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|IELTS: Main reason for study; different age groups; employer support
Writing FeedbackSHanafi - Mar 27, 2014 / eddies - Mar 28, 2014
|IELTS: Studying at university to be successful? Yes, but it is not main decisive element.
6 - Maybe your sentence was not clear and the moderator replaced it with a more meaningful one. Anyway, the...
Writing FeedbackLinh Hoang - Mar 25, 2014 / MisterWandering - Mar 27, 2014
|food from restaurants or from home - it doesn't matter; food just must have good nutrition
Writing FeedbackBOMAT_IRA - Mar 26, 2014 / ernhy - Mar 27, 2014
|IELTS; The ability of students in the areas of literacy and numeracy have declined
15 - Topic: Many people believe that the ability of students in the areas of literacy and numeracy have declined...
Writing Feedbackkobehstan - Mar 15, 2014 / eddies - Mar 27, 2014
|Eassy For Toefl: computer for students vs books for library
Writing Feedbackjon_snow - Mar 7, 2014 / sntinn - Mar 27, 2014
|IELTS: Who concerns issues more? Young people or elderly people?; equally concerned
NEW - Young people are much more aware of and concerned about issues like the environment, poverty, and animal welfare than...
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|IELTS: High price of petrol as sollution the traffic and pollution;the Nederland
Writing FeedbackSHanafi - Mar 26, 2014 / crystal941 - Mar 27, 2014
|IELTS International sporting games are essential in releasing patriotic emotions; safe way
2 - Sports unite peoples from different corners of the world. (Hook) For some people, sport events heighten...
Writing FeedbackSHanafi - Mar 25, 2014 / eddies - Mar 27, 2014
|Traditional and International - Why do we need music? 'essence of individuals and society'
3 - From the beginning of civilisationcivilization music was one of the most fundairtentalfundamentalpartsaspects of our society. Every one listen to...
Writing FeedbackBob brother - Mar 26, 2014 / dumi - Mar 27, 2014
|Toefl essay - CELEBRITY OR ATHLETE - WHOM DO YOU WANT TO MEET AND WHY?
Writing Feedbacksandipsinh - Mar 26, 2014 / dumi - Mar 27, 2014
|IELTS: Expenditure on fast food by Income groups in UK; hamburger and pizza
6 - The bar chart compares the expenditure of three income groups of Britain on three types of fast foods...
Writing FeedbackSHanafi - Mar 23, 2014 / MisterWandering - Mar 27, 2014
|IELTS: International imprisonment level report; 'USA recorded the top notch level rate'
5 - ...Thank you for the correction, andial :D. I should be more careful to choose appropriate word...
Writing FeedbackSHanafi - Mar 22, 2014 / SHanafi - Mar 27, 2014
|It is better to have a broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one
6 - ramshah... please consider eddies' analyses regarding your essay. I think that your statement ... gain a...
Writing Feedbackramshah - Mar 26, 2014 / andial - Mar 26, 2014
|IELTS exam; changes to the educational system; good & bad effects
3 - I feel this sentence is incomplete, disrupting the free flow of the ideas in this paragraph. ...
Writing Feedbackgoraya - Mar 26, 2014 / eddies - Mar 26, 2014
|IELTS: Studying in univ. or finding a job? High education prospects a successful career
5 - High education and higher education do not have similar meanings. Higher education means education beyond high school such...
Writing FeedbackSHanafi - Mar 26, 2014 / MisterWandering - Mar 26, 2014
|price of petrol vs traffic & pollution - temporary solution
3 - In my opinion, the hike of petrol's price has various effects to people. Spelling: sollution (solution)...
Writing FeedbackLinh Hoang - Mar 26, 2014 / niesaysi - Mar 26, 2014
|TOEFL evalution -PEOPLE LEARN THINGS FROM LISTENING OTHER, SELF- EXPERIENCE, READING.
3 - this essay is not good in organization. You need 3 paragraphs, each paragraph has: Thesis, detail, concusion. hey...
Writing Feedbacksandipsinh - Mar 25, 2014 / sandipsinh - Mar 26, 2014
|Some people prefer to eat meals at home. Other people would rather eat at restaurants.
Writing Feedbackgoraya - Mar 22, 2014 / goraya - Mar 26, 2014
|some high school leavers choose to work/travel; a matter of personal preference
Writing Feedbackzztrieuman - Mar 26, 2014 / tiaDS - Mar 26, 2014
|IELTS: BENEFICIAL INTERNET AND TRAFFIC CONGESTION; encyclopedia of human
3 - First of all, it cannot be denied that the Internetinternet has revolutionizedthe way people used to communicatepeople's communication. ...
