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|IELTS - To reduce traffic in cities, we should reduce traveling by people
Writing Feedbackhoshmp - Sep 20, 2012 / dumi - Sep 25, 2012
|'Dieting - a billion dollar market' - ielts
5 - You are really just bulleting facts. You need to add connecting sentences in between each of the sentences. Your...
Writing Feedbackvikki - Sep 24, 2012 / oksanavy7 - Sep 24, 2012
|Why Materialistic People Are Less Happy in Marriage?
5 - cool!...
Writing Feedbackzer000 - Sep 12, 2012 / ThreeFive2Hood - Sep 24, 2012
|ielts : financial education in school - should be mandatory
Writing Feedbackvikki - Sep 24, 2012 / joythblessy - Sep 24, 2012
|IELTS: Impacts of Technology and its crucial part of our lives
7 - nice work but you have stressed only on security .. technology is a general term and so it requires...
Writing FeedbackApril April - Aug 19, 2012 / vikki - Sep 24, 2012
|[TOEFL] Impacts of airplanes on modern life
Writing Feedbackhovan0201 - Sep 22, 2012 / vikki - Sep 24, 2012
|Choosing the place of working - IELTS ESSAY
Writing Feedbackxuanda - Sep 21, 2012 / vikki - Sep 24, 2012
|'The Hunger Games' - literacy narrative to proof read
2 - I have always thrived in math and science courses, but when it came to reading there was something about...
Writing Feedbackwrivers - Sep 12, 2012 / seraph - Sep 24, 2012
|TOEFL: Going in vacation or buying a car??
4 - ...A car could bring some benefits to its owner. It takes you to work every morning and carries his...
Writing Feedbackxucoi - Sep 15, 2012 / sweetbitterrose - Sep 23, 2012
|[IELTS] advantages vs disadvantages .requiring revision
Writing Feedbackcanadyfor - Sep 21, 2012 / canadyfor - Sep 23, 2012
|'change the world?' - What would you tell your founding fathers prompt? 2 3
104 - Yes, this was definitely a worthwhile experience. Nevertheless, I would still like to work on my grammar and overall...
Writing Feedbackchessman567 - Jun 7, 2012 / chessman567 - Sep 23, 2012
|TOEFL: I prefer to learn by a teacher - can learn the subject a lot deeper
Writing FeedbackMoonMoon - Sep 21, 2012 / MoonMoon - Sep 23, 2012
|Eat at food stand or restaurants. What is your viewpoint?
5 - This statement is unclear to me, "That is to say, at restaurants, you merely enjoy the taste of food...
Writing Feedbacklengoctrang - Aug 30, 2012 / ndiduch - Sep 22, 2012
|TOEFL Essay - Small or large class - which is better?
NEW - I have just started writting TOEFL essay, thus, your support is so much appreciated! . TOPIC: Do you...
Writing Feedbackhovan0201 - Sep 22, 2012 / — -
|IELTS -Eating in many Western countries
3 - Thank you very much for the feedback. This was my first essay for IELTS, so I don't have very...
Writing Feedbackcolor - Sep 21, 2012 / color - Sep 22, 2012
|'Having written many essays' - Introduction of Myself
NEW - I've been writing many essays already since my grade school years and one of my favorites is writing about...
Writing Feedbackavrillorraine - Sep 21, 2012 / — -
|[IELTS] Artificail robots substitute human
2 - there are some of my critisms: - The title doesn't fit the content of essay. - your body paragraph,...
Writing FeedbackPATRICK84 - Sep 19, 2012 / xuanda - Sep 21, 2012
|certain high schools require students to learn foreign language while other let stude
2 - schools are playing very bigimportant role to makein improving a students'carriercareer (SPELLING) prospects . only school build's up a...
Writing Feedbackbhupender - Sep 17, 2012 / April April - Sep 21, 2012
|[IELTS] People's diet and traditional foods
Writing FeedbackEhsan - Sep 17, 2012 / Ehsan - Sep 20, 2012
|Toefl: taking action directly is usually a good strategy
2 - it is nice approach, but i think you should write in four paras, 1st Introduction, than discuss topic, than...
Writing FeedbackJelLyLy - Sep 12, 2012 / hoshmp - Sep 20, 2012
|"Mobile Technology and Today's Student" - why wouldn't we take advantage of that?
Writing Feedbacksmiller - Sep 11, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Sep 19, 2012
|Toefl essay feedback: (Agree/Disagree) Employers should employ long-life worker.
