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|Toefl - a custom from your country that you would like people from other countries to ado
Writing Feedbacksandipsinh - Mar 13, 2014 / dumi - Mar 17, 2014
|TOEFL -You have the opportunity to visit a foreign country for two weeks.
5 - Well, overall, your essay needs better presentation. You tend to construct too complicated sentences. Avoid that and write simple,...
Writing Feedbacksandipsinh - Mar 14, 2014 / dumi - Mar 17, 2014
|Effects of the gold rush to Australia. 1850's Gold Rush changed the country face
4 - the gold is getting pulled up is the subject and the verb is the immigrants following. Does it make...
Writing Feedbacksabstar - Mar 6, 2014 / sabstar - Mar 17, 2014
|IELTS task 1: median costs of houses and units in four cities in Australia over a 16 year
3 - Overall, I think you write very well and really need not to worry about this task. However, you need...
Writing Feedbackandial - Mar 16, 2014 / eddies - Mar 17, 2014
|TOEFL - studying art and music will develop one's mind
4 - It can bring to everybody all pleasant views from all over the world without the need of expensive travelling....
Writing Feedbackborisbonev - Mar 16, 2014 / niesaysi - Mar 17, 2014
|In modern times, how to maintain the balance of the competition and cooperation is a serious problem
2 - Logon to EF On the new screen that opens up, under the LOGO "EssayForum", Find and select your essay...
Writing FeedbackBINGBINGLIANG - Mar 16, 2014 / eddies - Mar 16, 2014
|I was a rebel I was a trouble maker; Epiphany in My Life
6 - Utilize spell check features of Microsoft Word to correct as many spelling problems as possible before...
Writing Feedbackdayanag - Feb 17, 2014 / eddies - Mar 16, 2014
|IELTS Task I : Male and Female Fitness Membership
5 - To me, 2 details (para) look more organised: selecting the key information, including Number, and making comparison/contrast. Tell me...
Writing FeedbackSHanafi - Feb 18, 2014 / eddies - Mar 16, 2014
|IELTS Task 1 - Describing chart - help me to correct if any mistakes!
6 - This is good. However, you'd better have an overview instead of a conclusion. Write your overview paragraph after...
Writing Feedbackcarolinenguyen - Feb 20, 2014 / eddies - Mar 16, 2014
|Traditional methods of cooking is likely to be extinct - IELTS writing
Writing Feedbackyohooooo - Feb 20, 2014 / eddies - Mar 16, 2014
|IELTS - TASK1 - BAR CHART - average bed use in three typical hospitals
7 - To provide readers with a clear view of the main trends of the given charts, write your overview...
Writing Feedbackraflo - Feb 20, 2014 / eddies - Mar 16, 2014
|IELTS - GT (task-1) You have moved to different house, Write a letter to your friend
Writing FeedbackNaveed786 - Mar 16, 2014 / Naveed786 - Mar 16, 2014
|IELTS Task 1: Subway system in six major countries
5 - The table revealsevidencepresents detailed statistics of the underground railway systems in six major countries in field of opening...
Writing FeedbackSHanafi - Mar 14, 2014 / dumi - Mar 16, 2014
|IELTS WRITING SKILL 1 : Global water use by sector and in 2 different country
Writing Feedbackneda ziee - Feb 17, 2014 / eddies - Mar 16, 2014
|In my views, there is a positive and negative effects of global tourism in one country
8 - (1) "The flow of global tourism has been dramatically increased for the past few years" I think, for...
Writing FeedbackAndhy07 - Mar 15, 2014 / Misnariah Idrus - Mar 16, 2014
|The officials of Canadian universities have high variety in allow international students to graduate
Writing FeedbackSHanafi - Mar 16, 2014 / dumi - Mar 16, 2014
|COMPUTERS Vs TEACHERS; What would happen in the future?
3 - I requested you to follow some forum rules in your other thread and hope you'd pay attention to them...
Writing Feedbackbwosti - Mar 16, 2014 / dumi - Mar 16, 2014
|One Official international Language or more languages?
6 - (why...?) If you could, here you'd better restate what you've mentioned above. Then, show some suggestion or warning...
Writing FeedbackAbi90 - Jan 28, 2014 / eddies - Mar 16, 2014
|[Ielts task 1] Fish and Meat consumption in Europe from 1979 to 2004
10 - reduce the length of your sentences a bit more. Long sentence gives more work to the reader as he...
Writing Feedbacksouthstar - Feb 14, 2014 / eddies - Mar 16, 2014
|IELTS Task 1 : The Chart in Global Sales of Games Software, CDs and DVD or Video
11 - Nouns and prepositions often work together in common phrases. However, for this case the combination of nouns-prepositions is...
