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Commuting in Houston using various modes of transportation

NEW - The table shows essential information about commuting to office in Houston and measured by percent and the number of...

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Nowadays, as the world becomes more global, there is a new tendency to learn English

3 - Hi Dila, WELCOME to the Forum, I hope you find this website to be helpful and even more so...

Writing Feedbackdils - Nov 14, 2016 / justivy03 - Nov 14, 2016
Article Summary about Christine Corbett Moran

3 - Hello. I give you my correctio for your writing. ... Moran is a coder and a theoretical astrophysicist...

Writing FeedbackDioba - Nov 14, 2016 / alfinkurnia - Nov 14, 2016
The Relation of Kind of Vehicle and The CO2 Emission is Illustrated on The Given Data

2 - Hi Yurike, What kind of "table" that you are talking about here? I couldn't see them. Please pay...

Writing Feedbackyurikeyuri - Nov 14, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Nov 14, 2016
TED Summary : Making sense of a visible quantum object - Aaron O'connell

3 - Hai @nda18, I got some advice for your writing: 1. ... the naked eye can be (YOU SHOULD...

Writing Feedbacknda18 - Nov 13, 2016 / abangabul93 - Nov 14, 2016
Marcin Jakubowski Open-Source Blueprints for Civilization

5 - Hello Alfin, let me give you my correction He was graduated from ... there are many problemproblems...

Writing Feedbackalfinkurnia - Nov 11, 2016 / yurikeyuri - Nov 14, 2016
Summary TED - An engineer's vision for tinty forests, everywhere

3 - hi abraham lincoln i'd like to make some reviews here.. ... problem of the world, it(which) effects on...

Writing FeedbackAbrahamlincoln - Nov 14, 2016 / Kimichi89 - Nov 14, 2016
TED Summary Joshua Prager Wisdom from great writers on every year of life

3 - hello dioba, I give this correction for you Based on the armies of the night , a book...

Writing FeedbackDioba - Nov 14, 2016 / alfinkurnia - Nov 14, 2016
Should universities pay more to professors in order to improve the education quality, or not?

4 - @donge It is true that the phrase that you have mentioned convey the same meaning, but if you...

Writing Feedbackdonge - Nov 13, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Nov 14, 2016
Air transportation in today's world is popular not only for traveler but also for worker or student

2 - Dear lalu let me give you some inputs i think you have good enough skill to write in...

Writing Feedbackalfa7 - Oct 31, 2016 / Abrahamlincoln - Nov 14, 2016
To find work you love, don't follow your passion. TED 12 How could we choose a fulfilling career?

2 - Nurul, your essay offers incomplete information. You should have included a few sentences about the method of the study,...

Writing Feedbacknurul66 - Nov 14, 2016 / Holt - Nov 14, 2016
The debatable issue regarding to what is the primary function of post-secondary education

2 - Hi Amril, Here's my feedback based on IELTS band descriptors. Task Response: - The absence of examples...

Writing Feedbackamrillahmk - Nov 14, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Nov 14, 2016
The Human Speech Origin was Learned from Old Fish Sound

2 - Hello Yurike, guess me who ? wkkwkw Let me try to give you some corrections. 1) Past...

Writing Feedbackyurikeyuri - Nov 14, 2016 / faizunaa17 - Nov 14, 2016
The Developing on Human Genetic Research

2 - Hello I applied some corrections to your text so that it sounds better. They are as follows: ...

Writing Feedbackyurikeyuri - Nov 14, 2016 / Wolf Larsen - Nov 14, 2016
Study of Sociology Aspects of Art Theft

7 - Hi Ethan ! Thank you so much for the compliments. I am so happy that I was able to...

Writing FeedbackEthanchen1998 - Nov 10, 2016 / Holt - Nov 14, 2016
Summary Article - Trumps presidency could be good news for science

2 - Hi Lincoln, Here's my inputs and remarks towards your article summary. I hope you can follow through. -...

