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|A lifelong process which reflects my expectation from life in terms of getting a job and working
2 - Yober, when you already need a PhD for the rest of your career plans, you will have done that...
Scholarshipyober - Nov 3, 2016 / Holt - Mar 19, 2017
|"I've always been a book lover" KGSP Letter of Self-Introduction
Scholarshipkhadouj - Mar 19, 2017 / Maitouyen282 - Mar 19, 2017
|"Perseverance" - Essay for scholarship application by Nanyang Technology School (NTU) in Singapore
5 - Hi Holt, Thank you very much for your kind advice. I really appreciate your help and honest opinions as...
Scholarshipwayne193 - Mar 17, 2017 / wayne193 - Mar 18, 2017
|KGSP Future Goals - specialist advisor on technology
Scholarshipjkl - Mar 18, 2017 / Holt - Mar 18, 2017
|Reputable in linguistics - AAS - How did you choose your proposed course and institution?
2 - Muhammad, I can see that you placed great effort in developing this essay response. It has some right ideas,...
Scholarshipcons - Mar 18, 2017 / Holt - Mar 18, 2017
|I'm applying Wageningen NFP Scholarship, review my answer for this 3 questions
Scholarshippamilaadhi - Mar 8, 2017 / pamilaadhi - Mar 17, 2017
|Creativity in Using Communication Platforms -- Application for AAS
ScholarshipHatif - Mar 12, 2017 / Hatif - Mar 16, 2017
|Practical examples to use the knowledge and possible constraints - AAS Essay
6 - Well @Holt I guess you're right since honestly I'm not good at research. In fact I feel better if...
Scholarshipd2ny - Mar 10, 2017 / d2ny - Mar 16, 2017
|Passion and talent for languages; KGSP assion and talent for languages self-introduction Russia
3 - Natalia, your first paragraph does not apply to the essay requirement covering your course of life, point of view...
Scholarshipnayumi - Mar 15, 2017 / Holt - Mar 16, 2017
|KGSP - SELF INTRODUCTION - Translation and Interpretation major
4 - No, they are not intertwined because you had to leave the school in order to accomplish the task. It...
Scholarshipberfityberf - Mar 12, 2017 / Holt - Mar 16, 2017
|Checking different internet articles to get information about AAS
2 - Dany, start from the beginning. The essay must be approached from a chronological order. When did you first hear...
Scholarshipd2ny - Mar 15, 2017 / Holt - Mar 15, 2017
|Korea-Russia business. KGSP - Study plan for international trade master program
3 - Na, your goal of study is confused. You started it out as a personal statement, explained a long and...
Scholarshipamistrelia - Mar 14, 2017 / Holt - Mar 15, 2017
|Accomplishing something authentic; KGSP: FUTURE PLAN AFTER STUDY
4 - Chohra, it would be in your best interest if you write your goal of study plan before you work...
ScholarshipSprouty93 - Mar 12, 2017 / Holt - Mar 14, 2017
|NZAS scholarship : Why did you decide to apply to study in New Zealand or other Pacific location?
5 - Thanks everyone. I will add sentences about the research opportunity in university I am going to apply. :)...
Scholarshiprochamukti - Mar 12, 2017 / rochamukti - Mar 14, 2017
|Commonwealth Scholarships in the United Kingdom - Benefits to home country essay
7 - @Holt okay i get your point. Of which the problem with this essay is limited number of words. The...
ScholarshipBiegie - Mar 2, 2017 / Biegie - Mar 13, 2017
|I developed a strong network with key Ministry of Health and Sanitation authorities. Chevening.
9 - While there is not a single event in this essay that clearly portrays how you have created and used...
ScholarshipJopa 1 - Mar 10, 2017 / Holt - Mar 13, 2017
|Born in Lagos, the commercial hub of Nigeria, into a family of three; KGSP SELF-INTRODUCTION LETTER
3 - Thanks so much @Holt for your review. I shall effect the changes and repost. Thanks for a whole lot....
ScholarshipIntuitive - Mar 12, 2017 / Intuitive - Mar 13, 2017
|As a cutting edge field in the 21st century biotechnology is in the spotlight today. KGSP STUDY PLAN
Scholarshipnababa19 - Mar 10, 2017 / nababa19 - Mar 12, 2017
|Future plan - KGSP program - I want to dedicate my efforts and abilities to Korea
2 - Sunhi, don't keep the reviewer guessing about the timetable for your plans. Be specific. For example, in order to...
Scholarshipyuukisnow - Mar 12, 2017 / Holt - Mar 12, 2017
|'Be Creative Or die trying to' - KGSP- Letter Of self introduction
4 - Since you lack work experience, it is imperative that you create the idea that your internships did more than...
Scholarshipgussef - Mar 11, 2017 / Holt - Mar 12, 2017
|KSP Goal Study Plan. 2017- I will add methodology at the latter part.
