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We need to recognize problems in this technological era to minimize bad influence on our social life

3 - Hi Fadhilahumar91, I try to correct your writing. Feeling free to discuss :) First Paragraph. TechnologyTechnological era has...

Writing FeedbackFadhilahumar91 - Aug 18, 2016 / hirani03 - Aug 18, 2016
Writing Task 1 (unit 3 Workbook CECI) Survey about the essential of communication skill for job

4 - Hello, Ziad. Here some suggestions for your writing. From(you can use with regards to or to begin with)...

Writing FeedbackZiadRasyid24 - Aug 17, 2016 / Ilmi_03 - Aug 18, 2016
Why genetic research must be more diserve (Ted Talks by Keolu Fox) - Summary

2 - Hi Ashela.. Welcome to Essay Forum. I am very keen on reading your writing. Actually, it is a good...

Writing Feedbackashelarisa48 - Aug 17, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Aug 18, 2016
What skill does everyone need? According to the speaker, it should be addressed to listening skill.

2 - Hi Ramzi, let me lend you a hand, this is my suggestion words 1. This question, according to...

Writing Feedbackramzi06 - Aug 17, 2016 / ZiadRasyid24 - Aug 17, 2016
Time Summary: China's Launch of a Quantum Satellite is a Major Step in the Space Race

3 - hallo jo... Cracked message which is would alert and altered messages across the globe (...) quantum satellite and...

Writing Feedbackjomul01 - Aug 16, 2016 / ekalamarsyari11 - Aug 17, 2016
Mystery of déjŕ vu explained - it's how we check our memories

4 - hai azmi, l'd try my best ;-) false calls memories of brain we cannot use a plural noun...

Writing Feedbackazmi23 - Aug 16, 2016 / ekalamarsyari11 - Aug 17, 2016
"One Second Everyday" - Summary TED talks

2 - Hello Faridadwi18 I applied some adjustments to your text so that it sounds more professionally written. They are...

Writing FeedbackFaridadwi18 - Aug 17, 2016 / Wolf Larsen - Aug 17, 2016
Honey-bee Colonies and The Production of Honey - IELTS Task 1

2 - Hi Farida, let me lend you a hand, this is my suggestion words 1. the production of the...

Writing FeedbackFaridadwi18 - Aug 17, 2016 / ZiadRasyid24 - Aug 17, 2016
Writing Task 2 (unit 2 Workbook CECI) Healthy lifestyle for some people in modern world

2 - Hello ZiadRasyid24 You should consider doing a bit more reading in English - this should help you to...

Writing FeedbackZiadRasyid24 - Aug 17, 2016 / Wolf Larsen - Aug 17, 2016
Do you think that emailing and texting reduce the togetherness? Writing Task 2

6 - Hi Hirani, - ... the benefit aspects are morebigger than the weakness aspects. - As far as I...

Writing Feedbackhirani03 - Aug 17, 2016 / Faridadwi18 - Aug 17, 2016
Education and lifestyle. Causes and Effects of Overweight Children - IELTS Task 2

2 - Welcome to EF! Without further ado, let me go in a straight forward case of the introduction. You have...

Writing Feedbackdinafayna04 - Aug 17, 2016 / eddies - Aug 17, 2016
Many people have more attention to artificial friends than their neighbor surroudings

2 - Hi Ayu, WELCOME to the Essay Forum Team, we hope you find this website to be valuable and a...

Writing Feedbackayu sasmita08 - Aug 17, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 17, 2016
People should limit the use of electronic media to maintain relationships in reality

3 - Hi tyar, Here some corrections for you, - There are so many negative effectS that - ...

Writing Feedbacktyar32 - Aug 17, 2016 / Faridadwi18 - Aug 17, 2016
Writing IELTS 1, describing bar chart of domestic products growth in different type of countries

2 - hi ramzy.... ... increasing trend in a row since from 1960s to 1990s. (from... to...., if you want...

