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|IELTS: Academic - Sales of two companies
9 - Hi Dumi Since the question says the sales and are for next year and the market share is projected...
Writing Feedbackcandy07 - May 25, 2014 / candy07 - May 28, 2014
|Story about why the dog 'Jaw' was sold by the owner
Writing Feedbackenglishlover - May 25, 2014 / dumi - May 28, 2014
|Governments should support public transport - important factor of social welfare
4 - Anyway, your essay looks pretty short :) .... Had your prompt asked whether you agree on that...
Writing Feedbackmaryailt - May 23, 2014 / dumi - May 28, 2014
|Freedom of speech is mother of democracy
Writing FeedbackPsardana - May 24, 2014 / dumi - May 28, 2014
|IELTS - Traditional skills and ways are always valuable and will last forever
4 - I like those arguements offered, but there are some grammar mistakes. i have got question, do we...
Writing Feedbacktiandteo - May 22, 2014 / yirunli - May 28, 2014
|Toefl Essay: House or a business. Which would you choose to buy?
4 - First, you need to present your essay in a more tidy manner. This is pretty difficult to read as...
Writing FeedbackSam123 - May 22, 2014 / dumi - May 28, 2014
|The use of electronic mail (e-mail) makes people become better writers.
Writing Feedbackodon - May 23, 2014 / dumi - May 28, 2014
|To be successful in studying, students should have a good method to learn effectively.
Writing Feedbackthanhmai - May 22, 2014 / dumi - May 28, 2014
|iBT Essay: Finance sports at universities?
Writing Feedbackesmayli - May 22, 2014 / dumi - May 28, 2014
|Youth Drug Abuse topic - Causes - effects and possible recommendations
Writing FeedbackHung Arsenal - May 26, 2014 / KMeghji - May 27, 2014
|ACADEMIC TASK 1- COMPARISON OF PIE CHARTS (leisure activities in U.S.A)
Writing Feedbackcandy07 - May 27, 2014 / candy07 - May 27, 2014
|IELTS - parents should teach children / or school is the place?
5 - It is good to conclude your intro with a statement expressing your view on the issue (although your...
Writing FeedbackRSD - May 23, 2014 / dumi - May 27, 2014
|IELTS TASK 2- MACHINES - POSITIVE OR NEGATIVE FOR HUMANS
Writing Feedbackcandy07 - May 22, 2014 / candy07 - May 27, 2014
|IELTS Writing Task 1 : Process (Tea Production)
7 - Well, I think you need to improve the approach you follow for this task. Here, it is important to...
Writing Feedbacknded - May 21, 2014 / dumi - May 27, 2014
|'Getting degree' - TOEFL: Reasons why people attend university
3 - is it an ielts essay?it is too short, lacking introduction,bodies and conclusion.however, i think your writing style is good....
Writing Feedbackjhundais - May 17, 2012 / ieltswriter - May 26, 2014
|IELTS - Mobile Phone and its benefits
4 - i think you should read some samples about different topics available on internet. after you get familiar with these...
Writing Feedbackzubiboy008 - Dec 18, 2012 / ieltswriter - May 26, 2014
|GRE Argument: "Palean baskets" archeologists discovery
Writing FeedbackKMeghji - May 21, 2014 / classified9988 - May 26, 2014
|Women should work (paragraph)
7 - Well, it is nicer if you could break down this writing into paragraphs. To compose the best paragraph is...
Writing Feedbackycup - May 22, 2014 / eddies - May 25, 2014
|IELTS Essay - The option to work or study from home is advantage or disadvantage
7 - Even your prompt is open for discussion, there is no harm you stating your own opinion in the...
Writing Feedbackmsarkar - May 18, 2014 / eddies - May 25, 2014
|Shopping is beyond buying goods. It is social interaction with other people.
4 - I know you write well. However, you'd better always try to include the prompt. To give relevant and...
Writing Feedbackieltswriter - May 24, 2014 / eddies - May 25, 2014
|GRE Argument: Easy Read Speed-Reading Course has greatly improved productivity
2 - The first question that arises is,"whetherWas the inclusion of the course was the only change made?" Also, it...
