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The coal was the most popular energy source in France - years 1995 and 2005

3 - Hey Aris05 Those following corrections to make your essay even better : Compere has to followed by to...

Writing FeedbackAris05 - Sep 15, 2016 / Ifan21 - Sep 16, 2016
"Comparison underground railway systems in 6 major cities."

2 - The data given in the table compares the underground railway systems in 6 major cities. Overall, as can...

Writing FeedbackWindvalley - Sep 16, 2016 / swr10 - Sep 16, 2016
Most Americans Think Burgers Are Healthy

3 - It is my suggestion: ... Americans who had ordered a tasty burgertasty burgers instead of healthful ... As...

Writing Feedbackkiki23 - Sep 15, 2016 / swr10 - Sep 16, 2016
The Old Issues : Gender and Education as Opposite of Globalisation Era.

3 - Yo! here are some feedbacks i got for your essay 1)The the discrimination is an irrelevant in...

Writing FeedbackFirmanRomadhon20 - Sep 15, 2016 / Rinnegan45 - Sep 16, 2016
Athletes are obliged to train their skills and focus not only to the muscles or body movements

2 - Below are my view about your summary. Check it out ... their skills and focus ON not only...

Writing Feedbackrosadesiana - Sep 16, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Sep 16, 2016
Potential positions which are being inspected for the construction of a new supermarket in Garlsdon

2 - The given mapthe map show compares two potential positions ... ... the first site (S1) is was located...

Writing FeedbackWindvalley - Sep 15, 2016 / Terminal23 - Sep 16, 2016
Some people say that words have stronger power than actions

2 - Namely, people need to havesome experience to be aware ... ... why his words are so impressive is...

Writing FeedbackYuyahhhh - Sep 15, 2016 / Terminal23 - Sep 16, 2016
Animal Rights : a contradictive perspectives about The Rule

3 - Hi Hujjatul, I want to give some advices, I like your essay topic and I do agree with you...

Writing Feedbackmem77 - Sep 15, 2016 / Iedha01 - Sep 16, 2016
Too much, too young should schooling start at age

4 - Hi, I am not a good writer but I want to share something that I've got by my experiences...

Writing Feedbackmdamanhuri77 - Sep 15, 2016 / Iedha01 - Sep 16, 2016
Rita Pierson: Every kid needs a champion

3 - Hi, You did a good job in your writing. You start it with an opening sentence(Creating bond with all...

Writing Feedbackbung ilham - Sep 15, 2016 / Iedha01 - Sep 16, 2016
Writing Task 1 Student Cambridge Books- Travelling to work in Houston, Texas

4 - Hi Fadhil! Sharing is fun, right? The followings are my humble comments: - The table gives information (besides...

Writing Feedbackfadhilmd25 - Sep 15, 2016 / Fitri12 - Sep 16, 2016
Writting Task 1 the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in ten years

2 - Hi Shandy.. I am delighted to read your writing. In this moment, let me help you to finalize yours....

Writing Feedbackarisandy14 - Sep 15, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Sep 16, 2016
Five - second rule revealed (summary)

2 - Hi Husnul.. These are my thoughts to finalize your writing. Please, you meet my note and tackle them ...

Writing FeedbackHujjatul19 - Sep 15, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Sep 16, 2016
Successful performance is not merely physics, it's also a multitude combination of supporting skills

3 - Hi Dhyla.. These are a few suggestions for you to finalize this summary Check my notes and deal with...

Writing Feedbackdils - Sep 15, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Sep 16, 2016
Contrasting of energy production in France between 1995 and 2005

2 - The pie charts shows compareS kinds of energy THE PERCENTAGES OF FOSSIL FUELS PRODUCED in Ff rance between...

Writing FeedbackBAMS14 - Sep 15, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Sep 16, 2016
Bill Gates tried to elaborate several problems that humanity is faced all over the world

2 - Hello @fadhilmd25, I would like to give some suggestion for your writing. Here my advice: 1. .......

