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|Smoking should be made prohibited in public places : IELTS
Writing Feedbackdil77 - May 27, 2014 / dumi - May 30, 2014
|Task 1 : Line graph essay of expenditure on phone services in America
4 - .... "average yearly the consumer pending"? This phrase spoils your intro.... Also, mention the period in more details...
Writing FeedbacktiaDS - May 26, 2014 / dumi - May 30, 2014
|Park in Bangkok -Should the government build the park in the middle of the city?
3 - Instead of using same word frequently. it is highly better to use referencing such as it, they , or...
Writing Feedbackbrightxxz - May 26, 2014 / andial - May 30, 2014
|IELTS - Write a letter to a book shop manager about a book you're looking for
Writing Feedbackrims - May 29, 2014 / SalMon - May 29, 2014
|GRE: Adam's Realty firm is considerably superior to the Fitch's Realty firm
2 - The ten year period can help a company establish --> to establish its business, increase its productivity and thus,...
Writing FeedbackKMeghji - May 27, 2014 / Hung Arsenal - May 29, 2014
|ielts: different causes of car accidents and some solutions
Writing Feedbackieltswriter - May 25, 2014 / dumi - May 29, 2014
|Parent should acquisite skills of listening and taking care of their children
Writing FeedbackSalMon - May 23, 2014 / SalMon - May 29, 2014
|to acquire some certain skills, people usually need to be trained by education
Writing FeedbackHang Le - May 25, 2014 / dumi - May 29, 2014
|TOEFL: Why music is so important? It's indispensable part of people's life
Writing Feedbackluckyxuan - May 19, 2014 / Abdurasul - May 29, 2014
|Toefl: Teachers should attend courses - knowledge should be up to date
3 - You write very well - good grammar, vocabulary, ideas etc. However, I wonder whether it is wise to spend...
Writing Feedbackzhanghankun - May 25, 2014 / dumi - May 29, 2014
|IELTS task 2: video games provide harmless fun
Writing FeedbackStarSea - May 15, 2014 / StarSea - May 29, 2014
|IELTS - Rejecting job opportunities - POSITIVE OR NEGATIVE?
Writing Feedbackyirunli - May 24, 2014 / yirunli - May 29, 2014
|'experience more' - Living in a big city is better than a small city
4 - Hello, In my humble opinion, firstly, you should decide what types of essays you want to write; secondly, you...
Writing Feedbackhui4369 - Jul 27, 2012 / kristennguyen23 - May 29, 2014
|IELTS: Young people in the modern world
4 - Thank you Dumi! I really appreciate your comments ^^ I have a habit of writing too long, I trying...
Writing FeedbackSalMon - May 20, 2014 / SalMon - May 28, 2014
|IELTS: ACADEMIC- LINE GRAPH- TOURISTS IN FIVE COUNTRIES
3 - Hi tiaDS Thanks for your revert You are right . I should have compared the countries at least US...
Writing Feedbackcandy07 - May 28, 2014 / candy07 - May 28, 2014
|Story about why the dog 'Jaw' was sold by the owner
Writing Feedbackenglishlover - May 25, 2014 / dumi - May 28, 2014
|Governments should support public transport - important factor of social welfare
4 - Anyway, your essay looks pretty short :) .... Had your prompt asked whether you agree on that...
Writing Feedbackmaryailt - May 23, 2014 / dumi - May 28, 2014
|Freedom of speech is mother of democracy
Writing FeedbackPsardana - May 24, 2014 / dumi - May 28, 2014
|IELTS - Traditional skills and ways are always valuable and will last forever
4 - I like those arguements offered, but there are some grammar mistakes. i have got question, do we...
Writing Feedbacktiandteo - May 22, 2014 / yirunli - May 28, 2014
|Toefl Essay: House or a business. Which would you choose to buy?
4 - First, you need to present your essay in a more tidy manner. This is pretty difficult to read as...
