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|Study individually or in group - IELTS taks 2 : discuss both view
NEW - i'm learning IELTS at home and i'm bad at writing skill. I really appropriate that you give me feedback....
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|The obesity of people rises and their health condition is getting worse
3 - Hi, it's just my suggestion to help your essay better. In the Body, +"Firstly, modern citizens tend to ..."...
Writing Feedbacklinhchin - Jul 15, 2019 / kimmy2105 - Jul 15, 2019
|Economic growth as a solution for poverty and hunger? What about environment degradation?
3 - Hi, just my opinion and suggestion to better your essay. In the Introduction, it should be " due to...
Writing FeedbackNmnhucam98 - Jul 15, 2019 / kimmy2105 - Jul 15, 2019
|IELTS: Discuss both advantages and disadvantages of the Internet - information online
2 - hi, personally, I think your essay is off topic. The task asks you to discuss the statement : ......
Writing Feedbacklichien0422 - Jul 15, 2019 / linhchin - Jul 15, 2019
|IELTS task 2 Different between online news and paper based news
4 - hi I think it is not allowed to start task 2 essays with questions since it sounds more journalistic...
Writing FeedbackDevon Cheng - Jul 15, 2019 / linhchin - Jul 15, 2019
|IELTS task2: Nowadays people make new friends through social networks and internet chat groups.
8 - @tinapakshad1 Hello there! While you already had quite a lot of feedback, I hope to provide you with something...
Writing Feedbacktinapakshad1 - Jul 14, 2019 / Maria - Jul 29, 2019
|Some argue that history is is of great importance in school, others vote for science and technology.
Writing FeedbackHadiep - Jul 14, 2019 / lichien0422 - Jul 16, 2019
|IELTS writing task 2: All jobs will be done by artificial intelligent robots eventually
Writing Feedbacklichien0422 - Jul 13, 2019 / tinapakshad1 - Jul 14, 2019
|HAS INTERNET AFFECTED PEOPLE NEGATIVELY?
2 - @Annie Kristin Hello there. Welcome to the forum. I'll provide you with feedback to assist you in your writing....
Writing FeedbackAnnie Kristin - Jul 13, 2019 / Maria - Jul 13, 2019
|Get exercise - The growing number of overweight people and health care system.
3 - Hi I like the idea you wrote here. However, you have to be careful of several verb/grammar choices....
Writing Feedbackcsesaswati - Jul 12, 2019 / lichien0422 - Jul 13, 2019
|Housework sharing between women and men
2 - @solivagant Hello there. Your overall writing style has improved tremendously over the past weeks. Great job! You had a...
Writing Feedbacksolivagant - Jul 12, 2019 / Maria - Jul 12, 2019
|IELTS TASK 2 : Hobbies need to be difficult?
2 - @linhchin Hello there. Try to maximize the space in your essay by omitting unnecessary lines and words. If...
Writing Feedbacklinhchin - Jul 12, 2019 / Maria - Jul 12, 2019
|IELTS Task 2：Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed,rather than to work for a company
2 - @sodagreensmile Hello there. Welcome to the forum. I'll provide you with writing feedback to assist you in this. ...
Writing Feedbacksodagreensmile - Jul 12, 2019 / Maria - Jul 12, 2019
|IELTS: Cause and solution to the over-all happiness of the youth
4 - @lichien0422 Hello there. I'll provide you with writing feedback. I find that, in general, your writing is well-composed...
Writing Feedbacklichien0422 - Jul 12, 2019 / Maria - Jul 13, 2019
|Providing the community service by school students
Writing FeedbackCherry may - Jul 11, 2019 / Cherry may - Jul 13, 2019
|The provided maps illustrate several changes of facilities on a tourist destination.
2 - @minhkhue Hello. It would be helpful to provide the aforementioned map to help us create a more meaningful...
Writing Feedbackminhkhue - Jul 11, 2019 / Maria - Jul 12, 2019
|IELTS TASK 2: Advertising in Human Life
2 - in my opinion, you are writing unnecessarily complex sentences, which are difficult to understand. moreover, you are focusing too...
Writing Feedbackhuyhihung10A - Jul 11, 2019 / linhchin - Jul 12, 2019
|Money spent on a variety of social spheres by local authorities in Someland in three years
Writing Feedbackbuianhhong - Jul 11, 2019 / buianhhong - Jul 13, 2019
|Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve the poverty problem
4 - @thaivo Hello there. I'll provide you with feedback on your writing. Firstly, try to use more technically appropriate...
Writing Feedbackthaivo - Jul 11, 2019 / Maria - Jul 13, 2019
|Evaluating the opinion that increasing petrol's price would solve traffic and pollution problems
4 - @linhchin Hello there. I'll provide you with writing feedback. I find that, overall, your language is quite put...
Writing Feedbacklinhchin - Jul 11, 2019 / Maria - Jul 13, 2019
|The two pie charts below show some employment patterns in Great Britain in 1992.
2 - Hi @Kalina1110! I'll try my best to help you. Firstly, you made several mistakes when describing the data. It...
