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|IELTS TASK 2 WRITING: SHOULD THE GOVERNMENT PAY FOR THE CLEANING UP POLLUTION OF INDIVIDUALS?
4 - In your essay, you mentioned about corporations and companies but the requirement of the task just focuses on individuals,...
Writing FeedbackWanderer8 - Jun 21, 2020 / ththao_99 - Jun 23, 2020
|Should children not be allowed to watch TV?
2 - This is not a comparative discussion essay. You should familiarize yourself with the various discussion types for this test...
Writing Feedbacknaufal abiyyu - Jun 21, 2020 / Holt - Jun 22, 2020
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2: aim is mostly question of luck
3 - @Holt Thank you for your remarks. They are really helpful to me. However, I want to make it clear...
Writing Feedbacknguyenkisu - Jun 21, 2020 / nguyenkisu - Jun 22, 2020
|Producing fuel from corn - Writing task 1 - part 1 - flow chart
2 - You should have provided the image along with your short descriptive essay. I need the image to be able...
Writing FeedbackVan Anh Nguyen 7 - Jun 21, 2020 / Holt - Jun 22, 2020
|WORK FROM HOME OR GO TO THE OFFICE (?)
3 - Where is the dual point of view discussion? You failed to use the first, second, and third person pronouns...
Writing Feedbacknaufal abiyyu - Jun 21, 2020 / Holt - Jun 22, 2020
|Massive growth of international tourism directly affected to the wide knowledge of English language
4 - - I think you wrote the body paragraph 2 in irrelevance because you are actually discussing more other local...
Writing Feedbackfatika3007 - Jun 20, 2020 / naufal abiyyu - Jun 21, 2020
|Children learn to read words through only Online reading or printed materials? Essay Academic IELTS
Writing FeedbackFuddin Jamil - Jun 20, 2020 / Fuddin Jamil - Jun 22, 2020
|Chart A below shows the rate of oil consumption (in millions of barrels) in a small country
2 - There is a 3 sentence minimum requirement for the task 1 essay. You should be writing between 3-5 sentences...
Writing FeedbackPtp03 - Jun 20, 2020 / Holt - Jun 21, 2020
|Argumentative Essay - Is it fair to control time of teenagers using internet or playing games?
Writing Feedbackkellywee1234 - Jun 20, 2020 / Waterloop - Jun 25, 2020
|The charts below show the proportion of people's total spending in a particular European country
3 - I cannot review your work against the chart that you uploaded because the image you included for this report...
Writing Feedbackgiangianguyen67 - Jun 20, 2020 / Holt - Jun 20, 2020
|IELTS - Some people believe that all wild animals should be protected
3 - I would like to first start off by correcting your grammars & sentence structures. While some argues that ......
Writing Feedbackdaisynguyen197 - Jun 20, 2020 / kellywee1234 - Jun 20, 2020
|IELTS Book 8 Test 1 Task 2 -School is the place to teach children how to be good members of society?
Writing FeedbackWaterloop - Jun 20, 2020 / Waterloop - Jun 21, 2020
|IELTS Task 2 - Travelling to abroad, reasons and consequences
4 - @Holt @fatika3007 Sorry for my late response. I'm quite a busy little bee currently. Thank you very much...
Writing Feedbackthanhdvn - Jun 19, 2020 / thanhdvn - Jun 23, 2020
|IELTS - Essay about whether school should teach traditional subjects or practical knowledge.
2 - Please remember that this 40 minute task has to be edited and finalized in terms of content. Do not...
Writing Feedbackjuanna_13 - Jun 19, 2020 / Holt - Jun 20, 2020
|What are the advantages and disadvantages of going to the university? Discuss both views.
3 - @Holt Thank you so much for your feedback, I really appreciate it! I'll use it for future improvement....
Writing Feedbackxuanphuong - Jun 19, 2020 / xuanphuong - Jun 19, 2020
|Having an organized room will lead you to the success.
Writing FeedbackDona 78 - Jun 19, 2020 / naufal abiyyu - Jun 21, 2020
|Writing homework at university: The Food Culture Difference between Britain and Vietnam
2 - The instruction is for you to take one aspect of similarity between British and Vietnamese life, then compare the...
Writing FeedbackSiphu - Jun 18, 2020 / Holt - Jun 19, 2020
|The issue of the increasing crime rate has presented itself as a vital challenge in this day and age
2 - Your essay is not focused on a a discussion regarding the reasons why the crime rate is increasing and...
Writing FeedbackOsama0435 - Jun 18, 2020 / Holt - Jun 19, 2020
|Task 1 The graph gives information about changes in the birth and death rates in New Zealand
Writing FeedbackOsama0435 - Jun 18, 2020 / bangbangbt - Jun 26, 2020
|IELTS GT Writing task 2- How do you think children should spend their free time ?
5 - It is such a wonderful essay. However, there is some suggestion to improve your essay : 1. You have...
