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|University leadership experience - engineering week
2 - Mohammed, these are not leadership examples. These are examples of how you are a good follower. In fact, the...
Scholarshipmhdsalah1993 - Sep 2, 2018 / Holt - Sep 3, 2018
|I'll be able to make things happen; Motivations with which you apply for the KGSP
3 - Rannie, the language you use is overly dramatic to the point of exaggeration. I strongly suggest that you forgo...
Scholarshiproykim - Aug 31, 2018 / Holt - Sep 1, 2018
|Motivation letter for applying Scholarship in Netherlands
3 - Farrasati, the most that you need to do with this essay is rearrange the paragraphs for a more interesting...
Scholarshipfarras - Aug 31, 2018 / Holt - Sep 1, 2018
|Work experience as an assistant laboratory technologist has helped in grounding my leadership skills
ScholarshipAMOZ - Aug 29, 2018 / AMOZ - Aug 31, 2018
|An ever-growing professional network - regular contact with the professional analytical chemists
2 - @Urca your essay is practically seamless. It is near perfection, but does not showcase a real situation that shows...
ScholarshipUrca - Aug 30, 2018 / Holt - Aug 30, 2018
|Being a leader for challenging situation - those experiences have given me problem solving skills
ScholarshipAnanta - Aug 26, 2018 / Ananta - Aug 29, 2018
|I've learnt that leaders can change everything if they have that passion towards their goal and aim
4 - @missmeka It is better to focus on one example/instance so that you can develop it in details to give...
Scholarshipmissmeka - Aug 27, 2018 / RU_IS - Aug 28, 2018
|Leadership is a quality that has always been present in my life. Chevening.
Scholarshipvaleriavbv - Aug 27, 2018 / valeriavbv - Aug 27, 2018
|It is said that computers are the most essential man-made divices of the last centuries.
2 - Tran, you completely misunderstood the prompt and discussed a prompt so unrelated to the task that you will automatically...
Scholarshiptranphuongthao - Aug 26, 2018 / Holt - Aug 27, 2018
|Leadership can change everything with passion - for scholarship
3 - Rimz, you are explaining amateur leadership skills. Are you not yet working in a profession where you are called...
Scholarshipadirnarmak - Aug 26, 2018 / Holt - Aug 27, 2018
|Networking is a key to develop your personality and a way to enhance your ideas and thinking
3 - Rimz, this sounds more like a college application draft than a Chevening essay. It lacks a reference to professional...
Scholarshipadirnarmak - Aug 24, 2018 / Holt - Aug 25, 2018
|I have achieved in a number of areas where the leadership skills have been displayed and developed
Scholarshipafghan afghan - Aug 24, 2018 / Holt - Aug 25, 2018
|I have chosen three universities in the UK with the same Master program Cyber Security
4 - The justifications you provided for your interest in Cybersecurity such as "from childhood as I wanted to ... "...
Scholarshipadirnarmak - Aug 23, 2018 / RU_IS - Aug 24, 2018
|Networking has been one skill I adopt daily in my career. Chevening scholarship essay
3 - Over all, it is good. But I am trying to point out some issues in association with the points...
Scholarshipobianujumaureen - Aug 22, 2018 / jam92 - Aug 24, 2018
|A Childhood Dream - KGSP Undergraduate 2019 Personal Statement
2 - Axel, there are only 2 points in this essay that are bogging it down in terms of presentation excellence....
ScholarshipMazino31 - Aug 22, 2018 / Holt - Aug 23, 2018
|Being in a leadership position in Nigeria and to fight diseases
3 - Ugwu, you do not need several examples of leadership and influencing. You need only one effective example of these...
Scholarshipobianujumaureen - Aug 22, 2018 / Holt - Aug 23, 2018
|This is my essay of leadership and influencing for scholarship. Kindly comment on it
3 - Rida, you absolutely cannot use academic references for your leadership and influencing essay. That is a tremendously weak basis...
Scholarshipnarmakadir - Aug 21, 2018 / Holt - Aug 22, 2018
|Incident with a mobile phone showed my leadership skills - Chevening essay
2 - Rubana, this is a very effective leadership essay. However, it does not reflect greatly on your influencing style. While...
ScholarshipRU_IS - Aug 21, 2018 / Holt - Aug 22, 2018
|My assertive method of leadership. High-profile issues require skills. Chevening scholarship essay
6 - Ahseyar, Holt's comment is very detailed. I will just add that since you are allowed to write 500 words,...
ScholarshipAhseyar - Aug 12, 2018 / RU_IS - Aug 21, 2018
|My networking skills has helped me get to this height in my career. Chevening scholarship
2 - Ugwu, there is no need to define the meaning of networking to the reviewer. He is not interested in...
Scholarshipobianujumaureen - Aug 20, 2018 / Holt - Aug 21, 2018
|"Networking" An intellectual adventure for creativity- Chevening Scholarship
ScholarshipEmcee_huckz - Aug 18, 2018 / Emcee_huckz - Aug 18, 2018
|A leader in the making. Leadership has clearly been the course of my life.