3 - Thank you very much, Jennifer. I appreciate your comment for my essay and I gonna fix it based on...
Writing Feedbackhuonglt11 - Sep 16, 2012 / huonglt11 - Sep 19, 2012
|Toefl Topic: Knowledge from experience or knowledge from books?
Writing Feedbackmeili luo - Sep 18, 2012 / meili luo - Sep 19, 2012
|'success and knowledge' - [TOEFL] Learning about the past has no value
NEW - Topic: Learning about the past has no value on for those of us living the present. Do you agree...
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|An Analysis of Outsourcing Information Systems
Writing Feedbackmonajha - Sep 18, 2012 / kbambisa - Sep 19, 2012
|studying major cities only gives a glimpse on a society...
2 - 1. Use a spell checker (example: 'continueing' should be 'continuing' or ' undersrtanding' should be 'understanding'). 2. Proofread (example:...
Writing Feedbackmohammmo - Sep 2, 2012 / testing - Sep 18, 2012
|Governments should invest as much in the arts as they do in the military.
2 - Two things: 1. There should be a space after comma. 2. This, for example: "a society flourishing there...
Writing Feedbacksanyagoyal1988 - Sep 11, 2012 / ace - Sep 18, 2012
|Toefl: Do you agree or disagree? "Automobile has improved modern life"
Writing FeedbackMoonMoon - Sep 17, 2012 / ace - Sep 18, 2012
|Plase Evaluate my essay for Toefl - Category - Aggree or Disagree
4 - ...
Writing Feedbacknamrta - Sep 9, 2012 / meili luo - Sep 18, 2012
|IELTS Essay: Pollution, traffic congestion and solutions
2 - Drivers should be charged for congestion fee, thus this will force people to use public transport rather than private...
Writing Feedbackquy - Sep 17, 2012 / monajha - Sep 17, 2012
|[IELTS TASK 2] Developing countries are focusing on tourism. Reason and your opinion.
2 - Nowadays, an increasing number of impoverished nations are focusing on the development of tourism. It(There) is no doubt that...
Writing Feedbackrtfbvg - Sep 17, 2012 / quy - Sep 17, 2012
|Successful sports professionals - international reputation of the nation role
3 - certain high schools require students to learn foreign language while other let students learn subjects of their choice.which policy...
Writing Feedbackgag379 - Sep 13, 2012 / bhupender - Sep 17, 2012
|Love or Jealousy paragraph- Is this to harsh?
2 - is stronger because it thieves and festers off the ever-present pillars of Truth and Reality. Yeah it is...
Writing FeedbackTooDamn_Funky - Sep 16, 2012 / Pirateking - Sep 16, 2012
|best choice for a particular groups; Traditional and International music value
4 - Hi, I think following sentences describe the importance of international and traditional music. How could I improve these any...
Writing Feedbackquy - Sep 15, 2012 / quy - Sep 16, 2012
|IELTS Essay: Talent or Training
NEW - Could you please check my essay and give me some feedback? I would appreciate it. Topic: It is...
Writing Feedbackalexskyes - Sep 16, 2012 / — -
|healthy body - learning prevention will lead to many useful things in our life
Writing Feedbacktaher abdallah - Sep 14, 2012 / oanhmiss2 - Sep 16, 2012
|A person should never make an important decision alone? I dont agree
Writing Feedbackhungvud - Sep 12, 2012 / hungvud - Sep 15, 2012
|SOCIAL NETWORKING SITES (pros and cons)
2 - Some thoughts: - Try not to use 'also' so much (synonyms: too, as well, in addition, additionally, along...
Writing Feedbackmonajha - Sep 13, 2012 / nikhi - Sep 15, 2012
|Do you prefer using machines or doing work by hand? 'Machines are quite precise'
4 - Some of your sentences seems inaccurate and unnecessary. For example: Machines do not make any mistakes. (Technically not true...
Writing Feedbackmeili luo - Sep 15, 2012 / Shay87 - Sep 15, 2012
|Toefl: Do you agree or disagree? "Grades (marks) encourage students to learn more."
2 - I recommand you to give some personal experiences or qoute some cases . It is not thorough enough ....
Writing FeedbackMelika Abasi - Sep 15, 2012 / zer000 - Sep 15, 2012
|Autism Vs vaccines essay - the Controversy
2 - Essay sounded awesome! I have a younger sister with Autism, and I loved this! Do you at least have...
