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|Does Technology narrow or widen the poverty gap?
2 - @trungpham96 Hi there. Like what I always tell most learners here, I won't necessarily give out a band...
Writing Feedbacktrungpham96 - Jun 6, 2019 / Maria - Jun 7, 2019
|The only way to solve the increasing crime rate of young offenders is to teach parents.....
3 - Hi @EmanF! In your essay you've mentioned different studies which I think is superfluous, because you're supposed to give...
Writing FeedbackEmanF - Jun 6, 2019 / solivagant - Jun 10, 2019
|Advertising to children - Discuss both views
2 - @buiminhese Hi there! Welcome to the forum. Don't fret. We'll do our bests to help you here. ...
Writing Feedbackbuiminhese - Jun 6, 2019 / Maria - Jun 6, 2019
|Sports have the same importance as classes and libraries and require also similar funding
4 - My advice is that you should use words dividing your ideas into distinct ones such as: Firstly, Secondly; so...
Writing Feedbacklebuixuan - Jun 6, 2019 / suong1510 - Jun 10, 2019
|Sports which enhance team spirit are most beneficial but others advocate for individual competitions
Writing Feedbackoanh9a6 - Jun 6, 2019 / Maria - Jun 6, 2019
|Child punishment as a way of teaching morality
5 - Dear Solivagant, Punishment can be beating, hitting (physically injured) or pretending to stop loving, holding back giving money,...
Writing Feedbacksolivagant - Jun 5, 2019 / buiminhese - Jun 8, 2019
|IELTS General: Traffic congestion problem and some measure that could be taken to reduce traffic
3 - @Maria Thanks for welcoming me. Above essay was my first attempt for IELTS section 2 task. I am a...
Writing Feedbackrayraja18 - Jun 5, 2019 / rayraja18 - Jun 5, 2019
|Disease prevention is more important than treatment - strongly agree
Writing FeedbackDiligent Student - Jun 4, 2019 / Maria - Jun 5, 2019
|Writing task 1: Line graph shows the percentage of tourists....
2 - @rus147 Hello there. Welcome to the forum. Firstly, I suggest omitting unnecessary and irrelevant lines in your...
Writing Feedbackrus147 - Jun 4, 2019 / Maria - Jun 5, 2019
|Bar chart - the number of activities selected by Australian children in their leisure time
Writing FeedbackJason Nguyen - Jun 4, 2019 / Jason Nguyen - Jun 6, 2019
|Equal numbers of men and women learners in every field of study - is such balance beneficial?
3 - @vilender Hi there! First and foremost, ensure that the formatting of your words would all be academically appropriate....
Writing Feedbackvilender - Jun 4, 2019 / Maria - Jun 5, 2019
|Some believe that computer technology has made the world and the society a safer place
3 - @JINGHAN Hi there! Welcome to the forum. First and foremost, I recommend that you try to enhance...
Writing FeedbackJINGHAN - Jun 4, 2019 / Maria - Jun 5, 2019
|Shopping, working and communicating with people via Internet, without any face-to-face contact
3 - Hi thaonguyen1st, 1. With just a click of the mouse or ...=> I love writing like this and love...
Writing Feedbackthaonguyen1st - Jun 3, 2019 / manhmoc - Jun 4, 2019
|Writing Ielts task 2 - TECHNOLOGY and YOUNG PEOPLE
2 - @Wendynguyen803 Hello there! First and foremost, I think that your essay is well-written from the get-go. What I...
Writing FeedbackWendynguyen803 - Jun 3, 2019 / Maria - Jun 4, 2019
|IELTS WRITING TASK 1: VISITORS' SATISFACTION BEFORE AND AFTER REFURBISHMENT
2 - @sherry14 Hello there. It would be helpful if you could provide the pie charts alongside the text next...
Writing Feedbacksherry14 - Jun 3, 2019 / Maria - Jun 3, 2019
|Proportion of population aged 65+ - The text is IELTS Writing Task1
3 - @Annie Chen Hello there. Welcome to the forum! Like what has already been mentioned, including the figure next...
Writing FeedbackAnnie Chen - Jun 2, 2019 / Maria - Jun 3, 2019
|IELTS WRITING TASK 1: the number of silk workforce in England and Wales between 1851 and 1901.
4 - @Taylor 098 thank you ^^ @Maria Thank you so much for giving me your detail feed back, I really...
Writing Feedbackchickenbound - Jun 2, 2019 / chickenbound - Jun 3, 2019
|TOEFL - books vs experience; which source of knowledge is more important?
3 - @Maria Hi, Maria I appreciate your advises! Those advises really help me a lot! I practiced writing...
