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|Wrtiting Task 1 IELTS The title of population in developed countries and developing countries
8 - Hai Dayat! You have already written about 155 words on your writing but the content of your essay...
Writing FeedbackDayat - Dec 30, 2016 / ainunazwaria - Feb 5, 2017
|Teaching foreign languages at primary school should be optional rather than compulsory. Ielts task 2
Writing Feedbackadamrahimov - Feb 5, 2017 / adamrahimov - Feb 5, 2017
|Investing more on railways means investing in a safer future for us and our children
Writing Feedbackmariana13 - Feb 2, 2017 / mariana13 - Feb 3, 2017
|The Line graphs of how much people in UK and US to spend on Petrol
8 - Diaz, good work on presenting more than the minimum number of words in your essay. That said, you should...
Writing FeedbackDiazalichsan - Jan 5, 2017 / Holt - Feb 3, 2017
|Parents often wonder whether they ought to let their children spend time on TV, video and PC games
9 - If you notice the question. Discuss both view and give your own opinion You should provide your own...
Writing Feedbackmaitouyen1 - Feb 2, 2017 / bagusetyawan - Feb 2, 2017
|Percentage of different types of energy used and their greenhouse emission in Australian household
2 - Janice, the information that you present is relevant to the pie chart presented. The weakness of your comparison statements...
Writing FeedbackJanicelo - Feb 2, 2017 / Holt - Feb 2, 2017
|Given pie charts compare the number of inhabitants in Yemen and Italy in 2000
5 - Ayu, why are you indicating the information in the essay based upon thousands of percent when he chart is...
Writing Feedbackayuriska - Jan 13, 2017 / Holt - Feb 2, 2017
|[IELTS task 2] Lack of Learning languages and children development in the modern society
5 - The main problem with your essay Ken, is that you did not really understand the prompt. If you can,...
Writing Feedbackkenthai - Feb 1, 2017 / Holt - Feb 2, 2017
|task 2 ielts - celebrity's privacy; should every rumour of the famous be published by media?
5 - To, try to not type the prompt into the box. That is usually how these mistakes occur. Whenever possible,...
Writing Feedbackmaitouyen1 - Feb 1, 2017 / Holt - Feb 1, 2017
|Essay Writing. Methods to integrate modern ways of transportation.
2 - Ayman, I am assuming that you posted the wrong prompt instructions to go with the essay that you developed....
Writing Feedbackabohashim2003 - Feb 1, 2017 / Holt - Feb 1, 2017
|Some people think that reducing air travel is the best way to protect environment
5 - Chathuri, in an opinion essay that asks you to either agree or disagree to a particular degree, you must...
Writing Feedbackchathuri1982 - Jan 24, 2017 / Holt - Jan 31, 2017
|Minimum age limit for driving - Discussion
6 - very good, everyone has his own point of view and understanding of a topic, you shown yours, I may...
Writing Feedbackahamad17 - Jan 26, 2017 / mariana13 - Jan 31, 2017
|Family, television and friends are important factors in child's development. Task 2 ielts
Writing Feedbackmaitouyen1 - Jan 31, 2017 / Holt - Jan 31, 2017
|Around the world people are working more than ever. Is spending more time at work beneficial?
3 - Luong, you have written an extremely well researched essay. Normally, I would congratulate you on such a well written...
Writing Feedbackduongbaluong - Jan 31, 2017 / Holt - Jan 31, 2017
|Researching the Internet - I practice for my TOEFL writing
5 - @Holt Thanks so much. I really appreciate your professional advice and I will try the best to improving...
Writing Feedbackthuy_nguyet - Jan 30, 2017 / thuy_nguyet - Jan 31, 2017
|Task 2 ielts - sports and exercise classes and academic subjects
4 - To, the essay needs to have a better presentation on your part. You have 2 possible topics for discussion...
Writing Feedbackmaitouyen1 - Jan 30, 2017 / Holt - Jan 30, 2017
|There are three reasons which support my opinion that parents aren't the best teachers
Writing FeedbackOchir - Jan 18, 2017 / SYDA - Jan 27, 2017
|Internet make our communication easier, helps with getting information, business, and transaction
Writing Feedbackmaitouyen1 - Jan 27, 2017 / SYDA - Jan 27, 2017
|What would I do if I were a billionaire?
5 - Dears Your essay has some gramarical problems . For examle, let's find out what would I do and where...
Writing FeedbackVarlamow - Jan 8, 2017 / maitouyen1 - Jan 27, 2017
|The Earth needs both governments and individuals to cooperate for a positive change
2 - Hi Mai, thanks for posting the complete prompt and revised essay on your part. Having reviewed your work in...
