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To become a good citizen or benefit students as individuals

3 - Hi kwang here is my suggestion, >>I was really grateful aboutfor what he had done at ......

Writing Feedbackkwang997 - Sep 22, 2016 / MJT - Sep 22, 2016
An Assistance Request from More Capable Essay Writers - the impact of social media on society

2 - Hi please find comments, Start like this. In recent years, popularity of social media has been increased. ...

Writing FeedbackCartie - Sep 22, 2016 / Mayank7g - Sep 22, 2016
Summary Folktayes from Dutch : The cat and the cradle

2 - Hi good essay just couple of points is really to be avoided because of agains rules or even law=>...

Writing FeedbackFirmanRomadhon20 - Sep 22, 2016 / sinahector - Sep 22, 2016
TED Summary; Everything You Think You Know About Addiction Is Wrong - Johann Hari

2 - Hi very good essay just couple of points We always punish=>We always punish wrongdoers instead of judging them severely.=>...

Writing Feedbackrizaldohabibie - Sep 22, 2016 / sinahector - Sep 22, 2016
TED Summary: How Social Media Makes Us Unsocial by Allison Graham

2 - Hi very good essay just some points the answer probably is only 2 Where do they go=> (maybe) what...

Writing FeedbackFitri12 - Sep 22, 2016 / sinahector - Sep 22, 2016
Summary Article: Indonesia can apply 'clean' coal technology to reduce emissions

2 - It gives some advantagesbenefits for our country to improve... ... than the other technologies in terms offor the sake...

Writing Feedbackibal28 - Sep 22, 2016 / Wilson_Chen - Sep 22, 2016
Writing Task 2: There are two factors entertainment editors that it should decide to advertise

2 - Hi PHA2016 you have done a good job here are my suggestions.. ==> here are two factors o...

Writing FeedbackPHA2016 - Sep 22, 2016 / rosadesiana - Sep 22, 2016
Summary: Being on Facebook Can Actually Make Us Happier

3 - ... social media which can be found installed in every smartphone or computer. In spite of that, some...

Writing Feedbackibe13 - Sep 22, 2016 / ashelarisa48 - Sep 22, 2016
Help me to improve my writing. EILTS 6_Nurse Migration

3 - The Nursing shortage has been a serious problem not only for certain countries but also in the entire world....

Writing FeedbackFatirtalent - Sep 22, 2016 / ashelarisa48 - Sep 22, 2016
In Philippines, many nurses usually choose to look for a job overseas, than stay in their country

3 - Dear Alam you've done it better. here several comments for you. i hope it could help you 1....

Writing FeedbackAlamsyah Ismail - Sep 22, 2016 / Fatirtalent - Sep 22, 2016
TED Summary: HOW TO GROW A FOREST IN YOUR BACKYARD

2 - hello @Abu_Gosok could i give you little bit suggestions here we go 1. "Shubhendu Sharma TALKS on...

Writing FeedbackAbu_Gosok - Sep 22, 2016 / cinta_dollar51 - Sep 22, 2016
The world will become a very scary place if we lose our listening skills

2 - Dear Dio you've done your writing well, but here some comments of mine. Hope, it would be useful. ...

Writing FeedbackDioba - Sep 22, 2016 / Fatirtalent - Sep 22, 2016
Folklore: Yukki Onna The Snow Woman

3 - hi. your essay is good. I have some suggestions for you. There are[were] two hunters They were hunting...

Writing FeedbackPanjul88 - Sep 22, 2016 / rizaldohabibie - Sep 22, 2016
TED_Video: How to Be a Good Mentor

4 - Hiii ,. here my suggestion for your text. .....set expectations together in the very beginning.... = Redundant (If...

Writing Feedbackhanachi - Sep 22, 2016 / Abu_Gosok - Sep 22, 2016
Brain has carrot and stick to teach us how to behave

3 - Hello Jawa, This is some suggestions for you : ... which ensures us do something (it needs adding...

Writing FeedbackJawa - Sep 22, 2016 / FirmanRomadhon20 - Sep 22, 2016
Numerous negative effects were caused by nurse migration

2 - Hi,after reading your summary, i have some suggestions, perhaps usefull for you 1.Numerous negative effects ... ---->Various of negatives...

