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|Classification of schooling subjects has always cast doubt on numerous educators
2 - Your overall essay does not properly respond to the prompt requirement which is: Subjects such as Art, Sport...
Writing FeedbackMindfulIELTS - Jul 28, 2020 / Holt - Jul 28, 2020
|More funds to science education rather than other disciplines for the country's development
Writing Feedbackgintoki7 - Jul 27, 2020 / Holt - Jul 28, 2020
|Problems of having domestic animals - IELTS task2
5 - Essay scoring services are now only offered within our private review and URGENT services. Scoring is no longer part...
Writing Feedbacknegar7495 - Jul 27, 2020 / Holt - Jul 28, 2020
|Task 2 - Youngsters spend less of their free time with their family nowadays. What are the reasons?
Writing Feedbacksarinburritos34 - Jul 27, 2020 / Huong22082001 - Jul 30, 2020
|Solutions to reduce car use. What can be done to discourage people from using their car?
5 - @Holt You are so kind and meticulous because not only have you told me my deficiency but you also...
Writing FeedbackTracy Tram - Jul 27, 2020 / Tracy Tram - Jul 27, 2020
|Everything has two sides to it, and no except to cycling. Let's consider its pros and cons.
Writing Feedbackbngoc28 - Jul 27, 2020 / bngoc28 - Jul 29, 2020
|Nowadays the football supporters behave violently. What is the cause? How can we solve it?
3 - Since you are not being asked to determine the validity of the given discussion, you do not need to...
Writing Feedbackkimk - Jul 27, 2020 / Holt - Jul 27, 2020
|Whether traveling on our own or with a group headed by a tour guide is better remains controversial
2 - Hi, I found your supporting examples interesting. However, in the topic it mentions " travel in a group led...
Writing FeedbackBettie Orion - Jul 27, 2020 / ITW - Jul 27, 2020
|Some say that domestic waste is not recycled well, therefore, authorities should make relevant laws
3 - For better TA scoring, always outline your discussion reasons in the paraphrase. This will allow the first paragraph to...
Writing Feedbackluivy567 - Jul 27, 2020 / Holt - Jul 27, 2020
|Some people use the Internet to search for solutions to their medical problems, is this +ve/-ve ?
Writing Feedbackkeithkwan14 - Jul 26, 2020 / keithkwan14 - Jul 27, 2020
|The modern parents almost don't take their free-time to enjoy their children's companies
3 - This prompt is used for an English language test. Specifically, it is used in as an old prompt in...
Writing FeedbackNgocnguyen777 - Jul 26, 2020 / Holt - Jul 27, 2020
|Which is more important for a sport, is it mental strength or physical strength, and explain why.
4 - This is a 3 reasoning paragraph presentation. While you did an acceptable paraphrase of the given discussion, and you...
Writing FeedbackITW - Jul 26, 2020 / Holt - Jul 27, 2020
|TASK 2: Helping other countries - Financial or Non-financial Aid is better?
2 - The overall essay structure is well organised, covering both sides of views in a smooth flow. Some sentences...
Writing Feedbackjhhh11 - Jul 26, 2020 / keithkwan14 - Jul 26, 2020
|IELTS Writing task 2: opinions on rising the price of petrol to reduce the effects
3 - The essay solely focuses on the disagreement about the increment of petrol cost but does not show both sides...
Writing Feedbackhayenbui - Jul 25, 2020 / keithkwan14 - Jul 26, 2020
|GRE issue; Over the past year, our late-night news... Memorandum from business manager of TV station
3 - @Holt Thank you very much for your feedback, much appreciated. I'll keep trying to improve my essay within your...
Writing Feedbackkays - Jul 25, 2020 / kays - Aug 7, 2020
|Implementing same national curriculum for students until entering college - GRE Issue
4 - @Holt Thank you very much for your feedback, much appreciated. I'll keep trying to improve my essay within your...
Writing Feedbackkays - Jul 25, 2020 / kays - Aug 7, 2020
|In the modern world it is no longer necessary to use animals for food, clothing or medicine. To what
Writing Feedbacklinhchitran27 - Jul 25, 2020 / linhchitran27 - Jul 25, 2020
|Population aged 65 and older
Writing Feedbackhuong nguyen - Jul 24, 2020 / jhhh11 - Jul 24, 2020
|Variety of ways in which parents can prepare their children for future life - teaching finances
Writing FeedbackBettie Orion - Jul 24, 2020 / Holt - Jul 24, 2020
|IELTS TASK 1: THE GRAPH SHOWS THE INCOME OF FOUR CAFE IN NEW YORK OVER LAST YEAR (HANNAH)
Writing FeedbackBAOBAO - Jul 24, 2020 / BAOBAO - Jul 24, 2020
|[IELTS-T2] Using smart phones and online platforms leads to lack of human face-to-face communication
6 - The prompt paraphrase should represent the topic statement, the response to the question, and a direct response to the...
