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Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of online course as well as learning online

4 - The topic is really confusing. online course is almost the same as online course. Therefore, I can't check whether...

Writing Feedbacktrinhhuong08 - Mar 1, 2022 / CindyChang - Mar 9, 2022
IELTS WRITING TASK 1: HELP ME TO CHECK MY PREPARATION FOR MY UPCOMING EXAM - export values

3 - @Holt Thank you very much....

Writing Feedbackthanhyen2003 - Mar 8, 2022 / thanhyen2003 - Mar 9, 2022
*not a reference* Young leaders in the government. Discuss both views and give opinions

2 - I take it that the writer is reviewing for the IELTS test alone. Something that I surmised because, instead...

Writing Feedbackntbaotram138 - Mar 9, 2022 / Holt - Mar 9, 2022
WRITTING TASK 1: the percentage of Australian people who were born in different places in the world

2 - The summary overview the writer has presented is conflicting. There is a difference between the meaning of "the world"...

Writing Feedbackphu2626262 - Mar 8, 2022 / Holt - Mar 9, 2022
IELTS WRITING TASK 2: Watching live events is still more satisfying than watching it on TV

3 - @Holt Thank you for your feedback. I really appreciate your detailed comment on my two essays. I'm preparing for...

Writing Feedbackimduonggg - Mar 7, 2022 / imduonggg - Mar 9, 2022
IELTS WRITING TASK 2: Are governments responsible for environmental preservation?

2 - Why is the writer constantly changing the presentation slant of the original prompts? This is the second time that...

Writing Feedbackimduonggg - Mar 7, 2022 / Holt - Mar 8, 2022
IELTS WRITING TASK 2: Write about people's opinion about hosting an international sports event

3 - @Holt Honestly, I really appreciate your help with my writing. As a person who is learning IELTS on my...

Writing FeedbackImAnAmateur - Mar 5, 2022 / ImAnAmateur - Mar 8, 2022
IELTS Task2: To what extent do the advantages of memorization outweigh the disadvantages?

2 - Memorization is not the same as copying text. Memorization means"to commit to memory". It requires repeated reading. copying refers...

Writing FeedbackCindyChang - Mar 6, 2022 / Holt - Mar 6, 2022
IELTS: WRITING TASK 2: LANGUAGE DIED OUT

2 - The essay will get a failing TA score and because of that, an overall failing score even though the...

Writing Feedbackdumen88 - Mar 6, 2022 / Holt - Mar 6, 2022
IELTS WRITING TASK 1 - Bar chart - Divorces and marriages together with marital status

3 - @Holt Thanks so much for the feedback !!!...

Writing Feedbackwindieyaaa - Mar 5, 2022 / windieyaaa - Mar 6, 2022
Some people think climate change has a negative impact on business

2 - The writer will do best to remember that he has only 40 minutes to draft, review, edit, review, proofread,...

Writing FeedbackCh_ng - Mar 5, 2022 / Holt - Mar 6, 2022
In many countries, more and more people choose to buy imported food rather than local food

2 - The writer has shown a difficulty in the prompt restatement portion of this task. He has managed to string...

Writing FeedbackMarina Nguyen - Mar 5, 2022 / Holt - Mar 6, 2022
[IELTS Writing Task 2] Environmental degradation problems and solutions.

3 - @Holt Thank you for your assessment. I agree that my vocabulary needs working. I, however, don't suppose word...

Writing Feedbackcrazybee - Mar 5, 2022 / crazybee - Mar 5, 2022
IELTS 2 Some believe that nuclear weapons benefit the world at large. To what extent do you agree?

2 - Indicating several reasons is too wide a net to cast in a limited time essay. Aim for clarity and...

Writing Feedbacktptanuyen - Mar 5, 2022 / Holt - Mar 5, 2022
ARGUING ABOUT THE PURPOSES OF LEARNING A NEW LANGUAGE

2 - The prompt restatement is acceptable although the first sentence is a bit out of place as it does not...

