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|Spending more money in public transportation should be improved early
4 - Therefore, I would argue that governments should categorize issues by putting them in orders, and public transportation should...
Writing Feedbackpe5167 - Jun 20, 2014 / eddies - Jul 25, 2014
|[TOEFL]People who cannot accept the criticism from others will not be successful
3 - the criticism enables youpeople to be aware of others' opinion | other opinions. I prefer using the world...
Writing FeedbackCute Scott - Jun 20, 2014 / eddies - Jul 25, 2014
|IELTS ESSAY; Some people believe that cell phones should be for personal use only
Writing Feedbackdevabe2005 - Jul 24, 2014 / SHanafi - Jul 25, 2014
|IELTS Task 2: permit of women to run career in army must be supported
Writing FeedbackMisnariah Idrus - Jul 12, 2014 / eddies - Jul 25, 2014
|IELTS Task 2. Where Talent Comes From
Writing FeedbackMisnariah Idrus - Jun 18, 2014 / eddies - Jul 25, 2014
|Oil discovery has been most beneficial for people in Iran
6 - We are very grateful to an abundant oil supply given by the almighty. It effects the future nation...
Writing Feedbacksomi - Jul 2, 2014 / SHanafi - Jul 25, 2014
|Most people believe that adult should provide all child demands, because they not are independent
Writing Feedbackhamedmas - Jul 23, 2014 / eddies - Jul 24, 2014
|4 types of landfill waste in Molovia, Bratistan, Atlantis, Senia and Vatania
Writing FeedbackHang Le - Jun 11, 2014 / eddies - Jul 24, 2014
|TOEFL: If young children did not get in touch with technology, their creation would not develop
4 - Write a concluding signal, like: In conclusion,... This is important to show that you will end your essay....
Writing FeedbackDearbhailS - Jul 24, 2014 / eddies - Jul 24, 2014
|TOEFL: 'career preparation' - reasons why people attend to schools
6 - a subject and verb agreement. Write: These universities play | The university plays write: a library...
Writing Feedbackbrisky - Jun 4, 2014 / eddies - Jul 24, 2014
|IELTS Writing Task 1: Life cycle of silkworm and production of silk cloth
2 - You should have followed this approach ...> Introduction, Overview and Detailed paras :) I can see your introduction,...
Writing Feedbackzoomikag - Jul 23, 2014 / Pahan - Jul 24, 2014
|Most important characteristic of a good teacher?
3 - You better include the full prompt in your post for us to get a better understanding as to what...
Writing Feedbackashkannaghib - Jul 24, 2014 / dumi - Jul 24, 2014
|[TOEFL] Sometimes we have to do something for others which are not interesting for us
5 - It is not good to work in other pressure.Nobody can be happy when they follow other and go against...
Writing Feedbackhamedmas - Jul 24, 2014 / poudelmelina - Jul 24, 2014
|Vehicle has enhanced people being. However, cars harm nature.
3 - First of all, there are few researches worry about influence transport on nature. They show that...
Writing FeedbackHappyman - Jul 22, 2014 / sundin928 - Jul 24, 2014
|'We should acknowledge and use most suitable methods of learning' - Books vs Experience?
3 - well, I changed it to: We can learn and gain knowledge with different methods, such as reading a...
Writing Feedbackhirt_01 - Jul 22, 2014 / hirt_01 - Jul 23, 2014
|More and more people now choose to wear the fashionable clothes.
2 - negative- The more and more people get "trendy", the greater the expectations in what clothes you should wear increases....
Writing Feedbacksundin928 - Jul 23, 2014 / louisa216 - Jul 23, 2014
|"I AM NOT A MERE TEACHER" - creative essay
3 - thanks for correcting me on the digressions. n a cat means continuous assessment test... it's quite common in my...
Writing Feedbackdchege711 - Jul 17, 2014 / dchege711 - Jul 23, 2014
|We are always told that money is the most fundamental if one wants to make his own living
Writing FeedbackFor a voy - Jul 22, 2014 / For a voy - Jul 23, 2014
|People should be aware of health risks - dramatic increase in fast food consuming
4 - What is the purpose of writing this essay? Is it for IELTS, TOEFL? Mention the purpose in the title...
Writing FeedbackHaiha - Jul 12, 2014 / dumi - Jul 23, 2014
|IELTS writing 1: meat and poultry consumption
2 - The line graph comparespresents the per capita consumption of different meat items, namely beef, pork, brollersbroilers and turkey in...