ScholarshipPaddy - Aug 16, 2018 / Paddy - Aug 17, 2018
|KGSP-U - Study plan to Improve English and Korean speaking abilities required for University
3 - Danielle, your response is too short and not very focused on the question being asked which is "How do...
ScholarshipMochachii - Aug 15, 2018 / Holt - Aug 16, 2018
|Korea as destination country is really worthy to continue my study - KGSP scholarship essay
2 - Putri, your letter is not very coherent as it is not properly worded in the English language. Aside from...
Scholarshipputritiin - Aug 13, 2018 / Holt - Aug 14, 2018
|Study plans to improve foreign languages required for taking a bachelor's degree course
Scholarshipavbmarcelo - Jul 30, 2018 / hanhcom - Aug 13, 2018
|Contribution to Indonesia - Working as an Ambassador of Indonesia Through Teaching
3 - Maria, the reason why your essay reached the word limit is because you just kept on typing, without actually...
Scholarshipmarian6591 - Aug 9, 2018 / Holt - Aug 10, 2018
|NETWORKING AND IT'S SIGNIFICANCE TO MY PROFESSIONAL GOALS
3 - @Holt Thank you very much for your help. I really do appreciate. Which section did you say can be...
ScholarshipNanya - Jul 21, 2018 / Nanya - Jul 25, 2018
|Motivation letter for Master degree in University of Potsdam with PPGG DAAD Scholarship
2 - Juli, your essay has too much word filler in it that prevents the reviewer from getting to read the...
ScholarshipSarj - Jul 18, 2018 / Holt - Jul 19, 2018
|I am suitably qualified to apply this scholarship. Self introduction for a scholarship
3 - Ninda, this is an insufficient response to the essay because you only focused your response on the second part...
Scholarshipnindanrsh - Jul 17, 2018 / Holt - Jul 18, 2018
|How do you see yourself as providing leadership in water management? My skills and experience
2 - Omar, the question is "how do you see yourself in a position of leadership in the future?" Therefore, there...
Scholarshipomar3009 - Jul 17, 2018 / Holt - Jul 18, 2018
|Sussex University Sustainable Development Msc. Scholarship Motivation Letter
2 - Paragraph 1: from at a and interested interesting student who havealways societal/social issues organising leaders , harassment ,...
Scholarshipaates - Jun 29, 2018 / thuhuyen461 - Jul 9, 2018
|Why the awards panel should consider them for a Scholarship? LGBTQ SCHOLARSHIP
5 - Merged: I NEED HELP ON MY LGBTQ SCHOLARSHIP APPLICATION BELOW Why the awards panel should consider them...
ScholarshipAMOZ - Jul 3, 2018 / AMOZ - Jul 6, 2018
|Relevant work experience to commerce
3 - Haniye, you need to consider the word count for your response. How many words are you allowed to write?...
Scholarshiphaniye - Jul 4, 2018 / Holt - Jul 5, 2018
|My opinion whether children should learn to compete or to co-operate with others or not
2 - Hi :) I kindly suggest obtain -> acquire telling children to be -> encourage.. stand above others-> attaining greater...
Scholarshipimchang - Jul 1, 2018 / Phuongnguyen256 - Jul 2, 2018
|Writing: For MEXT Scholarship Japan - My field of expertise is Biotechnology
NEW - Respected EF moderators and members. I would like to apply MEXT scholarship which provides Field of specialization studied in...
ScholarshipNazish Masood - Jun 8, 2018 / — -
|Motivation for programme choice, you as a proper candidate, dissertation topic, study contribution
3 - @Holt Please make it urgent first, thank you. Hello! Thank you for the great feedback, Holt. I highly...
Scholarshipmaurice0422 - May 25, 2018 / maurice0422 - May 27, 2018
|Essay about African-American leader in my field who has inspired me to achieve my goals
ScholarshipDaughaqu - May 15, 2018 / Holt - May 21, 2018
|Study Objectives for Fulbright Scholarship - Artificial Intelligence w/ application in Aerospace
2 - Rizwan, I have to be blunt here and tell you that nothing in this study plan is applicable to...
ScholarshipRizwan89 - May 5, 2018 / Holt - May 6, 2018
|I dream to become an indigenous oil/gas expert in Nigeria Personal statement for ptdf scholarship
2 - Ugwu, your scholarship application becomes confusing to read because you do not apply the appropriate transition sentences from one...
Scholarshippalongs - May 5, 2018 / Holt - May 6, 2018
|Supporting statement for AAS 2018, Possible tasks to perform
2 - @Keiko_15 you neglected to inform the reviewer as to how you will use the professional network composed of professors,...
ScholarshipKeiko_15 - Apr 27, 2018 / Holt - Apr 28, 2018
|Why Master of Economics / Master of Applied Economics and Econometrics?