Writing Feedbackkimquin - Mar 4, 2022 / Holt - Mar 5, 2022
Paragraph about saving a natural resource

3 - If there is no word limit in writing this essay, add some more reasons to support your topic like...

Writing FeedbackNoah Caron - Mar 4, 2022 / harshita - Mar 4, 2022
ITLTS TASK2 ABOUT INTERNATIONAL CONTRIBUTION FOR THOSE IN NEED

2 - When the original prompt refers to something that people think, it is not referring to an argument. The reference...

Writing Feedbackkeymi850723 - Mar 3, 2022 / Holt - Mar 4, 2022
Annual outlook of a bank.

3 - @Holt Thank you so much for your correction. The reason why I repeat the phrase "The Bank" is that...

Writing Feedbackcdkengkeng - Mar 3, 2022 / cdkengkeng - Mar 3, 2022
Ielts task1: children's sport participation - graphs reporting

3 - @Holt thank you very much!...

Writing FeedbackAngela Pham - Mar 3, 2022 / Angela Pham - Mar 3, 2022
Some people think that it would be better for large companies and industry to move to countrysides

2 - Kindly review the original prompt and compare it to the statement presented here. There are several points of difference...

Writing Feedbackphammai2309 - Mar 3, 2022 / Holt - Mar 3, 2022
Task 2: More and more vehicles get in use today - fuel price impact on traffic and pollution

2 - The writer has not relayed an accurate prompt restatement based on the original prompt. He has offered a statement...

Writing Feedbacknvdkhoa - Mar 3, 2022 / Holt - Mar 3, 2022
Task 2: the spirit of a small community (benefits and drawbacks)

2 - The minimum word requirement for the task 2 essay is 250 words. There are only 249 words provided in...

Writing Feedbackphuonganh123 - Mar 3, 2022 / Holt - Mar 3, 2022
The rate of students' satisfaction of some supported-studying services in a university

2 - Actually, the image reference used is not appropriate. There is no diagram presented. Rather, 4 pie charts have been...

Writing Feedbacknguyenvankiet300 - Mar 2, 2022 / Holt - Mar 3, 2022
The graph below shows information about the preferred activities in Australia and New Zeleand

4 - I think you may change the following activitives --> followed by, it makes your essay attractively...

Writing FeedbackNhatha1603 - Feb 28, 2022 / phammai2309 - Mar 3, 2022
[IELTS TASK 1] The diagram shows how a wave-energy machine is designed and where it can be located

5 - I think you should have at least two paragraph in body to elaborate your idea. Moreover, you should use...

Writing Feedbackthugianggg - Feb 21, 2022 / phammai2309 - Mar 3, 2022
Write a paragraph of about 180 words about the advantages of electronic devices in learning.

2 - When speaking of electronic devices in relation to learning, it will be best for the writer to specify what...

Writing FeedbackNrop123 - Mar 1, 2022 / Holt - Mar 2, 2022
IELTS writing task 2, printed books or newspaper will not be buy by online reading

2 - The question is "to what extent?" Therefore, the writer must provide 2 sets of information for his opinion response....

Writing Feedbacklolikvloli - Mar 1, 2022 / Holt - Mar 2, 2022
Essay about building a computer vs buying one

2 - Since the title of this paper focuses on building computers versus buying one, there is no need to confuse...

Writing Feedbacktyl2046526 - Mar 1, 2022 / Holt - Mar 1, 2022
IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ABOUT COMMUNITY WORK

2 - Adolescents are from the age of 10-12. Teenagers cover the ages of 13-19 years. Incorrect word choice and...

Writing Feedbackaanh1009 - Feb 28, 2022 / Holt - Feb 28, 2022
IELTS TASK1. The plans show the change of a small theater in 2010 and 2012.

3 - Cutting-edge is an adjective, so you cannot stop your sentence like that. Additionally, "cutting-edge" sounds belonging to a personal...