Writing Feedbackramzi06 - Aug 16, 2016 / Fadhilahumar91 - Aug 17, 2016
Children Obesity ratio has risen in western countries

3 - Let me land you a hand .. Well, it is gonna difficult since you did not write the question....

Writing FeedbackKhatarizNS - Aug 17, 2016 / RezaAnandatama17 - Aug 17, 2016
Work or travel? The dilemma of adolescents after finishing third school and before beginning college

4 - Hi Halim. I am delighted to meet this medium. I have read your writing closely. Let me help you...

Writing FeedbackHalim15 - Aug 14, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Aug 17, 2016
Modern form of communication could be negative for us ??

4 - Hi Alfad, here some corrections for you, - Some people may think because of the social media...

Writing Feedbackalfadmishal20 - Aug 17, 2016 / Faridadwi18 - Aug 17, 2016
Taking a gap year for going a vacation or getting a job is being part of teenager's lifestyle

3 - hi.... ... that it is very valuable for them in order to improve their mentality Nevertheless, the...

Writing FeedbackRezaAnandatama17 - Aug 15, 2016 / Fadhilahumar91 - Aug 17, 2016
What Islam really says about women: TED summery

3 - hi ekaa.. According to Alaa Murabit, as a young moslem woman she never thoughtthinks that God judge...

Writing Feedbackekalamarsyari11 - Aug 16, 2016 / Fadhilahumar91 - Aug 17, 2016
Writing IELTS: Children with Obesity (Cause and Effect)

3 - Hi Ilham, as I go through the essay, I believe you were able to address the argument clearly, you...

Writing Feedbackbung ilham - Aug 17, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 17, 2016
The existence of high connectability through electronic letters makes people unsociable

2 - Greetings Mr Halim Such a pleasure having opportunity to share knowledge in writing ielts.. In modern era, telecommunication...

Writing FeedbackHalim15 - Aug 17, 2016 / ramzi06 - Aug 17, 2016
The cutting-edge technology brings a tremendous negative impact on human's relation with others

NEW - Modern forms of communication such as email and messaging have reduced the amount of time people spend seeing their...

Writing FeedbackRezaAnandatama17 - Aug 17, 2016 / — -
The youth in many countries is unskilled. Compulsory military service is good and necessary for them

3 - Hi Lupin_a1315616. I have some corrections for your essay. Feel free to discuss :) Second Paragraph A friend...

Writing FeedbackLupin_a1315616 - Aug 16, 2016 / hirani03 - Aug 17, 2016
Fighting for Aleppo, who is the target?

2 - Hi Yusuf. Welcome to Essay Forum. You have been the right medium to improve your writing. If it...

Writing FeedbackYusuf05 - Aug 17, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Aug 17, 2016
SUMMARY ARTICLE - PLAN A BELGIAN WAFFLE TOUR

4 - Hello my speaking partner! I found your writing is well developed and a reliable information. My suggestion is...

Writing FeedbackPermata08 - Aug 16, 2016 / Yusuf05 - Aug 17, 2016
ARTICLE SUMMARY : UNTOLD STORY BEHIND CHILDREN's TALE "The Little Prince"

2 - Hi Atikah, your writing is a good job. You passed the major errors. Let me help you to finalize...

Writing Feedbackdinartika19 - Aug 16, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Aug 16, 2016
Life: How Barbershop can Keep men Healthy

4 - Hi Muhammad, below are my thoughts on your essay; - but also a place to go for a...

Writing Feedbackgrintdevereaux30 - Aug 16, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 16, 2016
TED talks: Could we cure HIV with lasers?

3 - Hi Mahdi. You show the better progress in the writing skill since you reduce your mistakes of the grammar....

Writing Feedbackkobayakawa07 - Aug 16, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Aug 16, 2016
Essay about : What does StockBroker do?

5 - Hi Coban, thank you for appreciating our work here on EF, we definitely feel more energized whenever we read...

Writing Feedbackscoban - Aug 16, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 16, 2016
Intel Reinvents Itself to Stay King in a Changing World

3 - hi eka! here are some suggestions and corrections for your essay. In order to win that competitionachieve winning...

