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|Without action to solve this problem, electronics may destroy a relationship between loved people
2 - Hi bada, I'm trying to make some comments Introduction In introduction, you have told about general statement,paraphrase...
Writing Feedbackbadafebriani17 - Nov 1, 2016 / mardian24 - Nov 1, 2016
|100 out of 650 million of people having a physical disability in the world need wheelchairs.
2 - Hi Wasisha.. These are my a few corrections for your summary. ... of people having A physical disability...
Writing FeedbackWasishaSisha - Nov 1, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Nov 1, 2016
|The external and internal communication, essential in work, in 1997 and 2002.
3 - Hi nurainiyusuf16, I want to give some comments 1. ... internal communication skills were more essential by .....
Writing Feedbacknurainiyusuf16 - Nov 1, 2016 / mardian24 - Nov 1, 2016
|The favourite social media channel between 2011 and 2013
2 - Hi Amril, I can see that your writing is getting better. Keep up the good work! Yet, there is...
Writing Feedbackamrillahmk - Nov 1, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Nov 1, 2016
|There are four natural circle stages. Process of Silkworm's Life and Silk Cloth
2 - Hi Mujadiddah, Here's my analysis towards your report summary of IELTS task 1. I hope you can follow through....
Writing FeedbackHujjatul19 - Nov 1, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Nov 1, 2016
|Several kinds of communication skills which were significant in a vacancy; the results of two survey
4 - Hi wilyaftika23, the word is too common, you should utilize another advance vocabulary - "regarding" - The table...
Writing FeedbackWilyaftika23 - Nov 1, 2016 / WasishaSisha - Nov 1, 2016
|Devouring of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030
2 - Hi Pujiati, I have some suggestions for you. 1. The words "units", "petroleum", "oil", "natural gas" etc. are...
Writing FeedbackPJmustbebetter - Nov 1, 2016 / nyanpasu - Nov 1, 2016
|The electronic media make access to communicate with other people. It's good for mutual relations
2 - Hello Your text could use being refined stylistically so that it sounds better: advancecommunication technology [...] appears...
Writing FeedbackPramudia27 - Nov 1, 2016 / Wolf Larsen - Nov 1, 2016
|Researching particular contacting skills in business.
2 - Aloha Septiadara, Here are my thoughts; (1) ... the proportion forof people who were(you can reduce this) asked...
Writing Feedbackseptiadara29 - Nov 1, 2016 / ibe13 - Nov 1, 2016
|Good attitude is a must for everybody to show that we need someone else. Parents, school and society
3 - Why don't you delve towards the psychological side of parents at home and teachers at school on the behavior...
Writing Feedbackmardian24 - Oct 29, 2016 / shadow7 - Nov 1, 2016
|Various principal communication skills of an employee in a workplace
2 - Hello indah! I will give you some opinions about your essay. (1) ... common communication skills werewhich the...
Writing FeedbackSarlindaDS_27 - Nov 1, 2016 / septiadara29 - Nov 1, 2016
|Personal relationship between people has come withering away, since they using electronic media
3 - Hello willy! I will give you some opinions about your essay. (1) Nowadays, technologies are becoming more developeddeveloping...
Writing FeedbackWilyaftika23 - Nov 1, 2016 / septiadara29 - Nov 1, 2016
|Electronic media has stronger good impact than a negative - it's best for regular communication
Writing Feedbacknurainiyusuf16 - Nov 1, 2016 / SarlindaDS_27 - Nov 1, 2016
|I totally disagree that banning air travel is the only strategy to stop air pollution.
7 - Thanks for all the corrections and suggestions from you all guys, I really appreciate the comments. I will try...
Writing Feedbackmisskitty22 - Oct 31, 2016 / misskitty22 - Nov 1, 2016
|Article Summary : The Causes of Acne
3 - Hello. inda18. this is my suggestion. (...) form new structure called bio films making the ... 3....
Writing Feedbacknda18 - Oct 31, 2016 / badafebriani17 - Nov 1, 2016
|According to cyclical chart, the life of silkworm is started with the moth producing the moth's egg
Writing Feedbackkiki23 - Nov 1, 2016 / SarlindaDS_27 - Nov 1, 2016
|Silkworm and Silk cloth diagrams (Writing Task I)
3 - Hello! I will give you some opinions about your essay. (1) Then there are fivethe steps ofin producing...
Writing FeedbackCachaaaaaaaa - Nov 1, 2016 / septiadara29 - Nov 1, 2016
|Over 200 million people are suffering from Malaria, the disease caused by mosquitos; TED summary
4 - Hello inda18. actually, your essay has interesting topic. but let me give you some suggestions: 1. don't forget...
Writing Feedbacknda18 - Oct 31, 2016 / badafebriani17 - Nov 1, 2016
|To persuade the policymakers and influential people in the government - Chevening "Networking"
3 - @ichanpants89 Hi, Thank you very much for your remark, and it was certainly very helpful. One more question, do...