Writing FeedbackSam123 - May 22, 2014 / dumi - May 28, 2014
|The use of electronic mail (e-mail) makes people become better writers.
Writing Feedbackodon - May 23, 2014 / dumi - May 28, 2014
|To be successful in studying, students should have a good method to learn effectively.
Writing Feedbackthanhmai - May 22, 2014 / dumi - May 28, 2014
|iBT Essay: Finance sports at universities?
Writing Feedbackesmayli - May 22, 2014 / dumi - May 28, 2014
|Youth Drug Abuse topic - Causes - effects and possible recommendations
Writing FeedbackHung Arsenal - May 26, 2014 / KMeghji - May 27, 2014
|ACADEMIC TASK 1- COMPARISON OF PIE CHARTS (leisure activities in U.S.A)
Writing Feedbackcandy07 - May 27, 2014 / candy07 - May 27, 2014
|IELTS - parents should teach children / or school is the place?
5 - It is good to conclude your intro with a statement expressing your view on the issue (although your...
Writing FeedbackRSD - May 23, 2014 / dumi - May 27, 2014
|IELTS Writing Task 1 : Process (Tea Production)
7 - Well, I think you need to improve the approach you follow for this task. Here, it is important to...
Writing Feedbacknded - May 21, 2014 / dumi - May 27, 2014
|IELTS TASK 2- MACHINES - POSITIVE OR NEGATIVE FOR HUMANS
6 - 1) Thesis statement is simply a statement expressing your opinion. It is always good to conclude your intro with...
Writing Feedbackcandy07 - May 22, 2014 / dumi - May 27, 2014
|'Getting degree' - TOEFL: Reasons why people attend university
3 - is it an ielts essay?it is too short, lacking introduction,bodies and conclusion.however, i think your writing style is good....
Writing Feedbackjhundais - May 17, 2012 / ieltswriter - May 26, 2014
|IELTS - Mobile Phone and its benefits
4 - i think you should read some samples about different topics available on internet. after you get familiar with these...
Writing Feedbackzubiboy008 - Dec 18, 2012 / ieltswriter - May 26, 2014
|GRE Argument: "Palean baskets" archeologists discovery
Writing FeedbackKMeghji - May 21, 2014 / classified9988 - May 26, 2014
|IELTS: Academic - Sales of two companies
6 - click: takeielts.britishcouncil (dot) org/sites/default/files/IELTS_task_1_Writing_band_descriptors.pdf An overview is not the individual details, but the 'whole picture'....
Writing Feedbackcandy07 - May 25, 2014 / eddies - May 25, 2014
|Women should work (paragraph)
7 - Well, it is nicer if you could break down this writing into paragraphs. To compose the best paragraph is...
Writing Feedbackycup - May 22, 2014 / eddies - May 25, 2014
|IELTS Essay - The option to work or study from home is advantage or disadvantage
7 - Even your prompt is open for discussion, there is no harm you stating your own opinion in the...
Writing Feedbackmsarkar - May 18, 2014 / eddies - May 25, 2014
|Shopping is beyond buying goods. It is social interaction with other people.
4 - I know you write well. However, you'd better always try to include the prompt. To give relevant and...
Writing Feedbackieltswriter - May 24, 2014 / eddies - May 25, 2014
|GRE Argument: Easy Read Speed-Reading Course has greatly improved productivity
2 - The first question that arises is,"whetherWas the inclusion of the course was the only change made?" Also, it...
Writing FeedbackKMeghji - May 21, 2014 / niesaysi - May 25, 2014
|IELTS: WAY TO REDUCE THE AMOUNT OF TRAFFIC?
Writing FeedbackSalMon - May 22, 2014 / candy07 - May 25, 2014
|IELTS: only some of children's leisure activities should be educational
3 - Lemme give a try: Playing with friends brings great joy to children. For some people, they argue that children...
Writing Feedbackmohamedtheking - May 18, 2014 / eddies - May 24, 2014
|IELTS Task 1 : School expenditure in 3 particular year
3 - To here is not as a To-infinitive, but preposition. Omit 'reach'. From 28%... to 15% The number of...