Writing FeedbackAlan24 - Feb 27, 2022 / aanh1009 - Feb 28, 2022
Cambridge 10 Writing Task 3. Practice for my IELTS Exam - Working British students

2 - The writer must reference that there are 2 images provided for the comparison. That is because the information...

Writing Feedbackluthfiyahs - Feb 28, 2022 / Holt - Feb 28, 2022
Private entities nowadays seem to play a more prominent role in scientific activities

3 - @Holt thank you so muchhhh for your helpful comments. I will try my best to improve my writing skills...

Writing Feedbacknmuht - Feb 26, 2022 / nmuht - Feb 28, 2022
People are surrounded by marketing and commercial activities. Different implications of advertising

2 - The problem with this response isthat it does notmeet the task accuracy scoring requirementas it applies to the...

Writing Feedbackledinhphong - Feb 27, 2022 / Holt - Feb 28, 2022
Writing task 1 (Chile's demographic from 1975 to 2035, categorized by age)

2 - An incorrect word equivalent usage is present for the word "between' from the original presentation. The alternate words...

Writing Feedbackanhlog - Feb 25, 2022 / Holt - Feb 25, 2022
Writing task 1 IELTS The charts below show the percentages of the water used in different sectors

2 - In terms of synonyms, the writer chose the wrong word equivalent for the chart. A chart is...

Writing FeedbackOscarl - Feb 25, 2022 / Holt - Feb 25, 2022
The monthly visitors of Tabard Tower Theme Park - Learning IETLS

2 - I cannot say that this is a reliable description of the provided image since the writer did not...

Writing FeedbackNissaaa - Feb 25, 2022 / Holt - Feb 25, 2022
WRITING TASK 2 : Shopping malls too much - Agree/Disagree

2 - Going shopping and spending their free time at the shopping mall are 2 different activities. The writer was...

Writing Feedbackpglphamgialinh - Feb 23, 2022 / Holt - Feb 23, 2022
About Thomas alve Edison life and about his work and how it became famous and about Jefferson

2 - Kindly review the statement for capitalization errors. The writer has not provided capitalized words as required when presenting nouns...

Writing Feedbacknguyenthisuong - Feb 23, 2022 / Holt - Feb 23, 2022
task 2 Ielts:In many countries around the world, life expectancy is increasing.

2 - The prompt restatement + personal opinion paragraph cannot receive a passing score. The examiner will be highly confused by...

Writing Feedbackziht - Feb 23, 2022 / Holt - Feb 23, 2022
IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - Discuss - Living in big cities

2 - While you can opt to repeat the writing instructions at the end of the paragraph, that will not...

Writing Feedbacknotaweirdo - Feb 22, 2022 / Holt - Feb 23, 2022
Council donations to book clubs, Number of book club members - Writing task1

4 - @nghiabui Thank for your comment, actually i just learned English writing so i am not very good at it...

Writing Feedbacknguyentin1763 - Feb 20, 2022 / nguyentin1763 - Feb 22, 2022
Article: Causes of teen depression

3 - Would also like to add something regarding a sentence in your essay which is, "Last year, researchers found that,...

Writing Feedbacktranghg - Feb 7, 2022 / felixtobi - Feb 21, 2022
Gender gap in the numerous occupations in today's society

2 - This is the writer's personal opinion regarding the given topic. A clear disagreement with the given points. This...

Writing Feedbackdinhdaiviet - Feb 21, 2022 / Holt - Feb 21, 2022
Essay about if information should be public freely or should remain confidential

2 - The instruction for this essay is "discuss both views and present your opinion". The writer is required to present...

Writing Feedbackmaximo79 - Feb 19, 2022 / Holt - Feb 19, 2022
Money spent on books - [WRITING TASK 1] LINE GRAPH REPORT

4 - Here is my introduction: The line graph illustrates data statistics of book consumption in 5 countries: Germany, France,...

