Advice for my exercise - FOR INTRODUCTION - IELTS WRITING PART 2
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Nowadays, every piece of business conducted by humans is easier because of the advanced technology
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'simple touch of fingers' - People's daily activities have been simplified by connecting online
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IELTS Task 1 Result of Survey On Happiness Rattings In Married And Unmarried People
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Nowadays, private car is one of the essential needs for people lives. But there's too many of them.
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MAKING INTRODUCTION; discussing benefits and drawbacks, giving opinions on issues. IELTS TASK 2
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Internet is used for updating information, communicate with others and easily to fulfill daily needs
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General debate whether the environment damage is serious or acceptable to the international laws
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The addiction to the Internet seems to be a concerning issue, and many people suffer from it
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The common silkworm's life cycle and how silk cloth is harvested from them
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Human activity is more pleasure due to the sophisticated existence of Internet
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Many people has acknowledged that internet makes their daily business more accessible
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It is true that the Internet affects the way people live. Our life is much more easier now.
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People's lives are much more comfortable since the introduction of cutting-edge the internet
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At the present time, car become one of the most important goods (instruments) in human life
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There is an increasing trend around the world to have a small family rather than a large family
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Beneficial relaxation. Learning vacation is a new kind of holiday
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People who decide to have kids should better cogitate on how they can meet their children's needs
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Environmental issues are caused by human's activities. Task 2 (practice): "improving environment"
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What can be done to reduce the use of cars? SEVERAL EXAMPLES OF INTRODUCTION
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How a wind turbine will be built and where it is located
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Maintaining repeated customers is a prevalent aim within a business. My summary about Brand Loyalty
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A wind turbine consist of tower, generator, wind sensor, and blades controlled by a computer.
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It's not necessary to earn money by children when they are still on parents care
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Natural deterioration has became a major concern in any part across the globe.
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TED Talks : How to Make Stress Your Friend
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The changes at West park School since 1950 - after the demand for personal vehicles increased
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A phenomenon of social networking is rapidly increase in 21st century. SUMMARY TASK 7
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We pay too much attention to actors and other celebrities, and the media sometimes sensationalize it
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West Park Secondary School map. The building experienced a significant change from 1950 to 2010.
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Individuals vs. environment - PRACTICE IELTS WRITING TASK 2 : ESSAY TYPE AGREE OR DISAGREE
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Celebrity Life or Inspiring Personal Life?
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IELTS Writing Task 2 ( Full essay regarding environment in type of agree or disagree)
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Reducing emission production, processing waste, planting the number of plants - all for environment
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The Design of a Wave-Energy Machine and Its Best Location
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Facts about celebrities are always interesting to follow, and the lives of ordinary people?
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On Women's Equality Day, More Tech Companies Promise Change
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Citizens obligation and business cooperation - "Only large companies can improve environment"
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The mass media has been more interesting to show well known people's way of life
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It is certain that the clear water resource became a rarity in the several countries.
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These days, many entertainment news report celebrities activities and their private lives.
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People prefer live today in some urban areas and communicate less with local residents.
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The environment improvement depends only on large companies since individuals can't do much alone
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Big companies could improve environment rather than people because they have big impact on society.
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Large companies and individuals are no difference in maintaining the environment
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Parents have been through a lot of things, that's why I believe that they are outstanding teachers
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The machine for generating electricity consist of two main parts : steel tower and a computer room
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How to See the Upcoming 'Great American Eclipse' (SUMMARY)
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IELTS Essay Writing Test 3 About Agree and Disagree
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"Big can more" - possible ways to better the environement.
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TED - Averting the Climate Crisis. Make the massive persuasion campaign.
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Individuals are too limited to make a difference in the environmental development
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It is generally believed that the Internet is an excellent means of communication but some people su
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IELTS Task 1 Wind Turbine Design and The Optimum Location
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Writing IELTS task 1 : the components of a wind turbine and where it can be placed
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Should the media report ordinary people lives more than celebrities' lives? IELTS WRITING TASK 1
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Students have today more chances to study abroad, than it was before - practice on IELTS
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A wind turbine works by wind power, producing electricity efficiently when located on a high surface
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Radio, television, and Internet shows over and over gossips stories and entertainment news
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BOARDING SCHOOL FOR CHILDREN - good option for the contemporary parents who doesn't have enough time
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