Writing Feedbackthao_nguyen - Jul 24, 2020 / hoangtotk6 - Jul 26, 2020
|Ielts writing task 1 - a climograph about rainfall and temperature
6 - Coherence&cohesion seems less valued,it might be better if you add linking words into the essay. Good work on the...
Writing Feedbackdieulinh09611 - Jul 24, 2020 / Dolly Doloris - Aug 1, 2020
|[ IELTS 2] Should animal experiments be banned or not, because they are benefitial to humanity?
3 - You almost got the 4 paragraph presentation for this discussion correct. There are 2 errors in the presentation that...
Writing Feedbacktrunggnurt98 - Jul 23, 2020 / Holt - Jul 24, 2020
|Age at which children are supposed to enter the structured education system in schools
5 - Dear Holt, Many thanks for the indepth analysis of the essay and valuble suggestions. However I am in doubt...
Writing FeedbackITW - Jul 23, 2020 / ITW - Jul 25, 2020
|Individuals working hard get paid less in comparison to highly qualified in companies. Do you agree?
Writing Feedbacksantina7 - Jul 23, 2020 / santina7 - Jul 24, 2020
|A different language' foreigner can overcome problems by changing, adapting, and growing personality
Writing Feedbacksreevenk - Jul 23, 2020 / sreevenk - Jul 24, 2020
|International travelling brings more advantages than domestic traveling because ...
Writing FeedbackBettie Orion - Jul 23, 2020 / Bettie Orion - Jul 23, 2020
|Passenger activity of Toronto metro system
Writing Feedbacknguunguu90 - Jul 23, 2020 / nguunguu90 - Jul 23, 2020
|Teaching discipline should be the responsibility of teachers, or it's parents duty?
7 - Hi. In my opinion, you should eliminate the last paragraph. The 4th paragraph is more suitable to become the...
Writing Feedbackjhhh11 - Jul 23, 2020 / dinhquynhmai - Jul 28, 2020
|The pie charts compare the amount of energy taken from five different sources in the US (1980-1990)
4 - You should be combining your trending statement with the rest of the summary overview for a far more effective...
Writing Feedbackbanhbaooo03 - Jul 23, 2020 / Holt - Jul 23, 2020
|People have freedom to work and live anywhere in the world due to the development of communication..
5 - @Holt Thank you for your thorough feedback. In my opinion, the question of this task requires us to discuss...
Writing Feedbackducielts - Jul 22, 2020 / ducielts - Jul 23, 2020
|[IELTS WRITING TASK 2] The world is heavily dependent on oil for energy
2 - Your essay has too many words. You should practice being direct to the point and not being over analytical...
Writing FeedbackWoxic_145 - Jul 22, 2020 / Holt - Jul 22, 2020
|Some companies sponsor sports as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think it is good...
2 - I will not be scoring this essay because the discussion format is incorrect. I believe this is your first...
Writing Feedbackjhhh11 - Jul 22, 2020 / Holt - Jul 22, 2020
|The number of people who opt to live alone are increasing in many countries around the world
4 - Hi. Sau đây là một vài suggestions của mình nha ^^: - ...being hindered or disturbing disturbed -...
Writing Feedbackdinhquynhmai - Jul 22, 2020 / Tracy Tram - Jul 28, 2020
|Today more people are overweight than ever before. What's are the primary causes of this?
6 - @jhhh11 I suggest using more acadamic words and having flexible structure to have a higher score...
Writing FeedbackZiaMin - Jul 22, 2020 / linhchitran27 - Jul 25, 2020
|Diagrams depict how to make cement and the way cement is used in concrete production
3 - Try to be more specific with your image descriptions. Don't just call these diagrams. Describe these as "illustrative diagrams"...
Writing Feedbackbuiquynhhuong - Jul 21, 2020 / Holt - Jul 22, 2020
|A large number of animal species are likely to be extinct as human activities affect their habitats
5 - @dinhquynhmai Thank you for your advice a lot.I will try to write better and take care of my weak...
Writing Feedbacknguyen khai - Jul 21, 2020 / Khai - Jul 23, 2020
|IS IT BETTER TO HAVE A LONGER LIFE AND HIGH LIFE EXPECTANCY?
3 - You should try to change the words used in your prompt restatement from the original. If the original says...
Writing Feedbackmonica0407 - Jul 21, 2020 / Holt - Jul 22, 2020
|Is sport nothing more than a leisure activity?
Writing Feedbackbdmqnh - Jul 21, 2020 / Holt - Jul 22, 2020
|Physical or mental condition? A more crucial factor contributing to the success of a sports player
3 - Maybe your body one is kind of short, and I couldn't clearly see the main point in your passage....
Writing Feedbackmnbvcxz - Jul 21, 2020 / leerose111 - Jul 21, 2020
|Oversea traveling has become significantly popular - advantages and disadvantages to the community
3 - You did not properly deliver the restated prompt requirement. Although, you gave relevant reasoning topics in the discussion paragraph....