Writing FeedbackAbrahamlincoln - Nov 14, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Nov 14, 2016
High Education for Arabic Woman is Rare Phenomenon

6 - Hello urik, this is my correction for your writting. Education is an important aspects toward high ... ......

Writing Feedbackyurikeyuri - Nov 11, 2016 / alfinkurnia - Nov 14, 2016
Dark Chocolate Reaps Heart-Healthy Benefits

6 - hello, this is my correction for you. ... >> Most of people think that chocolate brings a lot...

Writing Feedbackmem77 - Nov 11, 2016 / alfinkurnia - Nov 14, 2016
Brad Pitt Cleared in Child Services Investigation

4 - ... there was crime WAS (PASSIVE VOICE S+BE+V3 ) acted by Brad Pitt ... ( CONFUSING SENTENCE AND...

Writing Feedbackfadhilmd25 - Nov 11, 2016 / Bams17 - Nov 14, 2016
Summary TED - How to grow fresh air - NASA's concept

3 - Hello, let me give you my correction, ... capacity decreased almost 70%, and"need the connector for to connect...

Writing FeedbackAbrahamlincoln - Nov 11, 2016 / yurikeyuri - Nov 14, 2016
Summarize article : Why Yellow Birds Mysteriously Turn Red

3 - Hello Andika, let me give you my correction for you ... bird's yellow feathers which have strangely turned...

Writing Feedbackandika08 - Nov 11, 2016 / yurikeyuri - Nov 14, 2016
Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has ..

2 - Hi Ivan.. These are my thoughts towards your essay. Please, you check them> The rising livels LEVELS(Be careful...

Writing FeedbackLola12 - Nov 13, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Nov 13, 2016
A great thing for all students to have the chance to study arts and music in secondary school

3 - @Holt I truly agree with what you mentioned and I apologize for the lack of clarification. To be honest...

Writing FeedbackBucky16 - Nov 11, 2016 / Bucky16 - Nov 13, 2016
Some interesting facts about a huge reservoir of water that was found inside the Volcano in Andes

2 - Andika, the essay seems to be better developed than your other attempt today. I wish that you had added...

Writing Feedbackandika08 - Nov 13, 2016 / Holt - Nov 13, 2016
TED Summary : We Train Soldiers for War. Let's Train Them to Come Home, too.

2 - Hi Edho, Here's my analysis towards your report summary of TED Talks. - In this TED video, the...

Writing Feedbackmem77 - Nov 13, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Nov 13, 2016
Article Summary : Remember to Take Time for Yourself

2 - hello edho it is a good summary I have a few suggestions for you hope it helps Nowadays,...

Writing Feedbackmem77 - Nov 13, 2016 / ryan31 - Nov 13, 2016
Should parents restrict children from tv

2 - @sinahector Hello Sinahector, regarding your writing, you are asked to discuss the content on television should be restricted from...

Writing Feedbacksinahector - Nov 13, 2016 / Ethanchen1998 - Nov 13, 2016
Article Summary : Food made from natural gas will soon feed farm animals - and us

2 - Hi The article from newscientist.com had revealed (discussed, explained that) was is made by plants as a result from...

Writing Feedbacknda18 - Nov 13, 2016 / sinahector - Nov 13, 2016
Disruptions to incumbent's campaign might be organized: Ahok team

2 - let me give several advice, perhaps useful for you. Just consider your flow writing in your essay. THEREBY,...

Writing Feedbackryan31 - Nov 13, 2016 / NinaJoesuf25 - Nov 13, 2016
Negative Impact of Plastic Pollution In the Sea World

3 - Hi Yurike, Here some advice for your writing You can use article "the" to something that we know...

Writing Feedbackyurikeyuri - Nov 11, 2016 / NinaJoesuf25 - Nov 13, 2016
TED Summary : Google's Driveless car - Sebastian Thurn

2 - Here some advice for your writing. As a person who loved car, Sebastian Thurn, the director ... ...

