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|"Trauma Still Fresh for Rwandan Genocide Survivors" Summary
3 - Hi Gian16, This is little suggestion for you : 1. "... raised in Kinyanya 20 years ago, still give...
Writing FeedbackGian16 - Sep 13, 2016 / FirmanRomadhon20 - Sep 15, 2016
|IELTS task 1 The diagram illustrates the change of food consumption in China in quarter century
4 - Hi arisandy14, Can I offer you a little suggestion " fish was the most popular (what popular?) with...
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|The amounts of meat, salt, and fish consumed in China, starting from 1985 to 2010
Writing FeedbackAris05 - Sep 13, 2016 / eddies - Sep 15, 2016
|Why you should experience a home stay in Thailand?
3 - Hi Almajid, we're on the same boat, I mean I'm still learning to compose better writing as well. So...
Writing FeedbackALMAJID14 - Sep 14, 2016 / Fitri12 - Sep 15, 2016
|After Africa's Sahara Desert, the next great desert is Taklimakan Desert
Writing Feedbackrosadesiana - Sep 14, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Sep 15, 2016
|Most Violent Crimes Are Wrongly Linked to Mental Illness - Summary article
3 - Many news talks[singular/plural issue] about person who has mental health problem wasthat responsible tofor committing violence. However, the...
Writing FeedbackDavid54 - Sep 14, 2016 / RAY93 - Sep 14, 2016
|An increasing temperature on the planet can have domino-falling effects for the future of Earth
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|We must be able to listen to the signal of body, because it is better than any doctors.
3 - Lissa Rankin, founder of (...) and mental illness, comes up [past simple is suggested since this event had fully...
Writing FeedbackFitri12 - Sep 14, 2016 / RAY93 - Sep 14, 2016
|Student books: international visitors to New Zealand: reason for visit
Writing FeedbackMita22 - Sep 14, 2016 / BAMS14 - Sep 14, 2016
|How many people became a fitness center members some years ago?
2 - Hi Shandy, below are my thoughts on your analysis. - women becomingbecame members of the fitness -...
Writing Feedbackarisandy14 - Sep 14, 2016 / justivy03 - Sep 14, 2016
|Several holiday makers in New Zealand prefer to do such activities like walking, sightseeing, etc.
3 - Hi ALMAJID14, please find a few suggestions below in order to enhance your essay. "The bar chart illustrates...
Writing FeedbackALMAJID14 - Sep 14, 2016 / DmitryB - Sep 14, 2016
|Birds generally travel to higher latitudes of the Northern Hemisphere to breed during a warm seasons
2 - Hi Rizaldo, please find a few suggestions below in order to enhance your essay. - but the renowned...
Writing Feedbackrizaldohabibie - Sep 14, 2016 / justivy03 - Sep 14, 2016
|Al Gore - how the behavior of people can effect the climate crisis?
Writing Feedbackfadhilmd25 - Sep 14, 2016 / justivy03 - Sep 14, 2016
|A global mobilization is required in order to tackle the Climate Crisis issue
2 - Hello Most of the sentences must be rewritten to sound better (and to make more sense). One of...
Writing Feedbackandika08 - Sep 14, 2016 / Wolf Larsen - Sep 14, 2016
|Most Young American Can't Pass a Test on Global Affairs -- Can You? Summery for an Article
3 - I do appreciate your writing, i see in your writing, simple sentence but every single sentence has coherence. ...
Writing FeedbackHujjatul19 - Sep 13, 2016 / ALMAJID14 - Sep 14, 2016
|Summarize TED video : Al Gore, New Thinking On The Climate Crisis
2 - hallo :) overall your writing has been good but there is a little error sentence. On that video,...
Writing Feedbackmem77 - Sep 14, 2016 / ALMAJID14 - Sep 14, 2016
|Summary from Article Are Potatoes That Bad for You? ( Elizabeth Narins)
NEW - The main thing why potato has considerably bad reputation it has high glycemic index such as the pace of...
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|HOW TO TALK TO KIDS ABOUT THEIR WEIGHT (Summary)
2 - hi swr10 here are my suggestions keep writing! ==>Dr Shandra recommendsrecomendedthatto the parents have to help kids get...
Writing Feedbackswr10 - Sep 14, 2016 / rosadesiana - Sep 14, 2016
|The most longest migration in our galaxy is observed among birds.
2 - aloha, let me give you my thoughts: What the indomitable animal in this world?(I think it is not...
Writing FeedbackLalu Aulia Sastr - Sep 14, 2016 / bung ilham - Sep 14, 2016
|Birds abilities to navigate through very long distance has fascinating observers for centuries
2 - hi yonathan, here are my suggestions keep writing ! ==>from cold to warmer place ==>bird migration areis...
Writing FeedbackYonathan - Sep 14, 2016 / rosadesiana - Sep 14, 2016
|Taklimakan Desert - dominated by sand dunes and extreme conditions and free from vegetation
2 - hay, Dioba. after reading your work, i have some advice that is perhaps useful for you. In the first...