Writing FeedbackSHanafi - Jan 20, 2014 / eddies - Mar 15, 2014
|expenditure on fast food by income groups and consumption of fast food (1970-1990)
Writing Feedbackfanix - Mar 15, 2014 / eddies - Mar 15, 2014
|Toefl - Advertising can tell you a lot about a country
7 - You should write at least two paragraphs for the TOEFL independent essay. Your word count is low and you...
Writing Feedbacksandipsinh - Feb 13, 2014 / ramshah - Mar 15, 2014
|IELTS: Letter to your friend - 'we all can have some lunch together'
6 - My pleasure :D My son Akshath was the happiest of all, asandhe particularly enjoyed your son's good...
Writing FeedbackArun0506 - Mar 14, 2014 / dumi - Mar 15, 2014
|Advantages and disadvantages of the internet. Increasing the living standards?
Writing Feedbackrrivanh - Apr 16, 2011 / paula13 - Mar 15, 2014
|IELTS TASK 1 (Map) - Planned Shopping Center Locations
2 - The map shows illustrates town planning for two potential locations (B and A) for atwo new shopping centers(A and...
Writing FeedbackJasS - Mar 14, 2014 / dumi - Mar 14, 2014
|Destiny and Character; "Your moments of decisions affect your Destiny"
Writing FeedbackSaqib - Oct 25, 2013 / Faith318 - Mar 14, 2014
|Topic: My favorite three ways of communications.
5 - .... transformed life to what? You need to specify! Secondly, the Internet has been instrumental in transforming our...
Writing Feedbackuzboy - Mar 11, 2014 / dumi - Mar 14, 2014
|IELTS;Popular events are essential in easing international tension
Writing FeedbackGichki - Mar 14, 2014 / dumi - Mar 14, 2014
|High salaries to sportsmen or other important professions; equally hard work
Writing Feedbackrachana - Feb 28, 2014 / eddies - Mar 14, 2014
|IELTS WRITING TASK 1; Annual expenditure of a British school
Writing Feedbackmona bhadange - Mar 12, 2014 / mona bhadange - Mar 14, 2014
|Relationship between HIGH SALES & POWER OF ADVERTISING
Writing Feedbackmariasultana - Feb 28, 2014 / eddies - Mar 14, 2014
|Traffic jams in big cities - headache question for the government to solve
Writing FeedbackThanh Thuy - Feb 13, 2014 / Pahan - Mar 14, 2014
|IELTS Task 1 : Australian children leisure activity
5 - I quite agree with eddies :) "attractive noticeable trends" - the word "attractive" does not provide...
Writing FeedbackSHanafi - Mar 14, 2014 / Pahan - Mar 14, 2014
|Teenagers are encouraged to have part-time jobs - What do you think about this?
6 - Hi Friend..., You write the ideas with the meaning and detail of your sentences. However, you don't pay enough...
Writing Feedbackjacquelyn - Feb 13, 2014 / eddies - Mar 14, 2014
|"Pohela Falgun" - The custom of my country that I like most and will encourage to follow TOEFL essay
Writing Feedbackjon_snow - Mar 11, 2014 / jon_snow - Mar 14, 2014
|Some people fail on their school but achieve success in their adult life. Why do you think
3 - here is the prompt: and Were I you, I would start analyzing the prompt, like this: Topic/discussion:...
Writing Feedbackagi - Feb 13, 2014 / eddies - Mar 13, 2014
|"to teach or understand the concept of the topic" - purpose of teaching and learning is same
7 - a closer look at the prompt given. Here, you should focus this topic on keywords: important ideas,...
Writing Feedbacksandipsinh - Feb 12, 2014 / eddies - Mar 13, 2014
|IELTS task 1: The continuous movement of water on, above & below the surface of the Earth
7 - You are welcome, Eddy :) And also, congratulations on your IELTS score! You deserve it every bit :-D...
Writing Feedbackeddies - Mar 7, 2014 / MisterWandering - Mar 13, 2014
|'the figure fluctuated between 1920 and 1940' - Birth Rates in China and the USA
4 - I think you follow a good structure. For this task you really do not have to have a conclusion....
Writing FeedbackJasS - Mar 10, 2014 / dumi - Mar 13, 2014
|IELTS TASK 1 - Bar and Line Charts! Tourists Of Japan Travelling Abroad!
Writing FeedbackJasS - Mar 12, 2014 / JasS - Mar 13, 2014
|My friend veipune
5 - Firstly, I learnedshe helped me learn how important it is to hold a positive attitude was importantin life. She...
