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TED Video by Negin Farsad: Taxonomy of Haters

2 - Hi Fadhillah.. I am going to give you a few suggestions. Much MANY social problems in America...

Writing FeedbackFadhilahumar91 - Aug 12, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Aug 12, 2016
Test 1 TOEFL promotions: based on seniority or on performance?

4 - -In an enterprise, everybody has the desire offor a promotion; itwhich is every employee's dream. -Therefore, most organizations have...

Writing Feedbackgabrieloandco - Jul 27, 2016 / Cindyliu - Aug 12, 2016
Test 6 TOEFL.Would you prefer taking a career path leading to management or individual positions?

4 - -In these positions ....some moment of our life. Leadership, time management and social skills are the traits which should...

Writing Feedbackgabrieloandco - Aug 11, 2016 / Cindyliu - Aug 12, 2016
Do you ever heard about Superfood?

5 - hi... Having a healthy body is not an easy thing. Many people believetrust(believe is a general...

Writing FeedbackFaridadwi18 - Aug 10, 2016 / Fadhilahumar91 - Aug 12, 2016
IELTS TASK 1 - The sale of foods and drinks on a typical weekday in a coffee shop

2 - Hi Rere, :) It is a great chance to give some suggestions for your essay. The sales of...

Writing Feedbackmadmoiselle - Aug 12, 2016 / Ilmi_03 - Aug 12, 2016
A smarter, more precise way to think about public health

4 - hi.. she had detected bad effect of her treatment ... (double verb in your sentence) ... the...

Writing FeedbackIforsa - Aug 11, 2016 / Fadhilahumar91 - Aug 12, 2016
What the West's Ancient Droughts Say About Its Future

4 - Hi ifrosa.. i hope, it can be help you.......... - Californians facing frightening question toward the recent...

Writing FeedbackIforsa - Aug 11, 2016 / Fadhilahumar91 - Aug 12, 2016
IELTS TASK 1 - The rail transport in the UK, the USA, Japan and Italy in 2007

2 - The rail transport in the UK, the USA, Japan and Italy ... Try: throughout the UK..... don't...

Writing Feedbackmadmoiselle - Aug 12, 2016 / adepani3112 - Aug 12, 2016
Article Summary : Facts of Laughter by Sophie Scott

2 - The way you develop paragraphs is good, yet some changes need more improvement in particular paragraph development. ...

Writing Feedbackashelarisa48 - Aug 11, 2016 / eddies - Aug 12, 2016
Summary - Al-Gore New thinking on the climate crisis

2 - Hi Dipa.. Welcome to Essay Forum.. I have read your writing closely. There are some of errors grammatically. I...

Writing FeedbackDipa19 - Aug 11, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Aug 12, 2016
SUMMARY ARTICLE : Trump's Ideas for Economy, Will He Make America Great Again?

2 - Hi Atikah.. Welcome to Essay Forum I have read your writing closely. I have found some of grammar mistakes....

Writing Feedbackdinartika19 - Aug 11, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Aug 12, 2016
The expenditure on Photographic is the highest amongst all other consumer goods of Britain

2 - Greetings Mr Jack Jiang, Just sharing several information regarding to your writing. The chart shows the differences of...

Writing FeedbackJack Jiang - Aug 11, 2016 / ramzi06 - Aug 11, 2016
Companies hire outside consultants to suggest ways for the company to operate more efficiently

2 - I completely agree with the strategy of companies consultants for the company to operate more efficiently I would...

Writing Feedbackfireboy99 - Aug 11, 2016 / gabrieloandco - Aug 11, 2016
'How to Explore the Pantanal' - article

2 - Greetings Mrs Selvi, just sharing for several information regarding to your wrting, It is a part of nation...

Writing FeedbackPermata92 - Aug 11, 2016 / ramzi06 - Aug 11, 2016
Drawings that show the beauty and fragility of earth

2 - Here is my feedback: As she got many experience, she can illustrate that situation by a unique way...

