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|Range of subjects which system is appropriate
3 - I think you should cut down the number of redundant words in other to give more space to strengthen...
Writing FeedbackWinter - Aug 3, 2019 / suong1510 - Aug 8, 2019
|IELTS1- table (five countries): consumer spending on different items / products
2 - I think that the last sentence of last paragraph should be removed to the second one The statistics in...
Writing Feedbacks410377088 - Aug 3, 2019 / Winter - Aug 3, 2019
|IELTS task 2 practice: The relation between poverty and crime
Writing Feedbackvuthuylinh2611 - Aug 3, 2019 / vuthuylinh2611 - Aug 5, 2019
|Travelers and Visitors - Review my IELTS task 1: The line graph
2 - hello~ You need to rephrase your first paragraph since some grammatic issue happens in your sentence. You...
Writing FeedbackThang Nguyen Duc - Aug 2, 2019 / s410377088 - Aug 3, 2019
|Wild animals have no use in the 21st century - is preserving them just a waste of resources?
3 - some unnecessary words --> It seems there is a little element truth in it... It will be better...
Writing Feedbacklucy1990 - Aug 2, 2019 / s410377088 - Aug 5, 2019
|The connection of using energy and releasing greenhouse gas in Australia
Writing FeedbackThanggggg - Aug 2, 2019 / Thanggggg - Aug 2, 2019
|Should the nonprofit community services be added to high school curriculum? IELTS Writing Task 2
2 - @hikigay Hi. Seeing as you are new to the forum, I personally welcome you here! I hope you can...
Writing Feedbackhikigay - Aug 2, 2019 / Maria - Aug 2, 2019
|IELTS Writing Task 2 Both sides opinion : Should elderly people be forced to retired or not?
5 - There are lines that are unnecessary and should be removed or replaced. Like this one "Nowadays, as the population...
Writing FeedbackSnoopy Jr - Aug 2, 2019 / Toan dep trai - Aug 6, 2019
|IELTS TASK 2: People should earn extremely high salary or normal? Discuss both and give opinion.
NEW - Question: In some countries, few people earn an extremely high salary. Some think it is good for the country,...
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|Grading an Issue essay for GRE AWA section
2 - @wayfarer13 Hello. I hope you're doing well. As you're new here, I hope you can keep joining us for...
Writing Feedbackwayfarer13 - Aug 2, 2019 / Maria - Aug 2, 2019
|TOEFL: In twenty years, cars vs environment
2 - @Yunyu Zhang Hi. Hopefully I'll provide you with writing feedback that you will be able to learn from. Please...
Writing FeedbackYunyu Zhang - Aug 2, 2019 / Maria - Aug 2, 2019
|Changes to price of food products from 1978 to 2009 - IELTS 1
Writing Feedbackhelloitsdlinh - Aug 1, 2019 / helloitsdlinh - Aug 3, 2019
|IELTS2- two-part question: do the role of a mother differ in some ways from the role of a father?
3 - @s410377088 Hello. Thanks for coming back! I hope you're doing good. I'll give you feedback on this essay. ...
Writing Feedbacks410377088 - Aug 1, 2019 / Maria - Aug 2, 2019
|The concept of Intelligent Property - sharing information issue
Writing FeedbackYuanHung - Aug 1, 2019 / YuanHung - Aug 1, 2019
|Library vs the Internet - benefits for student information access
4 - hi,there，the second sentence has grammar mistakes; when I looked though the second paragragh, I felt a little confused. the...
Writing Feedbacktranlinh171 - Aug 1, 2019 / lucy1990 - Aug 2, 2019
|Line graph reveals the proportion of visitors who traveled four difference attractions in Brighton
3 - @sanbe Hello there! Welcome here. As I agree with the prior comment, next time just do not leave out...
Writing Feedbacksanbe - Jul 31, 2019 / Maria - Aug 2, 2019
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2: whether people should increase the limit of retirement age.
3 - @kimese Hi! I'm here to welcome you to the forum and provide you with writing feedback on your essay....
Writing Feedbackkimese - Jul 31, 2019 / Maria - Aug 2, 2019
|Prison or education is the greater way in dealing with crime problems
3 - @Maria Aloha. I'm really grateful for your advices and suggestions on my essay. I'll definately take this as my...
Writing Feedbackletrandaohoa - Jul 31, 2019 / letrandaohoa - Aug 1, 2019
|IELTS2- opinion type: do companies have social responsibilities?
2 - @s410377088 Hi there. I hope you're doing good! I'll be giving you writing feedback on this work. If you...
Writing Feedbacks410377088 - Jul 31, 2019 / Maria - Jul 31, 2019
|Ielts writing task 2: Factors affect children's development
2 - @ththao_99 Hi there! Welcome back here. I hope you've been doing well with your learning endeavors. I'll be giving...
Writing Feedbackththao_99 - Jul 31, 2019 / Maria - Jul 31, 2019
|Cars and shopping advantages and disadvantages
2 - @Winter Hello there. I'll provide you with writing feedback on this essay! Hopefully this will help you improve your...
