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|TOEFL: In the modern world, we should never be impolite to another person.
7 - hi，thank u for ur careful notes. I will listen to ur suggestions and try to finish such tasks within...
Writing FeedbackNancy is here - May 10, 2014 / Nancy is here - May 10, 2014
|Same national curriculum should be studied by all the students in a nation until they enter college
Writing FeedbackMerlin2015 - May 9, 2014 / Merlin2015 - May 10, 2014
|IELTS Task 1. Parcels delivered by Federal Express and TNT Mail Services
Writing FeedbackMisnariah Idrus - May 8, 2014 / Pahan - May 10, 2014
|IELTS Task 1: Birth and Death rates in Switzerland
Writing Feedbackandial - May 9, 2014 / Pahan - May 10, 2014
|Success is only getting big reward or collecting money or something special
10 - Eva Novita Sari I'm sorry,but it wasn't me who made this mistake,I believe it to be the writer...
Writing FeedbackShineStarJoti - May 6, 2014 / Adammero - May 10, 2014
|TOEFL Practice - knowledge gained from experience or knowledge gained from books
4 - Look at what Pahan suggests you with the structure (a 4-paragraph essay). With this structure, you are easy to...
Writing FeedbackEuge_A - May 5, 2014 / eddies - May 10, 2014
|IELTS: Old building must be protected by law, not knocked down.
7 - This is the pattern for the concluding paragraph I suggest: It is nicer if you could construct this paragraph...
Writing Feedbackrara22 - May 8, 2014 / eddies - May 10, 2014
|IELTS ESSAY:Manual jobs are being done by sophisticated machines, good trend?
Writing FeedbackJohnny0203 - May 9, 2014 / eddies - May 10, 2014
|In some countries teens have jobs while they are students.is it good or not?
6 - The first thing the reader sees is your layout, which shows whole of your essay. If the layout is...
Writing Feedbackbrisky - May 10, 2014 / eddies - May 10, 2014
|IELTS Task 1: international students graduated in several canadian regions
Writing Feedbackandial - Apr 9, 2014 / dumi - May 10, 2014
|IELTS: 'Durdle Door and Dorset' - Erosion of a Headland
3 - Diachronic maps/picts Intro: here you should state what the maps/picts show Overview: state what the direction of change is...
Writing FeedbackMisnariah Idrus - Apr 19, 2014 / eddies - May 10, 2014
|IELTS. X Disease Cases in Someland (1960-1995)
4 - Single graphs Introduction: Here you sould state what the graph shows short body paragraph: state the most improtant piece...
Writing FeedbackMisnariah Idrus - May 7, 2014 / eddies - May 9, 2014
|IELTS Task 1: Travel to and from UK and popular countries visited by BRITON
7 - Double graphs Introduction: Write one sentence, but introduce each chart separately e.g "This first bart chart shows..., and the...
Writing Feedbackandial - May 4, 2014 / eddies - May 9, 2014
|IELTS task 1: Callum University graduates - numbers of male students
8 - Single graphs Introduction: Here you should state what the graph shows short body paragraph: state the most important piece...
Writing Feedbackandial - Apr 15, 2014 / eddies - May 9, 2014
|IELTS Task 1. Travel to / from UK from 1979 to 1999
2 - Double graphs Introduction: Write one sentence, but introduce each chart separately e.g "This first bart chart shows..., and the...
Writing FeedbackMisnariah Idrus - May 9, 2014 / eddies - May 9, 2014
|IELTS Task 1: Different qualification level in Australia
Writing FeedbackSHanafi - May 8, 2014 / dumi - May 9, 2014
|IELTS Graph: Most popular travel destinations for UK people
5 - In your Message block (the area where you type your essay) you find a feature "Attach file(s)". Click...
Writing Feedbackammus1 - May 8, 2014 / dumi - May 9, 2014
|IELTS Task 2: The aim of university education is to help graduates.
3 - Hai friend,I read ur essay and I feel that you give pay attention to the sentence structure.for example, I...
Writing Feedbackrara22 - May 9, 2014 / ammus1 - May 9, 2014
|IELTS: Happiness - factors and importance; "small gap between birth and death"
Writing FeedbackAbdurasul - May 3, 2014 / Abdurasul - May 9, 2014
|IELTS: University education - we are not get better job as we expected
2 - Even your prompt is open for discussion, there is no harm you stating your own opinion in the...
Writing Feedbackupinipin - May 9, 2014 / eddies - May 9, 2014
|IELTS Task 1: Parcels delivered by two mail services
3 - Your writing is very good now. You should focus on the layout which presents the 4 paragraph essay then....
