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|Study once specialist subject or a series of subjects in universitiy
6 - More attention should be paid on how universities provide a subject in their curriculum. Ordinary people think that college...
Writing Feedbackmumtazdinar - Feb 23, 2015 / Anfalia - Feb 27, 2015
|HOW COLOUR CAN EFFECT PEOPLE'S FEELING
3 - Colour is basic substances which can be possibly fast caught by eyes. For this reason, some experts have a...
Writing FeedbackPutri - Feb 23, 2015 / Anfalia - Feb 27, 2015
|We shouldn't ignore the underlying danger of spending great amount of time practicing sport; TOEFL
3 - Dear Alleb, Thank you soooo much for such patient and careful review for my poor essay! Your suggestions are...
Writing Feedbacklinglinzhang - Feb 26, 2015 / linglinzhang - Feb 26, 2015
|"Doing it like a girl" - My summary analysis of #likeagirl commercial
3 - Just a suggestion:) The purpose of the commercial is to encourage girls, especially young ones to keep doing what...
Writing Feedbackahmedissa - Feb 26, 2015 / EF_Jasmine - Feb 26, 2015
|Money is a loyal servant or a cruel master; it depends on the way that you use and consider it.
Writing Feedbacktuanbmt987 - Feb 22, 2015 / hunhann - Feb 26, 2015
|In order to produce a good movie for the audience, the film industry needs to push to their limits
2 - Well, I think that you need to write your prompt completely, so I know what is the purpose of...
Writing Feedbackhuongkhoi1708 - Feb 25, 2015 / eddies - Feb 25, 2015
|Calculator in School? It is more important to build basic arithmetic skills without using this tool.
NEW - Some people believe that electronic should not be allowed in school until after the pupils have mastered mental arithmetic....
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|Getting excellent grade in school or university is one of the ways to achieve bright future.
2 - Hello, my suggestions and edits are below:) Make this your first paragraph... Education and a great life are...
Writing FeedbackIndahSatria - Feb 24, 2015 / EF_Jasmine - Feb 24, 2015
|'I just want to let you know that I moved to a new house' - Letter to a friend - IELTS
4 - Hi Trina! I hope you are doing well. (See how I used your sentence there? :) I'm EF_Season and...
Writing Feedbacktrina - Feb 21, 2015 / EF_Season - Feb 24, 2015
|TASK 2 : I argue that the state should pay the course fee at univesities for us
Writing FeedbackZihni92 - Feb 23, 2015 / somasalims - Feb 23, 2015
|Universities' aims should provide more opportunities for students to study their own shake
3 - There are some ways to polish your flow sentences; using personal pronoun, synonyms, cohesive devices; but you have...
Writing Feedbackshintacandrade - Feb 23, 2015 / tiaDS - Feb 23, 2015
|IELTS TASK 2: work for the same organization all their working life
2 - Hi, you addressed the topic well, but you have quite a few errors in your sentence structures and word...
Writing FeedbackAnfalia - Feb 22, 2015 / TJLuschen - Feb 22, 2015
|Reading fiction (such as novels and short stories) is more enjoyable than watching movies.
2 - Hi! You have some great ideas, great start! I think you should develop your thoughts more for each section....
Writing FeedbackNovi Sri W - Feb 26, 2014 / EF_Jasmine - Feb 22, 2015
|I wish to still attend classes together with my friends; to ease the pressure and burden of studying
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|Drawing from the themes of a prompt - Hope
2 - Hi LeighV! Your essay raises a number of thoughts and question for me, which I hope (ha!) you...
Writing FeedbackLeighV - Feb 21, 2015 / EF_Season - Feb 22, 2015
|IELTS task 2: Government alone cannot defeat the climate change!
Writing FeedbackVns9x - Feb 19, 2015 / trina - Feb 22, 2015
|Essay about investment on art and culture - IELTS task 2
5 - thanks very much, guys i took all your notes in consideration and i will work more on them. Hope...
Writing Feedbackgondam7 - Feb 21, 2015 / gondam7 - Feb 21, 2015
|Incompleteness - the problem lay before me, challenging me to enter its deep labyrinth; inspiration
2 - Wow! What a great piece! I was engaged the whole time. I love your introduction! Since you are speaking...
Writing FeedbackDiscipulus96 - Feb 2, 2014 / EF_Jasmine - Feb 21, 2015
|IELTS TASK 2: increasing number of people are suffering from health problems
3 - Thank you so much. It really helps me. I think I should rewrite this essay. Thanks for your suggestion....
Writing FeedbackAnfalia - Feb 21, 2015 / Anfalia - Feb 21, 2015
|Growing up in a big city can have lots of benefits, such as schools, experiences; City vs Rural area
3 - Hi Vns9x! First, I'd suggest going through your essay to find spelling errors. One example is "An urban...
Writing FeedbackVns9x - Feb 20, 2015 / EF_Season - Feb 21, 2015
|Almost all things and thoughts have both benefits and drawbacks - attractions visitors
3 - Hi Bob brother! The first question I have is about your thesis. You write, "this attitude will be...