Scholarshipjc05 - Mar 12, 2017 / jc05 - Mar 12, 2017
|Life is like riding a bicycle. Check for me this Letter of Introduce
ScholarshipMinh Minh - Mar 12, 2017 / Minh Minh - Mar 12, 2017
|I intended to be Lecturer but my ambition is to conduct researches - KGSP program application essay
Scholarshipria17 - Mar 10, 2017 / jc05 - Mar 12, 2017
|The mathematics stuck with me. My Essay for KGSP - Self Introduction
2 - Grace, this is a very well phrased, but irrelevant and weak essay. It does not serve the purpose that...
Scholarshipmoo_min - Mar 11, 2017 / Holt - Mar 12, 2017
|Home benefits; being in a position to assist my country, Nigeria (Commonwealth shared scholarship).
5 - Chinwedu, I understand that this particular scholarship supports some selected taught Master's courses. Perhaps, you may have received an...
ScholarshipChiObi - Mar 10, 2017 / okorobiadimma14 - Mar 11, 2017
|AR technology combined with board games. My Study Plan and Goal of Study for KGSP
2 - Wong, what is the purpose of your AR technology research? Developing it for video games is not unique. The...
Scholarshipnanenoiii - Mar 11, 2017 / Holt - Mar 11, 2017
|KGSP Self-Introduction - Striving for a global education in business
3 - Jessalyn, the KGSP reviewers do not review your qualifications based upon general comments such as these. Review the prompt...
Scholarshipjkl - Mar 11, 2017 / Holt - Mar 11, 2017
|Optimisation of the supply chain activities. Goal and study plan - KGSP, Phd studies
6 - The problem is that you formatted your essay in a bullet points type of setting when the more beneficial...
Scholarshipyuuki kym - Mar 11, 2017 / Holt - Mar 11, 2017
|Letter of Self Introduction: KGSP, majoring in human resource and management
4 - @jc05 Hi, I am really interested in your work. However, I have some advice to give you to improve...
Scholarshipjc05 - Mar 8, 2017 / Maitouyen282 - Mar 11, 2017
|MYCETOMA - study plan for KGSP about endemic diseases.
2 - Zobida, since this is a continuation of your college thesis research, you should open the goal of study with...
Scholarshipzobidah - Mar 11, 2017 / Holt - Mar 11, 2017
|Repaying the gratitude and appreciation to Korea - Future Goal for KGSP Scholarship
3 - When you discuss becoming a lecturer in Korea, indicate what kind of lecturer you want to be and where...
Scholarshipeiriashhar - Mar 11, 2017 / Holt - Mar 11, 2017
|KGSP Study Plan - Reducing pollution to make a better future to live in
Scholarshipeiriashhar - Mar 8, 2017 / eiriashhar - Mar 10, 2017
|KGSP Graduate Goal of Study and Study Plan - A specialist in technology and East Asia
2 - Jessalyn, I suggest that you just present the research plan that has a direct relation with your post study...
Scholarshipjkl - Mar 10, 2017 / Holt - Mar 10, 2017
|I intend to be employed in a Korean firm. KGSP Future plans after my studies
4 - Joyce, you sound so desperate and defeatist in the opening paragraph. You need to project an aura of confidence...
ScholarshipJoyK - Mar 10, 2017 / Holt - Mar 10, 2017
|I got caught in the everyday routine. KGSP: Statement of purpose <goal of study>
5 - Not quite there yet. You have the thesis statement presented but you do not have any representation of how...
ScholarshipZeroXid - Mar 9, 2017 / Holt - Mar 10, 2017
|How will the suggested study benefit my future? - AAS Essay
5 - The second paragraph is irrelevant. There is no need to inform the reviewer about your employment arrangement. That is...
Scholarshipd2ny - Mar 7, 2017 / Holt - Mar 10, 2017
|I intend to apply for the Chevening 2018-19 scholarship - Career Plan question
8 - Thanks Very much Holt and folks for your patience in reviewing my work. I hope to work on paragraph...
ScholarshipJopa 1 - Mar 7, 2017 / Jopa 1 - Mar 10, 2017
|"Future Plan after Study" , Design product - is an assistant.
ScholarshipSiiaBirill - Mar 9, 2017 / SiiaBirill - Mar 10, 2017
|A passionate young man that always want to help people. Self-introduction KGSP - biotechnology
14 - @Holt thank you alot....i really appreciate ..may God continue to strengthen you ...thanks alot let me post my study...
Scholarshipnababa19 - Feb 22, 2017 / nababa19 - Mar 10, 2017
|International Development and Cooperation KGSP Letter of Self Introduction
10 - This is a very good clarification. It would be best though to divide it into a number of paragraphs....
ScholarshipJoyK - Mar 7, 2017 / Holt - Mar 9, 2017
|My Goal is to become an International Development specialist. KGSP Statement of Purpose
6 - Don't remove the questions. Instead, you should work on presenting it as a part of the thesis statement /...
