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TED Summary: The Taboo Secret To Better Health by Molly Winter

5 - hi ledha i have suggestions on your essay to be better It is caused by drinking sewage...

Writing FeedbackIedha01 - Sep 21, 2016 / bismillah - Sep 22, 2016
TED Summary: A Guide to the Energy of the Earth by Joshua M. Sneideman

3 - hi... Fitri12 let me try to give you some corrections to make a noun phrase, you need...

Writing FeedbackFitri12 - Sep 21, 2016 / Jawa - Sep 22, 2016
When art and technology pull each other to bits

3 - confusing sentence although art and technology have a close relation, those came apart at art festivals in some...

Writing FeedbackJawa - Sep 21, 2016 / RAY93 - Sep 22, 2016
Advantages of having tattoos - they may increase your chance of working

4 - Hello @fira28, I got some advice for your writing. Hope, it can help you .. Tattoos is an...

Writing FeedbackFira28 - Sep 21, 2016 / elasyari93 - Sep 22, 2016
You are what you eat! Obesity is not problem anymore

3 - Hello Giansy11, this is so informative writing, I just have some notes for you : Every womenevery woman...

Writing FeedbackGiansy11 - Sep 21, 2016 / FirmanRomadhon20 - Sep 22, 2016
Summary TED_How mobile phones can fight poverty

3 - there is no verb in this sentence Iqbal Quadir is a founder of Grameen Phone, ........ company. ...

Writing FeedbackDavid54 - Sep 21, 2016 / RAY93 - Sep 22, 2016
A history of India's independence

6 - Hello Jawa, I have little notes for you: There was noThis was not exception for India which had ......

Writing FeedbackJawa - Sep 19, 2016 / FirmanRomadhon20 - Sep 22, 2016
Arctic ice melt is killing birds and will leave caribou stranded

3 - too many misspelling words. The increasing loss of sea-ice whicH caused by melting ice in Artics victimizeS the...

Writing Feedbackmdamanhuri77 - Sep 21, 2016 / RAY93 - Sep 22, 2016
TED Summary : what do you think when you look at me?

3 - Hello Jawa, This is little note for you : The United States of America is the most racial...

Writing FeedbackJawa - Sep 21, 2016 / FirmanRomadhon20 - Sep 22, 2016
Nadia Lopez: Why open a school? To close a prison

4 - Hello @mdamanhuri77, i got some advice for your writing 1. When Nadia Lopez openedschool , Mott Hall Bridges...

Writing Feedbackmdamanhuri77 - Sep 22, 2016 / abdasyari93 - Sep 22, 2016
How to Conquer Ourselves For Public Speaking

2 - Hello @agungdanprakoso5, I got some suggestions about your writing. Here my advice: 1. Right now, i want...

Writing Feedbackagungdanprakoso5 - Sep 22, 2016 / abdasyari93 - Sep 22, 2016
News contributor elect what to show on television and what to print in newsletter

2 - hi bams, here my thought This essay will describe a decided factor influence ing brodcast on television or...

Writing FeedbackBAMS14 - Sep 22, 2016 / Aris05 - Sep 22, 2016
In China, Michelle Obama Tours School, Forbidden City

3 - 1.According VOA news dailyACCORDING TO THE VOS DAILLY NEWS 2.Michelle Obama hadBEEN visited China that aim to speech...

Writing Feedbackagungdanprakoso5 - Sep 22, 2016 / BAMS14 - Sep 22, 2016
Getting a job, earn your own money, have a happy family... how to make work-life balance work?

3 - there is no doubt that you have a good skill in writing, yet there are several mistakes you ought...

Writing FeedbackGiansy11 - Sep 21, 2016 / Ismailr - Sep 22, 2016
In recent days, some professional athletes become millionaires

2 - could you mind, if i give little bit suggestion for u here we go. 1. "Some companies is...

Writing FeedbackDafahAhmad - Sep 22, 2016 / agungdanprakoso5 - Sep 22, 2016
TED Summary: How to succeed? Get more sleep.