Writing Feedbacktux543 - Jun 2, 2019 / tux543 - Jun 3, 2019
|Topic: Describe one of the happiest days of my life (a paragraph of about 200 words).
2 - @Cozy19s Hello there! Because you only have two hundred words, using essay optimization techniques would help you have...
Writing FeedbackCozy19s - Jun 2, 2019 / Maria - Jun 3, 2019
|THE NUMBERS OF MALE AND FEMALE TEACHERS IN 6 DIFFERENT TYPES OF EDUCATIONAL SETTING IN 2010
3 - @Thykeppy Hi there! Welcome to the forum. In comparison to most that I have observed and given...
Writing FeedbackThykeppy - Jun 2, 2019 / Maria - Jun 3, 2019
|IELTS TASK 2 - AGREE OR DISAGREE? - Work from home only benefits employees, not employers.
3 - @ctyn1203 Hello there. Welcome to the forum! Let me help you with your essay. First and foremost,...
Writing Feedbackctyn1203 - Jun 1, 2019 / Maria - Jun 1, 2019
|It is better for college students to live far away from home than live at home with their parents.
3 - @Maria I really appreciate your feedback. Thank you! What band do you think I can get from my writing?...
Writing Feedbackhunghoiham1999 - Jun 1, 2019 / hunghoiham1999 - Jun 2, 2019
|Cars made in Argentia / Australia / Thailand - writing task
Writing FeedbackNhanpham147 - Jun 1, 2019 / Nhanpham147 - Jun 2, 2019
|IELTS writing task 2 - investment in science subjects is essential for development
Writing Feedbackkatiemeo - Jun 1, 2019 / katiemeo - Jun 2, 2019
|"throw-away" society. Causes and effects?
3 - Hi suong1510, Nice essay overall. There is a problem regarding the example in body paragraph 2. I...
Writing Feedbacksuong1510 - Jun 1, 2019 / greynd - Jun 1, 2019
|IELTS WRITING TASK 1: Water consumption statistics across the globe
2 - @nhant Hi there! It would be beneficial and helpful if you could provide the pie chart (any figure/data...
Writing Feedbacknhant - Jun 1, 2019 / Maria - Jun 1, 2019
|Question 26: Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later. A learn for kids?
2 - @tunghs15217 Hello! I see that you're new to the forum. Welcome! Let me help you with your essay....
Writing Feedbacktunghs15217 - May 31, 2019 / Maria - May 31, 2019
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2: Inconsiderate gaming and kids
4 - Hi there, I think your opinion in the essay is quite clear, with a wide range of vocabularies you...
Writing Feedbackgreynd - May 31, 2019 / suong1510 - Jun 1, 2019
|IELTS W2 - To what extent do you agree or disagree too much attention to wild animals and birds.
Writing Feedbackmisaping - May 31, 2019 / misaping - Jun 1, 2019
|Scientific experiments and research - should governemnt or private companies control that?
Writing FeedbackTaylor 098 - May 30, 2019 / Taylor 098 - Jun 1, 2019
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2: ANIMAL TESTING / moral issues
Writing Feedbackhaotran1198 - May 30, 2019 / suong1510 - Jun 1, 2019
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - Agree or Disagree essay on solution to improve road safety
4 - Thank you for your helpful advices @ melanienguyen278 and @ Maria I'll try my best to enhance my writing...
Writing FeedbackWendynguyen803 - May 30, 2019 / Wendynguyen803 - Jun 3, 2019
|Has the ease of preparing food and technologies improved life?
Writing Feedbackfaash - May 30, 2019 / faash - Jun 9, 2019
|IELTS TASK 2: Science will soon make people live longer. Good?Bad?Discuss both, give your opinions
Writing FeedbackDang Khoa - May 30, 2019 / Dang Khoa - May 31, 2019
|IELTS TASK 2 Agree/Disagree Police force carrying guns will encourage a higher level of violence.
2 - @yuchengkuo Hi there! I see that you're new here. Welcome to the forum. Let me look through your...
Writing Feedbackyuchengkuo - May 28, 2019 / Maria - May 29, 2019
|Everyone should stay a school until reaching adulthood
Writing Feedbacktrannthkv2 - May 28, 2019 / Maria - May 29, 2019
|How important is COLLEGE education today?
3 - @minhthuy99 Hi there! First and foremost, I can't seem to determine what form of citations you are using....
Writing Feedbackminhthuy99 - May 28, 2019 / Maria - May 29, 2019
|An opinion essay; Libraries - is there still a need such institution?
3 - @angaquay Hi there! Let's look through your essay - and hopefully I can provide you with useful feedback...
