then mostly...
Writing Feedbacksundin928 - Aug 4, 2014 / eddies - Aug 4, 2014
|Technology has both advantage and disadvantage for creativity of children
5 - Same meaning, both words means less, I just wanna add (es) to the verb which is unfamiliar to me...
Writing Feedbackhosseinshafiee - Aug 3, 2014 / EyadBosy - Aug 3, 2014
|SAT ; We place far too much emphasis on experience and achievement in our society
5 - Hitler had thrived to be the Chancellor of the Third Reich, which was also one of his achievements ....
Writing FeedbackDilian_Nguyen - Jun 28, 2014 / niesaysi - Aug 3, 2014
|Prunty County must undertake the same kind of road improvement as the Butler County; GRE Argument
NEW - [b]Q. Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain...
Writing FeedbackAmal098 - Aug 3, 2014 / — -
|GRE: Highway Safety in Prunty and Butler County - Argument Topic
NEW - Argument topic In an attempt to improve highway safety, Prunty County last year lowered its speed limit form 55Mph...
Writing Feedbackpinaksalvekar - Aug 3, 2014 / — -
|The wide-spread use of labor-saving devices has only made our life much more hectic.
Writing FeedbackRevin - Aug 1, 2014 / sundin928 - Aug 3, 2014
|TOEFL: 'new building construction hold the right to gain more money from government'
2 - If the price of housing growsincreases(more appropriate in the context) continuously, a comfortable place to live in will be...
Writing FeedbackStevenKuang - Aug 2, 2014 / niesaysi - Aug 2, 2014
|Learning a new language process
4 - Learning a new language it is a difficult process. Recently found this language exchange website: languageforexchange It's especially for...
Writing Feedbackkbektas - Jul 30, 2014 / ANSAN - Aug 2, 2014
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