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|Essay about freedom - Can anyone look over my paragraph?
3 - i also thought about doing this but it kind of contradicts my statement in the paragraph so i couldn't...
Writing Feedbackeldlflfk - May 13, 2014 / eldlflfk - May 13, 2014
|CBEST essay - Give entering college students advice
3 - Hi Nguyen Cong, Thank you for your comment. I think I still need more improvemenst when writing my...
Writing Feedbackokdeerpass - May 11, 2014 / okdeerpass - May 13, 2014
|IELTS : An enjoyable job or a good salary? Discuss both sides and give your view
Writing Feedbackharry137181143 - May 12, 2014 / harry137181143 - May 13, 2014
|IELTS academic rich-poor conflict
6 - Thank you all for such helpful responses,, but may I ask ,,regarding the paragraph which Pahan says away from...
Writing FeedbackAdammero - May 10, 2014 / Adammero - May 13, 2014
|TOEFL - Employers should provide smoking areas for their employees
4 - Cigarettes smokingSmoking causes deadly diseases like lung cancer, heart and lung diseases. IncidenceCases of lung cancer hashave been increased...
Writing Feedbackbrisky - May 11, 2014 / dumi - May 13, 2014
|IELTS Task - CHANGING CAREER AND PLACE OF LIVING ; POSITIVE OR NEGATIVE?
7 - Change is an inevitable part of life . To excel in their lives, many some people now a daysnowadayseasily...
Writing Feedbackcandy07 - May 11, 2014 / eddies - May 13, 2014
|IELTS - Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects
9 - .... good :) As an example, a student who isstudents preparing for deliveringto deliver a speech on...
Writing Feedbackmsarkar - May 12, 2014 / dumi - May 13, 2014
|TOEFL..Dormitory or apartment? Which is better for students to choose?
Writing Feedbackhere2study - May 9, 2014 / dumi - May 13, 2014
|Advantages and Disadvantages of using Machines?
Writing Feedbackquocdai - May 12, 2014 / dumi - May 12, 2014
|Concrete produce: cement, water, sand and gravel are poured to a concrete mixer
Writing FeedbackMisnariah Idrus - May 12, 2014 / Misnariah Idrus - May 12, 2014
|the charts below give information about travel to and from UK.
Writing Feedbackbakhadeer - May 12, 2014 / SHanafi - May 12, 2014
|IELTS Task 1 : Garlsdon City on plan to build a supermarket
3 - As per the map's featuresAccording to the map, the suggestedproposed location (no comma) S2, for building a new supermarket(no...
Writing FeedbackSHanafi - May 12, 2014 / Pahan - May 12, 2014
|IELTS: Freedom for creative artist - 'show their idealism freely'
Writing FeedbackSHanafi - May 8, 2014 / eddies - May 12, 2014
|Is international sport releasing patriotic emotions? 'fans support their teams'
4 - Sports unite peoples from different corners of the world. (Hook) For some people, sport events heighten international tensions....
Writing Feedbackmohamedtheking - May 11, 2014 / eddies - May 12, 2014
|IELTS - Children find it difficult to concentrate or pay attention in schools
13 - Thank you so much Pahan, Dumi Yep I am lucky Waiting for other paragraphs... I hope the model essay...
Writing Feedbackcandy07 - May 10, 2014 / candy07 - May 12, 2014
|Film review - "Gone with the wind"; 'deserves to be the most successful film'
3 - When the Civil War erupts and brings devastation and poverty to the O'Hara family, Scarlett becomes the indomitable one...
Writing Feedbackrainie1911 - May 3, 2014 / dumi - May 12, 2014
|IELTS task 2:should physical education be optional in school or not?
3 - ... Well, can you please give us the references where you find this information. It is worth for...
Writing FeedbackAndy_Vo - May 12, 2014 / Pahan - May 12, 2014
|Some people say the world would be a better place without private cars
3 - When you deal with IELTS, the first thing the assessor sees is your layout, which shows whole of...
Writing Feedbackulviqulieff - May 11, 2014 / eddies - May 12, 2014
|IELTS Task 1: Total school spending in the UK
Writing Feedbackandial - May 11, 2014 / dumi - May 12, 2014
|IELTS: technology affects people's interaction with each other
8 - Thank you dumi. I think I should focus more on the different between the present and the past. So...
