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|Why the University of Sidney became my first choice? (AAS Suporting Statemnet)
4 - Kiki, you have to be more specific about the reasons you have chosen to pursue masters studies in TESOL...
ScholarshipKikyo_14 - Apr 18, 2018 / Holt - Apr 19, 2018
|Information about AAS from Australian university websites and from attending educational exhibitions
2 - @yeniuyun Do not term your introduction to the AAS as coming from a "talk show" on campus.; That implies...
Scholarshipyeniuyun - Apr 18, 2018 / Holt - Apr 19, 2018
|Scholarship application - Master of Social Work in Queensland University matches my passion
ScholarshipIvonsestia - Apr 9, 2018 / Ivonsestia - Apr 19, 2018
|My proposed study will help me to understand people better. Positive for my career and for Indonesia
4 - Thank you @abdo65619 and @holt. Your feedback gave me some insight and it means a lot.. and I have...
ScholarshipIvonsestia - Apr 10, 2018 / Ivonsestia - Apr 19, 2018
|The gained knowledge would sharpen my passion (Australia Award Scholarship)
2 - also designing digital marketing are animportant skill I do hope to gain Consider separating run on sentence: From...
Scholarshiptams27 - Apr 16, 2018 / jazzyjaz - Apr 19, 2018
|Hi I'm Queen. This scholarship is for help to drive proper interventions and policies in Nigeria.
4 - @Holt Good evening sir, trust this meet you well. Please kindly find my edited essay above for your attention....
Scholarshipquiqui - Apr 14, 2018 / quiqui - Apr 18, 2018
|Why I choose master course in Mining and Metallurgical Engineering at Curtin University
Scholarshipdigital256 - Apr 17, 2018 / digital256 - Apr 18, 2018
|Commonwealth scholarship short essay on objectives during award, and career plan after award.
2 - Alao, why are you presenting the responses as an itemized listing? This is normally presented as inter connected plans...
ScholarshipAlao0702 - Apr 16, 2018 / Holt - Apr 17, 2018
|What will you do after finishing school? Supporting Statement - Australia Awards Scholarship
2 - @Milkx_Tea your response is confusing. If you have already worked at XYZ company and you are planning to return...
ScholarshipMilkx_Tea - Apr 16, 2018 / Holt - Apr 17, 2018
|How undertaking this fellowship in the UK will benefit your career
3 - Hi thanks for your suggestions. As you suggested I rephrased my opening sentence of this essay and some...
Scholarshipmohit2k6123 - Feb 24, 2018 / mohit2k6123 - Apr 16, 2018
|My reasons for applying the master's program of General and Applied Linguistics
Scholarshiptm_aulia - Apr 4, 2018 / tm_aulia - Apr 16, 2018
|"A sound track of excellence and dedication"; Statement of purpose (max 500 words) - UK scholarship
Scholarshipsalmamza85 - Apr 14, 2018 / salmamza85 - Apr 15, 2018
|WHY TESOL in University of Canberra or Sydney? (AAS Hunter)
2 - Umniyyatul, try to create a more integrated presentation of your reason for choosing the course at this institution. As...
ScholarshipUmni - Apr 13, 2018 / Holt - Apr 14, 2018
|Describe the efforts you have undertaken so far to obtain information on your study options?
ScholarshiphunterSC - Apr 8, 2018 / hunterSC - Apr 14, 2018
|"I will benefit directly" - A short essay for OFID scholarship
3 - Fatemah, your essay focuses mostly on your previous academic experience, which is not part of the required information for...
ScholarshipFatemahEbrahimi - Apr 9, 2018 / Holt - Apr 13, 2018
|Engineering; why you chose your proposed host organisation - Scholarship Application master essay
ScholarshipChemicalAus - Apr 11, 2018 / ChemicalAus - Apr 11, 2018
|Scholarship essay about my educational goals, reasons for applying, and how I would help my country
Scholarshipabdo65619 - Apr 7, 2018 / abdo65619 - Apr 11, 2018
|Describe the problem/issue of society/business you want to solve in your community or organization
2 - Nnamso, the essay is not asking you to describe what skills you hope to develop and use in the...
ScholarshipEsunam - Apr 2, 2018 / Holt - Apr 5, 2018
|Scholarship Response about education barriers
4 - I agree with holt, I think your essay is too political. You should be careful to write a tendentious...
ScholarshipLourHarb - Mar 26, 2018 / gultom - Apr 5, 2018
|Summarize the ways in which you have engaged in voluntary activities
ScholarshipAdade - Mar 29, 2018 / Adade - Apr 3, 2018
|Personal statement Science and technology for development - COMMONWEALTH SHARED SCHOLARSHIP
ScholarshipSophiaN - Apr 1, 2018 / SophiaN - Apr 2, 2018
|UK' CSC AND NIGERIA - HOW YOUR STUDY RELATES TO DEVELOPMENT IN YOUR COUNTRY?
