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|Severe problems with student behaviour of schools in many countries-IELTS Essay
Writing Feedbackphuonglanhpl - Aug 16, 2012 / ah_zafari - Aug 17, 2012
|Life Experience Essay on religious beliefs and how it effects my choices in friends
2 - ...wary of people who were practitioners of other religions; Jehovah's Witnesses , Atheists, Mormons, etc. This often led...
Writing FeedbackHimekoY - Aug 13, 2012 / EF_Susan - Aug 16, 2012
|"couch potatoes" - the luxuries and conveniences of contemporary life - Gre Issue
2 - Modern luxuries and conveniences have certainly helped our society become more independent as a whole; specifically by freeing historically...
Writing Feedbackmartinimadness - Aug 13, 2012 / EF_Susan - Aug 16, 2012
|'Good contact with nature' - leisure time indoors or outdoors?
Writing Feedbackneila - Aug 16, 2012 / ah_zafari - Aug 16, 2012
|'more than just strict punishment' - causes and punishment of teenager delinquency
Writing Feedbackzhoujingya - Aug 16, 2012 / ah_zafari - Aug 16, 2012
|GRE Issue essay - Originality does not mean thinking something that was never thought
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|Around 40% of people are studying because of their interest in subject and to gain qualification
Writing Feedbackvijaythot - Aug 16, 2012 / payampoya - Aug 16, 2012
|'Reach Malaysia!' - essay check
2 - Hi,first of all your essay is not clear i could not understand what it was about,internet?,facebook?using of handphones? what?,then...
Writing Feedbackisai - Aug 11, 2012 / payampoya - Aug 16, 2012
|GRE: Students should question what they are taught instead of accepting it passively
2 - hi ,i think if you use the second paragraph as the introduction it would be better but its not...
Writing Feedbackameynvaidya - Aug 15, 2012 / payampoya - Aug 16, 2012
|TOEFL essay : The subject that you want to learn more about (economics)
Writing Feedbackmdrphongdinh89 - Aug 12, 2012 / mdrphongdinh89 - Aug 16, 2012
|IELTS essay: The suggestion for save forest!
Writing Feedbackkogikothe - Aug 15, 2012 / April April - Aug 15, 2012
|My Generation Essay (music, brands, technology)
2 - Hi :) Nice work on your paper.I have a few ideas and suggestions. As generations come and go,...
Writing Feedbacksydzboo - Aug 7, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Aug 15, 2012
|'being enthusiastic and committed to become successful' - child hood dreams
Writing Feedbackneo1989 - Aug 15, 2012 / neo1989 - Aug 15, 2012
|'changes of using fuel source to produce electricity' - [IELTS] Task 1--- Pie chart
2 - you should use words with more impact like dramatic increase or exponentially rather than huge. "In constrast, there...
Writing Feedbackcollphunk - Aug 13, 2012 / jezeter - Aug 15, 2012
|paying money to supporting art or protecting environment?!
NEW - Up on the choice that whether art is more important or paying attention to environment, different people hold various...
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|IELTS-Given possible reasons for the loose of relationship between the family members
NEW - Question:It is generally acknowledged that families are not as close as they used to do. Give possible reasons and...
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|TOEFL Essay," Is daily homework necessary..?"
3 - In my opinion, you can make your conclussion more concise. I'd rather rewrite it this way: In short,...
Writing Feedbackana_p - Jul 26, 2012 / Minhhuy - Aug 15, 2012
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|'to be comfortable with words' - autoliteracy, rewriting for class
2 - Hi, I have a few suggestions to edit your writing The word 'literacy' means an ability to read,...
Writing Feedbackbjuaquin - Aug 14, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Aug 14, 2012
|TOEFL Essay,"Planning is better for free time activities OR not"
6 - Jennifer, You are a great person. I check out your posts. I admire your helping tendency. I humbly request...
Writing Feedbackana_p - Jul 23, 2012 / amitt - Aug 14, 2012
|People's reason for quit the countryside is logical
7 - Hi, I am little bit confuse about your posts... Can you please clear my confusion...? I think,...