Writing FeedbackKalina1110 - Jul 11, 2019 / solivagant - Jul 12, 2019
|Responsibility of the Clean and tidy streets
2 - @Jipsa Jadwani Hello there. I'll provide you with feedback on your writing. First and foremost, try to not...
Writing FeedbackJipsa Jadwani - Jul 10, 2019 / Maria - Jul 10, 2019
|IELTS TASK 2: IDEAS ABOUT MESEUMS
2 - @huyhihung10A Hello! I'll provide you with writing feedback. Firstly, be cautious of the formatting of your words....
Writing Feedbackhuyhihung10A - Jul 10, 2019 / Maria - Jul 10, 2019
|The advantages of eating food produced in other regions outweigh the disadvantages
2 - @Krystal318 Hi there. I hope you are doing well with your writing. Let me provide you with feedback...
Writing FeedbackKrystal318 - Jul 10, 2019 / Maria - Jul 10, 2019
|IELTS Writing Task 2: Teachers' influence on children bigger than impact of parents?
Writing Feedbacknimbus2k2 - Jul 10, 2019 / nimbus2k2 - Jul 12, 2019
|IELTS Task2 - Friends through social networks and internet. Discuss both views and give your opinion
5 - Hi, I am a little it skeptical about some sentences like: "those who do not favor ... are concerned"...
Writing Feedbacksmahajan74 - Jul 9, 2019 / huyhihung10A - Jul 10, 2019
|(exchange program application) Successful youth ambassadors and their characteristics
2 - @EstellePhillips Hello there. Welcome to the forum. I'll provide you with writing feedback. I think that the entirety...
Writing FeedbackEstellePhillips - Jul 9, 2019 / Maria - Jul 10, 2019
|Elite Training - [IELTS TASK2] - young people should be required to stay in full-time education?
6 - @Maria Could you tell me some grammar mistake that is my weakness part in my essay. Thanks for your...
Writing Feedbackluminous - Jul 9, 2019 / luminous - Jul 11, 2019
|Deforestation caused by human activity has serious results for the environment
3 - @ChristineNguyen Hi there! I'll provide you with writing feedback. I agree on what was previously aforementioned here....
Writing FeedbackChristineNguyen - Jul 8, 2019 / Maria - Jul 10, 2019
|Equal Distribution; there should be same chances for both genders to get post-graduate studies
Writing Feedbacktinapakshad1 - Jul 8, 2019 / ThuanPhat - Jul 26, 2019
|IELTS WRITING STRIVING: COMPUTER GAMES AND HOW THEY AFFECT CHILDREN
4 - @huyhihung10A Hi there. Let me try to provide you with beneficial feedback on your writing. You have...
Writing Feedbackhuyhihung10A - Jul 8, 2019 / Maria - Jul 10, 2019
|The chart below show information about honey-bee colonies and honey production in the US.
5 - @Maria Hello There. Thank you for your information! I will improve my writing skill, day by day. Because I...
Writing Feedbacktruong123456 - Jul 8, 2019 / truong123456 - Jul 17, 2019
|Two different attitudes towards old people
4 - @solivagant Hello. I'll do my best to provide you with writing feedback that would hopefully help you. I...
Writing Feedbacksolivagant - Jul 7, 2019 / Maria - Jul 10, 2019
|[IELTS task 2] Males and Females should have an Equal Education Opportunity
5 - Hi, I have some suggestions in the hope of helping you guys I think the introduction you should paraphrase...
Writing Feedbackkhoaminh - Jul 7, 2019 / huyhihung10A - Jul 11, 2019
|Fan Bing Bing have to pay huge taxes and fines
2 - @giangkodo Hi there. Welcome to the forum. I'll provide you with feedback on your writing. First and foremost,...
Writing Feedbackgiangkodo - Jul 7, 2019 / Maria - Jul 10, 2019
|IELTS Writing Task 1: Types of pollution
Writing Feedbacknimbus2k2 - Jul 7, 2019 / nimbus2k2 - Jul 12, 2019
|Computers are usually claimed to be the most significant device invented by human
Writing FeedbackVCSA - Jul 6, 2019 / hinguyn - Jul 7, 2019
|DO YOU THINK THE ADVANTAGES OF CHARGING PEOPLE FOR ADMISSION TO MUSEUMS OUTWEIGH THE DISADVANTAGES?
Writing FeedbackKarry Wang - Jul 6, 2019 / Karry Wang - Jul 7, 2019
|WRITTING TEST PART 2 - TECHNOLOGICAL DEVELOPMENTS
3 - @Maria Hi Maria, I give you many thanks for helping me with this. Hope I can receive your feedback...
Writing Feedbackhoanghuuhuan248 - Jul 5, 2019 / hoanghuuhuan248 - Jul 7, 2019
|Ielts writing task 2: Hosting Olympic Games - is it good for the country?
3 - @Maria Thank you for your constructive comments. I'll be having my Ielts exam in this september and I hope...