Writing Feedbackmaitouyen123 - Jan 26, 2017 / Holt - Jan 26, 2017
|Scientists and the news media are presenting ever more evidence of climate change
Writing Feedbackmaitouyen - Jan 26, 2017 / Holt - Jan 26, 2017
|IELTS TASK 2 - the reason why do fewer and fewer people appreciate art and how to solve it
2 - Ayu, I believe that your essay can garner an overall score of 5. That means that is the highest...
Writing Feedbackayuriska - Jan 25, 2017 / Holt - Jan 25, 2017
|IELTS1 - the number of diarrhea cases in Mashhad over ten years, some time ago
Writing Feedbackayuriska - Jan 25, 2017 / Holt - Jan 25, 2017
|University should not specifically accept more girls or boys for whatever purpose
3 - Ho, you approached this essay from the wrong perspective. In fact, you seem to have decided to answer a...
Writing FeedbackMH_tw - Jan 25, 2017 / Holt - Jan 25, 2017
|Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth than for their achievements
4 - I agree with Holt. You seem to be missing the main issue here. If you agree that contemporary celebrities...
Writing Feedbackmaitouyen - Jan 24, 2017 / Rashan - Jan 25, 2017
|IELTS Task 1: How Do U.S. Expenditures Compare With Those Of Other Countries?
4 - Hi @ellisana, in the second point, you should explain bit more about clothing percentage. In other hand, BritonJapan spend...
Writing Feedbackellisana - Jan 21, 2017 / ayuriska - Jan 25, 2017
|Writing an Essay on Personal Growth based on an activity
2 - Nina, it would be best if you just mention that your hobby is photography but your personal growth comes...
Writing Feedbackngutzeit3 - Jan 25, 2017 / Holt - Jan 25, 2017
|IELTS: REASONS AND EFFECTS OF OBESITY AMONG HUMANS
3 - hi @SuXrOb, I hope that you are not giving up to practice writing, the first problem that you should...
Writing FeedbackSuXrOb - Jan 24, 2017 / liv_ryu - Jan 24, 2017
|Free education - reasoning and consequences of implementing the policy
6 - On the contrary, your score will be better in the GRE depending upon how well you debate the issue...
Writing Feedbackpayal1982 - Jan 23, 2017 / Holt - Jan 24, 2017
|Flying all over the world. IELTS Task 2: Should air travel be restricted or NOT.
Writing Feedbacksumanmahajan - Jan 22, 2017 / sumanmahajan - Jan 23, 2017
|GRE Issue Task: The idea to tell students which subject their should study
5 - just remember you need to fully understand the complexities of the issue and show, in you writing, that you...
Writing Feedbackshiv_riky - Jan 21, 2017 / Rashan - Jan 22, 2017
|'Our personality is the average of the five people with whom we spend most of our time'; GRE Task
4 - @Holt @notmargaux Thank you, for the advice. I understand I was not able to convey my message from...
Writing Feedbackshiv_riky - Jan 18, 2017 / shiv_riky - Jan 21, 2017
|Many different views about the leading role of university education
2 - Jessica, I wonder if you know that your essay is 5 words short of the 250 word minimum requirement...
Writing FeedbackJessica Huang - Jan 21, 2017 / Holt - Jan 21, 2017
|Writing 2: people think instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it
Writing FeedbackArlen - Jan 13, 2017 / skazo - Jan 21, 2017
|Is fashion detrimental to society? People look into exterior beauty without notice of inner beauty
2 - Maritsa, I strongly suggest that you post the original prompt discussion that you are responding to along with your...
Writing Feedbackmaritsa - Jan 20, 2017 / Holt - Jan 20, 2017
|GRE Argument task for a hobby shop at Grilldon
Writing Feedbackpayal1982 - Jan 18, 2017 / payal1982 - Jan 19, 2017
|Is our government should provide a high level of health care for all its citizens?
2 - Kalmia kindly provide us with the complete IELTS prompt that you are required to respond to. I would like...
Writing Feedbacklittle kitten - Jan 19, 2017 / Holt - Jan 19, 2017
|Death Penalty should be given or not? The use of capital punishment
5 - Janaki, when the topic asks you to discuss both views and then give your own opinion, you should strive...
Writing Feedbackdrjanck_82 - Jan 18, 2017 / Holt - Jan 19, 2017
|IELTS TASK 2: A free university education should be applied in Vietnam. What is your opinion?
Writing Feedbacktabiris - Jan 19, 2017 / Holt - Jan 19, 2017
|Several changes of silkworm in its life cycle and method to produce silk cloth
Writing Feedbackayuriska - Jan 18, 2017 / Holt - Jan 19, 2017
|The graph presents information about comparison of spending on petrol between people in the UK & USA
4 - Grienda, for starters, always remember to include a copy of illustration that your report is based on when you...