Writing Feedbackfadhilmd25 - Sep 15, 2016 / abdasyari93 - Sep 15, 2016
Quickly scanning and noticing tracking objects - an athlete's recipe for success

2 - aloha Bams, here are my thoughts: Being a good athlete just does not only depend on muscles, but...

Writing FeedbackBAMS14 - Sep 15, 2016 / bung ilham - Sep 15, 2016
The least popular transportation chosen by the workers is cycling or walking

4 - Hi Kiki. These are my thoughts about your writing. In this moment, I only focus on content of your...

Writing Feedbackkiki23 - Sep 15, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Sep 15, 2016
Nowadays, people assume that muscles are the main factor which determine athlete performance

5 - hy nice summarys, there are few suggestion for you Until up recently Right now, people (...) athlete performances...

Writing FeedbackYonathan - Sep 15, 2016 / BAMS14 - Sep 15, 2016
TED Summary: The Art of Free-Stress Productivity by David Allen

2 - when productivity gets low and everything turns unstable. It is called crisis zone. = new sentence = it is...

Writing FeedbackFitri12 - Sep 15, 2016 / RAY93 - Sep 15, 2016
HERE'S HOW MANY APPLE CORES IT WOULD TAKE TO POISON YOU

2 - Hi Terminal123, below are my thoughts on your essay, this is very straight forward, in order for you to...

Writing FeedbackTerminal23 - Sep 15, 2016 / justivy03 - Sep 15, 2016
Writing Task 1; Comparison of five are mining sector categories in France during year 1995 and 2005

2 - Hay, Mr Pat. I just try to give my thought but I'am so sorry if this is not...

Writing FeedbackPHA2016 - Sep 15, 2016 / arisandy14 - Sep 15, 2016
There is no reason to show some special attitude toward people based on their age

3 - hello, I would like donate my thought about your work. the first, I concern that your grammar...

Writing FeedbackDmitryB - Sep 14, 2016 / arisandy14 - Sep 15, 2016
There are several ways of transport with different CO2 emissions (measured in kilograms). IELTS

2 - Hello Ryan31, firstly, I think you spent more word at writing task 1. you wrote approximatel 262 that...

Writing Feedbackryan31 - Sep 15, 2016 / PHA2016 - Sep 15, 2016
It Cannot Be Denied, There are the Pros and Cons of Using Internet for People Appearing in This Life

3 - i give some correction for you.. The Internet is has completely fulfilled individuals ... do business and other activities...

Writing FeedbackAsma Raj - Sep 15, 2016 / ALMAJID06 - Sep 15, 2016
INTERNET: The Drawback and Vantage

2 - Hello Your text is quite readable, but you could use adjusting/rewriting some of the sentences as follows: ...

Writing FeedbackJnur - Sep 15, 2016 / Wolf Larsen - Sep 15, 2016
Summarize TED video : Bill Gates talk about mosquito, malaria, and education

2 - Hello Mem77, ..., we know that Bill Gates He with his foundation tried (...) in many country countries,...

Writing Feedbackmem77 - Sep 15, 2016 / PHA2016 - Sep 15, 2016
Bill Gates' presentation about diseases, education and technology evolution

3 - the disease is... please pay more attention to your subject verb agreement it should be...

Writing Feedbackandika08 - Sep 15, 2016 / Jawa - Sep 15, 2016
The proportion of energy which is produced in one decade, within 1995-2005

2 - The pie charts show the proportion of different types of energy being produced in 1 decade(over a ten-year...

Writing Feedbackrosadesiana - Sep 15, 2016 / gigiqarib - Sep 15, 2016
Summary of Article, the title is "A Musician Creates an Americana Soundtrack for the Colorado River"

2 - hello almajid, it was an interesting topic and also i really appreciate with your efforts to do this essay....

Writing FeedbackALMAJID06 - Sep 15, 2016 / mem77 - Sep 15, 2016
Do a weekday vegetarian for a better life (TED Summary)

2 - =our meat diet behavior has caused many problems. Eating hamburger routinely [need to mention how many times...

