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|IELTS : Modern technology has an influence on schools today!
Writing FeedbackAltaa - Nov 7, 2013 / MisterWandering - Nov 9, 2013
|Do you think in mordern society, wearing formally is still important?
Writing Feedbackphuongnam95 - Nov 8, 2013 / phuongnam95 - Nov 9, 2013
|[TOEFL] Choosing a job is a critical decision in the life of every person.
Writing Feedbackphuongnam95 - Nov 8, 2013 / dumi - Nov 9, 2013
|[TOEFL] 'Announcement of opening of new restaurant in locality'
3 - I was happy and excited because I have already been to all the existing restaurants in the locality...
Writing Feedbacksky2586 - Nov 8, 2013 / dumi - Nov 9, 2013
|Reduce Recidivism: Invest in Life Changes
5 - Fortunately, there are programs that can help ex-offenders make their transition to normal life effectively. The...
Writing Feedbackjland72 - Nov 2, 2013 / Pahan - Nov 8, 2013
|"Boarding school is beneficial for student". Illustrate your point of view.
Writing Feedbackasifulizlam - Nov 3, 2013 / Pahan - Nov 8, 2013
|[toefl]was it easier to find jobs that would lead to a secure future In the past?
5 - you already used intense in your first paragraph, try to use synonyms like extreme, fierce etc.. Also, there...
Writing Feedbackscurry - Nov 8, 2013 / sky2586 - Nov 8, 2013
|IELTS-CAM 9-TASK 1-ISLAND BEFORE AND AFTER THE CONSTRUCTION OF TOURIST FACILITIES
Writing FeedbackTraveler - Nov 7, 2013 / dumi - Nov 8, 2013
|People benefit more from traveling in their own country or traveling to foreign countries?
4 - ... I just fixed your grammar error. However, this is not an interesting hook. Your opening sentence, the...
Writing FeedbackHaruhi - Nov 4, 2013 / dumi - Nov 8, 2013
|IELTS essay about professional workers ,sports and entertainment personalities
3 - ... economic growth This sentence is very confusing. It has grammar issues too. I cannot grasp the idea...
Writing Feedbackcatherine0605 - Nov 7, 2013 / dumi - Nov 8, 2013
|TOEFL _ intelligence as the most important characteristic of a student
4 - You should have provide a specific example for your reasoning as you did in the first paragraph. It is...
Writing Feedbackmoonname - Nov 7, 2013 / dumi - Nov 8, 2013
|Unpaid social service revive patriotism and responsibilities among students
2 - I think you've done a very good job. To be honest, your writing skill is much better than mine....
Writing Feedbacktarhuna16 - Nov 6, 2013 / scurry - Nov 8, 2013
|[TOEFL]Does the telephone greater influence on people's lives than television has?
Writing Feedbackscurry - Nov 7, 2013 / dumi - Nov 7, 2013
|global warming essay: causes and what solutions for people and for governments
3 - Try not to use first person in such a formal paragraph. Your paragraphs are very clear but the introduction...
Writing Feedbackbeula - Nov 6, 2013 / MaryMag96 - Nov 7, 2013
|Five Sentence Chronological Paragraph. "Let me tell you how to make my favorite sandwich."
Writing FeedbackMaryMag96 - Nov 6, 2013 / MaryMag96 - Nov 7, 2013
|[IELTS] Unpaid community service and its role in high school programs
5 - Alright thanks for all your help. I will try to re-write the intro again. By the way, would you...
Writing FeedbackRomanticDog - Nov 6, 2013 / RomanticDog - Nov 7, 2013
|IELTS - the largest percentage of consumer spending in each country went on food/drinks/tobacco
3 - very good summarising! I do not know much about writings but I noticed repetitive using of the word 'spending'....
Writing FeedbackTraveler - Oct 31, 2013 / ladyjoy - Nov 7, 2013
|IELTS essay about Multitasking, problems and solutions
Writing Feedbackgabbie - Nov 4, 2013 / gabbie - Nov 7, 2013
|IELTS; Children learning foreign languages - Good or Bad?
2 - In my opinion , you tried to state firstly the advantages by following this sentence : "Nowadays, children are...
Writing Feedbackanus - Nov 6, 2013 / Altaa - Nov 7, 2013
|Government officials should rely on their own judgment or not?