Writing Feedbackbismillah - Sep 22, 2016 / Dioba - Sep 22, 2016
Prosanta Chakrabarty told, that his passion in life is looking at some hidden wonders of life

3 - Hello @Iedha01 could i give little bit suggestion to you here we go 1. "These cave fishes has...

Writing FeedbackIedha01 - Sep 22, 2016 / cinta_dollar51 - Sep 22, 2016
TED Summary Why I Read a Book a Day? By Tai Lopez

3 - Hi Yonathan, it's my pleasure to share. the followings are my humble opinions. - I'm sorry to say...

Writing FeedbackYonathan - Sep 22, 2016 / Fitri12 - Sep 22, 2016
Citizens are using less bicycle than they used to do in the past. There are several reasons for this

5 - Hi hoangduc241096, I have few notes for you. * Nowadays {be careful with your spelling }.... *...

Writing Feedbackhoangduc241096 - Sep 21, 2016 / Panjul88 - Sep 22, 2016
TED Summary Jamie Oliver Talk About Obesity and Food

2 - Hi Yonathan,after reading your summary, i have some suggestions, perhaps usefull for you 1.biggest death factor is caused by...

Writing FeedbackYonathan - Sep 22, 2016 / Dioba - Sep 22, 2016
The background of the kind dolphin and the ferocious shark

3 - Hi FirmanRomadhon20, I have few suggestions for you. * This story is about {you can use tells...

Writing FeedbackFirmanRomadhon20 - Sep 21, 2016 / Panjul88 - Sep 22, 2016
Summary: Why education, not punishment, is the solution to reducing crime | John Lonergan

3 - Hi there, Your writing is good and its topic is interesting,however, i found some mistakes. Let me share them...

Writing Feedbackibe13 - Sep 21, 2016 / Iedha01 - Sep 22, 2016
Summary of TED fusion is energy's future (Steve Cowley)

7 - Hi Ifan21, I have few notes for you. * One of the crucial environmental {to make it...

Writing FeedbackIfan21 - Sep 21, 2016 / Panjul88 - Sep 22, 2016
There are many nurses migrating to developed nations in favour of well-paid vacancies.

2 - Hi Rizaldo Let me give you some advice... ... nations in favour of well-paid vacancies(salaries) . ... health...

Writing Feedbackrizaldohabibie - Sep 22, 2016 / Yonathan - Sep 22, 2016
Summary: Chinese Anti-Corruption Activists on Trial for "Disturbing Public Order"

3 - Hii firman, Here my suggestion for your text. You have some misspelling words on text such as: ...

Writing FeedbackFirmanRomadhon20 - Sep 22, 2016 / Abu_Gosok - Sep 22, 2016
The nursing shortage is still a problem in both developing and developed countries

3 - Hi Yonathan,after reading your summary, i have some suggestions, perhaps usefull for you 1."countries to get better salarysalaries and...

Writing FeedbackYonathan - Sep 22, 2016 / Dioba - Sep 22, 2016
(TED) What Islam Really Says About Women: Alaa Murabit

3 - Hi elasyari Letme give you some advice... In globalized(globalization) era, women's participation isare still in questionable forin all...

Writing Feedbackelasyari93 - Sep 22, 2016 / Yonathan - Sep 22, 2016
Summary: Sees the Progress of Tuberculosis Treatments

4 - Hi Hanachi, Your writing is quite good, but I have few notes for you. *.....sleeping by yourself,alone...

Writing Feedbackhanachi - Sep 22, 2016 / Panjul88 - Sep 22, 2016
Summary: Over 30 Killed in Attack on Nigerian School

2 - Hi Firman Let me give you some advice... This tragedy was(occured) two years ago in Nigeria. There was...

Writing FeedbackFirmanRomadhon20 - Sep 22, 2016 / Yonathan - Sep 22, 2016
TED Summary: The Taboo Secret To Better Health by Molly Winter

5 - hi ledha i have suggestions on your essay to be better It is caused by drinking sewage...

