|Writing Feedback [23,062] - page 242 of 385|
|Ielts: Libraries should not waste their money on hi-tech media. Agree or disagree?
6 - Thanks for your suggestion! If I didn't sum up my ideas in the conclusion, should I give some recommendations...
Writing FeedbackMisterWandering - Jun 24, 2013 / MisterWandering - Jun 25, 2013
|IELTS; Why attend Universities or Colleges? Specific reasons and examples
5 - I think you should change this sentence a bit: I believe that career preparation is the main reason...
Writing Feedbacksalmah1997 - Jun 18, 2013 / MisterWandering - Jun 24, 2013
|Ielts Task 1: Imprisonment levels in 5 countries
Writing FeedbackMisterWandering - Jun 23, 2013 / MisterWandering - Jun 24, 2013
|Talent vs Training - Talent is more important!
5 - Your essay structure definitely needs improvement. Seems like you have two conclusion paragraphs, you have a paragraph with a...
Writing FeedbackAnnaLimetta - Jun 5, 2013 / gmad06 - Jun 24, 2013
|What's more useful: purchasing a business or a house?
6 - I think you can get a better structure for this essay if you could share some insights also on...
Writing FeedbackMabossani - Jun 21, 2013 / gmad06 - Jun 24, 2013
|IELTS; Consumer durables(telephone,refrigerator,etc)owned inBritain
4 - The rate of people using this item fluctuated between 93% to 98% during the period Refrigerator...
Writing Feedbacklytetdi - Jun 21, 2013 / dumi - Jun 24, 2013
|IELTs---competition is much more importance than cooperation in school. do you agree?
Writing FeedbackKjerry - Jun 24, 2013 / MisterWandering - Jun 24, 2013
|Ielts: The cement and concrete making process
11 - I see. I guessed I could add a sentence about the fire to supplement the preceded sentence. Thank...
Writing FeedbackMisterWandering - Jun 14, 2013 / MisterWandering - Jun 24, 2013
|Compare and Contrast: Two kinds of transportation/ DRIVING & FLYING
Writing Feedbackastuart - Jun 8, 2013 / Pahan - Jun 24, 2013
|IELTS:Why Do People Feel Isolated from Each Other and what are the solutions?
3 - .... yes of course.... great start! .... How about introverts? They love isolation and do not...
Writing FeedbackYasir1994 - Jun 12, 2013 / Pahan - Jun 24, 2013
|Young adults are full of dreams and passion about their future. Do they need more independence?
Writing Feedbackdeepi - Jun 12, 2013 / Pahan - Jun 24, 2013
|IELTS: International travel brings more benefits than its de-merits
5 - .... You need to attend to grammar, but with practice you'll be alright. Follow the corrections suggested by...
Writing Feedbackellie_lcl - Jun 23, 2013 / Pahan - Jun 24, 2013
|TOEFL: Studying at home or at traditional school?
3 - Hi MisterWandering, I made a few revisions and here's what this sentence means. However, students can...
Writing FeedbackXiaokai Jin - Jun 24, 2013 / Xiaokai Jin - Jun 24, 2013
|Reason why you want to buy carbon filter comforter mask
3 - ...it's good if you can improve clarity of this line; [i]The industrial enviroments are often polluted by noise,...
Writing Feedbacklespeed - Jun 20, 2013 / dumi - Jun 24, 2013
|IELTS: Select 3 effective media and write about their effectiveness
3 - .... The media is a "catch-all" term which caters to any type of activity whether it involves current...
Writing Feedbackwinny239 - Jun 23, 2013 / dumi - Jun 23, 2013
|IELTS: Many people are busy with work and not enough time for famliy
Writing Feedbackellie_lcl - Jun 19, 2013 / MisterWandering - Jun 23, 2013
|IELTS: business and financial grew noticeably and become the most advanced area
3 - -> ... the UK in the twentieth century -> business and financial services grew/developed the most...
Writing Feedbackshinichi75 - Jun 21, 2013 / MisterWandering - Jun 23, 2013
|"fine for driving through the red signal" - FUNNY STORY
Writing FeedbackiBoris96 - Jun 6, 2013 / dumi - Jun 23, 2013
|GRE: Analyze an arguement; Wearing a helmet while bicycling
4 - No---in this case you're just telling me what the assumption is. You haven't yet commented on why...