Writing Feedbacka_p687 - Jul 31, 2012 / ana_p - Aug 14, 2012
|[TOEFL] Eating at hove vs. eating out (my recommendation)
Writing Feedbackco11apse - Aug 8, 2012 / ana_p - Aug 14, 2012
|GRE Argument--Professor evaluation vs. grade inflation
NEW - Hi guys, just need you to look at my essay! please leave your feedback. Thanks a lot! Prompt:...
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|Dear John, look after my house and pet - IELTS letter
Writing Feedbackrawbin - Jul 25, 2012 / Msx punk - Aug 14, 2012
|'improper use' - Effect of tv on teenagers
Writing Feedbackneo1989 - Aug 12, 2012 / neo1989 - Aug 13, 2012
|GRE: Palean Baskets were not uniquely Paleans
5 - Thank you so much for your inspiration, Ahmad. I look forward to your review in my future writing as...
Writing Feedbackdeepakbaniya - Aug 9, 2012 / deepakbaniya - Aug 13, 2012
|Modern high technology is transforming the way we work and is of benefit to society
NEW - Please check and reply my way of writing and grammar. Write an essay for university lecturer arguing either...
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|Most of us require progressive learning in order to contribute to our field.
4 - Thanks Deep! I guess I've been misusing that word my whole life. I was wondering what anyone else thought...
Writing FeedbackSkyanne - Aug 6, 2012 / Skyanne - Aug 13, 2012
|IELTS - POSSIBLE WAYS OF LEARNING ENGLISH, INCLUDING IN THE SPEAKING COUNTRY.
3 - I absolutely agree with your opinion! However, it could be nicer if you put one more body paragraph....
Writing Feedbackjobymonpj - Aug 12, 2012 / vickey - Aug 12, 2012
|America on Drugs - ENG102 Research Paper Draft
2 - I have a few suggestions. ...the nation, and its habitual use of medications is on the rise. Maybe...
Writing Feedbackmrogerscarruolo - Aug 11, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Aug 12, 2012
|'how travel mode usages have changed in England' - IELTS
2 - The table shows a database about how travel mode usages have changed in England from 1985 to 2000. Overall,...
Writing Feedbacks2184973 - Aug 12, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Aug 12, 2012
|Better to use our mind in exchange for computers to translate text
NEW - computers can tranlate all kinds of languages well.Do our children need to learn more languages in the future? ...
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|(teacher salaries / being unique for success?) - TOEFL Essays
Writing Feedbacktoohunlee - Aug 12, 2012 / toohunlee - Aug 12, 2012
|'advantage use of technology for humans' - GRE eassay
Writing Feedbackabhilasha - Jul 24, 2012 / abhilasha - Aug 12, 2012
|'learning ease' - Using a computer can have more negetive than positive effects?
3 - constant stairing the monitor as well as emission of radiations/obesity because of sitting are few more drawbacks but if...
Writing Feedbackmalaknaz - Aug 11, 2012 / amitt - Aug 11, 2012
|Cruel apartheid is apparent in Public Ed Sys in USA; An Inequality in Education
2 - injustices that have haunted this country, a country that ... ---- The comma should be either a semi-colon or...
Writing Feedbackcgilkey - Aug 2, 2012 / ershad193 - Aug 11, 2012
|Art essay, forever impacting our world
2 - In the conclusion, do not say "something that can make us feel an emotion"...say "something that make me feel...
Writing Feedbackmforero333 - Aug 10, 2012 / PBP - Aug 11, 2012
|TOEFL- juvenile delinquency and critical situations
NEW - Recent years, the number of crimes committed by young people in major cities throughout the world is increasing. Discuss...
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|'computers and machines are the best inventions' - TOEFL
NEW - Most people prefer working with people than with machines. There are host of occupations that we can choose, but...
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|'ways of becoming mature and courageous' - There's no success like failure
5 - Yes, you should use two or three examples. Try to use the structure: 1)Make introduction on what you are...