Writing Feedbacknda18 - Nov 13, 2016 / NinaJoesuf25 - Nov 13, 2016
TED Summary : How I fell in love with quasars, blazars and our incredible universe - Jedidah Isler

2 - Hi Nurul Your writing is great but there are some correction that I think will make it better. ...

Writing Feedbacknda18 - Nov 13, 2016 / NinaJoesuf25 - Nov 13, 2016
Various children issues - suggestion about conclusion of writing task 2

2 - Hi, these are my thought towards your conclusion To sum up, it is believed that bad habit of...

Writing FeedbackBeauty17 - Nov 11, 2016 / nda18 - Nov 13, 2016
Mentor or role model can change our life. TED 13: Why I Read A Book A Day?

5 - Hi meryani, these are my thought towards your summary the mentor or role model can ... Every...

Writing Feedbackmeryaniranggi - Nov 10, 2016 / nda18 - Nov 13, 2016
Easy DIY projects for kid engineers - summary ted

2 - hi ryan31, these are my thought towards your summary [it would be better if you write opening sentence]...

Writing Feedbackryan31 - Nov 13, 2016 / nda18 - Nov 13, 2016
Downloading copyrighted music and books from the internet - IELTS Writing Task2

5 - It is true that the internet has [...] consequences for both individuals and producers. Hi Mohammed, let me...

Writing Feedbackm7mdbsheer - Nov 12, 2016 / NinaJoesuf25 - Nov 13, 2016
The elderly in three different developed countries -IELTS TASK 1

3 - Hi ,what a good summary, let me give several advice, perhaps useful for you. 1. But , it then...

Writing FeedbackNinaJoesuf25 - Nov 12, 2016 / Dioba - Nov 13, 2016
Creative Approach to Teach Engineering for Everyone

3 - Hi, what a good summary, but let me give several comments, perhaps useful for you. 1. Miss spelling word...

Writing FeedbackHujjatul19 - Nov 11, 2016 / Dioba - Nov 13, 2016
IELTS task TED Summary Holly Morris, nuclear accident in Chernobyl

4 - Hi mr Dio, these are my thought towards your summary 1. it would be better if you...

Writing FeedbackDioba - Nov 11, 2016 / nda18 - Nov 13, 2016
Summary IELTS Task Beagle Mars probe probably didn't crash, new analysis shows

4 - Hi dio, these are my thought towards your summary 1. it would be better if you write an...

Writing FeedbackDioba - Nov 11, 2016 / nda18 - Nov 13, 2016
Declined trends about elephant's population number, between 1997 and 2004, in most Asian countries

3 - Hi,what a good summary, but let me give several advice, perhaps useful for you. 1. Good introduction, but you...

Writing Feedbackmem77 - Nov 11, 2016 / Dioba - Nov 13, 2016
The proportion of expenditures on five different needs in four developed countries in 2009

3 - Hello You have a good summary I have some corrections for you Firstly, pluskid was right. You can...

Writing Feedbackmem77 - Nov 11, 2016 / andika08 - Nov 13, 2016
The number of international scholars graduated from colleges in eight Canada provinces

3 - Hello You have a good summary I have some corrections for you ... New Brunswick province becomebecame the...

Writing Feedbackmem77 - Nov 11, 2016 / andika08 - Nov 13, 2016
The figure for imprisonment in five different developed countries in a fifty-year period, from 1930

2 - Hello You have a good summary I have some corrections for you ... five different developed countries inover/...

Writing Feedbacknda18 - Nov 12, 2016 / andika08 - Nov 13, 2016
Graphs provide information about the results of a survey on prefered culture and leisure activities

2 - Dear Lola Let me give you some inputs girl's prefered preferred culture and leisure activities. Even though, some...