Writing FeedbackWinter - Jul 31, 2019 / Maria - Jul 31, 2019
|IELTS Writing: agree/disagree: if unpaid service should be a compulsory part of school or not
3 - @Maria Hello. Thank you for spending your time on marking my essay. I really appreciate that! I'll try my...
Writing Feedbackletrandaohoa - Jul 31, 2019 / letrandaohoa - Aug 1, 2019
|IELTS Writing Task 2: Knowledge taught at school
4 - @nimbus2k2 HI,there, I found many grammar mistakes,for instance, "The knowledge students receive at ..." receive should be proofed into...
Writing Feedbacknimbus2k2 - Jul 31, 2019 / lucy1990 - Aug 2, 2019
|Many criminals re-offend after they have been punished. Why do some people continue to commit crimes
2 - @thuhanguyen9599 Hello there. Welcome to the forum! I'll be providing you with writing feedback on this work. ...
Writing Feedbackthuhanguyen9599 - Jul 31, 2019 / Maria - Jul 31, 2019
|No advertisement in the world
Writing Feedbacklucy1990 - Jul 30, 2019 / lucy1990 - Aug 1, 2019
|Ielts: Argument essay No need to use animals for food, clothing and medicine
Writing Feedbackhanhdth83 - Jul 30, 2019 / hanhdth83 - Aug 2, 2019
|Ecology solution - IELTS essay Task 2: Problem solution essay
3 - @qromj19 Hello. I hope you're doing good! It's good to see people who keep coming back to the forum...
Writing Feedbackqromj19 - Jul 30, 2019 / Maria - Jul 31, 2019
|Essay about the number of enquiries received - tourist information
5 - @thuyngan Hi there. I think you should add conclusion at the end of your text to take a reference...
Writing Feedbackthuyngan - Jul 30, 2019 / letrandaohoa - Aug 1, 2019
|IELTS: Governments should not waste money on space exploration
3 - @Langnhatque Hello there! Given that you're new here, welcome to the forum! I hope you find this writing feedback...
Writing FeedbackLangnhatque - Jul 30, 2019 / Maria - Jul 31, 2019
|IELTS: Should students be taught skills such as cooking or dressing?
2 - Hi @gracie2002, This is my feedback in terms of coherence. I hope that it will be helpful. I think...
Writing Feedbackgracie2002 - Jul 29, 2019 / ththao_99 - Jul 30, 2019
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2: International Tourism - Advantages and Disadvantages
4 - @barryha2705 Hi there. I apologize if those were insufficient. I'll do my best to give out opinions with more...
Writing Feedbackbarryha2705 - Jul 29, 2019 / Maria - Jul 31, 2019
|Clean or go to jail? - laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?
Writing FeedbackVeranda - Jul 29, 2019 / Veranda - Jul 30, 2019
|IELTS-task 2: Language is always useful, especially when it comes to traveling and doing business.
3 - Language is the way to express feelings and thoughts. As there are two type of language, first kind is...
Writing Feedbackmin0822 - Jul 29, 2019 / kamrulshaker - Jul 29, 2019
|There are benefits derived from travelling to remote areas, however it has numerous of downsides too
4 - Thank you so much for your valuable feedbacks and suggestions on my work. I will definitely look over the...
Writing FeedbackLaura Luc - Jul 29, 2019 / Laura Luc - Aug 1, 2019
|To judge or not to judge a person during interview - Opinion IELT essay do you agree or disagree?
Writing FeedbackMennamoni - Jul 29, 2019 / Mennamoni - Jul 29, 2019
|IELTS1 - the amount of electricity produced by different fuels in Australia and France
3 - Hey @s410377088 Your writing consists of no information on oil and hydro power. Of course there's no need to...
Writing Feedbacks410377088 - Jul 29, 2019 / nimbus2k2 - Jul 30, 2019
|An opinion essay about discussing views and giving personal opinion.
Writing FeedbackJackieMahamn - Jul 29, 2019 / JackieMahamn - Jul 29, 2019
|Group learning or individual learning is better?
5 - @ththao_99 Hello there! Welcome to the forum! I'm an active contributor here; and I hope you find all of...
Writing Feedbackththao_99 - Jul 28, 2019 / Maria - Jul 29, 2019
|Some people think that GM crops are a positive development. Others argue that they are dangerous
2 - maybe explain what a gm crop is first, before abbreviating. it helps for people who are unfamiliar with the...
Writing FeedbackCay nho - Jul 28, 2019 / jessiemkay - Jul 29, 2019
|What are my three biggest weaknesses? - Cancer Diagnosis
3 - @cmedwards Hello there! Welcome to this forum. I hope you find this writing feedback beneficial for your endeavors in...
Writing Feedbackcmedwards - Jul 28, 2019 / Maria - Jul 29, 2019
|IELTS Writing Task 1: Annual pay for doctors and other workers
5 - @s410377088 @Maria thank you both. The advice from users of the forum is really helpful cause I'm practicing writing...