Writing Feedbackarifkoushik - Oct 31, 2016 / arifkoushik - Nov 1, 2016
|There are many bad effects instead of advantages for people who use electronic media excessively
2 - Hello, Mr. Mardian :) Let me give you some corrections :) .....Because of THE electronic device, sometimes ......
Writing Feedbackmardian24 - Nov 1, 2016 / SarlindaDS_27 - Nov 1, 2016
|I believe that everyone is a leader because every great leadership start from self-leadership
Writing Feedbackdebby17 - Oct 31, 2016 / debby17 - Nov 1, 2016
|Article Summary - Did China discover America
4 - Hi Lincoln. these are a few improvements for your summary. GOOD LUCK The majority OF people argue (...) before...
Writing FeedbackAbrahamlincoln - Oct 31, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Nov 1, 2016
|Yearly collected data of kids whose Australian mother is 40-44 years old - statistics since 1981
Writing Feedbackainunazwaria - Oct 30, 2016 / ifraanisa05 - Nov 1, 2016
|It is very difficult for people to have a healthy lifestyle - habits change is necessary.
2 - Hello Septia You have a good summary I have some corrections for you ... people who think about...
Writing Feedbackseptiadara29 - Oct 31, 2016 / andika08 - Nov 1, 2016
|Information about people's opinion related to communication ability very useful in their occupation
2 - Hi Faiz. These are a few of corrections. ... related to communication ability that(If you wanna omit, you...
Writing Feedbackfaizunaa17 - Nov 1, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Nov 1, 2016
|Although air travel becomes the easiest way for massive people to transport, it should be reduced
4 - Hello Gigih12! Allow me to give you some suggestion. air pollution become become (...) that people face...
Writing FeedbackGigih12 - Oct 31, 2016 / nurainiyusuf16 - Nov 1, 2016
|A number of Bulgarians with different education, who plan to continue their live in other countries
3 - HELLO, here my suggestions for you Although, there is[was a] small decrease in the percentage [in] every category...
Writing FeedbackReskiRamadani88 - Oct 31, 2016 / Anna94 - Nov 1, 2016
|Summary TED: The best question that people always say
5 - Hello, i will give you some suggestion: 1. Be careful with your spelling and do personal exerciceexercise like...
Writing FeedbackMathew88 - Oct 28, 2016 / ReskiRamadani88 - Nov 1, 2016
|The plane contributes to pollute the atmosphere because it uses the fossil fuel
3 - Hi nda18. Here are my suggestions for your essay. Some people think that the only way to prevent...
Writing Feedbacknda18 - Oct 31, 2016 / IvanMS027 - Nov 1, 2016
|If we can use it in appropriate way, the social networking can really narrow the gap between people
2 - Aloha Faiz, let me share my thoughts with you; (1) Actually, we cannot lie that the messaging tools...
Writing Feedbackfaizunaa17 - Nov 1, 2016 / ibe13 - Nov 1, 2016
|Rule of "Smart Casual Dress" in Workplace for Employee
3 - Hai inda, here are my thoughts for your essay ... industries which have a popular name inat the...
Writing FeedbackSarlindaDS_27 - Oct 30, 2016 / ifraanisa05 - Nov 1, 2016
|People's were asked about communication ability which they needed and used in their job
2 - Hi Mr. Mardian. These are my thoughts for your writing. Please, review my notes. ... percentage of people's...
Writing Feedbackmardian24 - Nov 1, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Nov 1, 2016
|We should take notice that some insects are important in our daily life. One of them is the silkworm
2 - ... eggs again during 16 days. MEANWhile the process of silk cloth production ...pay attention about the difference between...
Writing Feedbackryan31 - Nov 1, 2016 / Pramudia27 - Nov 1, 2016
|The information about the grade of education of Bulgarian who looked for a chance to live abroad
3 - Hello ivan! I will give you some opinions about your essay. (1) ... grade of education of Bulgarian...
Writing FeedbackIvanMS027 - Oct 31, 2016 / septiadara29 - Nov 1, 2016
|It will be hard for people who ignore their health to have a healthy lifestyle.
Writing FeedbackBeauty17 - Oct 31, 2016 / ifraanisa05 - Nov 1, 2016
|Not many high educated Bulgarians are interested emmigration abroad
4 - ... while higher education and primary and lower education ... 1) The repetition make it not look effective....
Writing Feedbackibe13 - Oct 31, 2016 / faizunaa17 - Nov 1, 2016
|The peak of malarial death was a bit over 5 million in 1930.
2 - Dear misskitty, you have a good summary, however I have some advice for you It is essential to...
Writing Feedbackmisskitty22 - Oct 31, 2016 / Hujjatul19 - Nov 1, 2016
|Article Summary - Overworking style in Japan
3 - Hello! I will give you some opinions about your summary (1) ... almost suicide case isin Japan, It...