Writing FeedbackTuyenVo - Jun 18, 2020 / fatika3007 - Jun 21, 2020
|Scientific experiments and development may cause irreversible harms on human beings and the nature
3 - I think that instruction you mean is like the following- "Write a response in which you discuss the extent...
Writing FeedbackAndrewchen - Jun 17, 2020 / Andrewchen - Jun 18, 2020
|Composition of NCE Lesson 19 good deal of fortune
2 - Please remember to provide the writing instructions for your essay next time. It will be difficult for me to...
Writing FeedbackFlying Cat - Jun 17, 2020 / Holt - Jun 17, 2020
|IELTS task 2 - Should we punish our children?
4 - Hello @sonic8776 I'm also preparing my IELTS. As a English learner, I think it is a good essay....
Writing Feedbacksonic8776 - Jun 16, 2020 / Osama0435 - Jun 18, 2020
|Avertising helps us shop bettter
Writing Feedbackthaopham1705 - Jun 16, 2020 / thaopham1705 - Jun 16, 2020
|IELTS 1: the percentage breakdown in the spending patterns of Japanese and Malaysian families - 2010
2 - You did good work in presenting the information based on the pie charts. You were smart to keep it...
Writing FeedbackPtp03 - Jun 15, 2020 / Holt - Jun 16, 2020
|The news and information published by the media shape the public awareness in different ways
2 - Your prompt paraphrase is incomplete. As you can see, your presentation lacks the 3-5 sentence requirement for the paraphrase....
Writing FeedbackVENESSA - Jun 15, 2020 / Holt - Jun 16, 2020
|Positives and negatives of product globalization
2 - There are three main errors in your essay. The first, is in the paraphrase, you mistook the positive and...
Writing Feedbackonce0831 - Jun 15, 2020 / Holt - Jun 15, 2020
|Wanwan's diary: I & S hiking diary
3 - @Holt Thanks for your comment :) This is my first time writing here, ［Unfortunately, I am not allowed to...
Writing Feedbacksall530 - Jun 15, 2020 / sall530 - Jun 15, 2020
|Parents, Children, How to be good members of society, School
6 - Thank a lot @holt, @Thien (I mean " for first body paragraph is on the one hand) thanks. @Vanessa,...
Writing Feedbackernisernis88 - Jun 14, 2020 / ernisernis88 - Jun 15, 2020
|Task1_The Chart gives information about library borrowing in UK
4 - You should do a research on structure of task 1 to arrange your idea properly. Besides, there are mistakes,...
Writing FeedbackVENESSA - Jun 14, 2020 / bangbangbt - Jun 26, 2020
|The investigation for development in five organisations
2 - NOTE: Please be reminded that student scoring on any essay will result in your account suspension. Scoring of essays...
Writing FeedbackTQB - Jun 14, 2020 / Holt - Jun 14, 2020
|The pursuit for higher education of young people in four nations surveyed in three years
3 - @Holt Excellent comments. To my understanding, did your last comment suggest that I should include specific data to...
Writing FeedbackTQB - Jun 13, 2020 / TQB - Jun 14, 2020
|Should we support the consumption and production of GM food?
Writing Feedbackkellywee1234 - Jun 13, 2020 / djokernole - Jun 14, 2020
|IELTS TASK 2 - a huge number of young generation people in comparison to elderlies
4 - This being your first attempt at writing a task 2 essay, I can see the problems within your work....
Writing Feedbackthienthanh - Jun 13, 2020 / Holt - Jun 14, 2020
|Many items can be purchased on the Internet which is gradually becoming more popular than ever
Writing Feedbackloiquocbuu - Jun 13, 2020 / loiquocbuu - Jun 14, 2020
|Is buying new products a good thing? Why do people buy things do not really need?
Writing Feedbackchetanpl - Jun 13, 2020 / TQB - Jun 14, 2020
|(IELTS) Some educationalists think that international exchange visit will benefit teenagers
4 - @Holt Thank Mary for checking and showing me my mistakes in this essay. I will rewrite my essay to...
Writing FeedbackTinathanh - Jun 13, 2020 / Tinathanh - Jun 16, 2020
|Information on coffee production in Brazil, Colombia, Indonesia, and Vietnam commencing 1990 to 2000
3 - @Holt Hi Holt, These are extremely brilliant to me. I didn't even notice the in-depth meaning of those...
Writing FeedbackTQB - Jun 13, 2020 / TQB - Jun 13, 2020
|[IELTS]Some people think success is the best measure of intelligence
5 - I think you should use the words that you have understood them correctly so that you can prevent your...
Writing Feedbackdishusamba - Jun 12, 2020 / Sally 205 - Jun 15, 2020
|ielts task2 The animal species are becoming extinct due to human activities on land and in sea.
2 - Rather than using a numerical ordinal in your presentation, use a transition sentence, that connects the two reasons in...
Writing Feedbackmaxsingh - Jun 12, 2020 / Holt - Jun 12, 2020
|[IELTS] Every country has poor people and every country has different ways of dealing with the poor.