Writing Feedbackgrintdevereaux30 - Aug 11, 2016 / payal1982 - Aug 11, 2016
The Jobs Which Machine Can Do And The One That Can Not In The Future

2 - Hi! Here is a start to some grammatical errors and how to fix them! I hope this helps! ...

Writing FeedbackFaridadwi18 - Aug 11, 2016 / daniL - Aug 11, 2016
CBEST prompt- Restriction on how many years a teacher may teach the same subject or grade level?

6 - Thank you Justivy03 for your advice. I will try to write at least one essay everyday. Hope I could...

Writing FeedbackPkyra - Aug 8, 2016 / Pkyra - Aug 11, 2016
Summary of Article "Britain's First Female Doctor"

2 - Hello Hikuma! I have just read your summary and I want to try to give you a bit suggestions....

Writing Feedbackhikuma21 - Aug 11, 2016 / ashelarisa48 - Aug 11, 2016
Speedy cannabis spit test could spot people driving while high

3 - Hi Azmi, first if all, linking verbs, these verbs are very minor that are often neglected by a writer,...

Writing Feedbackazmi23 - Aug 11, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 11, 2016
TED Summary : "How to speak so that people want to listen" by Julian Treasure

2 - Hello I rewrote some sentences for you so the text sounds more stylistically refined: There are many...

Writing Feedbackmolly16 - Aug 11, 2016 / Wolf Larsen - Aug 11, 2016
summary TED's video: 6 talks that are music to my ears

4 - Hi Adi, let me suggest you some correction, I found some singural form and spelling mistakes in your writing:...

Writing Feedbackadip - Aug 11, 2016 / grintdevereaux30 - Aug 11, 2016
HERE'S WHY RIO'S OLYMPIC DIVING POOL TURNED GREEN!

3 - Hei Eris! May I corrrect your summary ? Here I come! Olympic is becomes a hot issue ...

Writing Feedbackeris28 - Aug 11, 2016 / dinartika19 - Aug 11, 2016
Article Summary : Asia's Lions Live in One Last Place on Earth-and They're Thriving

3 - Hallo Jomul, If you don't mind, let me correct you summary. they are become thea symbol of strength...

Writing Feedbackjomul01 - Aug 11, 2016 / dinartika19 - Aug 11, 2016
It is actually agreed today that sports and social activities play a main role in students' life.

5 - here some correction from me.. other activity activities directly influence --> influence directly therefor --> therefore...

Writing Feedbackmohamadabtahi - Aug 11, 2016 / Iforsa - Aug 11, 2016
Orangutan learns to mimic human conversation for the first time

5 - Hello Eka, Adriano Lameria, from the University of Durham, UK and his team found that ..... Adriano Lameria...

Writing Feedbackekalamarsyari11 - Aug 11, 2016 / Faridadwi18 - Aug 11, 2016
Between Apathy and Risk About Zika in Florida

2 - Hello farida, It is nice to know person who has same interest in IELTS. Overall, I like your essay...

Writing FeedbackFaridadwi18 - Aug 11, 2016 / mahdinurianto25 - Aug 11, 2016
HOW TO FIX A BROKEN EDUCATION SYSTEM WITHOUT ANY MORE MONEY

3 - when you make summary you don't need to give your own opinion, just make summary from the article/other website...

Writing Feedbackekalamarsyari11 - Aug 10, 2016 / Iforsa - Aug 11, 2016
Pandas Get to Know Their Wild Side - article from National Geographic

9 - Hello azmi23, Giant panda population have(has) declined and labelled endangered since 1990. The China still have (subject is...

Writing Feedbackazmi23 - Aug 10, 2016 / hikuma21 - Aug 11, 2016
Summary TED The reasons companies fail-and how to avoid them

3 - Every company needs to grow so the owner ignores for not getting any profit. There is [need article] a...

Writing FeedbackHalim15 - Aug 11, 2016 / RAY93 - Aug 11, 2016
More people in developing countries are purchasing cars.What are the problems and possible solution?

4 - Hi molly, Therefore, I believe collaboration governmentgovernment's collaboration with the ... Moreover, the direct impact of this is...