Writing Feedbackazurek14 - Aug 8, 2012 / Ibrik - Aug 11, 2012
|"On Balmer Island, where mopeds serve as a popular form of transportation
Writing Feedbacksanyagoyal1988 - Aug 10, 2012 / sanyagoyal1988 - Aug 11, 2012
|You can learn a lot about people by clothes they wear.
NEW - In our daily life we meet different people; they have different characters, different hairstyles and different clothing style. I...
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|'busy work and modern entertainment' - lack a sense of community
3 - You should write about the 2 causes in 1 paragraph, don't seperate them in 2 different ones. Also, in...
Writing FeedbackMarylin_Monroe - Aug 3, 2012 / April April - Aug 11, 2012
|'spending twelve years at high school' - Student Should Work Part-time While Studying
Writing FeedbackGachhong Heng - Aug 10, 2012 / ha phuong - Aug 11, 2012
|GRE ISSUE 207:Rituals and ceremonies help define a culture. Without them, societies
NEW - I really need your recommendation! The speaker asserts that rituals and ceremonies help define a culture and it...
Writing FeedbackIMQ - Aug 11, 2012 / — -
|Same laws which prohibit the sale and consumption of heroin be applied to tobacco?
Writing Feedbackhiren46 - Aug 9, 2012 / ah_zafari - Aug 10, 2012
|IELTS：globalisation... hold demerits
Writing Feedbackxiaoyu - Aug 9, 2012 / ah_zafari - Aug 10, 2012
|The future of our society is partly depended on the socialization of our children
NEW - I really appreciate your help! p.s. some of sentences refer to kevin's answer. The speaker asserts that how...
Writing FeedbackIMQ - Aug 10, 2012 / — -
|"Help for Depressed Teenagers" - summarization of my article
NEW - can you guys check my article if i have a grammar mistakes or suggestion of how can i improve...
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|Lying is always wrong, no matter whether it is a big lie or a white lie
8 - your essay is really good, but there some grammar mistakes. Try to expand you essay to mak it more...
Writing Feedbackhizaza - Aug 6, 2012 / cherry_09 - Aug 9, 2012
|'children play too much computer games?' - IELTS exam criteria
Writing Feedbackbeibeibajin - Aug 9, 2012 / beibeibajin - Aug 9, 2012
|[TOEFL] finding traces of the past - Does past pass values on our present lives?
Writing Feedbacksolitaire - Aug 9, 2012 / dumi - Aug 9, 2012
|'rising cities and living in them' - essay
5 - Why do people prefer to live in cities? How should cities be designed? Every week a millions of...
Writing Feedbackmatilda - Aug 9, 2012 / naijaprincess - Aug 9, 2012
|Training for work is more important than providing a broad base education?
4 - really good...
Writing Feedbacksohle143 - Aug 7, 2012 / mailridhima - Aug 9, 2012
|[TOEFL] Small town vs. Big city (opportunities, entertainment, job places)
8 - Yeah I'd agree Deepak. Well, I could'nt find much mistakes as I'm just 13, but still I found it...
Writing Feedbackco11apse - Aug 7, 2012 / Msx punk - Aug 9, 2012
|Education is long life task. Do u agree or disagree
Writing FeedbackMsx punk - Aug 8, 2012 / Msx punk - Aug 9, 2012
|Heroes risk their reputation and their lives
2 - OtherAnother example is,Elvis Aaron Presley. H is novel versions of existing songs - don't forget capital letters, and another...
Writing FeedbackNada Amer - Aug 8, 2012 / co11apse - Aug 8, 2012
|Do we ourselves cause change in our lives by making certain decisions?(SAT prep)
Writing FeedbackEgyie_D - Aug 8, 2012 / crada - Aug 8, 2012
|IELTS Task 2: Art or other essential service? Discuss both views, give your opinions
Writing Feedbacksophienguyen92v - Aug 6, 2012 / dumi - Aug 8, 2012
|Are relationships between people and pets good? [TOEFL]
6 - Pats has to be "strikethrough" or not be there at all... Sorry, I noticed it too late to edit...
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