Writing Feedbackhunglk - Mar 26, 2014 / Pahan - Mar 26, 2014
|Power of advertising; My two friends who owned well serviced car bought the same car
Writing FeedbackPrabina12 - Mar 25, 2014 / dumi - Mar 26, 2014
|Essay For Toefl: taking risk vs careful planning
7 - This preposition can be used when saying what people, organizations, and reports have said, not quoted from your...
Writing Feedbackjon_snow - Mar 8, 2014 / eddies - Mar 26, 2014
|Air Force Academy - Ethical Dilemma essay; The following story was real and not fabricated
2 - had the right ofto distributing untouched leftovers among employees I think your essay is generally well-written....
Writing Feedbackfotuniverse - Mar 25, 2014 / ramshah - Mar 26, 2014
|Toefl essay - stress are relieved by people by reading, gardening, exercising.
3 - These books address enormous matters that sometime serve us solutions for our problems All embracing books hashave proven inexpensive...
Writing Feedbacksandipsinh - Mar 25, 2014 / ramshah - Mar 26, 2014
|IELTS:Working people are busy -don't have time for family and friends; severe consequences
Writing Feedbackanselzhang - Mar 6, 2014 / eddies - Mar 26, 2014
|TOEFL IBT: Why people want to move to big cities to settle down?
Writing Feedbackluonghao - Apr 10, 2013 / luonghao - Mar 25, 2014
|IELTS: Water Cycle from the ocean to air and to the Earth surface
7 - Hi, all. As my effort to improve my ability, I write this prompt repetitively. I am glad that you...
Writing FeedbackSHanafi - Mar 11, 2014 / SHanafi - Mar 25, 2014
|IELTS exam: studying at university is the best route to reach successful career
8 - Being at a univerity is better: -gives time to find yourself -harder to work pay check by pay check,...
Writing Feedbackandial - Mar 24, 2014 / SalomeA - Mar 25, 2014
|Begin learning EL at primary rather than secondary school?Advantages outweigh disadvantage
4 - First of all, at primary school,younger the brain of children caneasier and quicker to learn aadapt to new langguage...
Writing FeedbackLinh Hoang - Mar 24, 2014 / Pahan - Mar 25, 2014
|Politicians are the most important people on earth! -- They have the final say
4 - Well, generally you use examples to support your justifications and they come in body paras. Introduction is meant for...
Writing Feedbackesmayli - Mar 24, 2014 / dumi - Mar 25, 2014
|IELTS: the high sales of goods & power of advertising - 'what we buy is up to ourselves'
Writing FeedbackRebeccaZ - Mar 24, 2014 / RebeccaZ - Mar 25, 2014
|Toefl essay - Media invading public figures privacy.
3 - News that can be defined as" north east west south" provides happening of all these four zones of the...
Writing Feedbacksandipsinh - Mar 21, 2014 / dumi - Mar 25, 2014
|IELTS: Living in modern Apartment or Traditional House - support your choice
4 - Yes, it is not delivering the idea you want to convey to the reader. Afford means having enough money...
Writing FeedbackSHanafi - Feb 28, 2014 / dumi - Mar 25, 2014
|IELTS :Distance-learning cannot bring the benefits that traditional colleges offer; Agree?
3 - This indicates you don't care enough to finish a sentence properly. You don't need to use lazy...
Writing Feedbackanselzhang - Mar 4, 2014 / eddies - Mar 25, 2014
|TOEFL: friends you can have fun with or those who can help you?
4 - AsBeing a kind of social animal, our human beings needthe human needs company of others .attention and love from...
Writing Feedbackcococherry - Mar 24, 2014 / dumi - Mar 24, 2014
|IELTS: Pros and Cons - advertisement - has become integral part of modern society's life
5 - I strongly advise you to follow Pahan's suggested structure for this task. Time is a critical factor for this...
Writing Feedbackandial - Mar 22, 2014 / dumi - Mar 24, 2014
|IELTS TASK 2 : Young people now have a lot of pressure .
Writing Feedbackchunguyen97 - Mar 4, 2014 / eddies - Mar 24, 2014
|Ielts Task 2:Our cities are noisier than ever before. Why is this so, and what can be done
4 - Working to a very tight deadline , construction companies would prefer to choose continuously operation and apply heavy...
Writing Feedbackleoking - Mar 15, 2014 / eddies - Mar 24, 2014
|internet is the great innovation in our lives; be selective to see many effects
6 - You don't need to use this. In IELTS, this is called 'Lazy expression', belonging more to oral presentation....
Writing FeedbackRestu - Mar 23, 2014 / eddies - Mar 24, 2014
|Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia's share.
3 - Use these phrases to avoid repetition of words in your visual writing: The number of = the figure for...
Writing FeedbackBob brother - Mar 24, 2014 / eddies - Mar 24, 2014
|TOEFL: Keep trying and never stop working for your goals.