Writing Feedbackswr10 - Sep 15, 2016 / RAY93 - Sep 15, 2016
TIME FOR KNOWING BEFORE TRAVELING.

2 - hello vkwssh, it was a very interesting essay and i really appreciate with your efforts. but i have some...

Writing FeedbackVK WSSH - Sep 15, 2016 / mem77 - Sep 15, 2016
Athlete is not only about muscles but also visual abilities

2 - hai lalsky I have some suggestions for you please check your wordstoo many use not only, but also ......

Writing FeedbackLALSKI - Sep 15, 2016 / ryan31 - Sep 15, 2016
Poverty Among Seniors has dropped - Summary Article from Times

3 - hai classmate I have several suggestions for you there are too many percent maybe you can use it in...

Writing Feedbackfadhilmd25 - Sep 15, 2016 / ryan31 - Sep 15, 2016
Men are more likely to sign up for the fitness membership, than women - according to the bar chart

3 - Hi Aris.. These are my thoughts to finalize your writing. I hope these can help you to improve your...

Writing FeedbackAris05 - Sep 14, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Sep 15, 2016
Write a paragraph ( 40 - 50 words ) telling your feeling about a traffic accident happened

3 - Hi! I have some advice for you: Avoid the repetition of "I" and add some conjunctions to make...

Writing Feedbackledungmi - Sep 15, 2016 / kiki23 - Sep 15, 2016
The stress is the body's way of responding to any kind of demand or threat

4 - Hai deanarin i have some advice to you What is the meaning of stress? "The definition of stress...

Writing Feedbackdeanarin - Sep 15, 2016 / Alamsyah Ismail - Sep 15, 2016
Education Is the Key to Breaking the Cycle of Violence - Summary article

2 - Hello It'll be better if you restructure some of your sentences as suggested below: "School should [...]...

Writing FeedbackDavid54 - Sep 15, 2016 / Wolf Larsen - Sep 15, 2016
When people focus on one particular object, they automatically do not notice anything else

2 - Hello You have a good summary I have some corrections When people focus on one particular object, they...

Writing Feedbackfaizahadina - Sep 15, 2016 / andika08 - Sep 15, 2016
The ability to stay focused positively relates to the quality of athlete's performance

2 - Hello Your text will sound better if you rewrite some of the sentences as suggested below: Athlete's...

Writing Feedbackmawahi bussalam - Sep 15, 2016 / Wolf Larsen - Sep 15, 2016
Summary: What's wrong with our food system?

4 - Hallo bung ilham, actually your summary essay is good, but i have some advice to you ... been...

Writing Feedbackbung ilham - Sep 14, 2016 / Alamsyah Ismail - Sep 15, 2016
As we attempt to focus, the whole other areas has less brightness and we tolerate the blur

2 - Hello You have a good summary I have some corrections When we carefully noticed that as we attempttried...

Writing Feedbackrizaldohabibie - Sep 15, 2016 / andika08 - Sep 15, 2016
White Gulls Dependent On Ice Are Disappearing From The Arctic

4 - Hi Andika Let me give you some advice... Life in the world is not(isnt) just humans (but) there...

Writing Feedbackandika08 - Sep 15, 2016 / Yonathan - Sep 15, 2016
Many birds migrating very long distances to breed and feed their youngsters

3 - Hi, BAMS14 As a read your summary, here I give you some suggestions. 1. "Many bird migrationregularly...

Writing FeedbackBAMS14 - Sep 14, 2016 / dils - Sep 15, 2016
"Reasons for study" four out of five people under 26 take part in courses because of job opportunity

3 - Hallo Windvalley, There are a little corrective, ...majority of young people study because of careerthey want to have...

Writing FeedbackWindvalley - Sep 15, 2016 / David54 - Sep 15, 2016
Your health depends on where you live - from the TED summary

3 - At the beginning of the talks, = talk , Bill Davenhall, (...) Services Expert [need comma. an additional...