Writing FeedbackIedha01 - Sep 21, 2016 / bismillah - Sep 22, 2016
Should students study in the single-sex schools in order to perform better academically

2 - halo Rafael,here are my thoughts for your essay: It is said that students should study in the single-sex...

Writing Feedbackkwang997 - Sep 22, 2016 / ibe13 - Sep 22, 2016
TED Summary: A Guide to the Energy of the Earth by Joshua M. Sneideman

3 - hi... Fitri12 let me try to give you some corrections to make a noun phrase, you need...

Writing FeedbackFitri12 - Sep 21, 2016 / Jawa - Sep 22, 2016
When art and technology pull each other to bits

3 - confusing sentence although art and technology have a close relation, those came apart at art festivals in some...

Writing FeedbackJawa - Sep 21, 2016 / RAY93 - Sep 22, 2016
Advantages of having tattoos - they may increase your chance of working

4 - Hello @fira28, I got some advice for your writing. Hope, it can help you .. Tattoos is an...

Writing FeedbackFira28 - Sep 21, 2016 / elasyari93 - Sep 22, 2016
Summary TED_How mobile phones can fight poverty

2 - there is no verb in this sentence Iqbal Quadir is a founder of Grameen Phone, ........ company. ...

Writing FeedbackDavid54 - Sep 21, 2016 / RAY93 - Sep 22, 2016
A history of India's independence

6 - Hello Jawa, I have little notes for you: There was noThis was not exception for India which had ......

Writing FeedbackJawa - Sep 19, 2016 / FirmanRomadhon20 - Sep 22, 2016
Arctic ice melt is killing birds and will leave caribou stranded

3 - too many misspelling words. The increasing loss of sea-ice whicH caused by melting ice in Artics victimizeS the...

Writing Feedbackmdamanhuri77 - Sep 21, 2016 / RAY93 - Sep 22, 2016
Nadia Lopez: Why open a school? To close a prison

2 - Hello @mdamanhuri77, i got some advice for your writing 1. When Nadia Lopez openedschool , Mott Hall Bridges...

Writing Feedbackmdamanhuri77 - Sep 22, 2016 / abdasyari93 - Sep 22, 2016
How to Conquer Ourselves For Public Speaking

2 - Hello @agungdanprakoso5, I got some suggestions about your writing. Here my advice: 1. Right now, i want...

Writing Feedbackagungdanprakoso5 - Sep 22, 2016 / abdasyari93 - Sep 22, 2016
Some editors have a great deal of consideration before broadcasting news on television or newspaper

2 - hallo aris05, i have corrected your writing, but i have some corrections 1. at this sentence: "... to...

Writing FeedbackAris05 - Sep 22, 2016 / hanachi - Sep 22, 2016
News contributor elect what to show on television and what to print in newsletter

2 - hi bams, here my thought This essay will describe a decided factor influence ing brodcast on television or...

Writing FeedbackBAMS14 - Sep 22, 2016 / Aris05 - Sep 22, 2016
Learn to understand of ourselves

2 - Hello Mdamanhuri77, n fact, the more we obtain knowledge of ourselves, the morethen we will realize that...

Writing Feedbackmdamanhuri77 - Sep 22, 2016 / PHA2016 - Sep 22, 2016
In China, Michelle Obama Tours School, Forbidden City

2 - Hello agung, According to VOA news (...) visited China that she aim to speech exceedingly ... ......

Writing Feedbackagungdanprakoso5 - Sep 22, 2016 / PHA2016 - Sep 22, 2016
Getting a job, earn your own money, have a happy family... how to make work-life balance work?

2 - there is no doubt that you have a good skill in writing, yet there are several mistakes you ought...

Writing FeedbackGiansy11 - Sep 21, 2016 / Ismailr - Sep 22, 2016
In recent days, some professional athletes become millionaires

2 - could you mind, if i give little bit suggestion for u here we go. 1. "Some companies is...

Writing FeedbackDafahAhmad - Sep 22, 2016 / agungdanprakoso5 - Sep 22, 2016
TED Summary: How to succeed? Get more sleep.