Writing FeedbackKMeghji - May 21, 2014 / niesaysi - May 25, 2014
|IELTS: WAY TO REDUCE THE AMOUNT OF TRAFFIC?
Writing FeedbackSalMon - May 22, 2014 / candy07 - May 25, 2014
|IELTS: only some of children's leisure activities should be educational
3 - Lemme give a try: Playing with friends brings great joy to children. For some people, they argue that children...
Writing Feedbackmohamedtheking - May 18, 2014 / eddies - May 24, 2014
|IELTS Task 1 : School expenditure in 3 particular year
3 - To here is not as a To-infinitive, but preposition. Omit 'reach'. From 28%... to 15% The number of...
Writing FeedbackSHanafi - May 21, 2014 / eddies - May 24, 2014
|IELTS TASK 1 : Process of making cement to produce a concrete brick
Writing FeedbackSHanafi - May 21, 2014 / eddies - May 24, 2014
|The table subordinate to Somecoutry's people
Writing FeedbackAmmapurnamasari - May 15, 2014 / Ammapurnamasari - May 24, 2014
|IELTS - EFFECT OF CELEBRITIES ON YOUTH
Writing Feedbackcandy07 - May 23, 2014 / bakhadeer - May 24, 2014
|Essay on OVERPOPULATION topic; 'starvation of millions'
NEW - Together with environmental related problems, population explosion has drawn a great attention of the public these days. It's believed...
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|"death is inevitable - everybody dies" - Soma Mine Disaster
Writing Feedbackbora99 - May 22, 2014 / bora99 - May 23, 2014
|[IELTS TASK 2] old and young workers
Writing FeedbackSalMon - May 22, 2014 / dumi - May 23, 2014
|TOEFL integrated task, altruism in humans and animals
3 - It is a well-written essay, I liked it :) Here are some comments: Your intro par clearly introduces the...
Writing FeedbackAngelaB - May 23, 2014 / esmayli - May 23, 2014
|Some people claim that technology advancement is a sign of human progress
4 - What is this all about? Is this the essay topic? For what purpose you are writing this essay?...
Writing FeedbackAbassdarsa - May 20, 2014 / dumi - May 23, 2014
|IELTS;Some celebrities misguide young people& some guide them in right direction
Writing Feedbackleoking - May 21, 2014 / leoking - May 23, 2014
|Funding public transport by government should be supported.
Writing Feedbackskyplex2014 - May 22, 2014 / SalMon - May 22, 2014
|IELTS - PRICE OF THE AIRPLANE TICKETS
Writing Feedbackyirunli - May 22, 2014 / yirunli - May 22, 2014
|IELTS -Levels of youth crime are increasing
5 - Hi Candy, I highly appreciate your writing skill. Just one suggestion, try to finish the essay within 300...
Writing Feedbackcandy07 - May 16, 2014 / msarkar - May 22, 2014
|IELTS: Children can effectively learn from watching television. Agree/Disagree?
Writing Feedbacksoham2508 - May 21, 2014 / candy07 - May 22, 2014
|IELTS Letter - Write a letter asking your friend to join you on a holiday
3 - was going...
Writing Feedbackmsarkar - May 21, 2014 / yirunli - May 22, 2014
|Introduction to Argumentative Essay on Homework
2 - I am an English teacher, and I bet homework IS important. It often happens that I explain a grammar...
Writing Feedbacktaymcg - May 22, 2014 / esmayli - May 22, 2014
|IELTS Task 1 - fast food graph and chart
Writing Feedbacksmeak - May 21, 2014 / MisterWandering - May 21, 2014
|IELTS: "Living a healthy lifestyle through eating"
Writing Feedbackbrianna - May 20, 2014 / brianna - May 21, 2014
|GRE Essay: Scandals are useful because they focus our attention
Writing FeedbackKMeghji - May 20, 2014 / KMeghji - May 21, 2014
|Should the government introduce some laws to control nutrition and food choices?
3 - It would be better if you mention the purpose of your writing. If it is for a particular test,...