3 - hi ibal ... of our mind is a small idea notion that can awaken much bigger thanothersones inside...

Writing Feedbackibal28 - Sep 21, 2016 / mdamanhuri77 - Sep 22, 2016
Summary: Violent Crime Rising in U.S. Cities Compared to 2015

2 - hi ibe, let me see your summary in 2016 saw a dramatically increase of violent of crime in...

Writing Feedbackibe13 - Sep 21, 2016 / mdamanhuri77 - Sep 22, 2016
More and more people do not ride the bicycle as a model of transportation even though it has many

3 - Hi, your essay seems intresting and convincing. Here are some errors i noticed; How tocan one encourage people to...

Writing Feedbackkenxu - Sep 21, 2016 / philo - Sep 22, 2016
Article Summary: Weekend Rehab:Trying To Fight Off Pollution by Dawn Davis

2 - hi liedha ... terrible experience which is related to the air pollution. ... felt that treadmills an gyms...

Writing FeedbackIedha01 - Sep 21, 2016 / mdamanhuri77 - Sep 22, 2016
Summary of Article "Air pollution is sending tiny magnetic particles into your brain" (Clare Wilson)

2 - Hello @ifan21, I got some suggestions for your writing. Here my advice: 1. nanoparticlesNano particles magnetic iron...

Writing FeedbackIfan21 - Sep 21, 2016 / abdasyari93 - Sep 22, 2016
Let Us Socializing about Alzheimer's disease !!

3 - The effects of Alzheimer's disease includes losing items (like glasses) in the house, forgetting someone's name or difficulty in...

Writing Feedbacknomoto79 - Sep 21, 2016 / nehakhatri17 - Sep 22, 2016
Summary Article: Revisiting globalization of English

2 - Hallo Ibal28 It is such a great Essay, These following are corrections to make it even better : ...

Writing Feedbackibal28 - Sep 21, 2016 / Ifan21 - Sep 22, 2016
A Great Elephant Was Defeated By an Ingenious Ant Once upon a time, in the jungle forest, lived ass

2 - Hi San, I believe this is my first review for your work and with that, I would like to...

Writing Feedbackhanachi - Sep 21, 2016 / justivy03 - Sep 22, 2016
Popular image of Hawaii that always relates to hula dancing with women swaying their hips

4 - Hi, thanks for getting back to me. I would suggest this replacement sentence: The popular image of...

Writing Feedbackrizaldohabibie - Sep 21, 2016 / TJLuschen - Sep 21, 2016
(TED) Judson Brewer: A Simple Way to Break a Bad Habit

6 - Hi there! @abdasyari I have read your writing and wonder about some tips like these: 1) It...

Writing Feedbackabdasyari93 - Sep 21, 2016 / Rinnegan45 - Sep 21, 2016
Traditional clothes, bowler hats, handmade macramé shawls, layered skirts and blouses in La Paz

2 - Hi Bekuk22. You did it well. I found a minor mistake. So, I just left a few of suggestions....

Writing FeedbackBekuk22 - Sep 21, 2016 / ibal28 - Sep 21, 2016
Hula dancing plays important function as an important aspect of Hawaiian culture.

2 - Hi Dils, your writing is pretty good, I found only slightly mistake. Hula is (put article "a" since...

Writing Feedbackdils - Sep 21, 2016 / Fitri12 - Sep 21, 2016
Each one of us has a unique voice print that reflects our age, size, even lifestyle and personality

3 - Hi bismillah. I left some suggestions for you. Hope it can helps you. Each one of us(you can...

Writing Feedbackbismillah - Sep 21, 2016 / ibal28 - Sep 21, 2016
Do you think that people can only be happy if they have a job really enjoy? WRITING TASKS 2 - IELTS

2 - Hi Andika, here I give you another example regarding your introduction as my though after reading your essay. I...

Writing Feedbackandika08 - Sep 21, 2016 / Anaguna - Sep 21, 2016
Article Summary: This Woman Might have Found a Deep-Fried Rat's Head in Her Popeyes Meal

3 - Hey Fitri12 These following corrections are addressed to make your great essay even better : That (That is...