Writing FeedbackStarSea - Jul 23, 2014 / dumi - Jul 23, 2014
|IELTS: In which areas people made important progress?
6 - Today,the role of English as a global language is indispensable.Some people are of the pointview that we can implementintroduce...
Writing Feedbacksundin928 - Jul 19, 2014 / dumi - Jul 23, 2014
|SAT - "happiness is not something that happens to us after we get what we want"
4 - Impressive start :) It seems to be something close at hand yetor sometimes far away from our grasp....
Writing Feedbacklittleting - Jul 9, 2014 / dumi - Jul 23, 2014
|'Europe had degraded most of its land' - three regions of the world during 1990's
2 - First, you need to upload the charts in to the thread for us to provide you with more meaningful...
Writing Feedbackkashaf - Jul 22, 2014 / dumi - Jul 22, 2014
|IELTS: 'food, drink and tobacco' - statistic of expenditure graph
3 - Yes, your approach seems to be fine with me too - Introduction, Overview ( overall idea of the...
Writing Feedbackxizon7777 - Jul 22, 2014 / dumi - Jul 22, 2014
|IELTS Air travel is becoming more welcomed by common people since its price is going down
Writing Feedbacksundin928 - Jul 21, 2014 / msarkar - Jul 22, 2014
|Toefl writing is my weakness, hope you can help me, the question is written in the message.
Writing FeedbackDearbhailS - Jul 19, 2014 / Pahan - Jul 22, 2014
|In order to avoid social crisis we should treat the elders with a courteous attitude
3 - This sentence has a few issues :( Here you assume that the reader knows the topic. However, the...
Writing Feedbacksundin928 - Jul 22, 2014 / dumi - Jul 22, 2014
|Writing task 2: studying overseas can be difficult at first, but gaining experience make it worth it
7 - Your prompt is directly asking you about the opinion you hold on this issue. So, it is better...
Writing FeedbackTranAnh - Jul 18, 2014 / dumi - Jul 22, 2014
|TOEFL essay, living in big cities or living in small towns; the Article
Writing FeedbackBasilMostafa - Jul 18, 2014 / dumi - Jul 22, 2014
|IELTS: Effects of technology to communication - dangers for a society
7 - In the past, the method of communication was pretty straightforward. .... good start :) If you want to...
Writing Feedbackbmomongan - Jul 19, 2014 / dumi - Jul 22, 2014
|IELTS Easy for poor people to get access to university education
Writing Feedbacksundin928 - Jul 21, 2014 / dumi - Jul 22, 2014
|Long period of studying will make students feel bored and limit their self-study
Writing Feedbackwulishiyanzl - Jul 7, 2014 / wulishiyanzl - Jul 22, 2014
|IELTS : Everyone possess a talent - we should recognize it and improve
Writing Feedbackxizon7777 - Jul 22, 2014 / sundin928 - Jul 22, 2014
|Fast food is cheap and convenient therefore has positive impact on human eating habits
3 - Good introduction ... You have good writing skills :) I wish you shortened this sentence. Your point...
Writing Feedbackiamchop - Jul 17, 2014 / dumi - Jul 22, 2014
|TOEFL: extraordinarily cautious is important since rough work is intolerable
Writing FeedbackAndreawqh - Jul 18, 2014 / dumi - Jul 22, 2014
|An increasing amount of students have negative attitude of learning. Why is this happening?
Writing Feedbackstephy7658 - Jul 21, 2014 / sundin928 - Jul 22, 2014
|The line graph: Migration Statistics in UK
3 - Well, this is a task that aims at assessing your report writing skills and therefore you need to...
Writing FeedbackVihuynh - Jul 7, 2014 / dumi - Jul 22, 2014
|What are the reasons behind lack of facilities &services for disabled population?
3 - We see many people with physical and mental disabilities and live in pathetic conditions. In fact, the recent statistical...
Writing FeedbackRUSHABH - Jun 5, 2014 / dumi - Jul 22, 2014
|IELTS: we should not ignore the traditional food; fast foods need be supervised
5 - .... that too has some grammar issues. These are few sentences I suggest ; There is a growing...
Writing Feedbacksundin928 - Jul 16, 2014 / dumi - Jul 22, 2014
|Fixed punishments for crimes may improve the efficiency, decrease the crime rate
Writing Feedbackkevin1983 - Jul 16, 2014 / stephy7658 - Jul 22, 2014
|International aid is a must but also it is required to operate in the right way
4 - not only is the international aid is indispensable but also it is required to be operated in the rightappropriate...
