Unanswered [0]
  

Home / Writing Feedback [29606] - page 167 of 494

Writing Feedback

Research advice on TOEFL, SAT, IELTS, GRE and other academic essays (page 167)

Replies | Threads
Seven key takeaways from Donald Trump

5 - Hello, I will give you my correction. There are three main points that ... Secondly, Trump has the...

Writing Feedbackryan31 - Nov 15, 2016 / alfinkurnia - Nov 16, 2016
Knowing and learning other language, beside your mother language, brings several benefits for brain

2 - Hello Your text will sound much better if you reformulate some of the sentences as follows: Knowing...

Writing Feedbacknda18 - Nov 16, 2016 / Wolf Larsen - Nov 16, 2016
Summary TED - Mia Nacamulli; Learning more than one language

2 - Bung, the summary that you wrote is too rushed and does not inform the reader of the necessary parts...

Writing Feedbackibe13 - Nov 16, 2016 / Holt - Nov 16, 2016
Summary New Scientist - Electric fields can stimulate...

2 - Bung, when you write a summary essay like this, make sure to represent both sides of the discussion in...

Writing Feedbackibe13 - Nov 16, 2016 / Holt - Nov 16, 2016
The breakthrough platform from central bank of Indonesia

2 - Nina, you should have also mentioned that the Central Bank is involved in the planning and overseeing of the...

Writing FeedbackNinaJoesuf25 - Nov 16, 2016 / Holt - Nov 16, 2016
Article Summary : Ahok named suspect in blasphemy case

2 - Nda, this is not a bad summary of the original article. You have covered most of the important points...

Writing Feedbacknda18 - Nov 16, 2016 / Holt - Nov 16, 2016
Angela Lee Duckworth found a way to be a better person and shared her experience

3 - hai dika I think it is a good summary I have advice for you hope it works The...

Writing Feedbackandika08 - Nov 13, 2016 / ryan31 - Nov 16, 2016
What hasppened with the Beagle Mars - new revelations

2 - Aloha, here is my thought; (1) [...] any updated information, thereforeinformation; therefore, // information. Therefore,("therefore" is adverb, so...

Writing FeedbackAbrahamlincoln - Nov 16, 2016 / ibe13 - Nov 16, 2016
(Summary TED) Philip Zimbardo the demise of guys?

3 - Based on data, 30 percent of men higher than woman to drop out from school. For example: in Canada,...

Writing Feedbackalfinkurnia - Nov 16, 2016 / Abrahamlincoln - Nov 16, 2016
The Early Baby Dragons Comes From Incarceration That Related with Young Range

2 - Yurike, there are certain errors in your summary. For example, the pink aquatic salamanders do not live in contaminated...

Writing Feedbackyurikeyuri - Nov 16, 2016 / Holt - Nov 16, 2016
Summary TED - What can we learn from shortcuts?

3 - HI brother, let me give several advice, perhaps useful for you. 1. ... to reach our destination faster,[/s --->More...

Writing FeedbackAbrahamlincoln - Nov 15, 2016 / Dioba - Nov 16, 2016
Today's hot issue comes to policy-makers' consideration in punishing criminals

3 - Hello, let me give my correction for you the latter one sounds as reasonable as does the first...

Writing Feedbackibe13 - Nov 6, 2016 / yurikeyuri - Nov 16, 2016
How to deal with narcissist when taking holiday

4 - Hi, let me give several suggestions for you. Correct me if i wrong. 1. you summary too short and...

Writing FeedbackNinaJoesuf25 - Nov 15, 2016 / Dioba - Nov 16, 2016
Chinese children Learning English by screaming it.

3 - Hi, let me give several advice for you. Feel free to correct me. 1.Ted's video talking about mania especially...

Writing Feedbackryan31 - Nov 15, 2016 / Dioba - Nov 16, 2016
Summary Article - Speedy bat flies at 160km/h, smashing bird speed record

4 - Hello I will give my correction for you. Brazilian bat has became the fastest (...) of speed around...