Writing Feedbackserendipityluo - Nov 3, 2013 / serendipityluo - Nov 6, 2013
|Educational systems of the United States and Ukraine
Writing Feedbackmerukameru - Nov 6, 2013 / merukameru - Nov 6, 2013
|[TOEFL]Agree or disagree: The telephone has greater influence on people's lives than TV
4 - As per TOEFL standards, an effective essay written for the TOEFL Independent Writing Task, which can score over...
Writing FeedbackAllen Hu - Nov 6, 2013 / Pahan - Nov 6, 2013
|Children are easily impressed by colors and sugar and this is dangerous.
4 - Actually this is your position of the argument which you should have been stated in the introduction. (have...
Writing FeedbackNatQ - Nov 4, 2013 / Pahan - Nov 6, 2013
|[TOEFL] Should good people are rewarded and bad people are punished in movies or dramas?
Writing Feedbackscurry - Nov 6, 2013 / Allen Hu - Nov 6, 2013
|IELTS- Problems with students behaviour
3 - The upbringing of children is very important for preventing children from in-disciplinary actions. .... the first...
Writing Feedbackwoodfish - Nov 4, 2013 / dumi - Nov 6, 2013
|IELTS, Fast food is now universally in most countries and is becoming increasingly popular
4 - .... this sentence has grammar issues; Modern and busy society depends on fast food for efficient and convenient...
Writing Feedbackphuoc - Nov 1, 2013 / dumi - Nov 6, 2013
|IELTS task-2, talk about private seconary school
Writing Feedbackeric628 - Nov 5, 2013 / dumi - Nov 6, 2013
|[IELTS] The private motor vehicle and air pollution
Writing Feedbackgowtham - Nov 6, 2013 / dumi - Nov 6, 2013
|Real life vs books - practical and theoretical ways to gain a knowledge.
Writing Feedbackbatais - Nov 5, 2013 / Pahan - Nov 6, 2013
|IELTS Academic essay: Some people believe money is a less important factor than free time
Writing FeedbackAltaa - Oct 30, 2013 / Altaa - Nov 6, 2013
|IELTS; CONTROL ON WATER OR NOT?
Writing Feedbackmaniskul - Nov 4, 2013 / JethroJosh - Nov 5, 2013
|Online education and traditional education
3 - If this writing is meant for IELTS or TOEFL, I am pretty confident that this essay is too very...
Writing FeedbackShaunFenty - Nov 1, 2013 / Pahan - Nov 5, 2013
|The new forms of communication have positive effects on interpersonal relationships.
3 - ...."different" regions is not the important fact here. It is the "far apart" that makes inconveniences for the...
Writing Feedbackdodam - Nov 4, 2013 / Pahan - Nov 5, 2013
|IELTS: Humans responsibility to prevent lesser-known languages from dying out
Writing Feedbackboannie - Nov 5, 2013 / Pahan - Nov 5, 2013
|IELTS Human's dependence in the modern world - about coherence, academic style
Writing Feedbackgabbie - Oct 27, 2013 / gabbie - Nov 5, 2013
|GRE ISSUE ESSAY:Is power an empirical act or an immaterial ability?
2 - These are some things that caught my eye in your Introduction. Is power an empirical act or an...
Writing Feedbackjhb - Nov 3, 2013 / Layune - Nov 5, 2013
|Attending university is now mandatory for student to be accepted for better work
7 - thank you sir...
Writing Feedbackbatais - Oct 10, 2013 / batais - Nov 5, 2013
|IELTS; FOOD PREPARATION IS EASIER TODAY COMPARED TO PREVIOUS ERAS
Writing Feedbackbatais - Nov 3, 2013 / batais - Nov 5, 2013
|Advantages and disadvantages of being famous
3 - What is the prompt? Are you preparing for TOEFL or IELTS? It's good if you mentioned them because then...
Writing FeedbackSleepingBeauty - Nov 4, 2013 / Pahan - Nov 4, 2013
|[IETLS] TV advertising is bad - Agree or Disagree?
Writing Feedbackwoodfish - Nov 3, 2013 / JethroJosh - Nov 4, 2013
|[ielts] Should we only be concerned with our own communities and countries?