Writing Feedbackshadman19922 - Jun 22, 2013 / jkjeremy - Jun 23, 2013
|RACE! What is race? What does your race mean?
Writing Feedbackschool1st - Jun 23, 2013 / dumi - Jun 23, 2013
|Cyber-bullying occurs when one party harasses another on-line
2 - For the most part I like this. If only there were fewer instances of the words "cyber" and "bullying,"...
Writing Feedbackpacers7ind - Jun 22, 2013 / jkjeremy - Jun 22, 2013
|SOCIETY;children are to be great fellows or not depend on learning and good idol
2 - ... This is confusing ... It does not convey your idea properly... You need to re-phrase this to...
Writing Feedbackbmtcute - Jun 6, 2013 / dumi - Jun 22, 2013
|World is like a small village and people, especially students, decide to go abroad for study
Writing FeedbackHabib Rastegar - Jun 6, 2013 / dumi - Jun 22, 2013
|Technological advancement hamper the development of a country's traditional skills?
Writing FeedbackAslanbek - Jun 22, 2013 / jkjeremy - Jun 22, 2013
|'Thank you God for those gifts' - friendship essay
Writing Feedbackjole - Jun 7, 2013 / jkjeremy - Jun 22, 2013
|MY THOUGHTS ABOUT WRITING HAS NEVER BEEN FUN, FAST OR EASY; Reflective essay
Writing Feedbackschool1st - Jun 21, 2013 / school1st - Jun 21, 2013
|Human activity is harmful to the existance of earth; what's your opinion?
Writing Feedbackkvant - Jun 21, 2013 / kvant - Jun 21, 2013
|Let various boards maintain their autonomy in preparing curriculum
7 - Our country is developing and step by step becomes a civilization country where the vast majority of people are...
Writing Feedbackrohan4819 - Jun 20, 2013 / chiphan38 - Jun 21, 2013
|IELTS TASK1:Complain letter for wrong information on a product's AD
4 - Yes, this has some grammar errors that have been already highlighted by others and the fixes have been...
Writing Feedbackgmad06 - Jun 20, 2013 / dumi - Jun 21, 2013
|IELTS; CHANGE or ROUTINE LIFESTYLE? Which one is better?
6 - Instead of: 1-The social environment in which we live changes daily,so that some people try to keep pace...
Writing Feedbackorxan88 - Jun 19, 2013 / scorpiontahir02 - Jun 21, 2013
|Books and experience - rate my essay for TOEFL iBT
Writing Feedbacklucky_boy - Jun 20, 2013 / jkjeremy - Jun 20, 2013
|Nowadays big cities in many countries become overcrowded. Why? Give some reasons
Writing FeedbackSrikanthan89 - Jun 5, 2013 / Srikanthan89 - Jun 20, 2013
|IELTS TASK2:Reward or punishment for a good behavior?
Writing Feedbackgmad06 - Jun 18, 2013 / gmad06 - Jun 19, 2013
|IELTS; Gender equality should be exercised in universities?
3 - .... Good opening. However, I feel they need fair treatment irrespective of which era they live in. There...
Writing Feedbackjenny90 - Jun 18, 2013 / dumi - Jun 19, 2013
|IELTS; Leisure time is for improving mind or resting mind?
Writing Feedbackmario_nagi - Jun 19, 2013 / ellie_lcl - Jun 19, 2013
|What's more important? Roads or public transport?
Writing FeedbackMabossani - Jun 19, 2013 / Mabossani - Jun 19, 2013
|I'll move; my city is not capable to provide job vacancies for young specialists
Writing Feedbackkvant - Jun 18, 2013 / jkjeremy - Jun 19, 2013
|My trip to a nice and unusual village!
2 - ..."gO to new places" is implied by the word "traveling".... so itsounds redundant. I love to travel because...
Writing Feedbackvahidbm - Jun 19, 2013 / dumi - Jun 19, 2013
|IELTS; Business letter explaining the reasons why I want to be away from work
5 - It is not required but it is good to have at least two sentences in your first paragraph. You...