Writing FeedbackAbrahamlincoln - Nov 15, 2016 / alfinkurnia - Nov 16, 2016
Mathematic and science as the main features in the industrial revolution era

3 - Hello, this is my correction for you. Mathematic and science are as main features in industrial revolution ......

Writing Feedbackyurikeyuri - Nov 15, 2016 / alfinkurnia - Nov 16, 2016
The Building of Recent English Words in Our Brain

4 - -The English language ENGLISH is AN international toolsof communication TOOL USED BY to another people in AROUND...

Writing Feedbackyurikeyuri - Nov 15, 2016 / RAY93 - Nov 16, 2016
People may become crazy over such things as sports, religion and learning English

3 - Hi Miss Mujadiddah. I have read you summary closely and found some which you should develop to show better...

Writing FeedbackHujjatul19 - Nov 15, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Nov 16, 2016
Summarize article : earthquake happen in New Zealand

4 - Hi Andika. These are my thoughts to fin alize your summary Note: You should reread your summary so...

Writing Feedbackandika08 - Nov 15, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Nov 16, 2016
The laws are needed to make people recycle more waste?

2 - Nurul, the prompt is asking you about laws regarding the implementation of recycling in communities. You are supposed to...

Writing FeedbackIlmi_03 - Nov 15, 2016 / Holt - Nov 15, 2016
These days, many people are trying to learn English, approximately 2 billions of students

3 - I WAS WODERING WHO IS THE SPEAKER ?? The is an interesting topic about mania. ( CONFUSING SENTENCE)...

Writing Feedbackandika08 - Nov 15, 2016 / Bams17 - Nov 15, 2016
Essay: DOGS ARE FRIENDS, NOT AN MEAT

2 - Hang, I am not sure about the format that you have written your essay in. I have not come...

Writing Feedbackhang moon - Nov 15, 2016 / Holt - Nov 15, 2016
Learning English has become a basic need for better life around the world.

3 - Hi Bung, I believe this is the first time that I will review your essay and with that I...

Writing Feedbackibe13 - Nov 15, 2016 / justivy03 - Nov 15, 2016
Getting better life with English mania

4 - Hi Nina, below are my thoughts on your essay. - Mania can be good,however, alarmingly, and unfortunately deadly....

Writing FeedbackNinaJoesuf25 - Nov 15, 2016 / justivy03 - Nov 15, 2016
Recently, the world has new kinds of mania, mania for learning new languages, especially English

2 - Hi Nda, Among thousands of TED Talks videos, why did most of the members here choose this video? Is...

Writing Feedbacknda18 - Nov 15, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Nov 15, 2016
Daylight Saving Time Bears A Unique Matter

3 - Mujaddidah, I am not really sure whether this is an acceptable a summary or not. It might quite...

Writing FeedbackHujjatul19 - Nov 15, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Nov 15, 2016
Summary New Scientist - Gender equality is boosted by better infection control

2 - Bung, you rushed through the process of summarizing your article. You did not read the essay in its totality....

Writing Feedbackibe13 - Nov 15, 2016 / Holt - Nov 15, 2016
Article Summary : Monday's bright supermoon will be closest to Earth in 68 years

2 - Nurul, you will have to be careful about plagiarizing content in you summary. I caught a few cut and...

Writing Feedbacknda18 - Nov 15, 2016 / Holt - Nov 15, 2016
IELTS summary task Papua New Guinea Hides Some of the Most Dangerous Volcanoes on Earth

4 - Hi Dioba, here is some suggestions for you ... in Papua New Guinea which producedproduces (since it is...

Writing FeedbackDioba - Nov 15, 2016 / Hujjatul19 - Nov 15, 2016
The electronic games are preferred by children for a number of factors and has bad effect on them

2 - hi these are my thought towards your essay ... or buy the games' CDs(CD games) which can be...

Writing Feedbackm7mdbsheer - Nov 15, 2016 / nda18 - Nov 15, 2016
Owner of Gudeg Yu Djum passes away

2 - Mohamed, let's get some of your error information clarified here. For starters, the body of Yu Djum was not...