Writing Feedbackveipune - Feb 27, 2014 / dumi - Mar 13, 2014
|belong to a middle class; Being a celebrity - such as a famous film star or ...
5 - To begin with, many celebrities earn extremely large amount of money, that is millions and millions of US dollars....
Writing Feedbackevstigneeff - Mar 13, 2014 / dumi - Mar 13, 2014
|IELTS task 2: The position of women in society has changed markedly in the last 20 years.
Writing Feedbackeddies - Feb 22, 2014 / dumi - Mar 13, 2014
|IELTS task 2: What to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers.
Writing Feedbackeddies - Mar 3, 2014 / Pahan - Mar 13, 2014
|Ielts writing test 1. Cement and concrete production diagrams. Ielts8
11 - The diagram illustrates the production process of cement which is one of the raw material used for concrete production...
Writing Feedbackipanema13 - Feb 10, 2014 / mona bhadange - Mar 13, 2014
|TOEFL ESSAY - Short stories are preferred more than movies,explain your position.
7 - Reading stories were( are )good means of amusement in primitive days Great emphasis! :) Please undo it. I'm sure...
Writing Feedbacksandipsinh - Mar 12, 2014 / niesaysi - Mar 13, 2014
|TOEFL: Which is better- Learning foreign language in home or host country?
Writing Feedbackmax2014 - Mar 12, 2014 / sandipsinh - Mar 13, 2014
|TOEFL : business research or agriculture research. What do you recommend for your country?
Writing Feedbackmax2014 - Mar 11, 2014 / max2014 - Mar 12, 2014
|IELTS TASK 2 : Problems that overpopulation causes and suggest solution.
Writing FeedbackSHanafi - Mar 8, 2014 / ahqaf - Mar 12, 2014
|IELTS Task I : Flowchart process of academic writing
6 - Thank you, Tuan. You correct the grammar and syntax wholly. I found in the dictionary, and i consider ...
Writing FeedbackSHanafi - Mar 7, 2014 / SHanafi - Mar 11, 2014
|Priority: The happiness of the majority vs the rights of individuals?
3 - A vast amountMany of people believe that the happiness of the majority is more important, while others claim that...
Writing FeedbackAbdurasul - Mar 11, 2014 / dumi - Mar 11, 2014
|IELTS- How should the value of a person be evaluated?
3 - First, I have an admin request. You need to have a more meaningful topic in the Subject field when...
Writing Feedbackthuongph170292 - Mar 11, 2014 / dumi - Mar 11, 2014
|IELTS - HAPPINESS; Why it is difficult to define and What factors contribute to achieving?
5 - The actual reason is that different people perceive happiness differently. These perceptions may have been shaped by their...
Writing FeedbackGichki - Mar 11, 2014 / dumi - Mar 11, 2014
|TOEFL: 'reach the zenith' Some people prefer to work for a large company.
3 - Thanks for the appraise. Could you be more specific? Are you saying both of my reasons are incomplete or...
Writing Feedbackbestonline99 - Mar 11, 2014 / bestonline99 - Mar 11, 2014
|Today, man is master and machine is slave but tomorrow, machine will be master and man wil
6 - You write very well. However, this does not follow the style that you are required to present at...
Writing Feedbackbwosti - Mar 11, 2014 / Pahan - Mar 11, 2014
|IELTS TASK 2: Young people are much aware about issues than previous generations.
3 - Your introduction seems to be ok! But you haven't written: Hook - An interesting statement to catch the reader's...
Writing FeedbackSHanafi - Mar 11, 2014 / Abdurasul - Mar 11, 2014
|Priority: Industrial skills vs Education?
Writing FeedbackAbdurasul - Mar 10, 2014 / Abdurasul - Mar 11, 2014
|My father wanted doctor profession for me; subject without opportunity to study
5 - i think your second reason is not strong enough. You already took your higher education on Management despite protest...
Writing Feedbacksandipsinh - Mar 11, 2014 / jon_snow - Mar 11, 2014
|An email to the hotel asking for a favor
2 - I have a reservation at your hotel as follows, Name: XXXXXXXXXXX Telephone: XXXX-XXXXXX Expiration dateValid till: XXXXXXXXX My husband...
Writing Feedbackmaych - Mar 11, 2014 / dumi - Mar 11, 2014
|The twenty-first century has begun. What changes do you think this new century will bring?
3 - First, it is good to mention the purpose of this writing. Is this for IELTS or TOEFL? Others can...
Writing Feedbackhakuyo1112 - Mar 11, 2014 / dumi - Mar 11, 2014
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