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|IELTS: Customs and behaviours followed by tourists or host should welcome.
Writing FeedbackInkjet - Jun 5, 2014 / dumi - Jul 1, 2014
|Nowadays, making a decision is extremely difficult compare with the past
3 - Nowadays, making a decision is extremely difficult compared with the past. People live in digital- ageda digital world today...
Writing Feedbackreza10977 - Jun 5, 2014 / dumi - Jul 1, 2014
|[IELTS TASK 2] Children's engagement in paid work. Right or wrong?
Writing FeedbackSalMon - Jun 5, 2014 / dumi - Jul 1, 2014
|IELTS : Salary is the most important consideration when choosing a job
5 - Ok... let me help you with your intro; Along with the increasing physical demands of human lifein today's...
Writing Feedbackthanhphongct1 - Jun 5, 2014 / dumi - Jul 1, 2014
|[IELTS] Equivalent number of two genders in terms of university's learning
2 - This sentence is too very long. Longer the sentence, less its clarity would be. Also, the reader is...
Writing FeedbackSalMon - Jun 30, 2014 / dumi - Jul 1, 2014
|Photo exhibition invitation - ielts letter
2 - You should put therefore in the middle: I heard that you have plan to continue your further study...
Writing Feedbackwojiaoxingshiga - Jun 30, 2014 / SalMon - Jun 30, 2014
|New methods for food preparation and preservation give us opportunity to eat healthier food
2 - Don't down yourself to begin with! Everyone has the ability to write like Shakespeare (actually, don't write like him,...
Writing Feedbackapanwar01 - Jun 29, 2014 / Eddie Han - Jun 30, 2014
|IELTS Writing Task 2 - Modern values; social status and material possessions
8 - It is obvious that our values and preferences change over flowingwith time. In the past- values such like honour...
Writing FeedbackAxed - Jun 10, 2014 / dumi - Jun 30, 2014
|IELTS: "With the rise in popularity of the internet, newspapers will gone"
2 - I totallutotally disagree with that opinion, because newspapers still have many benefits. Presses are usually published by official organizations...
Writing Feedbacktiandteo - Jun 29, 2014 / dumi - Jun 30, 2014
|Ielts: Teacher is the best option for children's education in some aspects.
Writing Feedbackganggang - Jun 4, 2014 / dumi - Jun 30, 2014
|IELTS Writing: Number of phone services in US - line graph essay
3 - By contrast , consumers of residential services dropped slightly to just under $700. I think you have followed the...
Writing FeedbackoktaHrp - Jun 3, 2014 / dumi - Jun 30, 2014
|IELTS: Increased life expectancy has many implications on society and individual
3 - Very good start :) However, increased life expectancy has many implications for aging individuals and for society as...
Writing Feedbackrims - Jun 4, 2014 / dumi - Jun 30, 2014
|The major aspects of a society can be studied by studying only the main cities
Writing Feedbackparneet70 - Jun 9, 2014 / dumi - Jun 30, 2014
|IELTS: Office and technology / young people working - introduction paragraph
Writing FeedbacktiaDS - Jun 9, 2014 / dumi - Jun 30, 2014
|The highest number of fishers was experienced by Asia in 1970 - [IELTS TASK 1]
2 - Hi Expert, Firstly, I am particularly impressed on how persistent and consistent you are in term of writing....
Writing FeedbacktiaDS - Jun 29, 2014 / andial - Jun 29, 2014
|IELTS Essay - Negative attitude of young people towards learning
3 - Some sentences are too long, as a result readers feel difficult to understand. Introduction of the essay is too...
Writing Feedbackmsarkar - Jun 27, 2014 / iamchop - Jun 29, 2014
|Food can be produced more cheaply today because of fertiliser and better machine
3 - As Eddies's comments, i think you didn't consider about negative effects on local communities. Besides, there are some grammar...
Writing Feedbackandial - Jun 28, 2014 / tiandteo - Jun 29, 2014
|Ielts ; Why more people are traveling than ever before?
3 - Well, no right or wrong where to put your opinion. However, I would recommend you put the opinion...
Writing Feedbackreza10977 - Jun 26, 2014 / eddies - Jun 29, 2014
|Does money go along with happiness?
3 - the complete prompt must be written to help us when we review your essay. I just guess this task...