Writing Feedbackmem77 - Nov 15, 2016 / Holt - Nov 15, 2016
TED Summary : The World's English Mania

3 - Your writing is great but there are some correction ... opened his speech withINTRODUCING REGARDING mania. ..., education,...

Writing Feedbackmem77 - Nov 15, 2016 / NinaJoesuf25 - Nov 15, 2016
Summary New Scientist - Food made from natural gas

3 - Hi Ibe, here are some suggestions as far as I can notice: - ... called Methylococcus C apsulatus....

Writing Feedbackibe13 - Nov 14, 2016 / m7mdbsheer - Nov 15, 2016
It is the teacher's responsibility to make a student learn the material.

5 - Kinnie, in order to make your argument even stronger in this essay, you should have taken the time to...

Writing Feedbackkinnie81 - Nov 15, 2016 / Holt - Nov 15, 2016
Anti-Trump protests continue across America

2 - here are some suggestions: They have scheduled(gathered, crowded ) to protest in the ... ...because many people...

Writing FeedbackBams17 - Nov 14, 2016 / m7mdbsheer - Nov 15, 2016
British societies facing more problems caused by globalisation. WHY BREXIT HAPPENED?

3 - Hi Bambang, I think that you forgot something that matters in a summary. You forgot to mention WHO...

Writing FeedbackBams17 - Nov 15, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Nov 15, 2016
IELTS summary TED Celeste Headlee 10 ways to have a better conversation

2 - Hi Dioba, ... develop an argument and trivialbig, burning, central, critical, crucial, important, key, main, major, vital |...

Writing FeedbackDioba - Nov 15, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Nov 15, 2016
Rogerian Essay on Social Networking - The pros and cons of being a part of it

2 - Kevin, I think that you should consider omitting the portion that discusses the health drawbacks of social media because...

Writing FeedbackFoxTrot05 - Nov 15, 2016 / Holt - Nov 15, 2016
IELTS Writing T2: Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and ...

3 - @ichanpants89 thanks for your help! I am struggling to learn new vocabularies and I hardly read books, but...

Writing Feedbacksiurae - Nov 14, 2016 / siurae - Nov 15, 2016
A place with Big Ideas to Get Rid of Fossil Fuels

2 - Hi Mujaddidah, - The most noticeable thingmatter/issue("thing" is quite informal) in Costa Rica is that they... - ......

Writing FeedbackHujjatul19 - Nov 14, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Nov 15, 2016
The Natural Exotic Flying Park on The City

4 - ... transportation which is used by may of people in the worldmany use with people in the world ....

Writing Feedbackyurikeyuri - Nov 11, 2016 / Abrahamlincoln - Nov 15, 2016
Keeping children for better education - TEDTALK

3 - Hello, let me give you my correction people who waswere unfortunate because the people is plural their...

Writing FeedbackNinaJoesuf25 - Nov 13, 2016 / yurikeyuri - Nov 15, 2016
A good environment with humble people only in a small village - english studio

6 - Dear Alfian i think you have good enough skill to write in English. However, there are several improvements...

Writing Feedbackalfinkurnia - Nov 14, 2016 / Abrahamlincoln - Nov 15, 2016
Antony Goldbloom, A machine can work like human, and substitute his work

5 - Dear Alan Those are my comments toward your writing 1. Please kindly attach the link of the article...

Writing Feedbackalfinkurnia - Nov 14, 2016 / Abrahamlincoln - Nov 15, 2016
Several benefits of practicing meditation

5 - Hello, let me give my correction for you, He told that practicing meditation iswas not about to make...

Writing FeedbackNinaJoesuf25 - Nov 13, 2016 / yurikeyuri - Nov 15, 2016
An Easy Brand New Approach for Gardeners

3 - Hello, I give you my correction. thanks ... farming field is appeared will be true, Aquaponics. It is...

Writing FeedbackHujjatul19 - Nov 14, 2016 / alfinkurnia - Nov 15, 2016
Animal experiments are ruthless but necessary. Should animals be used in research? IELTS Writing T2

2 - Hi Chen, I can see that you have gotten a comprehensive feedback from one of the members in EF....