Writing Feedbacknimbus2k2 - Jul 28, 2019 / nimbus2k2 - Jul 30, 2019
|Using the power - the benefits of nuclear technology far outweigh the disadvantages
Writing FeedbackAnn_Ng - Jul 28, 2019 / Ann_Ng - Aug 2, 2019
|Online communication and finding new friends
5 - @Maria OMG, thank you for your help. This is such helpful advice and I will take note of what...
Writing Feedbackbarryha2705 - Jul 28, 2019 / barryha2705 - Jul 29, 2019
|MY 21TH BIRTHDAY, IT'S A SOFT STORY
4 - @Thai nguyen Hello there. Welcome to the forum! I hope you find all of this feedback helpful for your...
Writing FeedbackThai nguyen - Jul 27, 2019 / Maria - Jul 29, 2019
|Junk food is damaged to health. Some people think education is a good solution while others disagree
2 - @Cay nho Hello there. Thanks for being back to the forum. I hope to provide you with writing feedback...
Writing FeedbackCay nho - Jul 27, 2019 / Maria - Jul 27, 2019
|With the development of online communication, people is easy to make new friends
5 - @Ann_Ng Hello, I also have some feedbacks for your writing. - "Social network was born to help ..." is...
Writing FeedbackAnn_Ng - Jul 27, 2019 / JackieMahamn - Jul 29, 2019
|Nuclear energy, economy and health - Ielts task2
3 - @Maria Thank for yours advices. I'll try my best to shorten my sentence in the next essay. However, maybe...
Writing FeedbackJackson97010 - Jul 26, 2019 / Jackson97010 - Jul 27, 2019
|MANY PEOPLE FIND IT DIFFICULT TO BALANCE THEIR RESPONSIBILITY AT HOME AND IN THE WORKPLACE
6 - @Thich Thong Luc Hello there! Welcome to the forum. I hope that you find the previous writing feedbacks to...
Writing FeedbackThich Thong Luc - Jul 26, 2019 / Maria - Jul 29, 2019
|There are more workers to work from home and more students to study from home.
3 - @Maria Dear Ms. Maria! Thank for your feedback. It will help to improve my writing style. Actually, I will...
Writing FeedbackThuanPhat - Jul 26, 2019 / ThuanPhat - Jul 26, 2019
|One of the major problems we are faced with today is obesity. Kids suffer from it too
2 - @Cay nho Hello there. Thanks for coming back to the forum.. I hope you find the feedback here productive...
Writing FeedbackCay nho - Jul 26, 2019 / Maria - Jul 26, 2019
|Should government control excessive salaries?
5 - @Ann_Ng Hello! I'll provide you with writing feedback on your essay. Firstly, try to ensure that you have...
Writing FeedbackAnn_Ng - Jul 26, 2019 / Maria - Jul 29, 2019
|Waste recycling and law - Argumentative essay
5 - Thank you, @Cay nho, @numbus2k2 and @Maria for your constructive feedback, really appreciate. Additionally, how about an example sentences...
Writing Feedbackqromj19 - Jul 26, 2019 / qromj19 - Jul 27, 2019
|How to improve road safety? Are punishments too lenient?
4 - @rainhoang Hello there! Welcome to the forum. I hope to provide you with writing feedback that would be substantial...
Writing Feedbackrainhoang - Jul 25, 2019 / Maria - Jul 29, 2019
|People are losing the ability to communicate face to face (too much of technology in relationships)
3 - Hi @maiko tran Just as @Maria suggested, make sure you follow the common essay structure. It's equally important to...
Writing Feedbackmaiko tran - Jul 25, 2019 / nimbus2k2 - Jul 30, 2019
|Having more money and less free time is better than earning less and having more free time?
Writing FeedbackAnn_Ng - Jul 25, 2019 / Ann_Ng - Jul 26, 2019
|Friendship with work mates - ielts task 2
3 - @Ngann Hello there. Welcome to the forum! I hope you find the feedbacks your receive here to be...
Writing FeedbackNgann - Jul 24, 2019 / Maria - Jul 25, 2019
|Allocation of public funds between road and railway projects
4 - @rivathh Thank you a lot! @Maria Can you explain more about "create more dyanism in your writing"? Thank you...
Writing FeedbackVeranda - Jul 24, 2019 / Veranda - Jul 27, 2019
|IELTS Writing Task 1: International conferences in 3 cities
4 - Thank you @stella898 and @Maria for your feedback. I'll be sure to stay active and continue to learn from...
Writing Feedbacknimbus2k2 - Jul 24, 2019 / nimbus2k2 - Jul 26, 2019
|Is it possible that cost of fuel can tackle the environmental pollutions?
3 - @khucthutrang Hello there. Welcome to the forum! I'll be providing you with writing feedback on your essay. I hope...
Writing Feedbackkhucthutrang - Jul 24, 2019 / Maria - Jul 24, 2019
|TOEFL Writing Do you agree if government should spend more money in support of arts than in athletic
3 - @Maria Thanks for your prompt reply. It's really a good and useful feedback! I'll keep in mind and come...
Writing Feedbackrilakkukkuma - Jul 24, 2019 / rilakkukkuma - Jul 24, 2019
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