ScholarshipJoyK - Mar 7, 2017 / Holt - Mar 9, 2017
|KGSP2017 - Letter of self-introduction - My look towards the future
3 - Johana, your first paragraph does not make any sense. Your family background should be just that, a family background...
Scholarshipjunhana - Mar 9, 2017 / Holt - Mar 9, 2017
|My essay for an OFID scholarship application to do my masters at UNESCO-IHE
6 - hello @Holt i really appreciate the your input in helping me come up with a usable essay for my...
Scholarshipjoseph256 - Mar 7, 2017 / joseph256 - Mar 9, 2017
|KGSP - letter of self introduction; to attain my goals and to expand my potential in the future.
2 - Amarhyun, please consider discussing the method of education in Korea that you have come too admire through your interactions...
Scholarshipammarhyun - Mar 9, 2017 / Holt - Mar 9, 2017
|My Korean Future - KGSP Post Study Plans
2 - Patience, a post study plan does not require a conclusion in the manner that you have presented. There are...
ScholarshipPeaches07 - Mar 8, 2017 / Holt - Mar 9, 2017
|KGSP2017 - Letter of self-introduction - fulfill my dream
5 - Yuuki, the essay is improved. However, there is a lack of professional experience representation on your part. Is this...
ScholarshipBoyoung - Mar 8, 2017 / Holt - Mar 9, 2017
|Korean games. My self-introduction for KGSP it will make my dream into reality
Scholarshipnanenoiii - Mar 3, 2017 / nanenoiii - Mar 8, 2017
|Living in a more sustainable environment - KGSP scholarship letter of self introduction.
3 - Taiwo, the self introduction that you have written is a bit too long. You need to compress the educational...
Scholarshipolutee360 - Mar 8, 2017 / Holt - Mar 8, 2017
|My skills and knowledge. SCHOLARSHIP APPLICATION ABOUT FUTURE GOALS
4 - @digaprasiska Hi Diga, In question number one, It says what skills you will gain and knowledge. I...
Scholarshipdigaprasiska - Mar 7, 2017 / jc05 - Mar 8, 2017
|Scholarship Essay, Challenging problems that have affected you education
2 - Anon, you addressed the method by which you overcame your weight problem in a very detailed manner. It was...
Scholarshipycast2017 - Mar 8, 2017 / Holt - Mar 8, 2017
|Chinese culture is a vast treasure
Scholarshipjohnsh12345 - Mar 7, 2017 / Holt - Mar 8, 2017
|Provide a maximum of four achieved awards not related to your qualifications
2 - Bolarinwa, you only have 2 accomplishments indicated in this response. The first paragraph, does not qualify as an academic...
Scholarshipbolarinwa - Mar 7, 2017 / Holt - Mar 8, 2017
|Culture Consume. KGSP Graduate Program - essential jigsaw for my career. Self-Introduction Letter
3 - Niranya, the first sentence in your essay is strong enough to capture the attention of the reviewer, however, the...
Scholarshipmissgiggle - Mar 7, 2017 / okorobiadimma14 - Mar 7, 2017
|My love for motion pictures started from a tender age. SOP FOR THE KGSP
9 - @debby89 Hi Debby My observation is that your second paragraph is too big and have multiple ideas. Try...
Scholarshipdebby89 - Mar 3, 2017 / JoyK - Mar 7, 2017
|Growing up amazed by the diverse culture difference - Study plan for KGSP 2017
11 - You may use any format that you wish to use in actuality. Most students prefer to use the straightforward...
Scholarshipylin0233 - Mar 3, 2017 / Holt - Mar 7, 2017
|To be a business woman who is able to help the world. Self introduction for KGSP 2017
4 - Lin, the focus of your academic background should not include high school information anymore. Those are considered irrelevant in...
Scholarshipylin0233 - Mar 7, 2017 / Holt - Mar 7, 2017
|Epidemiology Study Plan for Korean Scholarship
Scholarshiprsydnd - Mar 7, 2017 / Holt - Mar 7, 2017
|My challenge: the order to manage the payroll software to meet the latest Government Regulation
4 - Hi Iwan, I have read your writing closely and found a few improvement you need to deal with them...
Scholarshipbagusetyawan - Mar 7, 2017 / akbarmappiare - Mar 7, 2017
|STUDY PLAN ESSAY TO GAIN CHINESE GOVERNMENT SCHOLARSHIP.
5 - @Mwabi Mwabi, I think you should elaborate more in your study plain, put detail on your research plan would...
ScholarshipMwabi - Mar 5, 2017 / rsydnd - Mar 7, 2017
|Letter of Self introduction for KGSP 2017 - Motivation leads to success
3 - Van, please discuss what where you are currently located and what form of employment you have there. You need...
Scholarshipwinwin93 - Mar 6, 2017 / Holt - Mar 7, 2017
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