Writing Feedbackquocdai - May 20, 2014 / KMeghji - May 21, 2014
|CBEST- argument(s) either for or against "Back to Basics."
Writing Feedbackokdeerpass - May 20, 2014 / KMeghji - May 21, 2014
|Television has comprehensive good effects on society.
4 - Firstly, the arrival.. seems better since advent is less representative of a technology. I am concerned...
Writing Feedbackodon - May 21, 2014 / KMeghji - May 21, 2014
|The convenience and security enjoy more by the people who live in apartments
Writing Feedbackdil77 - May 21, 2014 / odon - May 21, 2014
|IELTS Task1; percentage of total US population aged 65 and over between 1900 and 2000
3 - This adds no value. You'd better present this Writing task 1with more formal tone. Avoid personal opinions...
Writing Feedbackrushil1995 - May 19, 2013 / eddies - May 21, 2014
|IELTS Task 1 : Satisfactory level on fitness membership
2 - ... Your intro needs better clarity; The table givesprovides information about the number of satisfactory levels ofon...
Writing FeedbackSHanafi - May 21, 2014 / dumi - May 21, 2014
|IELTS: Intended instruction hours in public institution
3 - IELTS Task 1 : Intended instruction hours in public institution (re-write - ITALY) The chart compares the number...
Writing FeedbackSHanafi - Mar 19, 2014 / SHanafi - May 21, 2014
|IELTS TASK 1 : Factors influence job performance
5 - The bar chart compares the affecting factors on job performance in number of the 2 aged groups. Overall,...
Writing FeedbackSHanafi - Mar 15, 2014 / SHanafi - May 21, 2014
|IELTS Task 1 : Number of childeren ever born from mother aged 40-45
6 - The table shows the percentage of baby born from Mother aged 40-44 in Australia during particular periods from 1981...
Writing FeedbackSHanafi - Apr 25, 2014 / SHanafi - May 21, 2014
|Parents are the best teachers - they teach us at any time, with no any fee
2 - Firstly, one of the reasons parents are best teachers is because they are full time teachers... ....no...
Writing Feedbackxomarleal - May 20, 2014 / okdeerpass - May 20, 2014
|Have humans harmed the earth or Made it a better place?
2 - In this solar system earth is the only planet that supports life form. Earth is a 2.3 million...
Writing FeedbackDragon9090 - May 20, 2014 / xomarleal - May 20, 2014
|Toefl: 'helpful bursaries' - Teenagers have jobs while they are still students.
4 - Can you add more details or words to explain why students have to get highest grades for future...
Writing FeedbackAngelaB - May 19, 2014 / okdeerpass - May 20, 2014
|Judgement and verification. Understand concepts and ideas is MORE IMPORTANT than learning facts?
Writing FeedbackJangGemini - May 3, 2014 / okdeerpass - May 20, 2014
|IELTS TASK 2: factor of choosing a career.
9 - This sentence is pretty long. When you write longer sentences, the reader has to keep memorizing the details...
Writing FeedbackAbdurasul - May 12, 2014 / Pahan - May 20, 2014
|GRE: fields of study in which students are unlikely to succeed should be banned
5 - Based on this knowledge, they can better choose their field of education for themselves rather than an outsider choosing...
Writing FeedbackKMeghji - May 13, 2014 / Pahan - May 20, 2014
|GRE Essay: major cities study to learn characteristics of a society
5 - That is something I did not think about while writing the paragraph. I'll think of something else to include...
Writing FeedbackKMeghji - May 13, 2014 / KMeghji - May 20, 2014
|GRE Issue Essay: Kindly check the response and advice accordingly.
6 - Dumi and Pahan: Thank you for the appreciation and correctiions. Pahan, I will keep it in my mind....
Writing FeedbackKMeghji - May 6, 2014 / KMeghji - May 20, 2014
|TOEFL writing; I'm against providing more money to professors
5 - Besides, the ultimate purpose is to change, to motivate students to be better. To improve education, spending more moneyallocating...
Writing FeedbackTiffany Lin - May 18, 2014 / dumi - May 20, 2014
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