Writing FeedbackSHanafi - May 21, 2014 / eddies - May 24, 2014
|IELTS TASK 1 : Process of making cement to produce a concrete brick
Writing FeedbackSHanafi - May 21, 2014 / eddies - May 24, 2014
|The table subordinate to Somecoutry's people
Writing FeedbackAmmapurnamasari - May 15, 2014 / Ammapurnamasari - May 24, 2014
|IELTS - EFFECT OF CELEBRITIES ON YOUTH
Writing Feedbackcandy07 - May 23, 2014 / bakhadeer - May 24, 2014
|Essay on OVERPOPULATION topic; 'starvation of millions'
NEW - Together with environmental related problems, population explosion has drawn a great attention of the public these days. It's believed...
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|"death is inevitable - everybody dies" - Soma Mine Disaster
Writing Feedbackbora99 - May 22, 2014 / bora99 - May 23, 2014
|[IELTS TASK 2] old and young workers
Writing FeedbackSalMon - May 22, 2014 / dumi - May 23, 2014
|TOEFL integrated task, altruism in humans and animals
3 - It is a well-written essay, I liked it :) Here are some comments: Your intro par clearly introduces the...
Writing FeedbackAngelaB - May 23, 2014 / esmayli - May 23, 2014
|Some people claim that technology advancement is a sign of human progress
4 - What is this all about? Is this the essay topic? For what purpose you are writing this essay?...
Writing FeedbackAbassdarsa - May 20, 2014 / dumi - May 23, 2014
|IELTS;Some celebrities misguide young people& some guide them in right direction
Writing Feedbackleoking - May 21, 2014 / leoking - May 23, 2014
|Funding public transport by government should be supported.
Writing Feedbackskyplex2014 - May 22, 2014 / SalMon - May 22, 2014
|IELTS - PRICE OF THE AIRPLANE TICKETS
Writing Feedbackyirunli - May 22, 2014 / yirunli - May 22, 2014
|IELTS -Levels of youth crime are increasing
5 - Hi Candy, I highly appreciate your writing skill. Just one suggestion, try to finish the essay within 300...
Writing Feedbackcandy07 - May 16, 2014 / msarkar - May 22, 2014
|IELTS: Children can effectively learn from watching television. Agree/Disagree?
Writing Feedbacksoham2508 - May 21, 2014 / candy07 - May 22, 2014
|IELTS Letter - Write a letter asking your friend to join you on a holiday
3 - was going...
Writing Feedbackmsarkar - May 21, 2014 / yirunli - May 22, 2014
|Introduction to Argumentative Essay on Homework
2 - I am an English teacher, and I bet homework IS important. It often happens that I explain a grammar...
Writing Feedbacktaymcg - May 22, 2014 / esmayli - May 22, 2014
|IELTS Task 1 - fast food graph and chart
Writing Feedbacksmeak - May 21, 2014 / MisterWandering - May 21, 2014
|IELTS: "Living a healthy lifestyle through eating"
Writing Feedbackbrianna - May 20, 2014 / brianna - May 21, 2014
|GRE Essay: Scandals are useful because they focus our attention
Writing FeedbackKMeghji - May 20, 2014 / KMeghji - May 21, 2014
|Should the government introduce some laws to control nutrition and food choices?
3 - It would be better if you mention the purpose of your writing. If it is for a particular test,...
Writing Feedbackquocdai - May 20, 2014 / KMeghji - May 21, 2014
|CBEST- argument(s) either for or against "Back to Basics."
Writing Feedbackokdeerpass - May 20, 2014 / KMeghji - May 21, 2014
|Television has comprehensive good effects on society.
4 - Firstly, the arrival.. seems better since advent is less representative of a technology. I am concerned...
Writing Feedbackodon - May 21, 2014 / KMeghji - May 21, 2014
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