Writing Feedbackbubbles117 - Jul 5, 2019 / bubbles117 - Jul 7, 2019
|People disagree with a school policy which forces children to learn new language. IELTS2
5 - @wyzbui Hi there! Here's some feedback on your writing. Firstly, you have unnecessarily long sentences that take...
Writing Feedbackwyzbui - Jul 5, 2019 / Maria - Jul 6, 2019
|ielts writing: explain some of the way in which humans are damaging the environment and solutions
Writing Feedbackhinguyn - Jul 5, 2019 / hinguyn - Jul 7, 2019
|IELTS Writing Task 2: Is it good to increase the life expectancy?
2 - @Katherine_Tu1101 Hi there! I'll provide you with feedback on your writing. First and foremost, the structure of...
Writing FeedbackKatherine_Tu1101 - Jul 5, 2019 / Maria - Jul 6, 2019
|Ielts writing task 2: Opinion on extra classes; one of the most challenging issues in education
Writing Feedbackbubbles117 - Jul 4, 2019 / bubbles117 - Jul 7, 2019
|Governments must invest this money in public services instead of arts. Do you agree or disagree?
2 - @trungkien2492000 Hello there! Use more appropriate transition words because the structure kind of gets lost in the process....
Writing Feedbacktrungkien2492000 - Jul 4, 2019 / Maria - Jul 4, 2019
|The urban dwellers tend to live in the nuclear family nowadays
3 - @sensen thank a lot for your comment, this is the first time i have written my essay followed the...
Writing Feedbackwyzbui - Jul 4, 2019 / wyzbui - Jul 5, 2019
|Technology Brings Changes toward People's Interaction
4 - @rivathh Hello there, I guess you're writing a IELTS writing essay. If that so, you'd be marked down as...
Writing Feedbackrivathh - Jul 4, 2019 / bubbles117 - Jul 7, 2019
|How have looked the average expenditure of Australian Family between 1991 and 2001
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|More animals are on the verge of extinction and others are on endangered list. Causes? Solutions?
4 - @totrangto Hello. I see that you're new to the forum. Welcome! I'll provide you with writing feedback. ...
Writing Feedbacktotrangto - Jul 3, 2019 / Maria - Jul 6, 2019
|IELTS1: indicators of economic and social condition of Canada, Japan, Peru and Zaire
2 - @mphuonggg Hi there. You are wasting space in your essay when you have to repeatedly mention the countries...
Writing Feedbackmphuonggg - Jul 3, 2019 / Maria - Jul 4, 2019
|IELTS Writing Task 2: Opinion on economic growth and its influence on the environment
Writing Feedbacknimbus2k2 - Jul 3, 2019 / nimbus2k2 - Jul 5, 2019
|[IELTS TASK 2]THE NEGATIVE EFFECTS ON THE SOCIETY WHEN THE PROPORTION OF OLDER PEOPLE IS INCREASING
Writing FeedbackKimngannguyen267 - Jul 3, 2019 / hinguyn - Jul 7, 2019
|WRITING TASK 1 : the total amount of gold sold in each month throughout the year of 2002 in Dubai
2 - I think your essay is pretty good. However, you have a grammatical mistake : "are measured " not "...
Writing Feedbackvieanh - Jul 2, 2019 / mphuonggg - Jul 3, 2019
|[Essay] - Abolish death penalty forever - provide the reasons
2 - @trvaanh Hi there. The tenses of your verbs have to be approved. Always use the appropriate words when...
Writing Feedbacktrvaanh - Jul 2, 2019 / Maria - Jul 4, 2019
|Dealing with crimes - IELTS WRITING TASK 2
2 - @GiangNguyen1807 Hello there! Evade the usage of filler words that do not contribute substantially to your written content....
Writing FeedbackGiangNguyen1807 - Jul 2, 2019 / Maria - Jul 4, 2019
|IELTS WRITING Task 1: Active participation rates in top ten sports in 1998 and 2005 in Canada
2 - I think it would be better to change some words paticipation rates ... with rates those in 1998 (word...
Writing Feedbacksensen - Jul 1, 2019 / trvaanh - Jul 2, 2019
|American Youth and Poverty
2 - @aknutson119 Hello there! Simplify your sentences as your meaning gets a little bit lost in translation because of...
Writing Feedbackaknutson119 - Jul 1, 2019 / Maria - Jul 4, 2019
|Breaking News - Is it important to know about events happening around the world??
Writing FeedbackSynorita - Jul 1, 2019 / Synorita - Jul 9, 2019
|IELTS Writing Task 1: Process Diagram of Producing Reliable Forecasts
2 - Hello! Here are some advice: "... and the analysis to the sources" may sound more sensible. "With...
Writing Feedbackselinastchen - Jul 1, 2019 / nimbus2k2 - Jul 1, 2019
|Due to many people are living much longer, the age at which people retire from work should be raised
2 - Hi there! It is extremely important that you should check your essay carefully again to correct some spelling and...
Writing Feedbacktamtauheodan - Jul 1, 2019 / nimbus2k2 - Jul 1, 2019
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