Writing FeedbackRamen - Nov 15, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Nov 15, 2016
Am I Really A Visual Learner? - Alexandra Panzer

2 - Most of people consider that they are visual learners. change "that they are" to "themselves" However, others argue...

Writing Feedbackibe13 - Nov 14, 2016 / annikaacuna - Nov 15, 2016
TED Summary : The discovery that could rewrite physics - Allan Adams

2 - Hi Nurul. these are my thoughts to finalize your summary Allan Adams is a MIT'S associate professor who...

Writing Feedbacknda18 - Nov 14, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Nov 15, 2016
Bringing up successful kids without over parenting

2 - Hi Miss Imanina.. These are my thoughts towards your summary. IN VIDEO OF TED, Julio Lycott-Haims explains regarding...

Writing FeedbackNinaJoesuf25 - Nov 14, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Nov 14, 2016
A healthy life for children - giving juice is not quite good beverage for maintaining their health

2 - You have made a lot of gramatik mistakes. It's not a good idea to use a lot of words,...

Writing FeedbackNinaJoesuf25 - Nov 14, 2016 / Lola12 - Nov 14, 2016
The community can come from villages or cities. Merits and demerits of Living in a Small Community

3 - ... to help other people FOR solving many problems... Secondly, the other advantagebenefit is giving fast respon ... Different...

Writing Feedbackyurikeyuri - Nov 14, 2016 / NinaJoesuf25 - Nov 14, 2016
American, Swedes and Japanese in the age group of 65s and more

3 - Hi Ibe, Here is some suggestions for you ... (the USA, Sweden, and Japan) in the a(too much...

Writing Feedbackibe13 - Nov 11, 2016 / Hujjatul19 - Nov 14, 2016
Article Summary : First home brain implant lets 'locked-in' woman communicate

3 - Hi Nurul, below are my suggestions for your essay. - HB is an fifty-eight years old paralyzed ......

Writing Feedbacknda18 - Nov 14, 2016 / justivy03 - Nov 14, 2016
Art Theft in relation to Society's Influence

2 - Ethan, the reason that you have a difficult time developing your closing argument is because your earlier work lacks...

Writing FeedbackEthanchen1998 - Nov 14, 2016 / Holt - Nov 14, 2016
Mania can be good, warming, and deathly. Nowadays, a novel mania is arising...

3 - Hello Shisha! In addition to the above comments, below are my inputs toward your essay; hope you will gain...

Writing FeedbackWasishaSisha - Nov 14, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Nov 14, 2016
IELTS writing task II most inhabitants where everyone knew each stayed in suburban.

4 - hi dio, these are my thought towards your essay ...most inhabitants stayedstaying in suburban knew each other. ...

Writing FeedbackDioba - Nov 14, 2016 / nda18 - Nov 14, 2016
(Summary article) It Just Got Easier to Shop Directly on Instagram

3 - Hi Alfin, please find additional suggestions below; - Neverthe less, sinceas instagram appeared many years ago - a...

Writing Feedbackalfinkurnia - Nov 14, 2016 / justivy03 - Nov 14, 2016
English is used as a second language in some countries

3 - hi eiraj, these are my thought towards your summary Jay Walker, one of the TED-Talk speakers, Jay Walker,...

Writing FeedbackEiraj - Nov 14, 2016 / nda18 - Nov 14, 2016
Manias can be expressed by various ways. Have your ever heard about English mania?

4 - Hello, this is my correction for you. thanks Maniacs can be expressed ... ..., for example, shows their...

Writing Feedbackabangabul93 - Nov 14, 2016 / alfinkurnia - Nov 14, 2016

Home / Writing Feedback

ⓘ Need academic writing help? 100% custom and human!
✖
Fill out one of these forms for professional help:

Best Writing Service:
CustomPapers form ◳

Graduate Writing / Editing:
GraduateWriter form ◳

Excellence in Editing:
Rose Editing ◳

AI-Paper Rewriting:
Robot Rewrite ◳