Writing FeedbackBob brother - Feb 21, 2015 / EF_Season - Feb 21, 2015
|TELL ME ABOUT YOUR FAVORITE TV PROGRAMME ?
5 - HI huongkoi1708! Since EF_Alyssa already helped you with the grammar and syntax, I thought I might touch on...
Writing Feedbackhuongkhoi1708 - Feb 19, 2015 / EF_Season - Feb 21, 2015
|Thus far today, the world has been just like a small country with hyper
6 - What about your first paragraph truly leads you into the idea of "teamwork?" Might there be a different way...
Writing Feedbackhungnguyen278 - Feb 20, 2015 / EF_Season - Feb 21, 2015
|What is the worst job in the world ?
2 - Hi huongkhoi1708! Your essay leaves me with a number of questions and leaves me wondering if, perhaps, you might...
Writing Feedbackhuongkhoi1708 - Feb 21, 2015 / EF_Season - Feb 21, 2015
|Growing numbers of people send their offspring to study in other countries - it has its detractors
2 - Really good essay! You do a good job of drawing on your experience (especially with the example of your...
Writing FeedbackVns9x - Feb 21, 2015 / EF_Alyssa - Feb 21, 2015
|The rush exchange information is monopolized by media nowadays
3 - Hi Akhfan, Allow me to give comments and suggestion for your writing. Overall, your writing is good whereas I...
Writing Feedbackakhfan - Feb 20, 2015 / fadlanmuzakki - Feb 21, 2015
|The improvement of the world's population every year becomes the most significant concern.
3 - Hi AinunAlfatih, I would like to give you some suggestions and comments, GRAMMATICAL ERRORS "of"...
Writing FeedbackAinunAlfatih - Feb 20, 2015 / fadlanmuzakki - Feb 21, 2015
|Parents vital role in controlling their children attitude about food preferences and lifestyles
3 - Obesity is nowconsidered( has been and now are two different words that describe time, I would suggest sticking to...
Writing Feedbacktantadedanaan - Feb 20, 2015 / EF_Jasmine - Feb 20, 2015
|Although studying hard is important, doing physical activity is as important as studying.
3 - Hi vns9x.. You're right.. I forgot to count my words, though. But, both my first body and second...
Writing FeedbackBambusaMX - Feb 20, 2015 / BambusaMX - Feb 20, 2015
|GRE essay-As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems,
3 - You have a great start and some very interesting information! Generally, the order in which you present your information...
Writing Feedbacktito - Jul 5, 2014 / EF_Stacey - Feb 20, 2015
|IELTS task 1: Unpaid works and people who squander time on them!
2 - This is very good! Your analysis is very clear. I've just recommended a few changes in the wording, to...
Writing FeedbackVns9x - Feb 20, 2015 / EF_Alyssa - Feb 20, 2015
|Foreign language should be mastered by children since the earliest level of their education.
Writing FeedbackLiliy - Jan 31, 2015 / fadlanmuzakki - Feb 20, 2015
|There are many different type of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional
2 - Hi there, let me share some points In the present[,] [we can hear] vari[ous] [type] of music can...
Writing FeedbackRsu141 - Feb 20, 2015 / masktaz - Feb 20, 2015
|Air traffic is increasingly leading to more noise, pollution and airport construction.
3 - In addition, The first part this sounds weird maybe community would be a better word choice offers that government...
Writing Feedbackmiloman - Feb 18, 2015 / Vns9x - Feb 19, 2015
|World population growth will be at the highest point in the near future; IELTS
3 - The topic is timely and you have a good bit of information to get started. Rather than beginning the...
Writing FeedbackVns9x - Feb 17, 2015 / EF_Stacey - Feb 19, 2015
|Choosing the custom of the place you live, and your own custom, has always been a polemical topic.
Writing FeedbackVns9x - Feb 19, 2015 / masktaz - Feb 19, 2015
|Create proper environment, which would help children foster the sense of competition and cooperation
2 - having considered the respective benefits of them, I believe both of them are essential for our children's future,as they...
Writing Feedbackbeyondmtk - Feb 19, 2015 / Vns9x - Feb 19, 2015
|IELTS: ASDA supermarket and its reasons! Close to home, good reputation, 24-hour shopping, etc.
2 - Overall, this is well-written. However, I notice a minor problem The figure for Parking facilities seems to...
Writing FeedbackVns9x - Feb 18, 2015 / eddies - Feb 19, 2015
|Why do you think people are drawn to take drugs. Opinion essay
2 - Utilising any kind of drugs an issue, which frequently generates a great deal of heated debate. this essay will...
Writing Feedbackturgutkhanova - Feb 18, 2015 / Vns9x - Feb 19, 2015
|Medical treatments, fast communication, great transportation - technology make our lives easier
2 - Your introduction seems to be bizarre. 1. You need to rephrase the prompt in the beginning and list your...