Writing Feedbackgunyes - Jun 16, 2014 / eddies - Jul 21, 2014
|[IELTS] 'Long-term positive effects of culture' - should tourist obey local customs and behaviors?
6 - You have an excellent writing structure, excellent writing skill, perfect accuracy of collocation (lexical resources). As usual, I really...
Writing FeedbackSalMon - Jul 18, 2014 / tiaDS - Jul 21, 2014
|IELTS: Too much freedom for children affected their studies
2 - I like yoru approach towards the intorduction. However, I wish you removed the last line as it is...
Writing Feedbackdevabe2005 - Jul 21, 2014 / dumi - Jul 21, 2014
|Number of languages in the world and its impact on global safety
4 - You should have mentioned the purpose of writing this essay, for example - IELTS, TOEFL etc., in the title...
Writing FeedbackVihuynh - Jun 9, 2014 / dumi - Jul 21, 2014
|Payment is very vital factor to consider while choose employer
Writing Feedbackhk_apm789 - Jul 2, 2014 / dumi - Jul 21, 2014
|"Bangla" - workers from Bangladesh in Malaysia
3 - 'Bangla' is one of the common descriptions we use to describe foreign construction workers in Malaysia, irrespective if they...
Writing FeedbackCycy - Jul 2, 2014 / dumi - Jul 21, 2014
|Nowadays, there is an ever increasing amount of noise in our everyday lives. Reasons and solutions
3 - I guess you have written this essay for IELTS or TOEFL preparation. It is good if you mention that...
Writing Feedbackstephy7658 - Jul 21, 2014 / dumi - Jul 21, 2014
|Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems.
3 - Hello Divya, Your writing is impressive and especially in introduction paragraph which depicts that you have great writing skill....
Writing FeedbackDIVYA RAJKUMAR - Jul 20, 2014 / tiaDS - Jul 21, 2014
|Toefl essay: advertisements whose target is young children should be banned
Writing FeedbackDearbhailS - Jul 20, 2014 / dumi - Jul 21, 2014
|Ielts: The world has seen an enormous increase in flights for leisure, business
5 - I think the reasons for both sides are not very good. And I think you should expand the ideas....
Writing Feedbackiamchop - Jun 24, 2014 / stephy7658 - Jul 21, 2014
|IELTS - Celebrities & Their Influences
5 - As a result, to become a star and an inspiration for people, a person need to have real talent...
Writing Feedbackicebeating - Jun 27, 2014 / kevin1983 - Jul 20, 2014
|The chart shows vast difference in the level of skilled vocational diploma
Writing Feedbackpranesh - Jul 17, 2014 / pranesh - Jul 20, 2014
|keep equal number of man and woman to show the respect for both genders
Writing Feedbacksky1997 - Jul 20, 2014 / Pahan - Jul 20, 2014
|TOEFL: An effective leader tries to make others feel they are part of the decision-making process.
Writing Feedbackjyong101 - Jul 18, 2014 / jyong101 - Jul 20, 2014
|IELTS: Technological progress in the past century has its negative effect, despite its remarkable
3 - level of living. health care standards. On the other hand, the development of technology is brings some...
Writing Feedbackdigitalidea - Jul 18, 2014 / heythere11 - Jul 20, 2014
|[IELTS TASK 2] Several languages die out in the world
Writing FeedbacktiaDS - Jun 23, 2014 / eddies - Jul 20, 2014
|Technological improvement has always two sides, benefits and drawbacks
5 - Some vocabularies and sentences interrupt the flow. You need a concluding signal. This is strictly necessary, you know....
Writing FeedbackSHanafi - Jul 17, 2014 / eddies - Jul 20, 2014
|IELTS ESSAY; companies and other organisations are requiring their employees to wear a uniform
2 - Hi, devaraj This is called shopping listing unfortunately, it indicates laziness. As far as I read the...
Writing Feedbackdevabe2005 - Jul 18, 2014 / SHanafi - Jul 20, 2014
|TOEFL - automobiles have changed our lives
3 - In my personal view automobiles are the ones that have brought have a new era of transportation. Yes... I...
Writing Feedbackshreyansh13 - Jun 27, 2014 / dumi - Jul 20, 2014
|[IELTS] The role of parents and school in teaching children
2 - Firstly, parents have major influence on children's behaviour, especially when they are 3-to 5-years-olds.very young. Children, by...
Writing Feedbacktoanci - Jun 28, 2014 / dumi - Jul 20, 2014
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