3 - Your first paragraph is out of place. Don't give the reviewer a historical lecture. He doesn't have the time...
ScholarshipGraham - Apr 1, 2018 / Holt - Apr 2, 2018
|Australia Awards 2018 Supporting Statement - proposed course and institution choice
2 - Laksmi, you have to write a totally new essay. In the new essay, just answer the question posed before...
Scholarshipprm57 - Apr 1, 2018 / Holt - Apr 2, 2018
|Human resource development needs organisation, choice of proposed course and institution
3 - Thx Holt.....
ScholarshipTMH - Mar 21, 2018 / TMH - Apr 2, 2018
|The Consistency of Change: QUESTBRIDGE BIOGRAPHICAL ESSAY
2 - Cole, this is a very well developed biographical essay. You have adequately represented the circumstances of your growth and...
Scholarshipcmakontrack - Mar 29, 2018 / Holt - Mar 31, 2018
|Workshop about creating lesson material through e-module application - solving a challenge essay
3 - Rini, there should not be any reference to "we" in this essay because the focal point of the discussion...
Scholarshipavatar22 - Mar 27, 2018 / Holt - Mar 31, 2018
|Personal Statement for Erasmus : Global Markets, Local Creativities Programme
Scholarshipssaadpasha - Jan 1, 2018 / ssaadpasha - Mar 30, 2018
|Common wealth Benefits to Uganda: for Msc Food Tech and Quality Assurance at Reading University
2 - Claire, try to be more precise about how your studies at this university tie in with the Commonwealth Benefits...
ScholarshipKreg - Mar 26, 2018 / Holt - Mar 29, 2018
|How your personal background has encouraged you to contribute to development in your country?
2 - Alao, you need to be less flowery with your presentation and more informational in content. You have to build...
ScholarshipAlao0702 - Mar 25, 2018 / Holt - Mar 26, 2018
|Explain how your proposed study relates to a development need in your sector and country
2 - Alao, paragraph 2 doesn't help to move the essay forward. It does not really say anything of value and...
ScholarshipAlao0702 - Mar 25, 2018 / Holt - Mar 26, 2018
|Problem with water resources in Nigeria. Home Country Benefit Commonwealth
3 - @Holt thank you very much for your contribution. I have noted the errors, I will do the corrections...
ScholarshipEmcee_huckz - Mar 22, 2018 / Emcee_huckz - Mar 26, 2018
|Expected skills and knowledge from proposed study (New Zealand Study)
2 - desmarnov , do not lump your skills and knowledge development for the two universities in one presentation. Since there...
Scholarshipadix - Mar 11, 2018 / Holt - Mar 20, 2018
|One theory that interests me is the theory of parallel universes. Questbridge Concept/Theory Essay
2 - Michelle, while the parallel universe theory is interesting to read about, you did not go beyond the "interest" part...
Scholarshiprunningflight - Mar 18, 2018 / Holt - Mar 20, 2018
|Essay for OFID scholarship. I've been admitted into the prestigious University of Chester in the UK
2 - Erick, this is a very creatively developed essay. You get points for that. However, you neglected to include the...
ScholarshipRunga - Mar 17, 2018 / Holt - Mar 20, 2018
|The proposed study will contribute to my next career, and my country overall
2 - Todo, you need to make the presentation more prompt responsive. Open the essay with a reference to your proposed...
Scholarshiptodo - Mar 16, 2018 / Holt - Mar 17, 2018
|Short essay on my current work: apply for a masters in art in international development and policy
NEW - experiences and challenges in uganda Improve the youth Uganda is a not-for-profit local community based organization whose objective...
Scholarshipjalutia30 - Mar 14, 2018 / — -
|Stuned Motivation Statement: Applied engineering research for resilient coastal community
4 - @Holt and @roxwolf95, Thank you for your comprehensive review and kind feedback. I realize the shortcoming on first half...
Scholarshiprum7 - Mar 10, 2018 / rum7 - Mar 14, 2018
|Knowledge and Skills I hope to gain from my proposed study (Development Studies)
2 - Khusnul, your response is so indirect that it failed to respond to the prompt. When you are writing a...
Scholarshipkkpanjaitan - Mar 11, 2018 / Holt - Mar 14, 2018
|What aspect/s of your leadership knowledge, skills and practice you consider to be well established?
2 - Selvi, this essay perfectly establishes your identity as a team member, not as a team leader, which was the...
Scholarshipselvimtj - Mar 11, 2018 / Holt - Mar 14, 2018
|Australia award scholarship's contribution in 37 year old's future career
2 - Ulambayar, I am not sure about how to review this essay. You forgot to give the prompt instructions for...