Writing Feedbackandial - May 8, 2014 / eddies - May 9, 2014
|IELTS: PROBLEMS AND BENEFITS OF INTERNATIONAL TOURISM
2 - First I do not understand which side you are supporting...It seems to me unclear ideas .. However, your...
Writing Feedbackhalleybachelor - May 9, 2014 / here2study - May 9, 2014
|Doing work by machine? Work by hand is always easier, cheaper and eco friendly
8 - Thank you all for helping me out..I am really trying hard to improve my essays..I really appreciate your comments..It...
Writing Feedbackhere2study - May 6, 2014 / here2study - May 9, 2014
|IELTS: Maintenance old buildings are for being historical building
5 - Maintenance of old buildings are for being historical buildinghelps preserve history. .... Your idea is not at...
Writing Feedbackupinipin - May 8, 2014 / dumi - May 9, 2014
|TOEFL ESSAY - qualities of good co -worker. 'cooperative and compatible'
3 - Well, compatibility is not actually a skill. Compatibility means that a state in which two things are able to...
Writing Feedbacksandipsinh - Apr 2, 2014 / dumi - May 9, 2014
|IELTS: taxing private car owners heavily in order to solve traffic problems
3 - You have wasted lots of time here. Just do one sentence to enter into your essay topic and then...
Writing FeedbackEva Novita Sari - May 7, 2014 / dumi - May 9, 2014
|IELTS 2: Problems encountered by students in abroad
Writing Feedbacksush2 - May 6, 2014 / sush2 - May 9, 2014
|The prons and cons of the Internet
Writing FeedbackHassan94 - May 3, 2014 / dumi - May 9, 2014
|IELTS: Ages of the populations chart - Yemen vs Italy
5 - First, you need to upload your image with the essay. Then only others can verify what you have written...
Writing Feedbackuzboy - May 3, 2014 / dumi - May 9, 2014
|Cities are the Ideal place to study Societies
8 - Yes, you've got it. Also, stick to a particular essay structure ( the one we suggested above is very...
Writing Feedbackas14 - May 1, 2014 / dumi - May 9, 2014
|It is better to use money for improving our planet than space exploration
4 - There is lots of redundancy in the first part of this sentence. Keep your writing more clear and...
Writing Feedbackmrsoup90 - Apr 29, 2014 / dumi - May 9, 2014
|IELTS: Many old buildings protected by law are part of a nation's history.
8 - Secondly, some people think they should not change their buildings . For example, in my country there is a...
Writing FeedbackEva Novita Sari - Apr 30, 2014 / dumi - May 9, 2014
|Tim Hortons vs Starbucks // gr9 personal
4 - As a consumer, you'd want to buy from the company that sells products which best suits your needs as...
Writing FeedbackBananaMilk - Apr 27, 2014 / dumi - May 9, 2014
|alcohol causes problems and frequeunt calls for government to ban it
2 - to + V1...
Writing FeedbackGaurav8731 - May 8, 2014 / upinipin - May 9, 2014
|IELTS TASK 1: Unpaid work "women and men"
Writing FeedbackEva Novita Sari - May 4, 2014 / upinipin - May 8, 2014
|IELTS TASK I : Britons weekly expenditure on fast food (two charts)
Writing FeedbackSHanafi - Apr 27, 2014 / SHanafi - May 8, 2014
|Writing task 1: Gold sales in Dubai
6 - I recommend putting it at the beginning of your essay, just after the introduction (leave one space) Not...
Writing FeedbackSHanafi - May 6, 2014 / eddies - May 8, 2014
|IELTS TASK 2: Learn by self better than with a teacher
7 - Hello Upinipin, According to me for getting good knowledge we required a good teacher who can guide us...
Writing Feedbackupinipin - May 3, 2014 / ShineStarJoti - May 8, 2014
|Writing task 1 : Diarrhea cases in Mashhad
3 - Adds no value for your report. Omit it. This task is aimed at assessing your report writing skills....
Writing FeedbackSHanafi - May 6, 2014 / eddies - May 8, 2014
|IELTS Graph: Changes in the birth rates of China and USA
6 - As per the basic rule, a paragraph is a collection of related sentences dealing with a single topic. You...
Writing FeedbackBOMAT_IRA - May 3, 2014 / eddies - May 8, 2014
|Ielts: complaint letter - dissatisfaction with the T-shirt
4 - First, give them some reference to trace your purchase and then tell the reason for writing the letter....