5 - @Holt Very well explained! and have noted the same. Thank you so much for enlightening me, this means a...
Writing Feedbackdsnider - Jun 11, 2020 / dsnider - Jun 12, 2020
|Youngsters' crime numbers have increased dramatically in many countries in the recent years. Why?
2 - Please make sure to study the different essay formats for the Task 2 test. There is only one instance...
Writing FeedbackLuna97 - Jun 11, 2020 / Holt - Jun 12, 2020
|Computers are becoming an essential parts of school lessons. Discuss the advantages and disadvantage
Writing Feedbackdo thu trang - Jun 11, 2020 / do thu trang - Jun 12, 2020
|[IELTS Writing] Increasing number of consumed sugar-based drinks? Why? What can be done to reduce?
Writing Feedbackthuhavu - Jun 11, 2020 / thuhavu - Jun 11, 2020
|Written examination is better that practical examination argued by some people
Writing Feedbackdolly24984 - Jun 11, 2020 / dolly24984 - Jun 12, 2020
|TOPIC: No matter how few possessions you own or how little money you have, loving wildlife and
4 - I do not know which examination you are preparing yourself for, but 493 words seem to long for an...
Writing Feedbackdjokernole - Jun 11, 2020 / Ptp03 - Jun 16, 2020
|Vegetarianism is better for everyone's health because there is no meat in such diet
5 - Hi, despite the fact that i am not a contributor, i would say that you might have to consider...
Writing Feedbackhuyhoang02 - Jun 11, 2020 / thienthanh - Jun 15, 2020
|Some people consider that several subjects like Maths and Philosophy should be optional for study
2 - This is not a comparative essay. This is a single opinion essay which you failed to respond to in...
Writing Feedbackanh tran - Jun 10, 2020 / Holt - Jun 11, 2020
|[IELTS] In many countries it is now illegal to smoke in public places. It is only fair that people..
Writing Feedbacklana9598 - Jun 10, 2020 / lana9598 - Jun 11, 2020
|Task1 The bar chart below gives information about the percentage of the population in urban areas
4 - Hi, I just want to give some more contribution for the overview only, aka. "Overall, all trends of...
Writing FeedbackOsama0435 - Jun 10, 2020 / TQB - Jun 14, 2020
|See 2 pictures about Colwic Arts Center between 2005 and today
3 - @Minhcho Hello I'm just a learner and I'm preparing my IELTS. I just discovered some mistakes in your...
Writing FeedbackMinhcho - Jun 10, 2020 / Osama0435 - Jun 10, 2020
|IELTS TASK 1 - The charts below show that what UK graduate and postgraduates students who did not go
Writing FeedbackLdh123456 - Jun 10, 2020 / Holt - Jun 10, 2020
|Task2: It is argued that because of globalisation we will lose our cultural identity
3 - There are a few mistakes in your essay : - Secondly, globalization not only allows people to immerse ......
Writing FeedbackOsama0435 - Jun 10, 2020 / VicAl25092020 - Jun 10, 2020
|Comparative between house and dormitory.
3 - @Kimdung Hello I'm preparing IELTS and I'm just a lerner. However I just found some mistakes in your...
Writing FeedbackKimdung - Jun 10, 2020 / Osama0435 - Jun 10, 2020
|Population of elderly people - IELTS WRITING TASK 1: LINE GRAPH
5 - The essay will receive a non-passing GRA score. The overall paragraph presentation is composed of run-on sentences which do...
Writing Feedbackmrfox9x - Jun 9, 2020 / Holt - Jun 10, 2020
|[IELTS]The typical teaching situation of a teacher and students in the class will not exist by 2050
3 - @Holt Thank you so much for detaled feedback. I believe, it is opinion with word extent, Cant I partially...
Writing Feedbackaline90909 - Jun 9, 2020 / aline90909 - Jun 9, 2020
|Whether university students should study whatever they like or not
3 - Some grammartical and spelling errors are as follows : - It should be "Whilst being able to choose subjects...
Writing Feedbackonce0831 - Jun 9, 2020 / VicAl25092020 - Jun 11, 2020
|IELTS 1 - The table compares the data in terms of forested land in different continents of the world
5 - @Holt Thank you Mr. Holt. I really appreciate that you let me understand what is my weakness in...
Writing FeedbackOsama0435 - Jun 9, 2020 / Osama0435 - Jun 10, 2020
|Tourism: International tourism is now more common than ever before. Is this a positive trend or not?
3 - @Gracie89 Hello Gracie I'm preparing my IELTS too. If you have time, please read some of my threads...
Writing FeedbackGracie89 - Jun 8, 2020 / Osama0435 - Jun 10, 2020
|Punishment is the only way to help children learn right and wrong. Agree or disagree?
3 - You need to upload the complete discussion prompt next time. I am unclear as to the whole discussion instruction...
Writing Feedbackratecsa - Jun 8, 2020 / Holt - Jun 9, 2020
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