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|[IELTS TASK 2] Advantages and disadvantages of genetically-modified foods
Writing Feedbackphamhieu98 - Jun 23, 2019 / phamhieu98 - Jun 25, 2019
|IELTS Task 2- Developed and developing nations should both combat climate change
Writing FeedbackKatherine_Tu1101 - Jun 23, 2019 / Katherine_Tu1101 - Jun 25, 2019
|Animal experiments to develop new medicines and to test the safety of other products
Writing Feedbacksandyhsu - Jun 23, 2019 / Maria - Jun 23, 2019
|The bar chart illustrates the proportion of overweight men and women in Australia
2 - @myronpage Hi there! Welcome to the forum. I'll provide you with feedback on your writing. Firstly, I...
Writing Feedbackmyronpage - Jun 22, 2019 / Maria - Jun 23, 2019
|Reasons affecting farmland degradation over the world
2 - @LUNA94 Hello there. First and foremost, I highly recommend that you try to be more concise with your...
Writing FeedbackLUNA94 - Jun 22, 2019 / Maria - Jun 23, 2019
|The price of 800 grams of four kinds of bread in a particular European country
4 - @Sangdoan Hello there! Welcome to the forum. Firstly, try to use words that would help you compress...
Writing FeedbackSangdoan - Jun 22, 2019 / Maria - Jun 25, 2019
|IELTS task 1: pie charts about the average percentages of nutrients
3 - Hi, I personal think that your first and second paragraph can be combined as the first paragraph. ...
Writing Feedbackoneouran - Jun 22, 2019 / LUNA94 - Jun 22, 2019
|Room for Improvement - Rhetorical Essay Comparison and Contrast
2 - @Martinez1011 Hello there! Let me do my best to provide you with substantial feedback on your essay. ...
Writing FeedbackMartinez1011 - Jun 21, 2019 / Maria - Jun 23, 2019
|IELTS TASK 1: A BAR CHART SHOWS IRRITANTS FOR THEATER-GOERS
4 - @thaley Hi there! Firstly, try minimizing the usage of words that are unnecessary. I repeatedly mention this to...
Writing Feedbackthaley - Jun 21, 2019 / Maria - Jun 25, 2019
|IELTS Part II: Should we invest in science education only for the country development.
Writing Feedbackvietcti - Jun 20, 2019 / vietcti - Jun 22, 2019
|Task 1 about the proportion of consumer expenditures on different categories
Writing FeedbackThangnguyen315 - Jun 20, 2019 / Thangnguyen315 - Jun 20, 2019
|Positive & Negative to actions to effect environment
Writing Feedbackyennhi2010 - Jun 20, 2019 / vietcti - Jun 20, 2019
|The pie charts below compare 2 years in terms of online sale in retail sectors in Canada
Writing Feedbacknochu307 - Jun 20, 2019 / nochu307 - Jun 21, 2019
|IELTS Writing Part II: Essay about the positive and negative development of tourism in some country
Writing Feedbackvietcti - Jun 19, 2019 / vietcti - Jun 20, 2019
|Genetically modified food as a new solution to agriculture productivity
2 - @baonguyen Hello there! I see that you're new here. Welcome to the forum! I hope you find feedback...
Writing Feedbackbaonguyen - Jun 19, 2019 / Maria - Jun 19, 2019
|What is better: academic or vocational education?
2 - @suong1510 Hi there! Good luck with your exam in October. I'll provide you with feedback on your writing....
Writing Feedbacksuong1510 - Jun 19, 2019 / Maria - Jun 19, 2019
|IELTS- parents give more freedom to children nowadays
3 - @Jipsa Jadwani Hi there! First and foremost, ensure that you would have clarity in the delivery of your...
Writing FeedbackJipsa Jadwani - Jun 19, 2019 / Maria - Jun 19, 2019
|The bar chart illustrates the age distribution of Australians who did regular physical activity
Writing Feedbacknthao9987 - Jun 19, 2019 / nthao9987 - Jun 20, 2019
|Pie charts showing data on British students speaking additional languages
4 - @Maria Hi Mara, Thank you very much for your constructive feedback! It helps a lot. I really appreciate...
Writing FeedbackTruc02 - Jun 19, 2019 / Truc02 - Jun 20, 2019
|Should be any financial concession made for people who take option for private schools education?
Writing Feedbacktiffanyvietnam - Jun 19, 2019 / tiffanyvietnam - Jun 20, 2019
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2: a general thesis that salary is the most vital element of a job
NEW - Question: When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extend do you agree or...