Writing FeedbackMattgang - Apr 27, 2014 / dumi - May 8, 2014
|IELTS TASK 1 : Findland Telephone calls
10 - a few words: As per the basic rule, a paragraph is a collection of related sentences dealing with...
Writing FeedbackSHanafi - Mar 9, 2014 / eddies - May 8, 2014
|Australian bureau of meteorology collects up to the minute data on the weather
4 - You don't need to copy and paste a person's writing. Otherwise, your account will get banned. Have this...
Writing Feedbackfanix - Mar 13, 2014 / eddies - May 8, 2014
|TOEFL: Parents are the best teachers? No - the experience is.
4 - Read as many authentic texts/ sample writings of TOEFL as you can to improve your writing skills. Reading texts...
Writing FeedbackAsia97 - Apr 5, 2014 / eddies - May 8, 2014
|'prophet Adam' - famous person from history
9 - You need to introduce the issue completely. Also, it is good to conclude your introduction stating your opinion though...
Writing Feedbackkukuh - Apr 4, 2014 / eddies - May 8, 2014
|IELTS - Freedom in showing creation is the right for every creative artist
7 - It is nicer if you could construct this paragraph with this pattern below: 1. a 'conclusion' signal: In...
Writing Feedbackkikiliyik - Apr 8, 2014 / eddies - May 8, 2014
|IELTS: the peak of epidemic X disease (500 cases)
2 - You write well. A few edits do I find. The given line graph illustrates a reserachresearchdone by a...
Writing Feedbackandial - May 7, 2014 / eddies - May 7, 2014
|IELTS: using of chemical and preservation in food damage many people
2 - It is nicer when you conclude the intro with a statement expressing your opinion very clearly. That helps you...
Writing Feedbackupinipin - May 7, 2014 / eddies - May 7, 2014
|IELTS: dangers derived from the use of chemicals in food production
Writing FeedbackEva Novita Sari - May 7, 2014 / Pahan - May 7, 2014
|IELTS: Administrations often invest in the art such as music and theater.
Writing FeedbackGaluh Prestisa - May 6, 2014 / upinipin - May 7, 2014
|IELTS: Government investment in the arts to make better their country
5 - such as highway, park city, traffic light, halte and anymore. Such as highway, city park, traffic light and...
Writing Feedbackfarizridhonudya - May 6, 2014 / Ammapurnamasari - May 7, 2014
|IELT TASK 2 :TV programmes should be blocked "agree or disagree"
6 - Television gives many disadvantages for ushas many negative effects on our society. .... this is a very...
Writing FeedbackEva Novita Sari - May 4, 2014 / Pahan - May 7, 2014
|Toefl iBT: Staying in one place is better than moving number of places
2 - I hope you pay attention to the approach dumi suggested. Have the parts of Intro, Body paras and Conclusion....
Writing Feedbacknyhyto - May 6, 2014 / Pahan - May 7, 2014
|IELTS: Jakarta - Some people prefer to eat at restaurants than eat at home
Writing FeedbackidhaNP - May 4, 2014 / Eva Novita Sari - May 7, 2014
|spending money on computer technology or on basic needs?
3 - Hope you pay attention to our previous posts and accordingly improve your essay structure :) This essay sounds too...
Writing Feedbackhere2study - May 6, 2014 / Pahan - May 7, 2014
|Talent vs hard-working; importance of environment, desire outweigh any endowment
Writing FeedbackAbdurasul - May 6, 2014 / Pahan - May 7, 2014
|IELTS Task 2: Global warming is one of the most serious issues in the world.
5 - ... wrong grammar :( one of the cases Global warming is one of the extremely dangerous issues that...
Writing FeedbackBOMAT_IRA - May 3, 2014 / dumi - May 7, 2014
|Many charities can society get if government investment money in arts activities
5 - Overall, to me your have a rich range of idea. Don't worry about many mistakes that you made. Your...
Writing FeedbackAmmapurnamasari - May 6, 2014 / SHanafi - May 7, 2014
|IELTS TASK 2: Global warming "serious issue"
2 - Nowadays, earthThe earthbecomesis becominghotter and hotter everydaythan previousapproximately one hundred years agoThis is caused global warming.and this condition is...
Writing FeedbackEva Novita Sari - May 6, 2014 / dumi - May 7, 2014
|IELTS TASK 1; Rechargable vs Disposal Battery
5 - IELTS Task 1 :Rechargable vs Disposal Battery (re-write) This is the link of my old writing essayforum.com/writing-3/task-rechargable-vs-disposal-...
Writing FeedbackSHanafi - Jan 23, 2014 / SHanafi - May 7, 2014
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