Writing FeedbackFitri12 - Sep 21, 2016 / Ifan21 - Sep 21, 2016
It is our responsibility to the earth to solve the climate crisis

4 - Hello You have a good summary I have some corrections As a human, we people should be more...

Writing Feedbackrosadesiana - Sep 21, 2016 / andika08 - Sep 21, 2016
Hawaii islands are one of interesting places to visit because of their original culture

3 - Hello You have a good summary I have some corrections ... because they have originally culture and beautifully...

Writing FeedbackAlamsyah Ismail - Sep 21, 2016 / andika08 - Sep 21, 2016
Traveling is the best way to relax and enjoy the beautiful scenery after the hectic pace of life

2 - Hi giansy11, I think your essay is good enough, however, there are only some minor mistakes that I have...

Writing FeedbackGiansy11 - Sep 21, 2016 / Iedha01 - Sep 21, 2016
Hula dance takes an important role in Hawaiian culture as a part of ritual in honor of gods.

2 - hallo Yonathan, i have corrected your writing, i have some suggestions. 1. at this sentence: "Although the...

Writing FeedbackYonathan - Sep 21, 2016 / hanachi - Sep 21, 2016
Some people feel happiness if they have buy a luxury car - it's personal satisfaction

2 - Hi Qara, the followings are my suggestions regarding your writing. Overall, the flow of your writing is definitely...

Writing FeedbackQaranewlagi52 - Sep 21, 2016 / Fitri12 - Sep 21, 2016
The incredible story of Hula Dancing and Hawaii. Gorgeous islands.

2 - Hi Dio Your summarization are great but here is some advice to improve your writing skills... ... the...

Writing FeedbackDioba - Sep 21, 2016 / Yonathan - Sep 21, 2016
Having a job that we love can be simply called as enjoying our hobby and get paid for it.

4 - hi kiki, today I just focus on your introduction. It is clear that to make introduction well, you have...

Writing Feedbackkiki23 - Sep 21, 2016 / ibe13 - Sep 21, 2016
The Story of a Mouse Deer and a Snail

2 - Your writing was pretty good, but much of this story was confusing to me. I don't understand what the...

Writing Feedbackabdasyari93 - Sep 21, 2016 / TJLuschen - Sep 21, 2016
The level of satisfaction of workers depends on how they do their job, the occupation is not crucial

2 - hi friend i have some suggestions to you about some people say that in order ,if you...

Writing Feedbackfadhilmd25 - Sep 21, 2016 / bismillah - Sep 21, 2016
The most important thing to be happy is to have an occupation that we enjoy doing. Is it true?

2 - Hi! I have some advice for you: disagree that statement... should be disagree to the statement... ...

Writing Feedbackryan31 - Sep 21, 2016 / kiki23 - Sep 21, 2016
Summary 7: Hula Dancing in Hawaiian Culture

5 - Hi erwin,after reading your summary, i have some suggestions, perhaps usefull for you. 1. "which be located in the...

Writing Feedbackerwiin - Sep 21, 2016 / Dioba - Sep 21, 2016
Reasons for Urbanization & Negatives of City Life

2 - Hi mem77, Your writing is good, but I found some grammatical issues there, let me show you -The...

Writing Feedbackmem77 - Sep 21, 2016 / Iedha01 - Sep 21, 2016
Summary article_Eating Junk Food Changes Your Cravings

3 - Hallo David. Here I left some suggestion for you. Hope it can helps you. 1. Fast food not...

Writing FeedbackDavid54 - Sep 21, 2016 / ibal28 - Sep 21, 2016
Summary Article: Population, urbanization and environment

3 - =in several countries, to live in the city is more fascinating for inhabitants rather than in rural area...

Writing Feedbackibal28 - Sep 20, 2016 / RAY93 - Sep 21, 2016
Find this out friends. EILTS Summary 5_Hola Dancing in Hawaiian Culture

3 - Hi fatirtalent,after reading your summary, i have some suggestions, perhaps usefull for you. 1.Hawai Island ----> as we know,...