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|Wearing company's uniforms - share your opinion
Writing FeedbackHanNguyen0510 - Jun 18, 2019 / Maria - Jun 18, 2019
|Task 1: Table about the annual expenditure of college students
Writing FeedbackThangnguyen315 - Jun 18, 2019 / Kate22 - Jun 19, 2019
|IELTS TASK 2: CARE ABOUT ANIMAL EXTINCTION OR HUMAN'S PROBLEM? DISSCUSS AND GIVE YOUR OWN OPINION.
4 - @Dang Khoa Hi there! Thanks for being a consistent, active participant in the forum. Let me try my...
Writing FeedbackDang Khoa - Jun 18, 2019 / Maria - Jun 20, 2019
|The graph shows the proportion of people visiting 4 destinations in Brighton - period of 1980 & 2010
2 - I think you have a problem in this sentence: ... people going to pier ... Moreover, if you can...
Writing FeedbackMiAnnn - Jun 18, 2019 / DiepVu - Jun 18, 2019
|The chart reveals the data about global sales of IT products (2000 - 2003)
Writing Feedbackmphuonggg - Jun 17, 2019 / mphuonggg - Jun 19, 2019
|Task 2 Ielts: having a single career or having several careers
3 - Remember that u should write the prompt of the essay so the readers can easily check and correct it...
Writing FeedbackDiepVu - Jun 17, 2019 / Dang Khoa - Jun 18, 2019
|Write your profile for the website of a club you belong to.
Writing Feedbacksossos010101 - Jun 17, 2019 / dodquynh - Jun 17, 2019
|IELTS essay Task 1 on Water usage in different areas in the world
3 - @dodquynh Hi there! Next time, it would be beneficial if you could provide the graph alongside your post...
Writing Feedbackdodquynh - Jun 17, 2019 / Maria - Jun 20, 2019
|Different approaches when it comes to investing in building transport facility
3 - Hi there, Your grammar and word usage are quite proper. However, there are some points that I found in...
Writing Feedbackdodquynh - Jun 17, 2019 / HanNguyen0510 - Jun 18, 2019
|IELTS: When designing, the use of a building is the most important, rather than appearance.
5 - @Maria Your comments have been always useful, thank you very much. It was a difficult topic to write, I'll...
Writing Feedbackmanhmoc - Jun 16, 2019 / manhmoc - Jun 19, 2019
|Investing on the arts is a waste of money - Agree or disagree?
3 - @nguyenvuong Hello there. Let me provide you with feedback on your writing. Firstly, I recommend that you try...
Writing Feedbacknguyenvuong - Jun 16, 2019 / Maria - Jun 20, 2019
|Task 2 - In the past, knowledge was stored on books. Now, knowledge is stored on the internet.
Writing Feedbackacynguyen0909 - Jun 16, 2019 / nguyenvuong - Jun 16, 2019
|IELTS TASK 2 Essay about the best way to tackle environmental problems
4 - Hello, Your essay is very well written. The only thing I would comment about is the amount of...
Writing FeedbackThangnguyen315 - Jun 16, 2019 / nguyenvuong - Jun 16, 2019
|IELTS TASK 2: Whether working for one or several places
2 - Dear you, I think you should start your conclusion by using other phrases like: To conclude, In conclusion rather...
Writing FeedbackKatherine_Tu1101 - Jun 16, 2019 / Thangnguyen315 - Jun 16, 2019
|An increase in bad behaviors, poor discipline and anti-social behaviors in schools
2 - Dear, Overall, it's quite a good essay. However, I think you can add more contents in the first...
Writing Feedbackmaria4506 - Jun 16, 2019 / Katherine_Tu1101 - Jun 16, 2019
|Encouraging the young people to live alone - is it a good idea?
3 - @solivagant Hello there. First and foremost, try to ensure that the language you are using in your articulation...
Writing Feedbacksolivagant - Jun 15, 2019 / Maria - Jun 20, 2019
|IELTS writing T2: living in a small family unit or building an extended family?
2 - @nguyenvuong Hello there! I think that, for the most part, your essay is nicely well-written. You were able...
Writing Feedbacknguyenvuong - Jun 15, 2019 / Maria - Jun 15, 2019
|Task 1: Development of Chorleywood village from the nineteenth to the twentieth century
2 - @DiepVu Hello there! I'll try my best to provide you with feedback on your writing. First and...
Writing FeedbackDiepVu - Jun 15, 2019 / Maria - Jun 15, 2019
|Universities should provide easier access to poor people or people from rural areas who want study
Writing Feedbackarceus28 - Jun 15, 2019 / maria4506 - Jun 16, 2019
|IELTS Task 2: Should people live alone or share accommodation with others?
5 - Hi guy, I would like to contribute some comments on your article. The arguments and ideas you...