Writing Feedbackmolly16 - Jul 29, 2016 / Faridadwi18 - Aug 11, 2016
"The jobs we'll lose to machines and the ones we wont" Anthony Goldbloom. TED

2 - Hello I applied a few adjustments to the text so that it sounds better and makes more sense....

Writing FeedbackRisty01 - Aug 11, 2016 / Wolf Larsen - Aug 11, 2016
Family has a bigger influence on young teens than friends. Present your agreement or disagreement.

7 - Your essay so good, but i think you must explain the reason, go deep "why the family give significant...

Writing FeedbackVips - Aug 9, 2016 / Fadhilahumar91 - Aug 11, 2016
Stem cell brain injections let people walk again after stroke

4 - hii thank you for your feedback but actually i found the same pattern of this sentence "According to recent...

Writing FeedbackIforsa - Aug 10, 2016 / Iforsa - Aug 11, 2016
TED Summary, the skill of self confidence from Dr. Ivan Joseph

3 - Hi Ramzi, What is the important importance of confidence ? ... of confidence on each person, they are...

Writing Feedbackramzi06 - Aug 10, 2016 / Faridadwi18 - Aug 11, 2016
There are three essential qualities of good parents: understanding, support and patience

3 - Form marriage to having have kids in order to create the next generation for the family, we all and...

Writing FeedbackQuang Huy - Aug 11, 2016 / Fadhilahumar91 - Aug 11, 2016
IELTS - Writing Task 1 Level of education of Bulgarians planning to leave Bulgaria

2 - Hallo ilmi, i would like to left a comment in your writing practice in IELTS. Your introduction and...

Writing FeedbackIlmi_03 - Aug 11, 2016 / Permata92 - Aug 11, 2016
Government spending on the internet - is it the most appropriate use of money? IELTS task 2

7 - All around the world, extraordinary sums of money ... Hello this is my introduction Such some regions...

Writing Feedbackhuynhngocminh99 - Jul 19, 2016 / adip - Aug 11, 2016
New Invention Which Gives Hope to Pancreatic Cancer Patient

2 - Hi Farida, here are my corrections for u : -- Pancreas is located in the middle of our...

Writing FeedbackFaridadwi18 - Aug 10, 2016 / molly16 - Aug 11, 2016
Summery article of "Superfood doesn't mean anything, so let's stop using it"

4 - People, nowadays are easily to believe the promise offers by the superfoods super food related to get health...

Writing Feedbackhikuma21 - Aug 11, 2016 / ekalamarsyari11 - Aug 11, 2016
Summary an article: Finding the right switch can solve the biggest problems

2 - Hi Nur, here's another one from my side; - how malnutrition badly behave about less nutrition problem -...

Writing FeedbackFadhilahumar91 - Aug 11, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 11, 2016
I need comments for my IELTS Task 1 about Burnaby Public Library (my first writing)

4 - Hi Yoga, indeed, WELCOME to the forum, we hope,like a family, you can trust us with your writing projects...

Writing FeedbackKusumaningtyas - Aug 10, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 11, 2016
Pixar: The math behind the movies

3 - HI Muhammad, below are my suggestions for your summary; First of all, the way you plot your summary...

Writing Feedbackgrintdevereaux30 - Aug 10, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 11, 2016
Summary of Video: Wired Happiness

3 - Hi Nur, below are my suggestions on your summary. - Most citizens in urban society - always say...

Writing FeedbackFadhilahumar91 - Aug 11, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 11, 2016
Being born in the middle-class in a developing country limits the overall perception of society.

2 - Hi Gabriel, you can see my analysis towards your essay in the detailed descriptions below. I hope you can...

Writing Feedbackgabrieloandco - Aug 10, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Aug 11, 2016
SUMMARY ARTICLE : GLOBAL CITIZENS, HOW TO CHANGE THE WORLD?

2 - hi dina: Maybe, i think, there is not many people in America Short of people in Amerika know...