Writing Feedbackkoshima - Feb 18, 2015 / Vns9x - Feb 18, 2015
|Education and its statistics. Breakdown information of the entrance in different Technology Colleges
2 - Much of this report sounded odd to me, as you were talking about numbers and "certificate", "diploma", and "bachelor"...
Writing FeedbackVns9x - Feb 17, 2015 / TJLuschen - Feb 18, 2015
|Some individuals consider to eat outdoors while others choose home dishes. Which is better?
4 - I will continue where Vns9x left off. Also, in your intro, eating is not really a hobby, although maybe...
Writing Feedbacktantadedanaan - Feb 18, 2015 / TJLuschen - Feb 18, 2015
|Both artists and scientists have immensely underpinned our society, since they first emerged. IELTS
2 - Hi, I thought your essay was pretty clear and had some good content, but maybe you are trying a...
Writing FeedbackVns9x - Feb 16, 2015 / TJLuschen - Feb 18, 2015
|IELTS: multinational companies are supporting our life, in lieu of ruining it.
Writing FeedbackVns9x - Feb 18, 2015 / tantadedanaan - Feb 18, 2015
|Everything has two sides and Gasoline cars are not an exception.
3 - Hi there! 1. When you write an introductory statement especially with this type of question, it is important...
Writing Feedbackwaliedf - Feb 18, 2015 / tantadedanaan - Feb 18, 2015
|It is not a surprise that local people are not interested in visiting historical sites
2 - I do not consider your reason to be a cogent one. I think, you should have mentioned that local...
Writing FeedbackNguyen Mcqueen - Feb 8, 2015 / Vns9x - Feb 17, 2015
|Japan was the leader when it comes annual income and life expectancy - IELTS table
2 - Hello, a few grammar suggestions have been made below. IfWhen analyzed, thehistorical data suggests that Japan was the...
Writing FeedbackVns9x - Feb 14, 2015 / EF_Sheri - Feb 17, 2015
|People should travel inside their country first - for easy deal with the locals and familiarity gain
Writing Feedbacktarak23 - Feb 16, 2015 / tarak23 - Feb 17, 2015
|Female and male and their ages; which group watch TV more? IELTS task 1
2 - Hi there! Your introduction was great, but I think you should start it with the word "The" like...
Writing FeedbackVns9x - Feb 16, 2015 / tantadedanaan - Feb 17, 2015
|Managing money from the early age - saving money makes prestige for children. IELTS
2 - My father always says to me that spend your money for lousier activities. Though, words cannot express my gratitude...
Writing Feedbacksmakmp - Feb 16, 2015 / Vns9x - Feb 16, 2015
|Do you prefer to start working on a presentation you'll have next month or postpone it to last days?
2 - with several lectures during their school days. I am not sure whether lectures exist in the school. deal with...
Writing FeedbackMinooo - Feb 16, 2015 / Vns9x - Feb 16, 2015
|Playing games is fun only when you win. (No. The game always gives you incredible things in life.)
2 - Playing game is a way to take away stresses , exercise, and improve your skill. However, some people agree...
Writing Feedbackdhanialfan - Feb 15, 2015 / Vns9x - Feb 16, 2015
|Space Exploration versus basic human needs. Which is more important?
2 - You did not really develop your reasons very fully. I think adding some specific examples would be a good...
Writing Feedbacktantadedanaan - Feb 15, 2015 / TJLuschen - Feb 15, 2015
|The birth of computer and its fast paced development could influence our lives in different ways.
Writing Feedbackah_zafari - Feb 14, 2015 / tantadedanaan - Feb 15, 2015
|IELTS Task 1; Employment patterns of females and males in Britain!
Writing FeedbackVns9x - Feb 12, 2015 / tantadedanaan - Feb 15, 2015
|Television and its powerful influences; can simultaneously benefit and ruin our cultural development
3 - "Television has always been thea tool, whichthat can easily influence many societiessociety . It is perfectly understandablereasonable, consideringsince most...
Writing FeedbackVns9x - Feb 15, 2015 / wonderland - Feb 15, 2015
|The benefits of living in the contemporary world! We used to squander hours on preparing our foods.
2 - "Foods used to be an issue for people, since our people did not knowbecause they were unaware of how...
Writing FeedbackVns9x - Feb 14, 2015 / wonderland - Feb 15, 2015
|Why museums are visited by tourists more than locals?
2 - This essay, therefore, is in identifying the main causes of the latter issue and finding ways to motivate local...
Writing Feedbackah_zafari - Feb 14, 2015 / Vns9x - Feb 15, 2015
|Choosing between public transportation or electric car, reduce the emissions of CO2
Writing Feedbacktphy - Feb 9, 2015 / ksu - Feb 15, 2015
|Male or female are become the peaceful leader (IELTS task 2)
3 - Hi SHanafi, as I have said several days ago, I would like to discuss about your flows and sentence....
Writing FeedbackSHanafi - Feb 12, 2015 / fadlanmuzakki - Feb 15, 2015
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