Writing FeedbackDavid54 - Sep 14, 2016 / RAY93 - Sep 15, 2016
Some birds migrate from the breeding ground to the other area for the rest of the remained season.

4 - Hello You have a good summary I have some corrections ... the bird follows through inits it is...

Writing Feedbackdils - Sep 14, 2016 / andika08 - Sep 15, 2016
How to raise successful kids - without over-parenting by Julie Lythcott-Haims

2 - Hi mdamanhuri77 , It's a nice topic, in keeping with that, I have some suggestions for you. ...

Writing Feedbackmdamanhuri77 - Sep 14, 2016 / dils - Sep 15, 2016
Imposing restrictions on the acceptable amount of trash may reduce the amount of waste

3 - Hello You have a good summary I have some corrections ... restrictions on the acceptable amount of trash...

Writing Feedbackgigiqarib - Sep 15, 2016 / andika08 - Sep 15, 2016
The incredible trips of Bird Migration

4 - Hi Mr. Patta. These are my suggestions for your summary. According to A passage, migration is commonly movement...

Writing FeedbackPHA2016 - Sep 14, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Sep 15, 2016
"Trauma Still Fresh for Rwandan Genocide Survivors" Summary

3 - Hi Gian16, This is little suggestion for you : 1. "... raised in Kinyanya 20 years ago, still give...

Writing FeedbackGian16 - Sep 13, 2016 / FirmanRomadhon20 - Sep 15, 2016
IELTS task 1 The diagram illustrates the change of food consumption in China in quarter century

4 - Hi arisandy14, Can I offer you a little suggestion " fish was the most popular (what popular?) with...

Writing Feedbackarisandy14 - Sep 13, 2016 / VK WSSH - Sep 15, 2016
The amounts of meat, salt, and fish consumed in China, starting from 1985 to 2010

5 - This is good, but still needs more rooms for improvement. If I were you, then I'd like to...

Writing FeedbackAris05 - Sep 13, 2016 / eddies - Sep 15, 2016
Why you should experience a home stay in Thailand?

3 - Hi Almajid, we're on the same boat, I mean I'm still learning to compose better writing as well. So...

Writing FeedbackALMAJID14 - Sep 14, 2016 / Fitri12 - Sep 15, 2016
After Africa's Sahara Desert, the next great desert is Taklimakan Desert

2 - Hi Rosa.. This is my vantage point about this summary ... Desert which the ITS width can...

Writing Feedbackrosadesiana - Sep 14, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Sep 15, 2016
Most Violent Crimes Are Wrongly Linked to Mental Illness - Summary article

3 - Many news talks[singular/plural issue] about person who has mental health problem wasthat responsible tofor committing violence. However, the...

Writing FeedbackDavid54 - Sep 14, 2016 / RAY93 - Sep 14, 2016
An increasing temperature on the planet can have domino-falling effects for the future of Earth

2 - Hi Riandi, as I go through your essay, I must say you know exactly how to approach or answer...

Writing Feedbackrian31 - Sep 14, 2016 / justivy03 - Sep 14, 2016
We must be able to listen to the signal of body, because it is better than any doctors.

3 - Lissa Rankin, founder of (...) and mental illness, comes up [past simple is suggested since this event had fully...

Writing FeedbackFitri12 - Sep 14, 2016 / RAY93 - Sep 14, 2016
Student books: international visitors to New Zealand: reason for visit

2 - hallo mita there are few advice for you count of word atleast 150 your word are 148, create...

Writing FeedbackMita22 - Sep 14, 2016 / BAMS14 - Sep 14, 2016
How many people became a fitness center members some years ago?

2 - Hi Shandy, below are my thoughts on your analysis. - women becomingbecame members of the fitness -...

Writing Feedbackarisandy14 - Sep 14, 2016 / justivy03 - Sep 14, 2016

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