Writing Feedbackgarung1187 - Jun 19, 2014 / tiaDS - Jun 29, 2014
|Topic: If i had 3 days to live; 'hypnosis for memory'
Writing FeedbackFionaP - Jun 15, 2014 / eddies - Jun 28, 2014
|[IELTS] Why is happiness difficult to define? Important factors to happiness?
6 - this is beautifully written. you have mentioned some important elements of happiness like living with a happy family or...
Writing FeedbackSalMon - Jun 25, 2014 / shreyansh13 - Jun 27, 2014
|IELTS - The largest percentage of land transports is recorded by the private cars
4 - While is not appropriate here. Use 'and' people in metropolitan area are usually taking children to school...
Writing FeedbacktiaDS - Jun 26, 2014 / eddies - Jun 27, 2014
|TOEFL: why do people attend college; 'it offers much more than life preparation'
Writing Feedbackthanhmai - Jun 25, 2014 / dumi - Jun 26, 2014
|'I like football and music' - ESSAY on my HOBBIES
Writing Feedbacktiennguyen - Jun 26, 2014 / tiennguyen - Jun 26, 2014
|[IELTS TASK 1] A report about consumption of energy in the USA
6 - The line graph compares(I don't really agree if you use the verb 'compares'. This chart uses the appropriate language...
Writing FeedbacktiaDS - Jun 23, 2014 / eddies - Jun 26, 2014
|CAUSES OF LOW PASS RATE OF PROFICIENCY EXAM
Writing Feedbackkbektas - Jun 20, 2014 / lovemylife - Jun 24, 2014
|IELTS Essay: Animal Testing - positive and negative aspects
3 - I appreciate your suggestion :) any way I think there are many different ways to write this kind of...
Writing FeedbackMiaCuthbert - Jun 23, 2014 / MiaCuthbert - Jun 24, 2014
|Ielts: Analysis of shopping complex in Auckland, New Zealand
2 - Hello friend, In writing task 1 is not important to write a conclusion paragraph, but an overview paragraph is...
Writing Feedbackiamchop - Jun 22, 2014 / tiaDS - Jun 23, 2014
|[IELTS] Classmates' impacts on children's performance at school
Writing FeedbackSalMon - Jun 17, 2014 / SalMon - Jun 23, 2014
|[IELTS] proportion of watching television and videos (Australian children)
4 - Everything was tackled appropriately and relevant contrast/comparison was made. However, a conclusion regarding the whole trend would have made...
Writing FeedbacktiaDS - Jun 20, 2014 / hillard214james - Jun 23, 2014
|Knowledge gained from books or from practical experience; compare and contrast
Writing Feedbackmoney123 - May 28, 2014 / hillard214james - Jun 23, 2014
|What you do and what you do not like about your city?
Writing Feedbackrbinods - Jun 22, 2014 / SalMon - Jun 23, 2014
|IELTS Essay Task 2: 'Television / Children' Topic
8 - Hi MiaCuthbert, I think it would be better if you try to refrain from repeating the same words. For...
Writing FeedbackMiaCuthbert - Jun 22, 2014 / hillard214james - Jun 22, 2014
|[IELTS] A large factory built near community. Pros and cons? Your position?
Writing FeedbackSalMon - Jun 8, 2014 / iamchop - Jun 22, 2014
|[IELTS] The new fashion in having careers
3 - Hi salMon, It is indeed quite tricky on how to attack the question since it did not ask anything...
Writing FeedbackSalMon - Jun 22, 2014 / hillard214james - Jun 22, 2014
|IELTS: Online learning or real school? Provide your opinion.
5 - Online learning is good for self-motivated students only; otherwise, they are better off sticking to regular class room and...
Writing Feedbacklewyne - Jun 8, 2014 / Rich Monte - Jun 22, 2014
|Own encouragement, own motivation to get you to the point of graduation.
2 - Going back to college was a difficult decision for me to make. For almost six years I went back...
Writing Feedbacksunserimelissa - Jun 18, 2014 / dumi - Jun 22, 2014
|Topic: Describe learning something from a friend.
4 - Hi dumi, Thank you for sharing your comments. I edit the paragraphs that you wrote and it becomes:...
Writing Feedbackokdeerpass - Jun 15, 2014 / okdeerpass - Jun 22, 2014
|TOEFL IBt Integrated task - decreasing number of sea otter (western coast of US)
2 - However, the lecturer rebuts the author's reasons and asserts that attacks by predators is the most important reasons for...
Writing Feedbackmasih65 - Jun 8, 2014 / dumi - Jun 22, 2014
|IELTS: Working/Traveling between finishing school and starting university?