Writing FeedbackStarSea - May 9, 2014 / StarSea - May 12, 2014
|IELTS: How Dangerous Products are Dealt with in Three Countries
4 - In the Overview, you need to talk about the most obvious trend/ trends without any details. It is not...
Writing FeedbackMisnariah Idrus - May 11, 2014 / dumi - May 11, 2014
|IELTS TASK 1 : Temperature in Kolkata graph
Writing FeedbackSHanafi - May 4, 2014 / andial - May 11, 2014
|Tax Private car owner for improve public transportation which is problematic
3 - to connect these paragraphs, you should use a connector which shows contrast such as 'however' 'on the other hand'...
Writing Feedbackupinipin - May 7, 2014 / fikri - May 11, 2014
|"pursuit of happiness" - Need some relevant examples for this SAT essay!
2 - It is necessary to give example from the history? Can't you give a general example on happiness? I do...
Writing Feedbackmaheenatiq - May 11, 2014 / here2study - May 11, 2014
|IELTS: Part of nation's history - "Old building"
Writing FeedbackEva Novita Sari - May 8, 2014 / Pahan - May 11, 2014
|Ielts task 2: What factors measure country's status.
3 - You write very well. First, you follow a good approach and your essay is well structured. Second, you have...
Writing FeedbackAbdurasul - May 11, 2014 / Pahan - May 11, 2014
|IELTS: Foreign language instruction should begin in kindergarten
Writing Feedbackkace - May 11, 2014 / Pahan - May 11, 2014
|Descriptive essay about an extraordinary island
5 - Thank you all. I really appreciate your help and I'll try to improve my writting skills more :)))...
Writing FeedbackAyman64 - May 9, 2014 / Ayman64 - May 11, 2014
|SAT Essay: Do we value only what we struggle for? Kindly grade.
6 - "That which we obtain too easily, we esteem too lightly. It is dearness only which gives everything its value."...
Writing Feedbackmaheenatiq - Apr 26, 2014 / maheenatiq - May 11, 2014
|Decisions that are made quickly are always wrong. Do you agree or disagree?
Writing Feedbackbrisky - May 9, 2014 / kace - May 11, 2014
|IELTS Writing Task 2 : Effects of Technology on people's relationship.
9 - This approach aims at helping you include all features in your essay (that are essential for scoring ) as...
Writing FeedbackNguyen Cong - May 10, 2014 / dumi - May 11, 2014
|IELTS: FRESH WATER SUPPLY
Writing Feedbackkace - May 10, 2014 / kace - May 11, 2014
|GRE Issue Task: well-being of a country's citizens measures leader effectiveness
2 - Well, it is not clear to which statement you disagree... I guess you agree with the statement. However,...
Writing FeedbackMerlin2015 - May 10, 2014 / dumi - May 11, 2014
|Technology deteriorate the human thinking; new types of problems
Writing Feedbackkanchan11 - May 8, 2014 / candy07 - May 11, 2014
|Societies are facing a growing problem with obesity. IELTS
7 - One of the main reasons of thefor this problem is that the majority of people do not leadeat a...
Writing Feedbackuzboy - May 10, 2014 / dumi - May 11, 2014
|TOEFL: In the modern world, we should never be impolite to another person.
7 - hi，thank u for ur careful notes. I will listen to ur suggestions and try to finish such tasks within...
Writing FeedbackNancy is here - May 10, 2014 / Nancy is here - May 10, 2014
|Same national curriculum should be studied by all the students in a nation until they enter college
Writing FeedbackMerlin2015 - May 9, 2014 / Merlin2015 - May 10, 2014
|IELTS Task 1. Parcels delivered by Federal Express and TNT Mail Services
Writing FeedbackMisnariah Idrus - May 8, 2014 / Pahan - May 10, 2014
|IELTS Task 1: Birth and Death rates in Switzerland
Writing Feedbackandial - May 9, 2014 / Pahan - May 10, 2014
|Success is only getting big reward or collecting money or something special
10 - Eva Novita Sari I'm sorry,but it wasn't me who made this mistake,I believe it to be the writer...
Writing FeedbackShineStarJoti - May 6, 2014 / Adammero - May 10, 2014
|TOEFL Practice - knowledge gained from experience or knowledge gained from books
4 - Look at what Pahan suggests you with the structure (a 4-paragraph essay). With this structure, you are easy to...
Writing FeedbackEuge_A - May 5, 2014 / eddies - May 10, 2014
|IELTS: Old building must be protected by law, not knocked down.