Writing Feedbackwhung17 - Feb 14, 2022 / maximo79 - Feb 19, 2022
SOME COUTRIES ALLOW OLD PEOPLE TO WORK TO ANY AGE THAT THEY WANT (WRITING TASK 2)

2 - Scoring is provided as a part of our private review services. Contact us privately for details. Wrong...

Writing Feedbackcongthanh - Feb 19, 2022 / Holt - Feb 19, 2022
Work and study online - benefits and drawbacks

2 - The writer has not formatted his response properly. The topics cannot be discussed selectively as the 2 are...

Writing Feedbacklzlywyb - Feb 18, 2022 / Holt - Feb 19, 2022
Ielts task 2 Many people people find it hard to balance their work with other parts of their lives

2 - This creates a topic reference inaccuracy. Review the original topic reference point. It uses"people" while the writer refers...

Writing Feedbackthienanh - Feb 18, 2022 / Holt - Feb 19, 2022
The proportion between Australian males and females who did exercise regularly - IELTS 1 - Bar chart

3 - @ Holt Thanks for your comment...

Writing Feedbackmaximo79 - Feb 18, 2022 / maximo79 - Feb 18, 2022
Writing task 1 The bar charts illustrate the money spend on purchasing houses in England and London

4 - @thanhthanhghghgh I think it is acceptable as long as it supports to your idea....

Writing FeedbackHanahelen - Feb 11, 2022 / maximo79 - Feb 18, 2022
MIX CHART: The bar chart show the numbers of men and women attending various evening courses in 2009

2 - I can understand that the writer was aiming to create a complex sentence presentation by presenting 2 different...

Writing FeedbackBell Hoang - Feb 17, 2022 / Holt - Feb 17, 2022
Consumption of three spreads_Writing task 1_Line graph report

2 - This is literally cut and paste from the original image. The result? Score deductions in the summary overview....

Writing FeedbackLoren - Feb 15, 2022 / Holt - Feb 16, 2022
IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - Agree/Disagree - Cycling

2 - There are several problems with this prompt restatement + opinion presentation. The first, is that the original topic...

Writing Feedbackdinosaur_thn - Feb 15, 2022 / Holt - Feb 16, 2022
The comparison of the figure of four electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework

2 - This information is not specified in the images provided. The writer will lose points for not accurately restating...

Writing Feedbackthanhthanhghghgh - Feb 13, 2022 / Holt - Feb 14, 2022
[WT2] The technology today makes the travel to isolated regions, such as the South Pole, possible

2 - Good response for a comparative essay. Sadly, your response is incorrect as it does not apply to the...

Writing Feedbacklinhnguyen425 - Feb 12, 2022 / Holt - Feb 13, 2022
THE INFLUENCE OF PHONE CALLS

3 - Thank you, Holt! Your advice is as usual useful....

Writing Feedbackhuyjunnie - Feb 9, 2022 / huyjunnie - Feb 11, 2022
[IELTS WRITING T2] Some people think that everyone has the right to have access to university...

3 - @Holt Thank for your feedbacks, But my opinions for this topic are both agree and disagree. So my body...

Writing Feedbackmatkinhcanthi - Feb 10, 2022 / matkinhcanthi - Feb 10, 2022
More and more people are opening accounts for social media and online banking purposes

3 - Hi there! I hope my feedback will be useful in further developing your essay! First of all, to...

Writing Feedbackthuylinh15 - Feb 6, 2022 / alyssa2036 - Feb 9, 2022
Some universities offer online courses as an alternative to classes delivered on campus.

2 - Neither statements provide a direct and correct response to the question. The writer cannot use a response...

Writing Feedbackimintokookcoconu - Feb 9, 2022 / Holt - Feb 9, 2022
Topic: People struggle with new things in their life

2 - The exam taker shows a clear grammar range and accuracy problem in the first paragraph. He has almost no...

Writing FeedbackDongba2004 - Feb 8, 2022 / Holt - Feb 9, 2022

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