Writing FeedbackAbrahamlincoln - Oct 31, 2016 / septiadara29 - Nov 1, 2016
|The developing, modern world makes very difficult for people to have a healthy lifestyle
Writing FeedbackReskiRamadani88 - Oct 31, 2016 / ryan31 - Nov 1, 2016
|Mom and Dad should be the teacher for social life of their children
6 - INTRODUCTION overall, this is a good introduction. You successfully delivered your introductory paragraph with strong opinion related to...
Writing FeedbackPramudia27 - Oct 29, 2016 / RAY93 - Nov 1, 2016
|Parents are more competent than school to show children how to be a decent citizen
5 - INTRODUCTION overall this is enough. you paraphrase the question then giving your personal opinion which indicated that you...
Writing Feedbackseptiadara29 - Oct 29, 2016 / RAY93 - Oct 31, 2016
|Being healthy is not an easy task today, but there are always ways to manage this
3 - Aloha ichanpants89, thank you for your suggestion, I hope you want to double check my essay. Here is my...
Writing Feedbackibe13 - Oct 31, 2016 / ibe13 - Oct 31, 2016
|Why making children, who lack artistic talent, learn painting and drawing in Art classes at school?
2 - Talking about your idea, you said that "I totally disagree with such an idea because they should be thought...
Writing Feedbackmem77 - Oct 31, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Oct 31, 2016
|How to stop the deadly disease that is spread by mosquitoes? Mosquito, malaria, and education
4 - @dils I think you should try an oppening that invites the reader to engage to your story, try something...
Writing Feedbackdils - Oct 31, 2016 / Lixtik - Oct 31, 2016
|Lightbulb made of modified E. coli fuses Biology and Electronics
2 - @Yonathan Hi Jonathan, I think you have a really good entry here. try to pay a bit more attention...
Writing FeedbackYonathan - Oct 31, 2016 / Lixtik - Oct 31, 2016
|An appropriate colour can result in comfort and motivation, therefore capacity for work and health
Writing Feedbackekalamarsyari11 - Oct 31, 2016 / naelendra - Oct 31, 2016
|Over the years, an issue dealing with air pollution has been emerging.
4 - Hi Sman, I believe this is the first time I will review your essay and just like everyone here...
Writing FeedbackUcha MSN - Oct 31, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 31, 2016
|In the modern world, we compete each other to grab the level of success. We forget about our health
2 - Next cause --> you should use more coherence words such as In addition, moreover (maybe it would make your...
Writing FeedbackIvanMS027 - Oct 31, 2016 / intanrahayu11 - Oct 31, 2016
|A new study reveals that happy people have a great sense to cheer their spouse up
3 - Hi Dila, here's another one from my end; - Happiness is related to the physical - happier are...
Writing Feedbackdils - Oct 31, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 31, 2016
|The increasing damage of pollution caused by aero transport emerges an opinion to reduce air travel
Writing Feedbacklanazaldo - Oct 31, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 31, 2016
|Extreme sports such as sky diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned.
2 - Hi Muhammad, below are my thoughts on your essay with the focus on the right words to incorporate in...
Writing Feedbacknaelendra - Oct 31, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 31, 2016
|Common Painkillers 'increase heart failure risk'
Writing Feedbacksasariri - Oct 4, 2016 / dils - Oct 31, 2016
|The popularity of reading books by citizens of Burnaby between 2011 and 2014
Writing Feedbackandika08 - Oct 29, 2016 / dils - Oct 31, 2016
|The Economist - What are the candidates' plans for America's budget?
3 - ... between Barack Obama and one candidate of Amerika president selectionAmerica presidential election. When the Barack Obama's era, they...
Writing FeedbackMathew88 - Oct 31, 2016 / amrillahmk - Oct 31, 2016
|Restricting the air travel to prevent air pollution
Writing Feedbackdils - Oct 31, 2016 / nda18 - Oct 31, 2016
|The idea of banned air transportation is not the best solution for air pollution
4 - Nowadays, many people travelled around the world faster and more easilyeasier, thanks to air transportation. ... of their efficiency...
Writing FeedbackYonathan - Oct 31, 2016 / amrillahmk - Oct 31, 2016
|Air pollution and planes. The government should look for a solution in the industrial sector instead
2 - @Kimichi89 Hi Kimichi, I would say that argument against factories are not strong enough. You might want to elaborate...
Writing FeedbackKimichi89 - Oct 31, 2016 / arifkoushik - Oct 31, 2016
|Nowadays it is very difficult to stay healthy in this modern world
3 - Hi Nur, below are my thoughts on your essay, first of all, the tittle, it's missing a word or...
Writing FeedbackAnna94 - Oct 31, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 31, 2016
|TED Summary: Why we Need to Talk About Depression by Kevin Breel
5 - Hi Jojo, Here some suggestions for you. Kevin Breel, is a person who suffering from depression about...
Writing FeedbackYonathan - Oct 4, 2016 / dils - Oct 31, 2016
|The decreasing figure of animals and plants in tropical forests / threats to plant life
NEW - The graph and chart below give information about species extinctions and threats to plant life. Data of decreasing...
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