Writing FeedbackLola12 - Nov 11, 2016 / Abrahamlincoln - Nov 13, 2016
Two different preferences of music site- TASK 1 IELTS

2 - What's (It is informal, use also, moreover, furthermore instead) more, the number (...) is the most dominant music...

Writing FeedbackNinaJoesuf25 - Nov 12, 2016 / Madina S - Nov 12, 2016
All regions in Canada had the highest percentage of international alumni in 2006, apart from Alberta

3 - Hi Ryan, Hope you are doing well Here is my contribution toward your essay. 1.First of all, I think...

Writing Feedbackryan31 - Nov 11, 2016 / Ashkan123 - Nov 12, 2016
Writing Task 1 : International student graduated In Canadian University

2 - Hi Nurul, Frankly, your writing is great but there are some correction that I think will make it better....

Writing Feedbacknda18 - Nov 12, 2016 / NinaJoesuf25 - Nov 12, 2016
The proportion of money spent on five different items in four developed countries in 2009

3 - Hi Ryan, I should argue that in overview IELTS task 1. it is better that you have two...

Writing Feedbackryan31 - Nov 11, 2016 / NinaJoesuf25 - Nov 12, 2016
The education you receive from your family is more important than the education you

3 - Danial, I would say that your task achievement score would be 4 in this instance. Mostly because you did...

Writing Feedbackpluskid - Nov 12, 2016 / Holt - Nov 12, 2016
Train soldiers for war. Let's train them to come home, too

2 - Riandi, your summary is quite short. It does not carry the complete information that the video and transcript offer....

Writing Feedbackryan31 - Nov 12, 2016 / Holt - Nov 12, 2016
Honeybees: Our Past, Present, and Future

2 - Shantel, I guess the question that I was left with when I read your introduction was, "Why did she...

Writing Feedbacksmarsmith12 - Nov 11, 2016 / Holt - Nov 12, 2016
The graph compares the estimated maximum population of elephants across a range of Asian countries

2 - Hello I have some corrections for you First of all, you have to attach the picture to help...

Writing Feedbackcjo4lin - Nov 12, 2016 / andika08 - Nov 12, 2016
The pie charts compares household expenses in 7 different categories in a 60-year period

6 - Dear Andika, here some advice for your writing and feel free to correct me too! In this case,...

Writing Feedbackandika08 - Oct 29, 2016 / mem77 - Nov 12, 2016
British people prefer hamburgers more than other fast food - research for 1970-1990

4 - Dear Andika, here some advice for your writing and feel free to correct me too! ... one for...

Writing Feedbackandika08 - Oct 29, 2016 / mem77 - Nov 12, 2016
Expenditures allocated for five predominant categories in four different developed countries

2 - hai nda here is my suggestions for you hope it helps ... developed countries in 2009 iswas illustrated...

Writing Feedbacknda18 - Nov 12, 2016 / ryan31 - Nov 12, 2016
WRITING TASK 1 : The Proportion of Elderly People Population in Three Countries

3 - Dear Andika, here some advice for your writing and feel free to correct me too! ..., the widened...

Writing Feedbackandika08 - Nov 10, 2016 / mem77 - Nov 12, 2016
The changes in maximum number of Asian elephants between 1994 and 2007

2 - hai ms eve I have few corrections for you Hope it helps ... information about the optimumestimated rate...

Writing Feedbackeve01 - Nov 11, 2016 / ryan31 - Nov 12, 2016
The optimum rate of elephants living in most Asian countries decreased between 1997 and 2004

2 - Dear Nurul, here some advice for your writing and feel free to correct me too! ... population which...

Writing Feedbacknda18 - Nov 12, 2016 / mem77 - Nov 12, 2016
Elephants Quantities over Eight-Year Period

3 - Hi Dida, these are my thought towards your essay 1. ...different countries during eight-year period started from 1997......

Writing FeedbackHujjatul19 - Nov 11, 2016 / nda18 - Nov 12, 2016

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