8 - May be there are some students who do not enjoy any leisure and look forward to completing their...
Writing FeedbackInkjet - Jun 8, 2014 / dumi - Jun 22, 2014
|It is inevitable that as technology develops traditional culture must be lost.
2 - Although lots of people claim that technology and traditions are not compatable,compatible with each other many experts believe that...
Writing Feedbackangelinawang - Jun 16, 2014 / dumi - Jun 22, 2014
|Charts on adult education and costs shared
2 - I found that you forget to attach you graphs. As I am recently practicing IELTS I think you have...
Writing Feedbackkoolsudha - Jun 22, 2014 / Inkjet - Jun 22, 2014
|[IELTS] We should opt for customary music rather than worldwide one
Writing FeedbackSalMon - Jun 18, 2014 / SalMon - Jun 22, 2014
|IELTS - Life in Big Cities Vs People's health
4 - Your essay is quite hard to review because there is no space among paragraphs. In my opinion, this essay...
Writing FeedbackMiaCuthbert - Jun 21, 2014 / tiaDS - Jun 22, 2014
|IELTS: Global music has more positive impacts on humans than traditional music
4 - I think you're confused because both of them are right. After "help", the verb can be V-infinitive/ to-V/...
Writing FeedbackMiaCuthbert - Jun 21, 2014 / MiaCuthbert - Jun 21, 2014
|IELTS: The private motor vehicle improved individual freedom; but it's expensive
6 - Hi, Thanks to Everyone, With your help i understand the structure of the Essay and hook of the...
Writing FeedbackShineStarJoti - Jun 20, 2014 / ShineStarJoti - Jun 21, 2014
|Schools should teach skills? What about values? The purpose of education.
4 - Write first the main TOPIC. I think you better change the structure of your essay. Remove the use of...
Writing Feedbackforouzan - Jun 17, 2014 / niesaysi - Jun 20, 2014
|[IELTS] Increased taxation on petrol and diesel fuel to discourage private cars?
12 - ok thanks :)...
Writing FeedbackSalMon - Jun 7, 2014 / SalMon - Jun 20, 2014
|[IELTS] Should parents be obliged to immunize their vulnerable children?
Writing FeedbackSalMon - Jun 18, 2014 / SalMon - Jun 20, 2014
|Distance learning as a new trend in education
NEW - In today's advanced technology world, students have option to choose whether they want learning in distance by using computer...
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|IELTS Essay: Work or study from home - advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Writing Feedbackrims - Jun 18, 2014 / fikri - Jun 19, 2014
|IELTS: As an international tourist, whether adhere to the local custom or not?
Writing Feedbacklynn11 - Jun 18, 2014 / lynn11 - Jun 19, 2014
|parents were busier in the past - nowadays more of them are involved in their children's education
8 - First, I have a small admin request from you. You should have had a more meaningful title in the...
Writing Feedbackpeyman_np - Jun 6, 2014 / dumi - Jun 19, 2014
|TOEFL: Would you choose your own roommate?
2 - I think you should rewrite these 2 sentences :) They are simple and not quite clear, and maybe...
Writing FeedbackAudi - Jun 18, 2014 / SalMon - Jun 19, 2014
|In many countries there has been increase in social problems involving teens
6 - It is always good to mention the purpose of writing your essay in the title itself. I guess this...
Writing FeedbackSabi Thapaa - Jun 14, 2014 / dumi - Jun 19, 2014
|IELTS: the graph show the number of passenger railway journeys
4 - You need to upload the graph for the reader to have a better understanding about what it presents...
Writing Feedbackiamchop - Jun 6, 2014 / dumi - Jun 19, 2014
|IELTS - The gender issue for getting education needs
Writing Feedbackagienugroho - May 25, 2014 / Henie - Jun 19, 2014
|Grandparents are significant source of experiences; childrens education big role
2 - Well you should combine sentences two make complicated one. For example, you should combine sentence 2 and...
Writing Feedbackreza10977 - Jun 19, 2014 / SalMon - Jun 19, 2014
|IELTS : Police force carries guns - significant impact for level of violence
6 - I recommend you next time pay attention to big mistakes and help suggest as much as possible, this is...
Writing Feedbackthanhphongct1 - Jun 9, 2014 / SalMon - Jun 19, 2014
|[IELTS] Prisons have various purposes
Writing FeedbacktiaDS - Jun 18, 2014 / reza10977 - Jun 19, 2014
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