Writing FeedbackDioba - Sep 14, 2016 / arisandy14 - Sep 14, 2016
|Multiple outdoor and indoor activities - The purpose of all tourists visiting New Zealand
2 - Kiki, There are a little correction, ... purposes of all tourists visiting New Zealand and is measured in...
Writing Feedbackkiki23 - Sep 14, 2016 / David54 - Sep 14, 2016
|Walking around in the country comes to the top list of the reason for visiting the New Zealand
2 - hi mem77, here are my suggestions. keep writing ! ==> It they hashavea five reasons for coming to...
Writing Feedbackmem77 - Sep 14, 2016 / rosadesiana - Sep 14, 2016
|Al Gore stressed the importance of being aware of the climate change
2 - Hello Kiki, nice writing but you need some feedbacks Al Gore points are to stressed the importance of...
Writing Feedbackkiki23 - Sep 14, 2016 / PHA2016 - Sep 14, 2016
|Populus euphratica, Tamarix ramosissima, and Alhagi sparsifolia - these plants grow on desert
Writing FeedbackAlamsyah Ismail - Sep 14, 2016 / ALMAJID14 - Sep 14, 2016
|Five reasons of journey to New Zealand by foreign tourists, measured in percentage
2 - Hi Rian,this is my suggestion for your essay: 1."Journey in New Zealand and is measured.." .Better if use "Journey...
Writing Feedbackrian31 - Sep 14, 2016 / Dioba - Sep 14, 2016
|Police and Crime Prevention, a perspective opinion
2 - I found this essay easy to understand. here is my suggestion: in their cities[.]because the job of polices...
Writing Feedbackmem77 - Sep 14, 2016 / rizaldohabibie - Sep 14, 2016
|Summary Article: The Stress-Free Guide to Making Healthy Eating Choices
2 - Hello It'll make your text sounding more professional if you apply the following adjustments to it: ...
Writing Feedbackibal28 - Sep 14, 2016 / Wolf Larsen - Sep 14, 2016
|The Information shows of two membership in fitness a five-year period, from year 1970 to 2000
Writing FeedbackPHA2016 - Sep 14, 2016 / rian31 - Sep 14, 2016
|The Refugee Olympic Team Now Has Its Own Flag and Anthem
5 - Hello You have a good summary I have some corrections A no-profit society called The Refugee... ... deserved...
Writing Feedbackazmi23 - Aug 15, 2016 / andika08 - Sep 14, 2016
|Summary Article : Oil Pipeline Construction Halted After Native American Protests
2 - Hi! I have some advice for you! Your writing is quite comprehensive but missing the strong statement of...
Writing Feedbackandika08 - Sep 14, 2016 / kiki23 - Sep 14, 2016
|What can you do about the climate crisis? Al Gore talk about the climate
Writing FeedbackALMAJID14 - Sep 13, 2016 / mdamanhuri77 - Sep 14, 2016
|To prevent and overcome chilhood obesity
2 - Hello Your text is a bit awkward (stylistically). I suggest you apply the following adjustments to it: ...
Writing Feedbackmdamanhuri77 - Sep 14, 2016 / Wolf Larsen - Sep 14, 2016
|10 Things Not to Say to a Mom Who Puts Her Kids in Day Care (Claire Zulkey) - Summary for article
5 - Hallo Ifan, nice essay but I have some Suggestion for you: you can describe your essay on more...
Writing FeedbackIfan21 - Sep 13, 2016 / Lalu Aulia Sastr - Sep 14, 2016
|TED Summary:The Shocking Truth About Your Health by Lissa Rankin (TEDxFiDiWomen)
NEW - The most important part of life is always being healthy. As a proverb said an apple a day keeps...
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|This Teenager Just Came Out to Her Family at Disneyland in the Most Amazing Way - Summary Article
5 - hello ibal, thak you very much for your really interesting essay and i appreciate for your effort to do...
Writing Feedbackibal28 - Sep 13, 2016 / mem77 - Sep 14, 2016
|How many people of both gender registered in a fitness center between year 1970 and 2000
Writing FeedbackBAMS14 - Sep 14, 2016 / mdamanhuri77 - Sep 14, 2016
|National Geographic to save the Animals Rhinos in Africa
2 - Dear Mita i have a few advice to your essay population of Africa's and white rhino specie have...
Writing FeedbackMita22 - Sep 14, 2016 / Alamsyah Ismail - Sep 14, 2016
|Although constructed with a simple technology, the wind turbine can generate much electricity
Writing Feedbackbung ilham - Sep 5, 2016 / andika08 - Sep 14, 2016
|An annual large scale-movement of birds called migration
3 - dear rosadesiana i have a few advice to your essay ... distances of migration have to changes to...
Writing Feedbackrosadesiana - Sep 14, 2016 / Alamsyah Ismail - Sep 14, 2016
|There are five common activities for tourist in New Zealand
3 - Hi! Here some advices for you; Do not forget to put the chart measurement on your writing: The...