Writing Feedbackhongphuc - Nov 3, 2013 / JethroJosh - Nov 4, 2013
|Community service can give a sense of fullment to students
4 - By working in unpiad community services, students will be able to acknowledge the way in which people communicating...
Writing Feedbacklynn731 - Oct 25, 2013 / hongphuc - Nov 3, 2013
|Me and Myself; Need help with Grammar!
Writing Feedbackfarhanwsd - Oct 25, 2013 / hongphuc - Nov 3, 2013
|IMPORTANCE OF MUSIC - important factor in the life of human being
2 - Hence = so, therefore, hence, consequently, thence, accordingly try to use various words. Hope it can help...
Writing Feedbacknileshv1 - Nov 3, 2013 / something - Nov 3, 2013
|Over the past few decades, society has been technologized; political duality of technology
Writing Feedbackvaulting - Nov 1, 2013 / vaulting - Nov 3, 2013
|should the government spend money on saving nearly extincted language ?
2 - I am preparing IELTS exams as well. I am not fully capable to correct your grammars and the way...
Writing Feedbackhongphuc - Nov 3, 2013 / woodfish - Nov 3, 2013
|IELTS: Which should be the ones to teach children into good citizens? Parents or Schools?
Writing Feedbackstream_xu - Oct 28, 2013 / stream_xu - Nov 3, 2013
|The best teacher is one who is very knowledgeable about the subject matter
4 - it should be Knowledgable you have met the problem of repeating words "knowledgeable teachers" and "can't...
Writing Feedbacksofianc - Oct 23, 2013 / Shinigami97 - Nov 3, 2013
|The past 20 years have seen a considerable increase of international tourism.
Writing Feedbackvietcuong89ks - Nov 1, 2013 / Shinigami97 - Nov 3, 2013
|Education plays fundamental role in the growth of a country
7 - thanks a lot for your support. I've got some problems with brainstorming and expressing ideas. I wonder if we...
Writing FeedbackShinigami97 - Oct 31, 2013 / Shinigami97 - Nov 2, 2013
|TOEFL: Which would you change to improve your health? EXERCISE
3 - Also,take some sports that could equip us with better body shape and help us to (need a space...
Writing Feedbackrolin - Nov 1, 2013 / Pahan - Nov 2, 2013
|She walked along the beach on a warm summer night
Writing Feedbackdewalea - Nov 2, 2013 / Pahan - Nov 2, 2013
|IELTS: Foreign languages should be instructed in kindergarten
6 - Well... I can see you have excellent writing skills . However, it is better to pay more attention to...
Writing Feedbackvmtct - Nov 1, 2013 / dumi - Nov 2, 2013
|'Children tend to imitate parents behavior'; Children - good members of society
Writing Feedbackbehrooz_00133 - Oct 29, 2013 / dumi - Nov 2, 2013
|IELTS: Are our zoos cruel to wild animals?
4 - Your IELTS Score depends on how accurately you used grammar and vocabulary. Though you need a variety of sentence...
Writing Feedbacklonghoho - Oct 28, 2013 / JethroJosh - Nov 2, 2013
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2:boarding schools are getting popular,positive or negative ?
3 - In the boarding life, students are required to become more independent because they live away from their families....
Writing FeedbackAgenderine - Oct 31, 2013 / Pahan - Nov 1, 2013
|IELTS 1; DIAGRAMS; Island before and after construction
Writing FeedbackShpr - Nov 1, 2013 / Pahan - Nov 1, 2013
|PRIVATE SCHOOL SHOULD BE BANNED! Ielts task 2
5 - Interactive learning, rich media and well prepared lectures let students find the subjects interesting, regardless of boredom textbook...
Writing FeedbackShinigami97 - Oct 31, 2013 / phuoc - Nov 1, 2013
|It's better to live in a small town than a big city
2 - .... Don't use numbers in essay writing unless it is something to do with time or dates. Also,...
Writing FeedbackDoanhty - Nov 1, 2013 / dumi - Nov 1, 2013
|Task 2 IELTS, AIMS OF UNIVERSITY ARE FOR GETTING JOB OR BENEFITING INDIVIDUAL AND SOCIETY
4 - Maybe your fundamental problem here is over-complicated sentence structure that leads to grammatical mistakes or confusing in meaning. Hopefully...
Writing FeedbackShinigami97 - Oct 31, 2013 / vmtct - Nov 1, 2013
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