2 - hi ibal ... of our mind is a small idea notion that can awaken much bigger thanothersones inside...

Writing Feedbackibal28 - Sep 21, 2016 / mdamanhuri77 - Sep 22, 2016
Summary: Violent Crime Rising in U.S. Cities Compared to 2015

2 - hi ibe, let me see your summary in 2016 saw a dramatically increase of violent of crime in...

Writing Feedbackibe13 - Sep 21, 2016 / mdamanhuri77 - Sep 22, 2016
More and more people do not ride the bicycle as a model of transportation even though it has many

3 - Hi, your essay seems intresting and convincing. Here are some errors i noticed; How tocan one encourage people to...

Writing Feedbackkenxu - Sep 21, 2016 / philo - Sep 22, 2016
Article Summary: Weekend Rehab:Trying To Fight Off Pollution by Dawn Davis

2 - hi liedha ... terrible experience which is related to the air pollution. ... felt that treadmills an gyms...

Writing FeedbackIedha01 - Sep 21, 2016 / mdamanhuri77 - Sep 22, 2016
You are what you eat! Obesity is not problem anymore

2 - hi giansy,let me see your summary Every women in this world already gettinggot engaged, gettingand married ......

Writing FeedbackGiansy11 - Sep 21, 2016 / mdamanhuri77 - Sep 22, 2016
Summary of Article "Air pollution is sending tiny magnetic particles into your brain" (Clare Wilson)

2 - Hello @ifan21, I got some suggestions for your writing. Here my advice: 1. nanoparticlesNano particles magnetic iron...

Writing FeedbackIfan21 - Sep 21, 2016 / abdasyari93 - Sep 22, 2016
Let Us Socializing about Alzheimer's disease !!

3 - The effects of Alzheimer's disease includes losing items (like glasses) in the house, forgetting someone's name or difficulty in...

Writing Feedbacknomoto79 - Sep 21, 2016 / nehakhatri17 - Sep 22, 2016
Summary Article: Revisiting globalization of English

2 - Hallo Ibal28 It is such a great Essay, These following are corrections to make it even better : ...

Writing Feedbackibal28 - Sep 21, 2016 / Ifan21 - Sep 22, 2016
Every person has take the control and responsibility for the type of life that he wants to lead.

2 - Hi Andika, as I review your essay, I must say, right of the bat, you made sure that your...

Writing Feedbackandika08 - Sep 21, 2016 / justivy03 - Sep 22, 2016
A Great Elephant Was Defeated By an Ingenious Ant Once upon a time, in the jungle forest, lived ass

2 - Hi San, I believe this is my first review for your work and with that, I would like to...

Writing Feedbackhanachi - Sep 21, 2016 / justivy03 - Sep 22, 2016
Some of people think that wealthy life and high salary are essential for personal happiness

2 - Hi Aris, I believe this is my first review for your essay however, I assure you that as we...

Writing FeedbackAris05 - Sep 21, 2016 / justivy03 - Sep 22, 2016
Popular image of Hawaii that always relates to hula dancing with women swaying their hips

4 - Hi, thanks for getting back to me. I would suggest this replacement sentence: The popular image of...

Writing Feedbackrizaldohabibie - Sep 21, 2016 / TJLuschen - Sep 21, 2016
(TED) Judson Brewer: A Simple Way to Break a Bad Habit

5 - Hi there! @abdasyari I have read your writing and wonder about some tips like these: 1) It...

Writing Feedbackabdasyari93 - Sep 21, 2016 / Rinnegan45 - Sep 21, 2016
Traditional clothes, bowler hats, handmade macramé shawls, layered skirts and blouses in La Paz

2 - Hi Bekuk22. You did it well. I found a minor mistake. So, I just left a few of suggestions....

Writing FeedbackBekuk22 - Sep 21, 2016 / ibal28 - Sep 21, 2016
Hula dancing plays important function as an important aspect of Hawaiian culture.

2 - Hi Dils, your writing is pretty good, I found only slightly mistake. Hula is (put article "a" since...

Writing Feedbackdils - Sep 21, 2016 / Fitri12 - Sep 21, 2016

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