Writing Feedbackekalamarsyari11 - Aug 16, 2016 / azmi23 - Aug 16, 2016
Uses of Leisure Time - the best way to rejuvenate body and mind is to spend time in nature

3 - Hi Terminal123, below are my suggestions for your review; - The researcher s are reporting higher - levels...

Writing FeedbackTerminal23 - Aug 16, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 16, 2016
Athletes vs Focus - it fills entire zone of sign is vague. Peripheral vision in sport - summary

3 - Hi Saitama, below are my thoughts on your essay; - Athletes must be have focus to do well...

Writing Feedbacksaitama10 - Aug 16, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 16, 2016
Astronaut nearly drowns in space

3 - Hi there! I'll give you another tips for your essay. - Being an astronaut is very threatening...

Writing Feedbackbbcheesecake14 - Aug 16, 2016 / Rinnegan45 - Aug 16, 2016
TED resume : The happy secret to better work

3 - Hi Beauty! 10% of long term happiness canpredictby external world => I think the better sentence is :...

Writing FeedbackBeauty17 - Aug 16, 2016 / dinartika19 - Aug 16, 2016
Fiji Wins First Ever Olympic Medal

7 - Hallo my classmate.. I will give some comment for your writing...i hope it will be useful for you to...

Writing FeedbackRiandi31 - Aug 12, 2016 / Permata992 - Aug 16, 2016
Summary Article : Gay-rights Activists Are Under Pressured by Religious Conservatives

3 - Hallo Farida, I will give me some feedbacks for your summary.. I hope it will useful for you to...

Writing FeedbackFaridadwi18 - Aug 16, 2016 / Permata992 - Aug 16, 2016
Get that life: How I Created a National Anti-Bullying Organization

NEW - By: Hearter Wood Rudulph Hi fellas, this is the summary of an article for today. Hope it feed...

Writing Feedbackyunindio28 - Aug 16, 2016 / — -
A Carnival, not A Crusade. Essay about the influence of Rio Olympic Games to Brazil

4 - hii, here my correction ;) -in your essay, it's too much punctuation error. such as, space, period, and...

Writing FeedbackEnvyfire213 - Aug 14, 2016 / bbcheesecake14 - Aug 16, 2016
TOEFL integrated essay about healing with the presence of animals

2 - The author explains that how pets enhance both ... They are convenient partners for lonely people. Also,...

Writing Feedbackjoo_rad - Aug 16, 2016 / ekalamarsyari11 - Aug 16, 2016
An info - how long it took to go arround the city before and after the transport was improved

2 - Hi Atikah.. In this writing, you have presented the big problem. You will get a penalty for your score...

Writing Feedbackdinartika19 - Aug 15, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Aug 16, 2016
TED talk: Under water explorer - cave diver

4 - here some comment from me There are many people imagine that diving in underwater most dangerous and imagine cave...

Writing FeedbackFadhilahumar91 - Aug 16, 2016 / Iforsa - Aug 16, 2016
Travelling to Work in Houston and the most popular choice of transportation - IELTS Task 1

2 - Hi Farida. Let me help you. We will establish the good writing together. Please, you meet my footnote and...

Writing FeedbackFaridadwi18 - Aug 15, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Aug 16, 2016
IELTS Task 1 :Time and Costs to Go Around The City

3 - Farida, it is a great chance to read your writing. Allow me to give some additional insights. The...

Writing FeedbackFaridadwi18 - Aug 15, 2016 / Ilmi_03 - Aug 16, 2016
IELTS WRITING TASK 2: Agree and disagree with the effect of modern communication to social lives

2 - Hi..... However, I argue that technologies make less quantity on human interactions, because ... ( i think technology,...

Writing Feedbackekalamarsyari11 - Aug 15, 2016 / Fadhilahumar91 - Aug 16, 2016
Writing Task 1: Summaries of the dissimilar time before and after expansion and it cost in traveling

2 - Hi Hikuma. I am always curious to read your writing. In a couple of days, you show the better...