Writing FeedbackFatirtalent - Sep 21, 2016 / Dioba - Sep 21, 2016
Talent and Hard Work as an Important Key to be Success

2 - Hi there, I think your essay is good enough, however I still found some mistakes there, let me share...

Writing Feedbackmem77 - Sep 21, 2016 / Iedha01 - Sep 21, 2016
Nigel Marsh shared his point of view on how to balance between life and work

2 - In my opinion, the above summary is well written. You have a good skill on writing, Fadhil. To enhance...

Writing Feedbackfadhilmd25 - Sep 21, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Sep 21, 2016
Women presence in the every sector of human life

2 - Dear FirmanRomadhon, here are some advices for your writing, feel free to correct me, This video is topic...

Writing FeedbackFirmanRomadhon20 - Sep 21, 2016 / fadhilmd25 - Sep 21, 2016
TED Pete Alcorn: The world in 2200

3 - ... planet is going to be a bad for inhabitans. the U.N's population data displayed that the trend...

Writing Feedbackmdamanhuri77 - Sep 20, 2016 / RAY93 - Sep 21, 2016
Article Summary: Miscarriage Is The Last Thing People Want To Talk About by Jamie Otis

3 - It was A terrible moment but she tried to share it in order this conversationso that this issue will...

Writing FeedbackIedha01 - Sep 20, 2016 / RAY93 - Sep 21, 2016
(TED) Cameron Russell: Looks aren't everything. Believe me, I'm a model

5 - hi...VKWSSH99 let me try to give you some corrections it is pointless to add "s" in a...

Writing FeedbackVKWSSH99 - Sep 21, 2016 / Jawa - Sep 21, 2016
HULA DANCING. Hawaii is not only full of beautiful views, but it is also a rich culture.

3 - Hii Bismillah.. You can deliver well and make us as the reader understand your article. But, i have some...

Writing Feedbackbismillah - Sep 21, 2016 / Giansy11 - Sep 21, 2016
TED summary : a 12-year-old app developer

3 - in this digital era, everyone, included children, can easily access..... that leads societies to be more creative ...

Writing FeedbackJawa - Sep 20, 2016 / RAY93 - Sep 21, 2016
TED Summary: Killing People are always wrong by Richard Bourke

3 - Richard Bourke is one of the Australian LAWYERS who works to save prisoners from death penalty. ''We are...

Writing FeedbackIedha01 - Sep 20, 2016 / RAY93 - Sep 21, 2016
IELTS Writing 7: Summary The Art of Mime

2 - Dear MJT, here are some advices for your writing, feel free to correct me, Mime can be a...

Writing FeedbackMJT - Sep 21, 2016 / fadhilmd25 - Sep 21, 2016
PUTTING WORMS TO WORK TO HELP YOUR GARDEN

4 - hi Jnur... let me try to give you some corrections, the first sentence reveals that you need...

Writing FeedbackJnur - Sep 20, 2016 / Jawa - Sep 21, 2016
Ted Summary - Hans Rosling - Debunking third world myths with the best stats you have ever seen

3 - Hello, your essay is good. However, I would like to give some suggestions for it. 1. He mentioned...

Writing Feedbackfadhilmd25 - Sep 21, 2016 / erwiin - Sep 21, 2016
WHY SHOULD WE TALK TO STRANGERS?

3 - Hi there! here are my ideas for your writing. as unsafe person = as unsafe individuals ...

Writing FeedbackJnur - Sep 20, 2016 / Rinnegan45 - Sep 21, 2016
The pros and cons of moving around in different places, IELTS Writing Task 2

4 - ....that they are more likely stayed in some places... (need verb) It is important that society spent their...

Writing Feedbackzian41 - Sep 19, 2016 / angga93 - Sep 21, 2016
Light Bulbs from Plastic Bottles, Water and Bleach

2 - Hi there! @abdasyari here some suggestions for you. Electricity is one of needs there are...

Writing Feedbackabdasyari93 - Sep 21, 2016 / Rinnegan45 - Sep 21, 2016

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