Writing Feedbackfadhilmd25 - Sep 14, 2016 / kiki23 - Sep 14, 2016
|Summary of TED HOW DO CARBOHYDRATE IMPACT YOUR HEALT, (Richard .J wood)
2 - Hello Ifan, Nice essay therefore I have some suggestion to your writing. according on to Richard [who ]...
Writing FeedbackIfan21 - Sep 14, 2016 / PHA2016 - Sep 14, 2016
|My opinion about TEDTalks: Gary Haugen "The hidden reason for poverty the world need to address now"
5 - hello tata, overall, your essay is good and i believe it can give us more information about it. but,...
Writing FeedbackTata77 - Aug 15, 2016 / mem77 - Sep 14, 2016
|UK, Switzerland, Denmark, Belgium and Sweden statistics regarding banana and coffee.
3 - Hello You have a good summary I have some corrections ... in several European countries are depicted illustrated...
Writing FeedbackIlmi_03 - Sep 6, 2016 / andika08 - Sep 14, 2016
|Reason For Visit New Zealand: sightseeing, walking, boating, volcanoes, museums
2 - hi andhika08 The bar chart show Shows the percentage of reason for visitvisiting / to Visit New Zealand. The...
Writing Feedbackandika08 - Sep 14, 2016 / mdamanhuri77 - Sep 14, 2016
|Fiction and non-fiction books - which of these two types of books do you generally prefer to read?
Writing FeedbackHthmn - Sep 13, 2016 / andika08 - Sep 14, 2016
|The relationship between sovereignty and the law is relatively straightforward. When it comes to pol
2 - Dear kiki23, here are some of advices for your summary: Issue appeared in Britain politics these days is...
Writing Feedbackkiki23 - Sep 14, 2016 / fadhilmd25 - Sep 14, 2016
|Is damaged tropical rainforest caused by Logging industry?
5 - Hello PHA, It's incredible simple text, these following correction for your writing : Now days (Nowadays or at present...
Writing FeedbackPHA2016 - Sep 13, 2016 / Ifan21 - Sep 14, 2016
|Summary: More Young Americans Live with Parents Than With Lovers
4 - Hello bung ilham, here i left the comment for you In the meantime, many young generation prefer...
Writing Feedbackbung ilham - Sep 13, 2016 / Fira28 - Sep 14, 2016
|The logging industry supplies the raw materials for array of products
Writing Feedbackmawahi bussalam - Sep 13, 2016 / dils - Sep 14, 2016
|The climate crisis in United States - significant increase of heat
3 - ...there was a significant increase in U.Sheat from 31 degrees Fahrenheit ... >>>> i suggest to replace "heat" with...
Writing Feedbackfadhilmd25 - Sep 13, 2016 / angga93 - Sep 14, 2016
|The result of adult education survey - Cambridge 1 Practice 1 - Correct if Found Some Wrong
2 - Hi @faizunaa17 I like the idea in the first paragraph. However, it should be more engaging whenever you...
Writing Feedbackfaizunaa17 - Sep 14, 2016 / wew018 - Sep 14, 2016
|I am in favour of an overseas university degree rather than in home country school
Writing Feedbackany577 - Sep 14, 2016 / Fitri12 - Sep 14, 2016
|Great increase of fish consumption in China from 600 grams/person/week in 1995 to 850 grams in 2010
Writing FeedbackBAMS14 - Sep 13, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Sep 14, 2016
|Top Takeaways from presidential candidates's views on Science - Laura Parker - Articles Summary
2 - Hi Fadhil.. I am delighted to read your summary. Honestly, it is good enough because this is free of...
Writing Feedbackfadhilmd25 - Sep 14, 2016 / akbarmappiare - Sep 14, 2016
|Environmental problems are too great to be managed by individuals; real change at government level.
2 - Dear Mahesh, there are some of advices from me for your essay: ... on impact of air pollution...
Writing Feedbackmahesh27 - Sep 13, 2016 / fadhilmd25 - Sep 14, 2016
|The difference three foods in China people consumes in year 1985-2010
Writing FeedbackPHA2016 - Sep 13, 2016 / rosadesiana - Sep 14, 2016
|Summary Article How to Eat More Vegetables And Less Meat in Three Weeks
6 - Hi Farida, Your essay gives us precious message for stay healthy with nutritious meals. However, I found dome mistakes....
Writing FeedbackFaridadwi18 - Aug 30, 2016 / Iedha01 - Sep 14, 2016
|Dinner makes a difference - summary
3 - Hi.. Please allow me to help you by giving some suggestions of your writing Your topic is quite...
Writing Feedbackbung ilham - Sep 13, 2016 / Iedha01 - Sep 14, 2016
|Logging impact. A great deal of the industries commit the activities of cutting down trees.
3 - Hello Your text could be improved (stylistically) if you apply the following adjustments to it: A great...
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