Writing Feedbackhirani03 - Aug 15, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Aug 16, 2016
The effect of refinements in travel times duration for different form of transportation in the city

2 - Greetings Mrs sofi, It is my pleasure to share knowledge in this forum, Taxi was the most expensive...

Writing FeedbackIforsa - Aug 15, 2016 / ramzi06 - Aug 16, 2016
Dealing with people is the most essential skills according to choices of 60% respondents in 1997

2 - Hi Daya. Welcome to EF. Fortunately, you have been the right way to improve your writing. Let me help...

Writing Feedbackdaya23 - Aug 15, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Aug 16, 2016
TED Talks : Track Your Happiness; Want to be Happier? Stay in the Moment.

2 - Hi Dinar. Let me help you again. I hope these will improve your grammar when you create the writing...

Writing Feedbackdinartika19 - Aug 15, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Aug 16, 2016
TED : baby diapers inspired scientist to create sophisticated technology

2 - hi miss sofi ... information about 'baby diapers that inspired scientist to contrive ... ... became greater...

Writing FeedbackIforsa - Aug 15, 2016 / ekalamarsyari11 - Aug 15, 2016
Summary TED Talks : 5 ways to be a good listener

2 - Hello Faridadwi18 I applied a few stylistic adjustments to your text so that it sounds more professionally written....

Writing FeedbackFaridadwi18 - Aug 15, 2016 / Wolf Larsen - Aug 15, 2016
Which aspects of communication skills are the most crucial in a job? Two surveys from 1997 and 2006

2 - Hi Nurul, here's my take on your essay. - A breakdown of communication skills that are equally important...

Writing FeedbackIlmi_03 - Aug 15, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 15, 2016
Summary Article "10 Beauty Products You Should Never Ever Share"

2 - Hi Hirani! May I correct your essay? Some of women => women alreadyplural MD explains a...

Writing Feedbackhirani03 - Aug 15, 2016 / dinartika19 - Aug 15, 2016
Summary Article : Selfish Dogs Would Rather play with a Toy than help a Human

2 - Hi Farida.. I have still found the grammar errors in your writing. These are my corrections to finalise the...

Writing FeedbackFaridadwi18 - Aug 15, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Aug 15, 2016
[Task 2] What makes a good teacher? Training or personal qualities?

4 - Thanks everyone providing comments! Many thanks...

Writing Feedbackyon959 - Aug 14, 2016 / yon959 - Aug 15, 2016
Technological proliferation has revolutionised the interaction between people. IELTS essay

NEW - Topic: Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has...

Writing Feedbackannguyen - Aug 15, 2016 / — -
Ear Care: Do-It-Yourself Wax Removal

2 - Hi there! here are some pointers for you. 1. ... it protects and cleans the ear. It...

Writing Feedbackbbcheesecake14 - Aug 15, 2016 / Rinnegan45 - Aug 15, 2016
Summary of the article written by Jennifer S. Holland related to pandas.

2 - Hai Ifrosa! get to know => gets to know : because the subject is The article simple...

Writing FeedbackIforsa - Aug 15, 2016 / dinartika19 - Aug 15, 2016
Essay written on the flaws in the foster care system and solutions to fix them

3 - Hi Kar, - We'llWe will Call Him Richard - didn't did not Try not abridge when you write....

Writing FeedbackKar2170572 - Aug 12, 2016 / Faridadwi18 - Aug 15, 2016
TED "Got a meeting? Take a walk by Nilofer Merchant"

2 - Hi Risty, I hope this finds you well. Your essay is very interesting, and I love the idea...

Writing FeedbackRisty01 - Aug 15, 2016 / JuanSebastianR - Aug 15, 2016
Discuss the possible advantages and disanvantages of making unemployed people take any job.

3 - Hi grint, - Unemployment was one of the problemS for many people in a big city. ... they...

Writing Feedbackgrintdevereaux30 - Aug 13, 2016 / Faridadwi18 - Aug 15, 2016

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