6 - Thank you dumi. That is very kind of you. I would certainly try to improve my introduction. ^...
Writing Feedbacksntinn - Mar 24, 2014 / sntinn - Mar 24, 2014
|Watching television is one of the simplest ways to relax after hard working time
Writing Feedbacknoriaki - Mar 23, 2014 / noriaki - Mar 24, 2014
|TOEFL: Why museums nowadays are so popular places to visit while traveling?
NEW - Could you please give me a feedback on this independent TOEFL essay? Many people visit museums when they...
Writing FeedbackXenia098 - Mar 24, 2014 / — -
|IELTS - Crime in UK; percentage of criminality of British people in different age/gender
11 - Use these phrases to avoid repetition of words in your visual writing: The number of = the figure for...
Writing FeedbackJasS - Mar 11, 2014 / eddies - Mar 24, 2014
|Hand work culture elimination is the 1st thing that would be cherished by human
4 - Use of machineriesmachines isare less time consuming. Theyit can complete a task in few minutes or hours.much shorter...
Writing Feedbacksandipsinh - Mar 23, 2014 / Pahan - Mar 24, 2014
|Toefl essay: Should we only watch movies that can teach us something about real life?
Writing FeedbackSpookysnoopy - Mar 23, 2014 / Pahan - Mar 24, 2014
|[TOEFL] The internet provides people with a lot of valuable info or problems?
Writing Feedbackramshah - Mar 23, 2014 / Pahan - Mar 24, 2014
|IELTS: highly qualif graduates without employment are frequent, why? cutthroat competition
3 - But this sole factor don't explain the whole problem, which is much more complex and difficult to deals with....
Writing FeedbackMowonight - Mar 23, 2014 / dumi - Mar 24, 2014
|(IELTS essay) It is becoming more and more difficult to escape the influence of the media
3 - I am sorry, shady. I really want to describe the part of my suggestion clearly. Unfortunately, when I want...
Writing FeedbackSlim shady - Mar 24, 2014 / SHanafi - Mar 24, 2014
|Task 1. imprisonment in five counties between 1930 and 1980
5 - ... thirty thousand or 30 thousand ... The chart illustrates imprisonment level in five major countries...
Writing FeedbackBob brother - Mar 23, 2014 / SHanafi - Mar 24, 2014
|(IELTS essay)Topic- in some countries young people have little leisure time...
Writing FeedbackSlim shady - Mar 23, 2014 / Slim shady - Mar 24, 2014
|IELS - A cheap air travel? advantage/ disadvantage; overweight - safety considerations
4 - This is what I have from your intro: A cheap air travel is becoming more popular than ever before....
Writing FeedbackBINGBINGLIANG - Mar 23, 2014 / eddies - Mar 24, 2014
|Can money bring happiness ? why or why not ?
Writing FeedbackSpecialK - Mar 21, 2014 / Linh Hoang - Mar 23, 2014
|IELTS-GT: it's important for parents to teach their children about the importance of money
3 - In IELTS, you'd better avoid using idioms or sayings which either state the obvious or seem out place...
Writing FeedbackNaveed786 - Mar 23, 2014 / eddies - Mar 23, 2014
|TOEFL - HOUSE OR BUSINESS? Which do you prefer more?
Writing Feedbackhakuyo1112 - Feb 28, 2014 / eddies - Mar 23, 2014
|IELTS TASK II : "Mother is the dead heart of the family" - Fatherhood vs Motherhood
7 - Do you write a 5-paragraph essay? Yes. You write one introduction, three bodies, and one conclusion. In the bodies,...
Writing FeedbackSHanafi - Feb 27, 2014 / eddies - Mar 23, 2014
|People who do not prefer change are pessimistic and who like changes- optimistic
6 - When you deal with IELTS, the first thing the assessor sees is your layout, which shows whole of your...
Writing Feedbackrachana - Feb 28, 2014 / eddies - Mar 23, 2014
|Raise of awarness; Younger are much more aware about issues like environment
6 - Do you write 3 paragraphs? Yes, but tell you the truth, you are playing with fire. You need an...
Writing Feedbackbilalakoz - Feb 28, 2014 / eddies - Mar 23, 2014
|TOEFL; In general , people are living longer now. Discuss the causes of phenomenon
6 - Yes, I agree I know you write well. However, you'd better always try to include the prompt. To...
Writing Feedbackhakuyo1112 - Feb 27, 2014 / eddies - Mar 23, 2014
|IELTS TASK 2 the most important thing in applying for jobs
2 - All of people need a job for earning money for surviving their life. Most of people need a job...
Writing FeedbackNhasir Rahmatia - Mar 23, 2014 / Restu - Mar 23, 2014
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