Writing Feedbackdinartika19 - Aug 10, 2016 / Fadhilahumar91 - Aug 11, 2016
Summary article: Anxiety on China

3 - The official forecast is predicting of a very small number growth that is incontrovertible inflated for Political reasons. ...

Writing Feedbackadip - Aug 10, 2016 / ekalamarsyari11 - Aug 11, 2016
TEDx Talks : The Skill of Self Confidence

2 - Without such skill, person will lose believe in her/his self before he/she accomplish her/his tasks. fail to accomplish his...

Writing Feedbackmahdinurianto25 - Aug 10, 2016 / ekalamarsyari11 - Aug 11, 2016
The globalization brings economic and social improvements to the world - the reading passage

2 - You could say: Throughout the reading passes, there are conclusive evidence that prove.... However, the passage also integrates...

Writing Feedbackgabrieloandco - Aug 10, 2016 / adepani3112 - Aug 11, 2016
Wide arrays of policies have been created to ban public smoking in closed areas

3 - That's no mistake mate, imposing taxes and paying them are two completely different things. Citizens pay taxes, while governments...

Writing Feedbackgabrieloandco - Aug 10, 2016 / gabrieloandco - Aug 10, 2016
Summarize an article "Why Brexit happened and what to do next"

2 - is considered one of the most profound phenomena If you mention Europe and the rest of the world, you...

Writing FeedbackRisty01 - Aug 10, 2016 / gabrieloandco - Aug 10, 2016
A chronicle Abuse' at Australia's Nauru Immigration Camp

2 - Your mistakes corrected: The confidential files revealed a massive reports of sexual abuse The victims , who...

Writing FeedbackYusuf05 - Aug 10, 2016 / gabrieloandco - Aug 10, 2016
It is often argued that distance learning should completely replace classroom learning

2 - This essay is very well written I only suggest some stylistic changes. ... to an enterprise where he...

Writing Feedbackgabrieloandco - Aug 10, 2016 / Davidg021 - Aug 10, 2016
TED Summary: Inside The Mind of A Master Procrastinator by Tim Urban

2 - Hello I think it'll make more sense if you try constructing some simpler sentences for now. I applied...

Writing Feedbackmolly16 - Aug 10, 2016 / Wolf Larsen - Aug 10, 2016
Disscussion of documents 'Describe Serious Abuse' at Australia's Nauru Immigration Camp.

2 - - This island is a place were immigrantshousing on it. Double verb - Nauru has first housed a detention...

Writing FeedbackCitradipuss22 - Aug 10, 2016 / Risty01 - Aug 10, 2016
La Nina Could Affect the Spread of Virus !

2 - El Nino and La Nina (have) affected weather and health ... La Nina is the counterpart of El Nino(,)...

Writing Feedbackjomul01 - Aug 10, 2016 / Davidg021 - Aug 10, 2016
Promising test for pancreatic cancer from a teenager

2 - - He is interested - are the main principal procedures - He attempts or attempted - he concludes...

Writing FeedbackIforsa - Aug 10, 2016 / Risty01 - Aug 10, 2016
SUMMARY ARTICLE : ARE YOU SURE 2016 IS THE BLEAK HISTORY EVER?

2 - Hi Atikah, WELCOME to the Essay Forum Team, I hope you find this website helpful and rather useful to...

Writing Feedbackdinartika19 - Aug 10, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 10, 2016
Plan to Replant Millions of Trees in Central England Slows Down

2 - hiii eris after read your summary here some suggestion from me 1. it is better for you to pay...

Writing Feedbackeris28 - Aug 10, 2016 / Iforsa - Aug 10, 2016
Why photo should be more beautiful?

2 - Your essay is good, but i have some suggestion which you can use : - In the first...

Writing FeedbackPermata92 - Aug 10, 2016 / Faridadwi18 - Aug 10, 2016
Some people argue that teaching students to behave well and to assess right and wrong is important.

2 - Hi Rere, WELCOME back! I'm not sure if it's just me but it seems that you've been busy lately...

Writing Feedbackmadmoiselle - Aug 10, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 10, 2016

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