Writing Feedbackgribigribi - Jan 5, 2017 / Holt - Jan 19, 2017
|The proportion of telephone calls in the UK
4 - Ayu, there are instances when you should use a comma and when you should a period in your sentence...
Writing Feedbackayuriska - Jan 13, 2017 / Holt - Jan 19, 2017
|IELTS - Writing t2 - Mobile telephones have brought many benefits but they have also had negatives
3 - Phuong, do you see the reason that you gave in the conclusion of your essay? You should not have...
Writing Feedbackphuong1312 - Jan 18, 2017 / Holt - Jan 18, 2017
|Corporation has a responsibility towards society and environment apart from maximizing profits.
5 - Thanks for the information Payal. I hope you won't mind that I will be giving your work a score...
Writing Feedbackpayal1982 - Jan 16, 2017 / Holt - Jan 17, 2017
|The number of times that youngsters ate 3 kinds of junk food namely pizza, hamburgers, fish & chips
4 - @bellajane pizzas and burgers were the lowest consumption this sentence does not make good sense it should have...
Writing Feedbackbellajane - Jan 17, 2017 / drjanck - Jan 17, 2017
|[IELTS task2] Architects shouldn't worry about producing building as a work of art. Agree or not?
Writing Feedbackseaflower412 - Jan 16, 2017 / drjanck - Jan 17, 2017
|Here's a little part of a story I made up myself. Not sure about it..
2 - Dvergence, you have to give me something to work with here. Did you write this for creative writing class?...
Writing Feedbackdivergence0 - Jan 16, 2017 / Holt - Jan 17, 2017
|Response to an article on why liberal arts are important
Writing FeedbackNoBeesHere - Jan 16, 2017 / Holt - Jan 17, 2017
|IELTS - several sources as energy consumption in US in 1980 and its forecasting in 2050
2 - Ayu, for this sort of predictive report essay, you must learn how to format your sentences in the future...
Writing Feedbackayuriska - Jan 16, 2017 / Holt - Jan 17, 2017
|IELTS TASK 1 - MAP (comparison the development of some tourist facilities)
6 - Ayu, the tense to use in all of these report essays will be the past tense because the information...
Writing Feedbackayuriska - Jan 13, 2017 / Holt - Jan 17, 2017
|Consumer societies' where money and possessions are given too much importance.
6 - Hi @drjanck , overall your essay is good, but perhaps you can use complex sentence for some statements. then,...
Writing Feedbackdrjanck - Jan 14, 2017 / ayuriska - Jan 16, 2017
|Some people think that wild animals should not be kept in zoos.
5 - Janaki, the essay is asking you to do a number of things before you present your opinion. That is,...
Writing Feedbackdrjanck - Jan 15, 2017 / Holt - Jan 16, 2017
|Compare the data on a global scale - report
3 - Well done! Here are some suggestions to improve: At the endfinally , India and Africa ... shows the...
Writing FeedbackRin El_Faariha - Jan 15, 2017 / sweetsenior - Jan 15, 2017
|Looking for a way out - Alcohol Intervention
3 - Xinyi, if you are already a college student or a high school interested in writing, your school, college, or...
Writing Feedbackxinyi0913 - Jan 14, 2017 / Holt - Jan 14, 2017
|Too much of financial dissonance in this world
4 - Your structure is good. On the other hand, you have made many grammar mistakes and I think you should...
Writing Feedbackfidel123 - Jan 13, 2017 / krempetkov - Jan 14, 2017
|It is important to rest the mind during leisure time.
4 - Chau, while your essay speaks of valid reasons for resting the mind during leisure time, it fails to take...
Writing FeedbackChau Tran - Jan 12, 2017 / Holt - Jan 14, 2017
|To what extent you agree with the idea that some teenagers lead an unhealthy lifestyle?
2 - Hello Liu! Hopefully my feedback is helpful for you. I've considered your points and read your essay as...
Writing FeedbackCaliabi - Jan 13, 2017 / CDuke93 - Jan 13, 2017
|You have just spent a weekend at a friend's house and forgot your coat containing some belongings
2 - Jaya, if you are going to make up information about the value of the coat, saying you left your...
Writing Feedbackjaikrishna - Jan 13, 2017 / Holt - Jan 13, 2017
|Writing Task 2 opinion's people about internet using
Writing FeedbackFiza26 - Jan 5, 2017 / Arlen - Jan 13, 2017
|Besides the economy, there are many types of progress worth our attention as well.
4 - @ngokhoa99 Thanks for your correction and I have a question that whether to have an example in essay is...
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