Writing Feedbackleshiro - Sep 2, 2012 / amcd - Sep 14, 2012
|Report-International survey about attitudes to job
Writing Feedbackkittyas - Sep 14, 2012 / kittyas - Sep 14, 2012
|Crime, population, and taxpayer's role - essay
NEW - Can you help with other essay please? Write about the following topic: In many cities crime is increasing. Why...
Writing Feedbackoptal - Sep 13, 2012 / — -
|'Living with parents and generation gap' - Topic: iBT writing
Writing Feedbackmahtabk - Sep 9, 2012 / krishnakant - Sep 13, 2012
|TOEFL: There is nothing uneducated people can teach educated people. Do you agree?
4 - Your essay is very good, organized your thoughts well..but you had some grammatical errors...i mentioned two..so like go over...
Writing Feedbackthaonguyen1901 - Sep 12, 2012 / Shayke_96 - Sep 13, 2012
|"Luck or success' - Is success in life earned, or do people succeed because they are lucky?
Writing Feedbackikufun23 - Sep 13, 2012 / — -
|'self-satisfaction' - GRE:True success can be measured
3 - Thanks Dumi...
Writing Feedbackmahsaa - Sep 9, 2012 / mahsaa - Sep 13, 2012
|Does our happiness come at the cost of others' misery?
2 - I strongly recommend you to separate your essay to 3-4 paragraph. It will be more clear to indicate your...
Writing Feedbackandshewashappy8 - Sep 9, 2012 / zer000 - Sep 12, 2012
|brings equality, create unity; Should schools strickly enforce dress codes?
5 - You made some very good points in your essay. I think school dress codes also help keep students more...
Writing Feedbackhp709 - Sep 11, 2012 / chess1921 - Sep 12, 2012
|Toefl Topic: Do you prefer living in a place with diverse climate or a place ...
2 - Writing in "first person" means that you are writing as if you are speaking it, in real time. It...
Writing FeedbackMoonMoon - Sep 11, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Sep 12, 2012
|GRE issue topic-The surest indicator of a great nation
2 - I think it's a great, well thought out essay. I guess there are some problems with commas, like: ...
Writing Feedbackmujunlin - Sep 12, 2012 / ace - Sep 12, 2012
|IELTS essay; assess this essay and show me my mistakes?
3 - I wrote another essay, i hope it could score better. The bar chart above, shows the proportion of...
Writing Feedbackfedail - Sep 8, 2012 / fedail - Sep 12, 2012
|Toefl -Many people believe that it is very important to make large amounts of money,
4 - O'K i will try to explain what I mean when I say concrete introduction. You should generalize what bot...
Writing Feedbacknamrta - Sep 11, 2012 / eradulova - Sep 12, 2012
|The world is changing fast, people are less happy.
Writing FeedbackChrisLiu - Aug 28, 2012 / IMQ - Sep 12, 2012
|Everything was silent. I did not hear the heavy drumming sounds of the dog breathing.
2 - Hi :) You have done a very nice job with your essay. It is very descriptive, and definitely takes...
Writing Feedbackzmelman - Sep 10, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Sep 11, 2012
|IELTS TASK 1; Figures of the hamburgers annual sales of Marry
2 - The line graph illustrates the figures of theMarry'sannual hamburgers annual salesof Marryat his restaurant. The report will give a...
Writing Feedbackweareone_08 - Sep 11, 2012 / Jennyflower81 - Sep 11, 2012
|TOEFL: University student should not be required to attend classes.
3 - Your essay is quite good...but i think you should revise the essay and look out for all those silly...
Writing Feedbackmissbjang - Sep 11, 2012 / Shayke_96 - Sep 11, 2012
|'free entrance to museums and art galleries' -revise my IELTS writing task 2
6 - Hm, you didn't add anything useful. You just rewrote Grama's input... You should add someting more unique....
Writing Feedbackoptal - Sep 10, 2012 / ace - Sep 11, 2012
|'The quest to be Lake City's new mayor' - Argument writing
Writing Feedbackgolnar - Aug 15, 2012 / sanyagoyal1988 - Sep 11, 2012
|[IELTS]Men and women employed in full-time jobs have to share evenly household chores
3 - In your second as well as third para you didn't mention the present situation/modern world in which Men and...
Writing FeedbackTomy6240 - Sep 10, 2012 / amittt - Sep 11, 2012
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