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|IELTS: Should we ban combat sports which depend on violence for their entertainment
4 - 322 words is too long. A shorter introduction would leave more time for the body. people have...
Writing Feedbacknguoi_co_doc - Sep 4, 2014 / phuoc - Sep 4, 2014
|All kinds of medical health expenditures should be borne by the government; do you agree or not .
Writing FeedbackAshikk - Sep 2, 2014 / Ashikk - Sep 4, 2014
|IELTS: Media coverage of celebrities is having a negative effect on children.
Writing Feedbacknguoi_co_doc - Sep 2, 2014 / Xiaokai Jin - Sep 4, 2014
|Retail cashier job - my very first job experience
3 - Yes, this is a very important thing.... you should tell us why and for what purpose you wrote...
Writing Feedbackmrszlexilandero - Aug 27, 2014 / dumi - Sep 4, 2014
|Writing Task 1 - Ticket buying Chart Comparison
4 - First, this task is aimed at assessing your report writing skills and therefore you should present details in...
Writing FeedbackRomeD - Sep 3, 2014 / dumi - Sep 3, 2014
|Ielts - Advertisements have become part of our life and it is impossible to ban them
Writing Feedbackswathi_12345 - Sep 3, 2014 / dumi - Sep 3, 2014
|Awareness among people about a healthier lifestyle leads to the need to look for a specific food
2 - I like that you use transitional words such as "in addition", "in conclusion" to emphasize the structure of your...
Writing Feedbackpriskeith - Sep 3, 2014 / MarianaS - Sep 3, 2014
|IELTS: What can be done to discourage people from using their cars?
3 - Essay is clear and coherent. There are few grammatical errors which you might need to work on. Some of...
Writing Feedbacknguoi_co_doc - Sep 3, 2014 / swathi_12345 - Sep 3, 2014
|Ielts - Museums and art galleries be free of charge for the general public
Writing Feedbackswathi_12345 - Aug 30, 2014 / swathi_12345 - Sep 3, 2014
|TOEFL: Type of temper and advantages of individual work as best arguments in favor of studying alone
8 - Agood TOEFL Writing essay need that you responded well to the task, relating the lecture to the reading including...
Writing FeedbackMarianaS - Sep 2, 2014 / Anouar - Sep 3, 2014
|"leader is like the captain in a boat"; what is the most important qualities of a person who guides?
Writing FeedbackAnouar - Sep 3, 2014 / vangiespen - Sep 3, 2014
|IELTS: 'various jobs can't be limited to a gender'; more women are taking over traditional male work
3 - To begin with, confronting with such severe job competition and economic stress in the society, women can no longer...
Writing Feedbackstephy7658 - Aug 27, 2014 / nguoi_co_doc - Sep 3, 2014
|ielts: private citizens, businesses and governments play equally roles in protecting the environment
2 - First and foremost, you must lengthen your introductory statement. It is too short and does not totally inform the...
Writing Feedbackfunny_sun89 - Sep 2, 2014 / vangiespen - Sep 3, 2014
|In undermentioned countries foot/drinks/tobacco has recorded the highest percentage of expenditures
Writing Feedbackandys77a - Aug 14, 2014 / SHanafi - Sep 2, 2014
|"One more stab to the heart, one more reason to hate, one less reason to live"|