3 - @nelanavida you did extremely well in the first part of the essay where you introduce the purpose of your...
Scholarshipnelanavida - Apr 26, 2018 / Holt - Apr 27, 2018
|Scholarship Essay Globalisation, Business and Sustainable Development
Scholarshipcuriouscat - Apr 26, 2018 / curiouscat - Apr 27, 2018
|I will apply nursing education in Monash University - AAS 2018
4 - i try to make new essay based on your advice, could you please correct it again. A new revision...
ScholarshipKeiko_15 - Apr 21, 2018 / Keiko_15 - Apr 27, 2018
|My essay for the Julius Mwalimu scholarship scheme
4 - Jimmy, overall, your essay did not come into focus until you wrote paragraphs 4-6. The first part of your...
ScholarshipWanyabanda - Apr 15, 2018 / Holt - Apr 25, 2018
|AAS Supporting Statement, Why Master of Sustainable Energy? Solutions for global energy challenges
3 - Firno, your reference to the reason why you chose this course is too vague. You cannot have a generalized...
Scholarshipfirno - Apr 21, 2018 / Holt - Apr 22, 2018
|My goal to become an e-business transformation consultant - IELTS PRIZE personal statement
3 - Thanks @Holt! I think the work experience is important because it made me confirmed my goal, but maybe...
Scholarshipenjoy543 - Apr 18, 2018 / enjoy543 - Apr 20, 2018
|Why the University of Sidney became my first choice? (AAS Suporting Statemnet)
4 - Kiki, you have to be more specific about the reasons you have chosen to pursue masters studies in TESOL...
ScholarshipKikyo_14 - Apr 18, 2018 / Holt - Apr 19, 2018
|Information about AAS from Australian university websites and from attending educational exhibitions
2 - @yeniuyun Do not term your introduction to the AAS as coming from a "talk show" on campus.; That implies...
Scholarshipyeniuyun - Apr 18, 2018 / Holt - Apr 19, 2018
|The gained knowledge would sharpen my passion (Australia Award Scholarship)
2 - also designing digital marketing are animportant skill I do hope to gain Consider separating run on sentence: From...
Scholarshiptams27 - Apr 16, 2018 / jazzyjaz - Apr 19, 2018
|Hi I'm Queen. This scholarship is for help to drive proper interventions and policies in Nigeria.
4 - @Holt Good evening sir, trust this meet you well. Please kindly find my edited essay above for your attention....
Scholarshipquiqui - Apr 14, 2018 / quiqui - Apr 18, 2018
|Why I choose master course in Mining and Metallurgical Engineering at Curtin University
Scholarshipdigital256 - Apr 17, 2018 / digital256 - Apr 18, 2018
|Commonwealth scholarship short essay on objectives during award, and career plan after award.
2 - Alao, why are you presenting the responses as an itemized listing? This is normally presented as inter connected plans...
ScholarshipAlao0702 - Apr 16, 2018 / Holt - Apr 17, 2018
|What will you do after finishing school? Supporting Statement - Australia Awards Scholarship
2 - @Milkx_Tea your response is confusing. If you have already worked at XYZ company and you are planning to return...
ScholarshipMilkx_Tea - Apr 16, 2018 / Holt - Apr 17, 2018
|How undertaking this fellowship in the UK will benefit your career
3 - Hi thanks for your suggestions. As you suggested I rephrased my opening sentence of this essay and some...
Scholarshipmohit2k6123 - Feb 24, 2018 / mohit2k6123 - Apr 16, 2018
|"A sound track of excellence and dedication"; Statement of purpose (max 500 words) - UK scholarship
Scholarshipsalmamza85 - Apr 14, 2018 / salmamza85 - Apr 15, 2018
|My reasons for applying the master's program of General and Applied Linguistics
2 - Teuku, your essay is not appropriate for the prompt. The reason for your proposed course and institution must be...
Scholarshiptm_aulia - Apr 4, 2018 / Holt - Apr 15, 2018
|WHY TESOL in University of Canberra or Sydney? (AAS Hunter)
2 - Umniyyatul, try to create a more integrated presentation of your reason for choosing the course at this institution. As...
ScholarshipUmni - Apr 13, 2018 / Holt - Apr 14, 2018
|Describe the efforts you have undertaken so far to obtain information on your study options?
ScholarshiphunterSC - Apr 8, 2018 / hunterSC - Apr 14, 2018
|"I will benefit directly" - A short essay for OFID scholarship
3 - Fatemah, your essay focuses mostly on your previous academic experience, which is not part of the required information for...
ScholarshipFatemahEbrahimi - Apr 9, 2018 / Holt - Apr 13, 2018
|Engineering; why you chose your proposed host organisation - Scholarship Application master essay
ScholarshipChemicalAus - Apr 11, 2018 / ChemicalAus - Apr 11, 2018
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