Writing Feedbackmario_nagi - Jun 17, 2013 / gmad06 - Jun 19, 2013
|IELTS TASK2:learning to play a music instrument is a waste of time
Writing Feedbackgmad06 - Jun 17, 2013 / jkjeremy - Jun 19, 2013
|IELTS; İnformation about USA marriage and divorce rates
Writing Feedbackorxan88 - Jun 14, 2013 / orxan88 - Jun 19, 2013
|Grade this GRE issue essay task out of 6.. feel free to point out any mistake
6 - This can be true. However, if I don't know my multiplication tables, should I be teaching arithmetic (let...
Writing FeedbackNilanjana - Jun 17, 2013 / jkjeremy - Jun 18, 2013
|Being afraid of changing can make people conservative and less interesting than others.
Writing Feedbackshinichi75 - Jun 15, 2013 / shinichi75 - Jun 18, 2013
|Students should find the field they are interested in and contribute to it.
4 - .... Start sentences with capital letters. It's difficult for others to identify your sentences when you present...
Writing Feedbackjemmy - Jun 3, 2013 / dumi - Jun 18, 2013
|Report- The number of vehicles crossing the Waterloo Bridge.
Writing Feedbackxucoi - Jun 15, 2013 / xucoi - Jun 18, 2013
|'uniformity in the educational system'; one national curriculum for students
Writing Feedbackretro13 - Jun 17, 2013 / retro13 - Jun 18, 2013
|IELTS; Teachers would not be need anymore in the classroom as a result of computers
4 - Hi Kjerry Pay attention to preposition,vocabulary and spelling. Read some articles and books. the way we...
Writing FeedbackKjerry - Jun 17, 2013 / gmad06 - Jun 17, 2013
|GRE Analytic Writing; Should student study the same National Curriculum ?
4 - Don't make a list of points in your introduction. High school teachers (and teachers of all kinds) are wrong...
Writing Feedbackshadman19922 - Jun 17, 2013 / jkjeremy - Jun 17, 2013
|'censorhip'; Creative artists should have freedom to express their views
3 - .... It's not just last decades... Even in ancient times, the artists used to talk to their people...
Writing Feedbackdragosp - Jun 17, 2013 / dumi - Jun 17, 2013
|Minimum Legal Drinking Age 21 & why it should stay there
Writing Feedbackls2ws6 - Jun 1, 2013 / dumi - Jun 17, 2013
|Mind is very vulnerable and fragile; Death and the Maiden / Visual Essay
Writing Feedbackomid_sarox - Jun 17, 2013 / jkjeremy - Jun 17, 2013
|IELTS TASK1:Letter to a friend visiting your country
Writing Feedbackgmad06 - Jun 16, 2013 / gmad06 - Jun 17, 2013
|Topic: "Which is a better place to live - a small town or a big?"
3 - There are many advantages and disadvantages tothat one would experience by living in a big city or small town....
Writing FeedbackLokiWolfChilde - Jun 16, 2013 / dumi - Jun 17, 2013
|Nature Vs Nurture; What is more important? Inborn characteristics or Experience?
Writing Feedbackdido272000 - Jun 17, 2013 / dumi - Jun 17, 2013
|Frederick II: Astonishment of the World or Blasphemous Beast of the Apocalypse?
Writing FeedbackRegathion - Jun 6, 2013 / drodriguez_38 - Jun 16, 2013
|The eating habits and lifestyle change of the new generation.
Writing FeedbackLady Elle - Jun 10, 2013 / jkjeremy - Jun 16, 2013
|IELTS; Certain professionals are not paid well for their services; Do you agree?
2 - .... this has happened and still continue to happen. So write it in present tense; It is true...
Writing Feedbackerni - May 18, 2013 / Pahan - Jun 16, 2013
|Where would you prefer to live? Small town or Big city; existence of facilities'
3 - this is grammatically wrong. Have a look; Furthermore, living in a big town is easy and convenient ...or...
Writing FeedbackHabib Rastegar - Jun 12, 2013 / Pahan - Jun 16, 2013
|St Augustine was the first individual who read silentlz; A silent force
4 - There was a legend called St Augustine and he was the first individual who read less aloud, as...
Writing FeedbackDHuong - Jun 2, 2013 / Pahan - Jun 16, 2013
|IETLS; Should government spend money on preserving language? YES
Writing Feedbackwzncx - Jun 12, 2013 / dumi - Jun 16, 2013
|Home / Writing Feedback|