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|variety is the spice of life - making life worthwhile
4 - The topic is quite rich that's why, it needs more analyze.So I think you need to re-write your arguments...
Writing Feedbacksadia22 - Aug 20, 2014 / Anouar - Sep 8, 2014
|GRE It is hard task to find the best way of exploring and understanding characteristics of a society
4 - Thank you for your kind comments. As for your inquiry about the language you used in the essay, I...
Writing Feedbackxatutik - Sep 8, 2014 / vangiespen - Sep 8, 2014
|Ielts: gender equality - behavior of people become different from past to present
Writing Feedbackgela07 - Sep 8, 2014 / gela07 - Sep 8, 2014
|Experiences make people prepared for the future problems - valuable lessons
Writing Feedbackhamedmas - Sep 2, 2014 / gela07 - Sep 8, 2014
|Issue Essay Educational institutions have a responsibility to dissuade students from pursuing fields
Writing Feedbackxatutik - Sep 5, 2014 / gela07 - Sep 8, 2014
|Toefl: work for themselves vs work for employer
5 - A hundred people will have a hundred ways of answering any essay. Each of them believing that their...
Writing Feedbackhamedmas - Sep 8, 2014 / vangiespen - Sep 8, 2014
|Smokers jeopardize also the people nearby them - it's clear that banning of smoking will be prudence
5 - Thank you so much for sharing your opinions with me guys! I will try to rectify some flaws in...
Writing FeedbackJustinong - Sep 7, 2014 / Justinong - Sep 7, 2014
|Going to other countries to work or study is a optimistic indicator about globalization.
2 - I would like to suggest that you mention globalization at the start of the essay as one of the...
Writing Feedbackthuylinh08 - Sep 7, 2014 / vangiespen - Sep 7, 2014
|IELTS: Gender distribution of teachers in different educational institutions
6 - Please allow me to give a try for the introduction and overview: The bar chart illustrates the proportion...
Writing Feedbacktrantrunghieu - Aug 10, 2014 / eddies - Sep 7, 2014
|GRE Issue: Governments should focus to solve today problems rather future ones
5 - Obviously, human is still working to combat the increasingly forecast number of other lethal diseases like cancers. -...
Writing Feedbackdunguyen - Sep 6, 2014 / patriot1776 - Sep 6, 2014
|"My Father" - Teachers day
Writing Feedbackksingh - Sep 5, 2014 / vangiespen - Sep 6, 2014
|IELTS: "the best teacher in children's live is their parents"; how to be a good member of society
2 - ...school is best spot to learn everything either social life or other about life's fields. ..school only the place...
Writing Feedbackfadlanmuzakki - Sep 6, 2014 / Anouar - Sep 6, 2014
|[TOEFL] Children are rather free from most of regulations and obligations in this society
5 - Thanks guys. Btw can someone change my title of post? I never wrote 'Children are rather free from...
Writing Feedbackchilly1363 - Sep 5, 2014 / chilly1363 - Sep 5, 2014
|[IELTS Task 2] Pollution and damage of environment are resulted from a country developing.
6 - People's activities change the atmosphere and environmental condition. Many people (1) regard that in a non-globalized country, (2) a...
Writing FeedbacktiaDS - Sep 4, 2014 / eddies - Sep 5, 2014
|Which is a more powerful force of social change: Power of patience?
3 - Hi, well that's just it. Religion is a very explosive thing to discuss as every religion has a specific...
Writing FeedbackAnouar - Sep 5, 2014 / vangiespen - Sep 5, 2014
|Liberty or Rules- Which is better?
3 - @BachChaconne2 Yes u were quite helpful.. This is the first discussive essay i have written so i was already...
Writing FeedbackAva_21 - Sep 4, 2014 / Ava_21 - Sep 5, 2014
|Ielts - Colleges are definitely the doors opening to new areas of knowledge
NEW - Please give me your feedbacks. Thanks so much! Topic: People attend college or university for many different reasons. Why...
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|[IELTS Task 1] The line chart shows popularity of fast food among Australian young people
2 - The line chart below illustrates the kinds of fast food that Australian teenagers consume every year. ...
Writing FeedbacktiaDS - Sep 4, 2014 / BachChaconne2 - Sep 4, 2014
|IELTS: Should we ban combat sports which depend on violence for their entertainment
4 - 322 words is too long. A shorter introduction would leave more time for the body. people have...
Writing Feedbacknguoi_co_doc - Sep 4, 2014 / phuoc - Sep 4, 2014
|All kinds of medical health expenditures should be borne by the government; do you agree or not .
Writing FeedbackAshikk - Sep 2, 2014 / Ashikk - Sep 4, 2014
|IELTS: Media coverage of celebrities is having a negative effect on children.
Writing Feedbacknguoi_co_doc - Sep 2, 2014 / Xiaokai Jin - Sep 4, 2014
|Retail cashier job - my very first job experience
3 - Yes, this is a very important thing.... you should tell us why and for what purpose you wrote...
Writing Feedbackmrszlexilandero - Aug 27, 2014 / dumi - Sep 4, 2014
|Writing Task 1 - Ticket buying Chart Comparison
4 - First, this task is aimed at assessing your report writing skills and therefore you should present details in...
Writing FeedbackRomeD - Sep 3, 2014 / dumi - Sep 3, 2014
|Ielts - Advertisements have become part of our life and it is impossible to ban them
Writing Feedbackswathi_12345 - Sep 3, 2014 / dumi - Sep 3, 2014
|Awareness among people about a healthier lifestyle leads to the need to look for a specific food
2 - I like that you use transitional words such as "in addition", "in conclusion" to emphasize the structure of your...
Writing Feedbackpriskeith - Sep 3, 2014 / MarianaS - Sep 3, 2014
|IELTS: What can be done to discourage people from using their cars?
3 - Essay is clear and coherent. There are few grammatical errors which you might need to work on. Some of...
Writing Feedbacknguoi_co_doc - Sep 3, 2014 / swathi_12345 - Sep 3, 2014
|Ielts - Museums and art galleries be free of charge for the general public
Writing Feedbackswathi_12345 - Aug 30, 2014 / swathi_12345 - Sep 3, 2014
|TOEFL: Type of temper and advantages of individual work as best arguments in favor of studying alone
8 - Agood TOEFL Writing essay need that you responded well to the task, relating the lecture to the reading including...
Writing FeedbackMarianaS - Sep 2, 2014 / Anouar - Sep 3, 2014
|"leader is like the captain in a boat"; what is the most important qualities of a person who guides?
Writing FeedbackAnouar - Sep 3, 2014 / vangiespen - Sep 3, 2014
|IELTS: 'various jobs can't be limited to a gender'; more women are taking over traditional male work
3 - To begin with, confronting with such severe job competition and economic stress in the society, women can no longer...
Writing Feedbackstephy7658 - Aug 27, 2014 / nguoi_co_doc - Sep 3, 2014
|ielts: private citizens, businesses and governments play equally roles in protecting the environment
2 - First and foremost, you must lengthen your introductory statement. It is too short and does not totally inform the...
Writing Feedbackfunny_sun89 - Sep 2, 2014 / vangiespen - Sep 3, 2014
|In undermentioned countries foot/drinks/tobacco has recorded the highest percentage of expenditures
Writing Feedbackandys77a - Aug 14, 2014 / SHanafi - Sep 2, 2014
|"One more stab to the heart, one more reason to hate, one less reason to live"|