Writing Feedbackjackjixam13 - Jul 21, 2020 / Holt - Jul 21, 2020
|There's an increasing number of people who choose to delay childbirth due to several reasons
Writing Feedbackksshair - Jul 20, 2020 / ksshair - Jul 21, 2020
|IELTS SPEAKING PART 2 - Describe a job you would not like to do in the future
4 - The job is called singing, and the person doing the job of singing is called a singer. Use the...
Writing FeedbackVictor Nguyen - Jul 20, 2020 / Holt - Jul 21, 2020
|What are the reasons for bigger wage for celebrities than politicians? Evaluate this development.
3 - @keithkwan14 Personally, I think your topic sentence for the second paragraph doesn't give a clear overview: Firstly, politicians are...
Writing Feedbackkeithkwan14 - Jul 20, 2020 / thanhnhannnnn - Jul 20, 2020
|Creativity should be used as the only true measure of intelligence - GRE Issue
2 - You discussed this essay from a singular point of view. You focused only on the defense of your position...
Writing Feedbacksam1999 - Jul 20, 2020 / Holt - Jul 20, 2020
|It is suggested that adolescents should work in their spare time to benefit society
5 - Maybe you could try this way: It is suggested that adolescents should work in their spare time to...
Writing Feedbackjackjixam13 - Jul 20, 2020 / leerose111 - Jul 21, 2020
|It is believed that salary is the most important priority when choosing a job. I partially agree.
5 - There is a problem with the exam takers who insist on taking a "partly" stance in the given discussion....
Writing Feedbacktumi0107 - Jul 19, 2020 / Holt - Jul 20, 2020
|The information on coffee and tea consumption and interest in drinks in 5 Australian cities
Writing Feedbackthanhnhannnnn - Jul 19, 2020 / thanhnhannnnn - Jul 20, 2020
|Response to the recommendation from the Board of Directors of Monarch Books
2 - Amazing! I do believe that you have written a 5 scoring essay response here. Although there are some problems...
Writing Feedbacksam1999 - Jul 18, 2020 / Holt - Jul 18, 2020
|THE GRAPHS BELOW SHOW THE PERCENTAGE OF DIFFERENT ELEMENTS IN THREE TYPES OF DIETS
4 - The paragraph splits are not proper and there is no coherency in the essay. Better transition will help the...
Writing FeedbackDaisy Nguyen - Jul 18, 2020 / sam1999 - Jul 19, 2020
|Some feel international tourism is a positive trend, while others do not. What are your opinions?
2 - Since this is a Task 2 essay, you should be writing no more than 250-290 words. The time allotment...
Writing Feedbackkeithkwan14 - Jul 18, 2020 / Holt - Jul 18, 2020
|The graph informs about changes in the number of books read by boys and girls at Starmouth's library
2 - NOTE: Only trained contributors can score essays. Student scoring = Suspension !!! I hope you won't mind if...
Writing Feedbackndung0310 - Jul 18, 2020 / Holt - Jul 18, 2020
|Some say that news has no connection with most people's life and it is waste of time for most of us
3 - @Holt I took an IELTS course last year in order to improve my writing but it didn't help with...
Writing Feedbackngoclanluu12 - Jul 18, 2020 / ngoclanluu12 - Jul 18, 2020
|The two pie charts illustrate the post academic qualifications of students in Canada
4 - Hi, I would like to give some feedback for your essay. Your illustration is quite good, but I think...
Writing Feedbacktitus_saju - Jul 18, 2020 / kays - Jul 25, 2020
|The enormous numbers of cars is the cause of a huge number of traffic congestion
3 - Your prompt rephrasement became incorrect because of the first sentence. It was unnecessary to indicate that since it was...
Writing Feedbackkiaranoble - Jul 18, 2020 / Holt - Jul 18, 2020
|The chart shows the sales revenue in dollars at three branches of a bank in the first quarter - 2000
3 - @Holt thank you so much! Your review has been really helpful to me since you not only corrected me...
Writing Feedbackbanhbaooo03 - Jul 17, 2020 / banhbaooo03 - Jul 21, 2020
|ESSAY: The power of speaking or writing
2 - Your essay is not a very good first effort because you failed to understand the rudimentary requirements of this...
Writing Feedbacknhiuyen - Jul 17, 2020 / Holt - Jul 17, 2020
|There are various reasons why schools have serious issues with pupils acting
2 - I do not feel that you have written enough words in this essay to truly reflect your English vocabulary,...
Writing FeedbackHoang Ngoc Anh - Jul 17, 2020 / Holt - Jul 17, 2020
|People have a tendency to involve in many particular fields and develop themselves in different jobs
Writing Feedbackdinhquynhmai - Jul 17, 2020 / dinhquynhmai - Jul 18, 2020
|I lost my friend - a sad event and what you learn from the event
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