ScholarshipUlambayar - Mar 9, 2018 / Holt - Mar 13, 2018
|Lingual & cultural communication is a bridge; Applying for Korean Studies/KGSP-G Personal Statement
Scholarshipbeatricekarova - Mar 10, 2018 / miriealie - Mar 10, 2018
|Scholarship essay to NTU : An event of personal importance to you. You may choose any topic.
2 - Sourabh, while you were asked to pick someone else or a different event for the topic of this essay,...
ScholarshipSourabh01 - Mar 8, 2018 / Holt - Mar 10, 2018
|CT's Motivation Letter for applying Master Degree Maritime Operation
2 - CHUMPON, a motivation letter is an essay that explains your reasons for wishing to enroll in a specific masters...
Scholarshiptuengi - Mar 8, 2018 / Holt - Mar 10, 2018
|Being at crossroads in the journey of life. My "Personal Statement" for Government Scholarship
ScholarshipShinbi Jung13 - Mar 4, 2018 / Shinbi Jung13 - Mar 10, 2018
|Why you apply for Msc in Business Administration, specialization Small Business & Entrepreneurship?
2 - @SSAGitz you are not being asked why you want to be an entrepreneur, the question is all about the...
ScholarshipSSAGitz - Mar 5, 2018 / Holt - Mar 10, 2018
|Essay about How do you pay your tuition and living expenses while in college?
3 - Sophia, your whole essay, save for the part where you discuss working as a call center agent is nothing...
ScholarshipSophia123 - Mar 4, 2018 / Holt - Mar 10, 2018
|KGSP Personal Statement - opportunity to delve deeper into Korean studies
3 - Sven, you need to refocus your response to represent only the academic and professional aspects of your application in...
Scholarshipagermanguy - Mar 4, 2018 / Holt - Mar 10, 2018
|Applying KGSP Korean Language and Literature majoring in Teaching Korean As a Foreign Language
5 - @brightcolours ahh thats right :( i think i wrote too long for nothing.. i got no more space to...
Scholarshipstardust294 - Feb 24, 2018 / stardust294 - Mar 2, 2018
|Looking for an opportunity to conduct Environmental researches! Personal statement
2 - Hi! First of all: This is my first time commenting on any essay so please kindly note, that my...
ScholarshipAMOZ04 - Feb 26, 2018 / brightcolours - Mar 1, 2018
|KGSP Personal Statement - Combining Technology and Korean Culture
2 - Rafika, open the essay with an immediate reference to your college studies. The current opening statement you have does...
Scholarshipraf1209 - Feb 27, 2018 / Holt - Mar 1, 2018
|KGSP Study Plan - Solving Companies Problem
2 - Evin, What exactly is your thesis proposal ? I don't get what your study goal is. What is the...
ScholarshipEvin Chan - Feb 27, 2018 / Holt - Mar 1, 2018
|Technology and telecommunication engineering in Korea - personal statement for KGSP 2018
2 - Ainani, your essay is nowhere near delivering the relevant requirements for the KGSP scholarship. This sort of essay writing...
Scholarshipstxrrynight - Feb 26, 2018 / Holt - Mar 1, 2018
|Architects are responsible for comfortable and safe future. KGSP Personal Statement.
2 - Assima, the first half of your essay sounds like a college application essay rather than a masters degree letter...
Scholarshipdaisyooh - Feb 24, 2018 / Holt - Feb 27, 2018
|It was worth to wait for the opportunity to apply for Master study in Korea - Personal Statement
NEW - Hi guys~ I am going to apply KGSP for Master's study. This is my personal statement for the scholarship....
Scholarshipshahzad iqbal - Feb 27, 2018 / — -
|Why should they choose me for KGSP 2018 ?
4 - "Korea is known for its spectacular rise from one of the poorest countries in the world to a developed...
Scholarshipkopure - Feb 14, 2018 / smtn22 - Feb 26, 2018
|Marketing myself and demonstrating suitability in my Personal Statement
3 - Walter, this personal statement is too simplified in presentation that it almost seems like a draft of a personal...
Scholarshipgmeigo9 - Feb 23, 2018 / Holt - Feb 25, 2018
|Personal Statement for phD scholarship in Design schools in Korea
NEW - The registration program requires the following items: Motivations with which you apply for this program / Your education and...
Scholarshiparantesb - Feb 23, 2018 / — -
|I have been involved deeper into the processes that need more expertise - KGSP application
Scholarshipbatgirl23 - Feb 22, 2018 / batgirl23 - Feb 23, 2018
|My nursing education and interest in the Korean Government Scholarship Program
3 - Thank you so much for your advices I will fix my mistakes.And I think I should write with Korean...
ScholarshipKubra42 - Feb 21, 2018 / Kubra42 - Feb 22, 2018
|KGSP - is a big opportunity to start over, when you think that life is over
7 - Thank you, i will definitely rewrite my statement, now i see that it was to emotional and indeed not...
ScholarshipLanaVasel - Feb 20, 2018 / LanaVasel - Feb 22, 2018
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