Writing Feedbackcoke - Jun 15, 2019 / acynguyen0909 - Jun 16, 2019
|IELTS TASK 2: Watching TV is a waste of time. Agree or disagree?
2 - @Dang Khoa Hello! Firstly, be cautious of the formatting and structure of your sentences. While you attempt to...
Writing FeedbackDang Khoa - Jun 15, 2019 / Maria - Jun 15, 2019
|TASK 1 ( IELTS ACADEMIC ) Outokumpu companies share price - LINE GRAPH
3 - @MiAnnn Hi there! Welcome to the forum. I'll try to provide you with feedback on your essay. ...
Writing FeedbackMiAnnn - Jun 15, 2019 / Maria - Jun 15, 2019
|Task 2 - Townsfolk either live alone or in small family units, rather than in large family groups
Writing Feedbackacynguyen0909 - Jun 15, 2019 / acynguyen0909 - Jun 16, 2019
|Task 2- Foreign learning: advantages and disadvantages of studying abroad in the developed countries
6 - @Maria Thank for your feedback. It is so useful and a lot of great words and grammatical clause structure...
Writing FeedbackMinhAnh - Jun 15, 2019 / MinhAnh - Jun 16, 2019
|Some people believe that the only purpose of films are entertain - what about education?
Writing FeedbackDangKhoaBui - Jun 14, 2019 / acynguyen0909 - Jun 15, 2019
|IELTS 2 - Fair Judgement - the best way to reduce crime is by giving longer prison?
3 - Hi guy, I think a thesis statement should be written in the opening paragraph. Your essay will be...
Writing Feedbacknguyenvuong - Jun 14, 2019 / acynguyen0909 - Jun 15, 2019
|Increasing travel between countries enable people to learn different cultures or increase tension
3 - @murph Hi there! Try adding more dynamism to your writing through incorporating a more structured and yet complex...
Writing Feedbackmurph - Jun 14, 2019 / Maria - Jun 28, 2019
|IELTS TASK 1: Marriage Statistics of 8 countries in 2 different years
3 - Thx @nguyenvuong, i just realise that run-one sentence is quite good if we add them, it makes our essay...
Writing FeedbackDang Khoa - Jun 14, 2019 / Dang Khoa - Jun 15, 2019
|IN MODERN WORLD, THE IMAGE IS BECOMING A MORE POWERFUL WAY OF COMMUNICATING THAN THE WRITTEN WORD
NEW - Hello¡ I am applying to a College program in Canada, and how English is not my first language, I...
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|Percentage of Australian population who did exercises regularly in 2010
2 - @mynhung as i know about task 1, you must reach 150 words at least. the first problem is that...
Writing Feedbackmynhung - Jun 13, 2019 / Hammy - Jun 13, 2019
|IELTS WRITING TASK 1 - DESCRIBING THE DATA FROM TABLE
3 - @Wendynguyen803 Hi there! Let me try to provide a substantial feedback for your essay. First and foremost,...
Writing FeedbackWendynguyen803 - Jun 13, 2019 / Maria - Jun 19, 2019
|IELTS TASK 2 - Children spend time playing computer
Writing Feedbackacynguyen0909 - Jun 13, 2019 / acynguyen0909 - Jun 14, 2019
|Pictures - Describe the cutting tools
Writing Feedbackbuiminhese - Jun 13, 2019 / Dang Khoa - Jun 15, 2019
|The percentage of national expenditure on three different categories of products and services
Writing Feedbackphamtruongueh - Jun 12, 2019 / phamtruongueh - Jun 12, 2019
|IELTS Writing Task 2: Is global warming real and should we spend time debating other social issues?
2 - @tplinh Hello there. First and foremost, try to optimize your essay through merging altogether lines that are quite...
Writing Feedbacktplinh - Jun 12, 2019 / Maria - Jun 12, 2019
|Sport activities and universities should be given the same amount of money?
Writing Feedbackcauchysang - Jun 12, 2019 / cauchysang - Jun 12, 2019
|Writing task 2: education is expensive - funding
5 - I think your ideas are good, and you should reduce redundant words to make your voice stronger. But I...
Writing Feedbackyuanyuan123 - Jun 11, 2019 / suong1510 - Jun 19, 2019
|Which of the following qualities is most important to you: a) cleanliness b) humorous c) politeness
2 - @areis4ud Hello there. Firstly, I recommend that you optimize your sentences. Evade using lines that do not contribute...
Writing Feedbackareis4ud - Jun 11, 2019 / Maria - Jun 12, 2019
|IELTS Writing Task 1: Percentage of employment - adults employed in seven sectors
3 - Hello! Although your structure is good, I would suggest taking optimizing imprecise words/phrases, as @Maria said. Another way...
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