7 - This is the pattern for the concluding paragraph I suggest: It is nicer if you could construct this paragraph...
Writing Feedbackrara22 - May 8, 2014 / eddies - May 10, 2014
|IELTS ESSAY:Manual jobs are being done by sophisticated machines, good trend?
Writing FeedbackJohnny0203 - May 9, 2014 / eddies - May 10, 2014
|In some countries teens have jobs while they are students.is it good or not?
6 - The first thing the reader sees is your layout, which shows whole of your essay. If the layout is...
Writing Feedbackbrisky - May 10, 2014 / eddies - May 10, 2014
|IELTS Task 1: international students graduated in several canadian regions
Writing Feedbackandial - Apr 9, 2014 / dumi - May 10, 2014
|IELTS: 'Durdle Door and Dorset' - Erosion of a Headland
3 - Diachronic maps/picts Intro: here you should state what the maps/picts show Overview: state what the direction of change is...
Writing FeedbackMisnariah Idrus - Apr 19, 2014 / eddies - May 10, 2014
|IELTS. X Disease Cases in Someland (1960-1995)
4 - Single graphs Introduction: Here you sould state what the graph shows short body paragraph: state the most improtant piece...
Writing FeedbackMisnariah Idrus - May 7, 2014 / eddies - May 9, 2014
|IELTS Task 1: Travel to and from UK and popular countries visited by BRITON
7 - Double graphs Introduction: Write one sentence, but introduce each chart separately e.g "This first bart chart shows..., and the...
Writing Feedbackandial - May 4, 2014 / eddies - May 9, 2014
|IELTS task 1: Callum University graduates - numbers of male students
8 - Single graphs Introduction: Here you should state what the graph shows short body paragraph: state the most important piece...
Writing Feedbackandial - Apr 15, 2014 / eddies - May 9, 2014
|IELTS Task 1. Travel to / from UK from 1979 to 1999
2 - Double graphs Introduction: Write one sentence, but introduce each chart separately e.g "This first bart chart shows..., and the...
Writing FeedbackMisnariah Idrus - May 9, 2014 / eddies - May 9, 2014
|IELTS Task 1: Different qualification level in Australia
Writing FeedbackSHanafi - May 8, 2014 / dumi - May 9, 2014
|IELTS Graph: Most popular travel destinations for UK people
5 - In your Message block (the area where you type your essay) you find a feature "Attach file(s)". Click...
Writing Feedbackammus1 - May 8, 2014 / dumi - May 9, 2014
|IELTS Task 2: The aim of university education is to help graduates.
3 - Hai friend,I read ur essay and I feel that you give pay attention to the sentence structure.for example, I...
Writing Feedbackrara22 - May 9, 2014 / ammus1 - May 9, 2014
|IELTS: Happiness - factors and importance; "small gap between birth and death"
Writing FeedbackAbdurasul - May 3, 2014 / Abdurasul - May 9, 2014
|IELTS: University education - we are not get better job as we expected
2 - Even your prompt is open for discussion, there is no harm you stating your own opinion in the...
Writing Feedbackupinipin - May 9, 2014 / eddies - May 9, 2014
|IELTS Task 1: Parcels delivered by two mail services
3 - Your writing is very good now. You should focus on the layout which presents the 4 paragraph essay then....
Writing Feedbackandial - May 8, 2014 / eddies - May 9, 2014
|IELTS: PROBLEMS AND BENEFITS OF INTERNATIONAL TOURISM
2 - First I do not understand which side you are supporting...It seems to me unclear ideas .. However, your...
Writing Feedbackhalleybachelor - May 9, 2014 / here2study - May 9, 2014
|Doing work by machine? Work by hand is always easier, cheaper and eco friendly
8 - Thank you all for helping me out..I am really trying hard to improve my essays..I really appreciate your comments..It...
Writing Feedbackhere2study - May 6, 2014 / here2study - May 9, 2014
|IELTS: Maintenance old buildings are for being historical building
5 - Maintenance of old buildings are for being historical buildinghelps preserve history. .... Your idea is not at...
Writing Feedbackupinipin - May 8, 2014 / dumi - May 9, 2014
|TOEFL ESSAY - qualities of good co -worker. 'cooperative and compatible'
3 - Well, compatibility is not actually a skill. Compatibility means that a state in which two things are able to...
Writing Feedbacksandipsinh - Apr 2, 2014 / dumi - May 9, 2014
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