Writing Feedbackangaquay - May 28, 2019 / Maria - May 29, 2019
|In any field - those in power should step down after five years
3 - @yyu340 Hello there! As someone has already given you a rating, I would rather prefer to focus more...
Writing Feedbackyyu340 - May 28, 2019 / Maria - May 29, 2019
|IELTS TASK 2 Some students leave school with a negative attitude towards learning and peer pressure
4 - @Maria Thanks so much for your prompt feedback! Trying to sound naturally in transitions is my weakest spot, and...
Writing Feedbackchrisskuo - May 27, 2019 / chrisskuo - May 28, 2019
|IELTS Task 1: Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden, and Turkey - money spent on consumer goods
Writing Feedbackandrewfoy273 - May 27, 2019 / andrewfoy273 - May 28, 2019
|IELTS task 2 (global climate change) - carbon print
Writing Feedbackchanyinyui - May 27, 2019 / chanyinyui - May 28, 2019
|Who holds the duty to take measures against environmental degradation? IELTS Task 2
Writing Feedbackmaria4506 - May 27, 2019 / maria4506 - May 28, 2019
|The use of social media is replacing face-to-face contact in this century. Good or bad?
Writing Feedbackchiruha - May 27, 2019 / andrewfoy273 - May 27, 2019
|Justifying and estimating belong to necessary skills for youngsters to acquire in their young age
Writing Feedbacknagasirenz2 - May 27, 2019 / nagasirenz2 - May 28, 2019
|Truthfulness as the critical factor that contributes to sustaining a good relationship
4 - @junejulyapril Just keep reading/listening books, magazines and stuff that you like, when you found a new word, just write...
Writing Feedbackjunejulyapril - May 27, 2019 / Dang Khoa - May 29, 2019
|Some people believe that the best way to improve road safety is to ban the teenagers from traveling'
Writing Feedbackxyanuaaa - May 26, 2019 / xyanuaaa - May 27, 2019
|IELTS 2: Computers are just a tool or the most important invention?
4 - @melanienguyen278 Hello! First and foremost, I think that your essay is well-written! You were able to establish your...
Writing Feedbackmelanienguyen278 - May 26, 2019 / Maria - May 27, 2019
|IELTS: Discuss the issues associated with people aging longer and give possible measures.
Writing Feedbackcoke - May 26, 2019 / DoctorWho - May 26, 2019
|IELTS task 1 (bar chart showing modes of transport of children)
6 - Dear chanyinyui, For this essay, I suggest some points: 1. Pay attention to your tenses. The statistics in...
Writing Feedbackchanyinyui - May 26, 2019 / buiminhese - Jun 11, 2019
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2: Should student freely choose subject to study?
4 - @Dattranvan1811 Hello. I won't necessarily give out a band score; however, I'll provide you with a sufficient feedback...
Writing FeedbackDattranvan1811 - May 26, 2019 / Maria - May 27, 2019
|IELTS: People have little understanding of natural world. Why and how to fix it?
Writing Feedbackmanhmoc - May 25, 2019 / manhmoc - Jun 4, 2019
|assignment - do you agree with the idea that children have a pet
Writing Feedbackchangcap - May 25, 2019 / Maria - May 25, 2019
|Ielts task2: Government plans for global warming
2 - @bluepen0311 Use more appropriate terminologies when you are trying to explain things. For instance, you do not extend the...
Writing Feedbackbluepen0311 - May 24, 2019 / Maria - May 24, 2019
|I've written this essay about overpopulation topic. Meaning and consequences.
2 - @suong1510 Try to minimize the number of unnecessary terms in your essay; this will help you optimize your essay...
Writing Feedbacksuong1510 - May 24, 2019 / Maria - May 24, 2019
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - WHICH BENEFITS OF TAKING A GAP YEAR FROM A SCHOOL?
Writing Feedbackdatngn09 - May 23, 2019 / datngn09 - May 24, 2019
|IELTS Writing Task 2: Discuss opinion about the developments of AI.
2 - Hey!! It's a fairly good essay. There's a good progression from the introduction to highlighting about the...
Writing Feedbackdinhcongtrang99 - May 22, 2019 / DoctorWho - May 23, 2019
|Advanced technology can prevent and solve the crime
3 - Maria i've learned a lot from you like try to write "the more specific the better". I usually think...
Writing FeedbackKrystal318 - May 22, 2019 / Dang Khoa - May 25, 2019
|IELTS task 2: problems in big citties/ main problems and solutions
3 - Your Opening is quite vague as you mentioned "some factors" and "some solutions". The same with your Ending "some...
Writing FeedbackTaylor 098 - May 21, 2019 / Krystal318 - May 22, 2019
|IELTS Task 1: The bar chart show the petroleum production and consumption among 7 regions in 2002
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